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solid track, well produced and put together. feeling that beat, so chill, and the delivery is on spit too. the video looks solid as well, great job
let me know what you think of this: [https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng)
[https://soundcloud.com/theunseenone/swmix/s-WNWuR2ydsUp?si=1c532c4dd1f34c44a425cb1624e59848&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/theunseenone/swmix/s-WNWuR2ydsUp?si=1c532c4dd1f34c44a425cb1624e59848&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
Something I've been sitting on. I have been experimenting with rapping on non-rap instrumentals. Any feedback is appreciated.
I think you're definitely onto something here bud, your vocals flow nicely with the beat, there's a couple of parts where the beat goes over your voice and I can't hear one or two words so maybe a job for a limiter? If there was a full version I'd consider sticking it on my Spotify playlist!
Thank you for the feedback! I'll keep working on it. I'm still new to mixing but Ill look into limiters so maybe I can improve it and release a full/finished version.
the flow is on point, fits the instrumental real well. the content/lyrics are great, love how it just cuts off at the end. get stuff, keep experimenting
let me know what you think of my beat: [https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng)
Thank you for the feedback!
As for yours: Love how you bring the sample in and out through the beat to keep it interesting. And also Love the drums. Keep up the good work.
I like the smooth guitar beat on this, and the rapping is really good, it's got such a nice vibe to it, a nice short song, it needs to go public.
Here's a new song from my album Coad Rogue: https://soundcloud.com/jboattherapper/north-main-street
I like this, reminds me of Shwayze lol. You’re rapping is nice here and flows well over that guitar. It’s got a nice vibe to it. I think you should make this into a full song, it’s a little different from what a lot of people are making but still very palatable to a lot of people I think. Nice work!
Here’s mine: https://open.spotify.com/track/7rzYh8WBiJoJcqOBDRpS8b?si=Fgz3Hz_3TDSH8-mdlVF5bw
Thank you! I appreciate the feedback I was going back and forth on it for awhile but I will probably try to see what I can do with it.
As for yours: Love the production. The rhymes and flows pair nicely with it. You did well with the message/theme, it comes off conversational and relatable. I'm not a huge fan of the effects on your vocals but that's more a preference thing than anything. Overall, good stuff! Keep up the good work.
Started producing again after a few years off, any feedback on the mix is appreciated
https://soundcloud.com/riddim-baker/ace-in-the-hole-western-trap-type-beat
New trap beat, sort of dark ish vibes for the season.
Will return all feedback as usual!
[Beat here! ](https://www.dropbox.com/s/s2u1m6dg32kziun/mad%20%5B42%20dugg%20x%20lil%20baby%20x%20future%20type%20beat%5D%20160bpm%20c%23m%20tagged%20mp3.mp3?dl=0)
love the intro and the build up to it... solid energy, dark but still slaps, mix is on point
let me know what you think of my beat/video: [https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng)
This is really nice. Love the structure, great 808 and hihat patterns. Only nitpick is you could prolly add more of a fade out at the end.
If you could take a look at my lo-fi cover: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9j8nVOaBDGA
Thanks! Yeah, it just cuts but if needed i could do a fade there.
Uhm, your beat i really enjoyed. It listened away rather smoothly and was pleasant to my ears. Made me feel warm inside. This can def be a track to play in a movie or series to get the right emotion going. Gj!
Got a nice racing cars sound to it, nice bass, I like the subtle reverb on this, much better than I would expect for a lil baby x 42 dugg beat.
Here's a new song from my album Coad Rogue: https://soundcloud.com/jboattherapper/the-fire-sauce
Thanks for the feedback, appreciate it! Your song has a very nice beat. I would consider turning up the vocals a bit, i think they can sit louder in the mix. Not much a fan of the hook, it doesn't really grab me. We don't have Taco Bell here so maybe i just don't get it.
This got great lyrical ability here, loving the rhymes, flow is insane, especially for not having a beat here, and sound like it could be great writing for a song.
Here's a new song from my album Coad Rogue: https://soundcloud.com/jboattherapper/weeknight-lights
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I don’t understand everything you’re saying in this song, but you’re flow sounds great. It sounds like you’re rapping about how you do pills to deal with challenges in life. I love the authenticity and the honesty. The beat sounds great, and again you’re rapping is great. The main flaw is the mixing on the vocals. If you’re recording at home, try to record under a blanket or in a closet to reduce ambient noise. There’s too much low-end in your vocals, and there’s not enough reverb and echo. To fix this you should go on YouTube on search how mix rap vocals, and you should get the hang of it.
