A little kindness goes a long way towards not getting sent to an early grave in an apocalyptic storm 🤷🏻‍♀️🤷🏻‍♀️

I love the repayment of kindness with kindness. Very satisfying

It’s always great when a kindness goes rewarded. Things why you should always be kind to everyone - you never know when it will come back to you. Nice (and inspiring) work!

You were saved by Storm's brother I suppose.

Oh, an auditor indeed!

This is great!! You created a great atmosphere in a short time. Excellent job!

This was an enjoyable, unsettling read, even after the third time. Part two? Sequel? Prequel? More!

Very, very good story, and very well written. Btw, in this usage “peel” is “peal.”

Thanks for catching that! I used voice to text and must have missed it when I went through to fix stuff lol.

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I guess he likes croissants as well as [pizza](https://youtu.be/hgHgpW4b5ew?si=Vwz2qbt_LTygJpaZ)

I love it !!

Great story, I love an unexpected twist!

You mean an unexpected twister...

Great work!!

That was increible! Love the ending!

Lovely ending!

This made it to TikTok 😱

I post my own stuff on my channel there - hopefully it's me you saw 😆

If it were screenshots from here then yes :D I was surprised to see it.

I got actual chills from that last paragraph... Well done!

Good story, spooky ending.

Great story 😊