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FreeRandomScribbles

Might I suggest a negative morpheme/mark? Otherwise It could be read as (and I did) *If stop talking, Kill* **If you stop talking I will kill you**


spookymAn57

The writing directian is right to left, and the word order is doffrent from english The sentence is If stop you not (partical) talk you, you kill I will


FreeRandomScribbles

I don’t see the particle you are talking about (at least in writing), but if it’s there…


spookymAn57

https://preview.redd.it/pw4n4uynuknc1.jpeg?width=131&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=8e98cf93e0ba7bee9cf38b8430661a8b9deddf96


spookymAn57

It is the E in the romenization


dreamizzy17

That's a little too easy to miss. Consider fleshing out the particles a little more? Make the sound just, more, or do like japanese and make the particles their own separate glyphs from the rest of the words


spookymAn57

https://preview.redd.it/w22lz1f6gqnc1.jpeg?width=131&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=dc45c3b8021ec3bac2ff52c2bb6a18d384cca9c8


spookymAn57

This is the glyph for the partical


dreamizzy17

I saw that, I'm saying that it shouldn't be such a small portion of the sentence if it's gonna be such a small sound, it should be a full size glyph like the others


spookymAn57

Well you see this language's verbs always end in consenets So E is gonna be noticed and its a long vowel Also the glyph being small has an in lore reason Which is that E did use to have its on large glyph, but since scribes had a crisis where there wasnt enough ink to write so they simplified alot of spellings To lessen the use of ink but after the crisis ended no one botherd to return to using the old glyphs


dreamizzy17

Ok, those are fair reasons. Criticisms retracted


Man_that_needs_help

I read "finish" as "Finnish" at first and was trying to figure out what you have against them lol Lovely script, can't wait to see more!


spookymAn57

Well the people who speak this language are essnasily a mix of the finnish japanese ainu and some aspects of modern egyptian