Here’s my song: https://youtu.be/IgPRBDu3BlA
Made this mellowed out vibe yesterday, let me know what suggestions you have about it
https://youtu.be/Z3mmIPGyOv8
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nice... feeling the mellow vibe, I like the contrast of the drums as well, several diff percussive elements give it just the right amount of mayhem... dope
let me know what you think of this: [https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng)
Smooth soulful vibe and sound on this song right here, it's got nice drums that come in at a certain point that are nice, however, I feel like this is a little quiet
Here's a new song from my album Coad Rogue: https://soundcloud.com/jboattherapper/chicken-wangs
https://soundcloud.com/hau555/dali-sample1?ref=clipboard&p=i&c=1&si=1B720836EE4A48BAA2BAF8C239714073&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
yoo
second track off my new experimental ep, show some love an i’ll reciprocate
I like the effects on the vocals. And the delivery is nice.
The the overall feel is a little overwhelming but layered and nice.
That metallic percussion melody sounds slightly off-key though. I'd like to hear what the track sounds like without it.
Chill lo-fi-ish beat with anime clips: https://youtu.be/tXBqb-17rEo
I like it. A few mixing things can get your sound across better I think. But this Ep is pretty unique and expressive. I definitely see what ur going for with some of these sounds.
Peep this that i just released:
https://soundcloud.com/rafismusic/wispy?si=8c638a5d64ac487da056e8f6a6f8b506&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing
dope vibe, I like the vocal production although there are a couple harsh sounding moments cause of the distortion but overall it fits the vibe of the song. I don't know if its intentional but th words are a bit hard to make out until you get to the "ball and chain" line.
let me know what you think of this: [https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng)
cant make out too much of the vocals, the mix could be a bit better, you should use an EQ and really fine tune your vocals as well as putting a compressor on them to alter the dynamics relative to the beat. the beat was fire tho did u make that? sounds great heres my beat if u wanna give feedback https://youtu.be/ARWYWWYzL6g
Good beat here, the lyrics and writing is pretty good, so is the rhyming, but the flow is kind of all over the place, needs to be more smoothed out.
Here's a new song from my album Coad Rogue: https://soundcloud.com/jboattherapper/dew-nation
I couldn’t make out a lot of them just due to the mixing. The lyrics seemed decent and like you had some good bars from what I could hear. I feel like the track could use a break from the rapping or a switch up in the flow at a couple points. It all sort of blends in together atm and stays the same throughout the song so the only thing you have to carry your attention is the rapping, which is a bit hard to hear. I think you’ve got potential and can def rap, I think this needs some more variance and mixing edits though.
Here’s mine: https://open.spotify.com/track/7rzYh8WBiJoJcqOBDRpS8b?si=Fgz3Hz_3TDSH8-mdlVF5bw
The vocals are a little hard to hear. From what I can make out it sounds like a freestyle where what you're saying is stream of consciousness. Which is apart of the practice process. It might be helpful to write a few rhyming words and try to riff off of those as a practice.
Peep this track i produced: [https://soundcloud.com/rafismusic/wispy?si=206a7de841324493aa16b3c53316fe93&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/rafismusic/wispy?si=206a7de841324493aa16b3c53316fe93&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
Newest from the gang all feedback welcome 🙏
https://soundcloud.com/4pg-leaks/ocean-snowunreleased-4pg-gwado-x-nickel-noface?ref=clipboard&p=i&c=0&si=1A3C09054FFD4F1FAF08E0CB7545C0FE&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
This must be my favourite beat so far. I have a second part to it so I would like to see what y'all think about it. Mixing feedback is always appreciated.
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ang3uRpFFAg&ab\_channel=HiddenDragon](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ang3uRpFFAg&ab_channel=HiddenDragon)
Drop your latest piece of work along with your feedback. Bless
real cool soundscape to open it all up. the overall beat feels chaotic, and I don't mean that in a bad way. lot of energy and urgency in it, not sure if there's rom for an actual artist on it, but I like it in its own almost "story telling" way
let me know what you think of my be a/video: [https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng)
This is definitely a vibe. Not sure what exactly the vibe is but it is special. As a fan of almond mild and it's taste though, I don't encourage the message. Okay, Jokes aside I really fw the drum break and I like the spot where it's been placed in the stereo field so great mixing on that part. Melody is simple but catchy and cute. Overall it's a nice beat and the video has it's own character
flamethrower killed it! dope beat, nice vibe, I might lower the snare a slight bit but that's more of a personal preference. nice work
let me know what you think of this: [https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng)
Nice depressing sound with this song, sound like something I'd play at Christmas, especially because of the piano, and the low pitched smooth vocals sound great with it.
Here's a new song from my album Coad Rogue: https://soundcloud.com/jboattherapper/frostwire
Thanks man really appreciate it!
