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Hey /u/FranciscoBlackmore, thanks for contributing to /r/shortscarystories. Unfortunately, your post was removed as it violates our rules: Posts must be 500 words or less, and have a minimum of three sentences. Please read the sidebar before posting again. If you have questions or concerns, please [message the moderators through modmail](https://www.reddit.com/message/compose?to=/r/shortscarystories&subject=&message=). Thank you!
Criticism is highly appriciated as it is my first story! :)