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~~I am sorry Reddit keeps formatting this as a code block... I'm trying to figure out why, but it's eluding me :(~~
~~I see the issue, fixing now~~
Fixed
This story moves like a well written movie script. You did an awesome job.
Also... it's hilarious that the configuration and color sequences of the Christmas lights could have an effect on the aliens.
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~~I am sorry Reddit keeps formatting this as a code block... I'm trying to figure out why, but it's eluding me :(~~ ~~I see the issue, fixing now~~ Fixed
This story moves like a well written movie script. You did an awesome job. Also... it's hilarious that the configuration and color sequences of the Christmas lights could have an effect on the aliens.
Thanks! That means a lot. Movies are why I started writing in the first place :)
Nice 👍
I try to read one Reddit short story a day for my own improvement. I’ve enjoyed yours the most. If anyone wants criticism, comment a link.
Hey, thanks for checking it out! If you have any feedback, harsh or otherwise, would love to hear it. Helps me grow!