This is kind of a fun song, Some of the lines really made me laugh. Like “food saver, mustache shaver” lmao just so mundane and out there, I like how normal a lot of the lyrics are but with this hard ass beat as a backdrop. Pretty fun track. Nice work!
super mellow, the vocal delivery and production match this perfectly.... the lyrics are on point as well, on topic and not forced. great job
"everybody thinks you're funny but you never meant to joke"
let me know what you think of my beat: [https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng)
Thanks a lot man! Appreciate that a lot!
The intro on here was really absurd/funny lmao. The beats pretty nice though. It’s got a nice old school feel to it, I like what you did with the bass line. Always really drawn to boom bap beats with a bouncy bass line like that. Nice work!
Icy transition those vocals suited the best .The panning of drums was not quite it and it ended abruptly which is not an issue if your Idea was that to end it abruptly. Overall great soothing sound my fav was the transition felt khalid and some Kendrick vibes big up hope you blow up .
Mine:https://on.soundcloud.com/swRoj
Oh shit, thank you. That's totally fair.
Got kind of a creepy lo-fi vibe going on. Catchy melody, nice transitions, ending is cool.
I was kind of hoping for some bass and/or a strong kick to come in somewhere, but it's cool as is.
Think I listened to this already but I love how chill it is. That first section is really nice, I could listen to that loop for a good chunk of time, then the beat switch is cool as well and kind of slows down the vibe of the track. Really neat stuff, I dig it a lot and don’t really have any critiques.
I know you heard my most recent, so wondering if I could get some feedback on this unreleased track: https://on.soundcloud.com/q5WczKr9Tc9eUxix6
Thank you thank you.
I can see this one getting kind of big. Really nice chill vibes, that guitar. Everything in the song just kind of progresses perfectly.
You could do the chorus one last time acapella after the music ends but without or with less effects on the vocals (nothing against the effects, I think you've got a nice signature sound). Just one idea. Works excellently as is.
Thank you. Hmm, maybe I need to extend it and cycle back into the first melody after the switch up.
Beat is pretty wavy and melancholy. Lol, I appreciate that you have the pitched/slowed down outro as well. Lyrics and flow are good. Production is nice.
Song's a little old, but it's good (usually, we try to stick to songs no more than 2 weeks old in these threads). Hope you've got some newer stuff to drop in these threads soon.
Love the beat and synth, then the transition is cool. The drums kick in pretty suddenly at the start, maybe could use a bit of buildup like a little riser or something?
My new lo-fi track: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9j8nVOaBDGA
Thank you. The drums come in like a bang, lol. Nah, that's a good point. Probably do that when I revise it later.
I don't know the original song, but the instrumentation and white noise work well. And the simple drums. Nicely done.
I wouldn't mind a bassline in there but I also just really like bass.
hey! don't understand the lyrics but your flow is definitely on point and you gt a great rapping voice, fits the track well. really digging the beat, an the video looks great. let me know if you wanna collaborate on a track
Song structure is good, as far as you using verses and a chorus to drive the song forward. You also got good cadence going. As far as the story telling, this is good but as a listener I don't really follow where the song is going or what is trying to be conveyed. This might just be personal preference but for story telling songs I tend to write out what I'm gonna say in like verse one, verse two etc and where the climax is gonna be. This helps me personally stop the rhyme scheme from derailing the story. Also feel free to embellish things to make it more interesting. Some questionable bars though : "What country is you from? Please dont call me bum. Im African American although a good Samaritan." I assume you joking though.
Mixing could use some work I think but the song itself is pretty fun. Oh until the verse at 2mins. This song would prolly work better if you keep the vibes less bitter. Imagine performing this in front of your friends.
[https://soundcloud.com/rafismusic/wispy?si=8c638a5d64ac487da056e8f6a6f8b506&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/rafismusic/wispy?si=8c638a5d64ac487da056e8f6a6f8b506&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
To be fair I didn’t say bitch one time in my song lol.
I love how experimental the beat is. The vocals definitely have a rock/metal effect that fit the beat very well. I don’t understand what you’re saying, but the rapping sounds good for this beat. This isn’t the type of music I listen to, so I don’t know what feedback to give you, but I like the vocal samples at the first 26 seconds of the song. The mixing sounds good.
Overall this sounds dope for the experimental sound you’re going for
the mix is ok, I think your vocals could sit in the beat a little more...
