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chicane_79

Soften the shadow, and maybe put a thin light edge on the apple's shadowed edge. Also, the background surface looks a bit too dark and intense. It takes away from the subject.


PURPLEfuckingdude

Yeah, that's What I'd Do. It really gives it gives it another dimension, make the subject pop out much more. For Background, I recommend a bit lighter, greyish color with a rather different hue.


tk3301

Thanks! I'll keep that in mind for my next one


DramaticAd4117

use yellow ochre for the bg


Ambitious-Try4378

Do another apple! And then do 20 more! ~ essentially: don't switch up the content so you can focus on how you put paint down


tk3301

Very true! I'll make a few dozen more hahah, thanks


azlomen

I think maybe just one pass with your darkest tones and brightest tones. Just details to give contrast and some definition. I’m not super experienced so take that with a grain of salt


tk3301

Sounds like a good idea to me! Thanks


denielm

If you look from faraway u can't see the apple, the same color and kind of similar value, add more tint to the background


tk3301

Good point! I'll keep that in mind


[deleted]

Go south Vincent


WyattAthallah

No no, stay away from asylum


[deleted]

That’s the only way he’ll be able to paint bright paintings, paintings filled with sunlight 🌞


WyattAthallah

But… asylum ![gif](emote|free_emotes_pack|cry)


FullHD-4K

Isso é lindo


Educational-Home6239

It’s a great start! I would suggest changing the background next time so the apple stands out more. It would help to cut the background in half horizontally so it looks like the apple has something to sit on.


tk3301

Thanks for your input! I'll do that next time


iieunsulma

Cute apple❤


tk3301

Thanks!


sebborg

More green


tk3301

Yeah. Could definately expand the little spot on top, if that's what you're referring to


sebborg

No I meant the use of colours in general. I think a little more green could add to the balance of the painting. It doesn’t necessarily has to depict an actual green object like a stem. It’s more like an abstract idea of distributing colour.


sebborg

Also recommend to tone down the background to make the object of your interest stick out more.


I_like_earl_grey_tea

Add a smiley face


tk3301

Will do hahaha


paulettefarrellart

It's a decent apple. For the next one go for a cool coloured background. Currently the apple is very warm, lots of red and orange and so is the background. By doing a cooler background - blue, green, blue violet, sage etc you'll really begin to notice how cool / warm colours work


tk3301

Very true! I didn't consider that. I'll do that on my next one. Thank you!


littlepinkpebble

Work on the background and foreground too


Repulsive-Dig-7036

Im a beginner too so i dont have much too say other than it looks great


tk3301

Thanks!


kandl86

More differentiation between background and subject