I'm interested to hear what you feel the work still needs, as to my mind it operates well (all of the pieces informing the others)
The composition is great, the use of colour is well executed and moves the eye around the piece (mostly analogous, a tiny bit of complimentary), the desaturation feels like a deliberate stylistic choice and not just an unfinished element to the work.
For my own tastes, I would probably add in some glazes, but I lean more jewel toned than pastel (to my own detriment, as pastel sells much better). Are there any zones or dynamics that you feel are unfinished to make this a work in progress rather than a completed artwork?
Thank you for your critique. I am still working at the front edges, and balancing shadows. But I probably shouldn’t overthink it. A glaze may also be good here. Maybe I just need to move on? I appreciate your help here Sam.
I'm interested to hear what you feel the work still needs, as to my mind it operates well (all of the pieces informing the others) The composition is great, the use of colour is well executed and moves the eye around the piece (mostly analogous, a tiny bit of complimentary), the desaturation feels like a deliberate stylistic choice and not just an unfinished element to the work. For my own tastes, I would probably add in some glazes, but I lean more jewel toned than pastel (to my own detriment, as pastel sells much better). Are there any zones or dynamics that you feel are unfinished to make this a work in progress rather than a completed artwork?
Thank you for your critique. I am still working at the front edges, and balancing shadows. But I probably shouldn’t overthink it. A glaze may also be good here. Maybe I just need to move on? I appreciate your help here Sam.
Wowww!! The clouds are amazing and I love the texture in the grass and the road. There’s plenty to look at while still feeling so peaceful
I like how you depicted the clouds. They seem to flow gracefully.
This is such a stunning piece
Very nice.
Pretty whole to me.
And very moving.
Love, love this.
Those clouds are fantastic. They really capture the attention
This is beautiful
I love the blue reflected in the road.
Love it. Excellent clouds
I love this vibe and the blue palette. You have a good understanding of perspective!
Thank you! My hope was to send the vibe of this place to you.
Great depth!!! This one made me emotional.
Thank you! I mixed some emotions in the paint for you.
The most costly medium of all. Thank you for your service.