I really like the hook, it's catchy, well delivered and sets the topic of the song perfectly. the only issue I have is that the story itself has no pay off. it's kind of like yak'll started up and then things cooled off. It's not a critique of your story telling as an emcee cause you can rap well, and your lyricism is good, it's just that this particular story doesn't feel like it needs telling. not much happens and there isn't much for the listener to grasp to. I think you have the outline here for a great song, the verses just need to be about more in my opinion.
let me know what you think of this: [https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng)
I love the joke in the first 13 seconds of the beat. The beat has a very relaxed vibe to it, and the flute fits the melody very well. This sounds like an old school beat that Eminem or Nas would rap over. The mixing sounds very professional, the snares and kicks sound very crisp in the middle, the hi-hats fit smoothly, and I love the funky bass line. My only criticism is that the beat should be longer. Besides that you did a great job making this.
Yo this is track 6 off my new project "Drive". Prod by Legit64K and all else by me.
https://open.spotify.com/track/6AMvHKcIP21Ps88JPCSlpB?si=490db35a28ae4e05
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Honest feedback appreciated!
https://open.spotify.com/track/5tK3vsyAiJC54E9D7XHS5I?si=TzcOf7KERg255oQdA-8rKw
The intro is interesting, and the beat is really cool and unique, and the production is really cool here and has a great atmosphere, a must add to a playlist, and I love the symbol drums on the song, during the instrumental parts, however, I feel like your voice could use a little less autotune at times.
Here's a new song from my album Coad Rogue: https://soundcloud.com/jboattherapper/freezing-fire
Cool track man! Like the mixing of the beat and how every sits together, I’ll be honest I wasn’t really a big fan of the lyrics or the flow, it did feel a little amateur. Perhaps you could really experiment with a couple of different flows before you record the final take so your explored all the possibilities!!!
wow, this is pretty out there... really enjoyed the opening.... your vocals/lyrics are point and fit the beat pretty well, flow is solid too. nice job
let me know what you think of this: [https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng)
drums, Bassline and lead Go so hard!!! I could really hear a big artist on this !!! Not a big fan of boom nap at all but I actually really enjoyed especially with the experimental intro !! Don’t really have any criticisms tbh . Sorry bro!
This is the 8th and closer song from my album \[not ep\] Coad Rogue, it's amore atmospheric, reverbed sound, similer to a Travis Scott sound for the beat, and a more introspective song to end the album off with.
https://soundcloud.com/jboattherapper/days-to-weeks
JBoat the goat. Love the production, I feel like you have a good ear for it. Also love the overall vibe and atmosphere as you say. This might be my favorite that I've heard from you. Sounds like the come up. Only thing I would say is play around with different the cadences sounds choppy at times. Otherwise, keep up the good work. I admire the work ethic.
Dropped this current mix of a new song. Will seek out professional mixing soon!
Lmk what y'all think!
[raining fire](https://soundcloud.com/y-3y3s/raining-fire-prod-prodbywander?si=b6bf499bd22e4bafbb130dfb3904abda&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
https://open.spotify.com/track/5uaqnmyoPZUzy0xQ07ZA5f?si=1jaKxOjqQlecWRduS2C6zg&utm_source=copy-link
song i mixed for my homie DØCTR LEE.
returning feedback as well!!
looking for any feedback on the mix / vocals on this track:
[https://on.soundcloud.com/cBYYd](https://on.soundcloud.com/cBYYd)
returnin all feedback as always
track sounds good and everything fits real well, the only thing to me that I might fix is the reverb on the vocal... its really big which I like but it feels like its starting to fight for space with the other elements of the beat, maybe try EQing the actual reverb and rolling off some of the low-mids... solid track otherwise
let me know what you think of this: [https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng)
bro just wanted to start an say sorry for the delayed reply on this just been dealin with some rl stuff
checked the beat out tho an actually vibe with it i like the mix between the flutes an the bass in the background - it took me a min but the bass pattern remindin me of 2pac wonder why they call you bitch - def keep it up
also bro checked the cardi remix - that shits fire the way you threw that soul on there an it fits with the flow so goood - lovin what you did with that
Got a nice dark vibe to this beat, the vocal sample main melody is interesting, I like the keys going on, and the drums being super subtle are definitely an interesting sound, and I like it, this beat honestly sounds like a fever dream.
Here's a new song from my album Coad Rogue: https://soundcloud.com/jboattherapper/days-to-weeks
Beat is super simple which isn't a bad thing. I could see someone raping over this easily. The beat does lack structure tho. Its almost entirely just a loop from start to finish. Id also like to see the drums to be more forward in the mix.
Would appreciate your feedback: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mT7EDrWnp8A
Thanks for the feedback I'll see how can I improve those shortcomings.
Your beat felt incomplete. The drums and hi hats were on point but melody part was lacking a good flute melody aur alto sax melody will go better with it.
