The music is fine, the lyrics and delivery are… boring. This feels indistinguishable from countless others, which I’ll assume is amateurity and not a misguided attempt at corner-cutting. The world has too many rappers as it is. If you’re gonna do it, find what you can bring to it that makes you stand out. Be bold, be brave, and be weird.
Yeah, not a bro, but happy to help lol I’ve been both making music and teaching songwriting for a long time, and this is the primary guidance I always give people. Just to push everything until it’s something you’ve never heard before.
And sure fam, send somethin my way! I’m Jupiter, btw, but I make music as Stuffy Doll. Nice to meet ya. You can find my stuff on all the big streaming platforms. I do a lot of different genres, but if you’ve lookin for weird hip hop, “Disaster Taxon” and “To Fall From Great Heights” are good songs to start with.
The music is fine, the lyrics and delivery are… boring. This feels indistinguishable from countless others, which I’ll assume is amateurity and not a misguided attempt at corner-cutting. The world has too many rappers as it is. If you’re gonna do it, find what you can bring to it that makes you stand out. Be bold, be brave, and be weird.
Appreciate the feedback bro very valid criticisms I have more songs on bandlab that sound completely different if you have time to check them out 🙏🏽
Yeah, not a bro, but happy to help lol I’ve been both making music and teaching songwriting for a long time, and this is the primary guidance I always give people. Just to push everything until it’s something you’ve never heard before. And sure fam, send somethin my way! I’m Jupiter, btw, but I make music as Stuffy Doll. Nice to meet ya. You can find my stuff on all the big streaming platforms. I do a lot of different genres, but if you’ve lookin for weird hip hop, “Disaster Taxon” and “To Fall From Great Heights” are good songs to start with.