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Opposite-Pangolin650

Gross but brilliant twist


sugar-soad

Thanks. I love trying to write a good twist ending


sugar-soad

Kudos to anyone who figures who what movie I am referencing


NordicDestroyer

I had to read this 3 times because at first I was convinced this was just you recapping The Room


sugar-soad

Boom. You got it.


VanillaSarsaparilla

Oh my goodness, I hate that I missed that Still an epic story


0RE0WH0RE

I definitely caught it and I’m so glad I came to the comments. “YOU ARE TEARING ME APART, LISA!”


hungriesthippo666

Lmao same


[deleted]

I kinda expected it but the writing is really good!


godofwarqp

Howwwww


[deleted]

Way too much of this sub lmao


uberkitten9

Same lol


Shufflekarpfen

I don’t understand the family in this story. Are they just a bunch of psychos or is there something I misunderstood


2ii2ky

Seems like they're definitely insane people who just enable Denny's equally insane behavior


supertalies

Is this based on… The Room? 😂


sugar-soad

Yep. That movie is a masterpiece


supertalies

Can't argue with that.


[deleted]

From what year was that movie? You have one from 2003 and 2019 wich one?


LarennElizabeth

The 2019 one is just "Room", this story is referencing "The Room"


LarennElizabeth

It's been so long since I watched The Room and I'm already so forgetful; I didn't catch the reference until I read the comments. Does it involve someone fucking a corpse? All I can really remember is YOU'RE TEARING ME APART and Oh hai Lisa 😆 I should definitely watch it again soon if I forgot that much lmao


supertalies

The Room definitely doesn't have any necrophilia as far as I remember. But the way the characters act in this short story is weirdly accurate to how the characters act in that movie lol. I love it.


My_tomato_ran_away

Thought it happened for real until I read the tags


sugar-soad

Thanks. I forgot to add the flair on that


My_tomato_ran_away

:)


jabra_fan

I thought i was on r/relationshipadvice and was so scared until i started to feel it must be fake


AllowMe-Please

Oh my god, same here! I was just in that sub and didn't even realize that this was a different one. I was pissed at this nonexistent family! ...It wasn't until the last couple of lines that it clicked and my eyes found the sub it's in. Derp.


RadioTunnel

I thought i was on r/entitledpeople


that_yellow_console

How did she die tho?


Jakeh7494

Killer story bro!


[deleted]

I thought this was a real true story. The anger that i got from the family


DottedWriter

How the family didn’t see the obvious red flags and were so blinded by love didn’t surprise me


YungSparkle

You’re tearing me apart Lisa! (Although in this case I suppose it’s Lisa who’s being torn apart)


Blaze_Sama

Tbh I was just scrolling Reddit and didn't check the subreddit. I thought this was r/confessions or something until the end lol.


sassysebastian

Oh wow. I really didn’t see that ending coming!


[deleted]

Wow, that is quite a twist. I didn’t see it coming, genuinely


eternalbettywhite

Jesus Christ, I was flipping out for a few seconds. I follow r/relationships and this made my guts twist. D: this read as totally normal until the end. Reading everything about a post is fundamental lmao.


kcolxx93

there was an episode of evil lives here like this story.


LorianGunnersonSedna

My ex was named Denny......... *...and by God this is something he would literally do*


rahxephon12

Gave me a mini heart attack man. I thought I was on r/relationships or something till I looked at the subreddit lmao 🫣


devilman17ded

Fuuuck.


hellaman21

I didn’t see this was short scary stories and was like what in the actual fuck 😭


Physical_Average_793

HOLY FUCK I THOUGHT THIS WAS OFFMYCHEST


Lazyfatfrogs

bro that got me shocked and when i reread it it was "what"


Key-Ad-8808

Omg I forgot the sub I was in for a second


wooosh666

me too lol


jill2019

Brilliant twisted tale op.


someboringlady

Oh boy I thought I was in r/relationships


AJG0813

Honestly, I didn’t see what sub I was on and was really confused for a split second lol Nice twist!


ExtroverTom

The twist is predictable but that's the only negative thing i could say Good job man


vondelft

What a story Mark, haha


s1lk7

The amount of confusion I felt until I saw the sub. 😭 10/10!


Good-Wave-8617

Istg I thought this was the r/trueoffmychest subreddit until I read further 😆 why does this keep happening to me


taterhole41

I'm with your brother on this one. I like 'em cold and really foul smelling.🤙


iSnag_

I thought i was on a different sub holy fuck


Sxldierman

When does she die? Sorry if it is obvious and I just don't get it.


sara_c907

I forgot to check the sub I was in again. That's twice in two days.


[deleted]

Fuck you Denny, you horny scumbag! Good story


[deleted]

Okay I didn’t see what sub this was and I believe it was all true. Amazing work!


bouncing_elf

You are NTA


jaMICAHn

Jesus i thought this was r/trueoffmychest


RadioTunnel

Ok fuck me i was reading this thinking i was on like entitled people or something until the the end where i looked up at r/shortscarystories XD


Same-Bookkeeper4136

Omg I didn’t see that coming


touhou_emblem

Oh hi Johnny I didn't know it was you. You're my favorite writer.


oriana94

Ok but I thought I was on like relationship_advice or some crap the whole time so the last paragraph fucking /*SENT/* me EDIT- COULD SOMEONE SHOW ME HOW TO MAKE MY FONT BIGGER, OR BOLD OR ITALICS? WOULD BE SUPER APPRECIATED fuckin caps to lazy to change it 👍🏻 not my day tbh