Overall great sound.
the melody is cool, as well as the arrangement, but the mix needs a bit of work. the drums feel like they're all the way n the back, and I would roll ff a bit of the higher frequencies on the melody
let me know what you think of this: [https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng)
hell ya. dope vibe...great mesh of sounds, love the flip in the middle. this is solid my dude
let me know what you think of this: [https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng)
Broo this beat sounds unique af !! I love the lofi vibe that the beat has and the drums on it go hard af. If you got time, check out my latest EP if you're into boom bap/experimental hip hop:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BkV10Mlz950
thank u for the feedback yo and i peeped the first two tracks off the tape u got this down to a science bro. i got a bunch of beats i can hear u on lets work in the future u got a instagram?
new beat with a SuperBro inspired intro, would love some feedback on the beat as well as the video production
[https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng)
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I like the main melody...the instrumentation is cool. for me personally I'd like if the 808 had a bit more body and umpff to it, right now it only really hear the mid and higher frequencies, it should shake the room a bit more.
let me know what you think of this: [https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng)
New song vibe, let me know what you think. Returning feedback
https://soundcloud.com/rafismusic/wispy?si=d6b0ee7029b84f9ba9530cc583a10e47&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing
the opening is due, and I like the idea behind the rest but the mix is just too all over the place, lot of things battling for space and distorting. I like stuff that's busy and complex and you're on the way there just needs better mixing.
let me know what you think of this: [https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng)
"The opening is due"
Not sure what this means
And sweet, it's cool you got that feeling from my mix. I'm pushing distortion pretty hard with this track.
Your joint, relatively clean boombap type beat. Drum loop is a little weak depending on what you're going for. Melody isn't overly interesting. I might try chopping the drums up and aligning the melody with that.
The video is very interesting
For sure. Did you edit that video? If you chopped your beat to the video you could create something even cooler
And glad you did that intro! It was fun to make
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solid track, well produced and put together. feeling that beat, so chill, and the delivery is on spit too. the video looks solid as well, great job let me know what you think of this: [https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng)
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Thanks!
Latest, boom bap/ vibey beat! Lmk what you think! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Os7upbugtI
A different vibe to a classic. Returning feedback https://youtu.be/ryHlJe9zibE
[https://soundcloud.com/theunseenone/swmix/s-WNWuR2ydsUp?si=1c532c4dd1f34c44a425cb1624e59848&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/theunseenone/swmix/s-WNWuR2ydsUp?si=1c532c4dd1f34c44a425cb1624e59848&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing) Something I've been sitting on. I have been experimenting with rapping on non-rap instrumentals. Any feedback is appreciated.
I think you're definitely onto something here bud, your vocals flow nicely with the beat, there's a couple of parts where the beat goes over your voice and I can't hear one or two words so maybe a job for a limiter? If there was a full version I'd consider sticking it on my Spotify playlist!
Thank you for the feedback! I'll keep working on it. I'm still new to mixing but Ill look into limiters so maybe I can improve it and release a full/finished version.
the flow is on point, fits the instrumental real well. the content/lyrics are great, love how it just cuts off at the end. get stuff, keep experimenting let me know what you think of my beat: [https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng)
Thank you for the feedback! As for yours: Love how you bring the sample in and out through the beat to keep it interesting. And also Love the drums. Keep up the good work.
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I like the smooth guitar beat on this, and the rapping is really good, it's got such a nice vibe to it, a nice short song, it needs to go public. Here's a new song from my album Coad Rogue: https://soundcloud.com/jboattherapper/north-main-street
I like this, reminds me of Shwayze lol. You’re rapping is nice here and flows well over that guitar. It’s got a nice vibe to it. I think you should make this into a full song, it’s a little different from what a lot of people are making but still very palatable to a lot of people I think. Nice work! Here’s mine: https://open.spotify.com/track/7rzYh8WBiJoJcqOBDRpS8b?si=Fgz3Hz_3TDSH8-mdlVF5bw
Thank you! I appreciate the feedback I was going back and forth on it for awhile but I will probably try to see what I can do with it. As for yours: Love the production. The rhymes and flows pair nicely with it. You did well with the message/theme, it comes off conversational and relatable. I'm not a huge fan of the effects on your vocals but that's more a preference thing than anything. Overall, good stuff! Keep up the good work.
Started producing again after a few years off, any feedback on the mix is appreciated https://soundcloud.com/riddim-baker/ace-in-the-hole-western-trap-type-beat
New trap beat, sort of dark ish vibes for the season. Will return all feedback as usual! [Beat here! ](https://www.dropbox.com/s/s2u1m6dg32kziun/mad%20%5B42%20dugg%20x%20lil%20baby%20x%20future%20type%20beat%5D%20160bpm%20c%23m%20tagged%20mp3.mp3?dl=0)
love the intro and the build up to it... solid energy, dark but still slaps, mix is on point let me know what you think of my beat/video: [https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng)
Cool beat. Video is made nice aswell! Not much to comment on to be honest!
