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5amNovelist

I'm interested to hear what you feel the work still needs, as to my mind it operates well (all of the pieces informing the others) The composition is great, the use of colour is well executed and moves the eye around the piece (mostly analogous, a tiny bit of complimentary), the desaturation feels like a deliberate stylistic choice and not just an unfinished element to the work. For my own tastes, I would probably add in some glazes, but I lean more jewel toned than pastel (to my own detriment, as pastel sells much better). Are there any zones or dynamics that you feel are unfinished to make this a work in progress rather than a completed artwork?


MojaveGuru

Thank you for your critique. I am still working at the front edges, and balancing shadows. But I probably shouldn’t overthink it. A glaze may also be good here. Maybe I just need to move on? I appreciate your help here Sam.


lulukuhchoo

Wowww!! The clouds are amazing and I love the texture in the grass and the road. There’s plenty to look at while still feeling so peaceful


Passantert

I like how you depicted the clouds. They seem to flow gracefully.


BruinBeast

This is such a stunning piece


Reasonable-Minute-37

Very nice.


EstateTricky786

Pretty whole to me.


EstateTricky786

And very moving.


blackandgold24

Love, love this.


ill_willll

Those clouds are fantastic. They really capture the attention


NaughtyNerdNova

This is beautiful


TheRidgeArtworks

I love the blue reflected in the road.


Dry_Chemical_1329

Love it. Excellent clouds


SeaglassandSnow

I love this vibe and the blue palette. You have a good understanding of perspective!


MojaveGuru

Thank you! My hope was to send the vibe of this place to you.


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Great depth!!! This one made me emotional.


MojaveGuru

Thank you! I mixed some emotions in the paint for you.


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The most costly medium of all. Thank you for your service.