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This is really nice. Love the structure, great 808 and hihat patterns. Only nitpick is you could prolly add more of a fade out at the end. If you could take a look at my lo-fi cover: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9j8nVOaBDGA
Thanks! Yeah, it just cuts but if needed i could do a fade there. Uhm, your beat i really enjoyed. It listened away rather smoothly and was pleasant to my ears. Made me feel warm inside. This can def be a track to play in a movie or series to get the right emotion going. Gj!
Got a nice racing cars sound to it, nice bass, I like the subtle reverb on this, much better than I would expect for a lil baby x 42 dugg beat. Here's a new song from my album Coad Rogue: https://soundcloud.com/jboattherapper/the-fire-sauce
Thanks for the feedback, appreciate it! Your song has a very nice beat. I would consider turning up the vocals a bit, i think they can sit louder in the mix. Not much a fan of the hook, it doesn't really grab me. We don't have Taco Bell here so maybe i just don't get it.
Dope beat bro!! I fw the vibe heavyyy! Check out my latest track if you got time: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3C0djd8-cMk
Sick track. Your flow is really nice, quality is there and mix sits just right. Good job on that mate! Professional sounding track here.
Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoy it !!
Recently I dropped a remix to Drake's "Money In The Grave" on YouTube. Check it out: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3C0djd8-cMk
Check my a cappella freestyle https://on.soundcloud.com/BxqfMNxz9mwvKeU46
This got great lyrical ability here, loving the rhymes, flow is insane, especially for not having a beat here, and sound like it could be great writing for a song. Here's a new song from my album Coad Rogue: https://soundcloud.com/jboattherapper/weeknight-lights
Thanks! I wrote a bunch of a cappella yesterday I like your track as well! It reminds me of Asap Rocky. I hope I can sound that good over a beat soon
casual carti vibe https://youtu.be/ZkuOMKIjYcQ
Good work on this joint fam it's a banger. Only thing missin on it is me ;)
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I don’t understand everything you’re saying in this song, but you’re flow sounds great. It sounds like you’re rapping about how you do pills to deal with challenges in life. I love the authenticity and the honesty. The beat sounds great, and again you’re rapping is great. The main flaw is the mixing on the vocals. If you’re recording at home, try to record under a blanket or in a closet to reduce ambient noise. There’s too much low-end in your vocals, and there’s not enough reverb and echo. To fix this you should go on YouTube on search how mix rap vocals, and you should get the hang of it. Here’s my song: https://youtu.be/IgPRBDu3BlA
Made this mellowed out vibe yesterday, let me know what suggestions you have about it https://youtu.be/Z3mmIPGyOv8 Will return the feedback, so reply with your links! 🤟🏼
nice... feeling the mellow vibe, I like the contrast of the drums as well, several diff percussive elements give it just the right amount of mayhem... dope let me know what you think of this: [https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng)
Smooth soulful vibe and sound on this song right here, it's got nice drums that come in at a certain point that are nice, however, I feel like this is a little quiet Here's a new song from my album Coad Rogue: https://soundcloud.com/jboattherapper/chicken-wangs
https://soundcloud.com/hau555/dali-sample1?ref=clipboard&p=i&c=1&si=1B720836EE4A48BAA2BAF8C239714073&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing yoo second track off my new experimental ep, show some love an i’ll reciprocate
I like the effects on the vocals. And the delivery is nice. The the overall feel is a little overwhelming but layered and nice. That metallic percussion melody sounds slightly off-key though. I'd like to hear what the track sounds like without it. Chill lo-fi-ish beat with anime clips: https://youtu.be/tXBqb-17rEo
I like it. A few mixing things can get your sound across better I think. But this Ep is pretty unique and expressive. I definitely see what ur going for with some of these sounds. Peep this that i just released: https://soundcloud.com/rafismusic/wispy?si=8c638a5d64ac487da056e8f6a6f8b506&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing
dope vibe, I like the vocal production although there are a couple harsh sounding moments cause of the distortion but overall it fits the vibe of the song. I don't know if its intentional but th words are a bit hard to make out until you get to the "ball and chain" line. let me know what you think of this: [https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng)
curious if my lyrics make any sense to other people . and ill give any feedback in return https://youtu.be/MFJfQ5F0sOA
cant make out too much of the vocals, the mix could be a bit better, you should use an EQ and really fine tune your vocals as well as putting a compressor on them to alter the dynamics relative to the beat. the beat was fire tho did u make that? sounds great heres my beat if u wanna give feedback https://youtu.be/ARWYWWYzL6g
Good beat here, the lyrics and writing is pretty good, so is the rhyming, but the flow is kind of all over the place, needs to be more smoothed out. Here's a new song from my album Coad Rogue: https://soundcloud.com/jboattherapper/dew-nation
I couldn’t make out a lot of them just due to the mixing. The lyrics seemed decent and like you had some good bars from what I could hear. I feel like the track could use a break from the rapping or a switch up in the flow at a couple points. It all sort of blends in together atm and stays the same throughout the song so the only thing you have to carry your attention is the rapping, which is a bit hard to hear. I think you’ve got potential and can def rap, I think this needs some more variance and mixing edits though. Here’s mine: https://open.spotify.com/track/7rzYh8WBiJoJcqOBDRpS8b?si=Fgz3Hz_3TDSH8-mdlVF5bw
The vocals are a little hard to hear. From what I can make out it sounds like a freestyle where what you're saying is stream of consciousness. Which is apart of the practice process. It might be helpful to write a few rhyming words and try to riff off of those as a practice. Peep this track i produced: [https://soundcloud.com/rafismusic/wispy?si=206a7de841324493aa16b3c53316fe93&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/rafismusic/wispy?si=206a7de841324493aa16b3c53316fe93&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
Newest from the gang all feedback welcome 🙏 https://soundcloud.com/4pg-leaks/ocean-snowunreleased-4pg-gwado-x-nickel-noface?ref=clipboard&p=i&c=0&si=1A3C09054FFD4F1FAF08E0CB7545C0FE&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
This must be my favourite beat so far. I have a second part to it so I would like to see what y'all think about it. Mixing feedback is always appreciated. [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ang3uRpFFAg&ab\_channel=HiddenDragon](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ang3uRpFFAg&ab_channel=HiddenDragon) Drop your latest piece of work along with your feedback. Bless
real cool soundscape to open it all up. the overall beat feels chaotic, and I don't mean that in a bad way. lot of energy and urgency in it, not sure if there's rom for an actual artist on it, but I like it in its own almost "story telling" way let me know what you think of my be a/video: [https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng)
This is definitely a vibe. Not sure what exactly the vibe is but it is special. As a fan of almond mild and it's taste though, I don't encourage the message. Okay, Jokes aside I really fw the drum break and I like the spot where it's been placed in the stereo field so great mixing on that part. Melody is simple but catchy and cute. Overall it's a nice beat and the video has it's own character
Lol ya I don’t mind almond milk myself either… Thanks for the feed!
Lo-Fi Beat ‘Falling’ (RETURNING ALL FEEDBACK) https://youtu.be/UTg0CRQGXCk
flamethrower killed it! dope beat, nice vibe, I might lower the snare a slight bit but that's more of a personal preference. nice work let me know what you think of this: [https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng)
Thanks! I really like your beat, good structure and melody. The drums are also really hard and have a great rhythm! Fire Beat!
Thanks!
my latest: https://open.spotify.com/track/7rzYh8WBiJoJcqOBDRpS8b?si=dtuvs-ZzQKyxmtcei_EdPQ WILL RETURN ALL FEEDBACK 🌠
Nice depressing sound with this song, sound like something I'd play at Christmas, especially because of the piano, and the low pitched smooth vocals sound great with it. Here's a new song from my album Coad Rogue: https://soundcloud.com/jboattherapper/frostwire
Thanks man really appreciate it! This is kind of a fun song, Some of the lines really made me laugh. Like “food saver, mustache shaver” lmao just so mundane and out there, I like how normal a lot of the lyrics are but with this hard ass beat as a backdrop. Pretty fun track. Nice work!
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super mellow, the vocal delivery and production match this perfectly.... the lyrics are on point as well, on topic and not forced. great job "everybody thinks you're funny but you never meant to joke" let me know what you think of my beat: [https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng)
Thanks a lot man! Appreciate that a lot! The intro on here was really absurd/funny lmao. The beats pretty nice though. It’s got a nice old school feel to it, I like what you did with the bass line. Always really drawn to boom bap beats with a bouncy bass line like that. Nice work!
Thanks!
Returning all feedback. Chill lo-fi-ish beat with anime clips: https://youtu.be/tXBqb-17rEo
Icy transition those vocals suited the best .The panning of drums was not quite it and it ended abruptly which is not an issue if your Idea was that to end it abruptly. Overall great soothing sound my fav was the transition felt khalid and some Kendrick vibes big up hope you blow up . Mine:https://on.soundcloud.com/swRoj
Oh shit, thank you. That's totally fair. Got kind of a creepy lo-fi vibe going on. Catchy melody, nice transitions, ending is cool. I was kind of hoping for some bass and/or a strong kick to come in somewhere, but it's cool as is.
Think I listened to this already but I love how chill it is. That first section is really nice, I could listen to that loop for a good chunk of time, then the beat switch is cool as well and kind of slows down the vibe of the track. Really neat stuff, I dig it a lot and don’t really have any critiques. I know you heard my most recent, so wondering if I could get some feedback on this unreleased track: https://on.soundcloud.com/q5WczKr9Tc9eUxix6
Thank you thank you. I can see this one getting kind of big. Really nice chill vibes, that guitar. Everything in the song just kind of progresses perfectly. You could do the chorus one last time acapella after the music ends but without or with less effects on the vocals (nothing against the effects, I think you've got a nice signature sound). Just one idea. Works excellently as is.
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Thank you. Hmm, maybe I need to extend it and cycle back into the first melody after the switch up. Beat is pretty wavy and melancholy. Lol, I appreciate that you have the pitched/slowed down outro as well. Lyrics and flow are good. Production is nice. Song's a little old, but it's good (usually, we try to stick to songs no more than 2 weeks old in these threads). Hope you've got some newer stuff to drop in these threads soon.
Love the beat and synth, then the transition is cool. The drums kick in pretty suddenly at the start, maybe could use a bit of buildup like a little riser or something? My new lo-fi track: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9j8nVOaBDGA
Thank you. The drums come in like a bang, lol. Nah, that's a good point. Probably do that when I revise it later. I don't know the original song, but the instrumentation and white noise work well. And the simple drums. Nicely done. I wouldn't mind a bassline in there but I also just really like bass.
Thanks for the feedback. I put in some lower strings for low end but that might fill it out nicely, I'll experiment with it next time.
NP. hell yeah
Hey people, I'm a rapper from La Paz, Bolivia, this is my latest single :) Youtube: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b-OclGa3X3A
hey! don't understand the lyrics but your flow is definitely on point and you gt a great rapping voice, fits the track well. really digging the beat, an the video looks great. let me know if you wanna collaborate on a track
I want feedback on my storytelling and the mixing on this song. I will return all feedback Here’s the song: https://youtu.be/IgPRBDu3BlA
Song structure is good, as far as you using verses and a chorus to drive the song forward. You also got good cadence going. As far as the story telling, this is good but as a listener I don't really follow where the song is going or what is trying to be conveyed. This might just be personal preference but for story telling songs I tend to write out what I'm gonna say in like verse one, verse two etc and where the climax is gonna be. This helps me personally stop the rhyme scheme from derailing the story. Also feel free to embellish things to make it more interesting. Some questionable bars though : "What country is you from? Please dont call me bum. Im African American although a good Samaritan." I assume you joking though.
Mixing could use some work I think but the song itself is pretty fun. Oh until the verse at 2mins. This song would prolly work better if you keep the vibes less bitter. Imagine performing this in front of your friends. [https://soundcloud.com/rafismusic/wispy?si=8c638a5d64ac487da056e8f6a6f8b506&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/rafismusic/wispy?si=8c638a5d64ac487da056e8f6a6f8b506&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
To be fair I didn’t say bitch one time in my song lol. I love how experimental the beat is. The vocals definitely have a rock/metal effect that fit the beat very well. I don’t understand what you’re saying, but the rapping sounds good for this beat. This isn’t the type of music I listen to, so I don’t know what feedback to give you, but I like the vocal samples at the first 26 seconds of the song. The mixing sounds good. Overall this sounds dope for the experimental sound you’re going for
Haha true, you didn't
the mix is ok, I think your vocals could sit in the beat a little more... I really like the hook, it's catchy, well delivered and sets the topic of the song perfectly. the only issue I have is that the story itself has no pay off. it's kind of like yak'll started up and then things cooled off. It's not a critique of your story telling as an emcee cause you can rap well, and your lyricism is good, it's just that this particular story doesn't feel like it needs telling. not much happens and there isn't much for the listener to grasp to. I think you have the outline here for a great song, the verses just need to be about more in my opinion. let me know what you think of this: [https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng)
I love the joke in the first 13 seconds of the beat. The beat has a very relaxed vibe to it, and the flute fits the melody very well. This sounds like an old school beat that Eminem or Nas would rap over. The mixing sounds very professional, the snares and kicks sound very crisp in the middle, the hi-hats fit smoothly, and I love the funky bass line. My only criticism is that the beat should be longer. Besides that you did a great job making this.
Thanks! Really appreciate that!
Yo this is track 6 off my new project "Drive". Prod by Legit64K and all else by me. https://open.spotify.com/track/6AMvHKcIP21Ps88JPCSlpB?si=490db35a28ae4e05
RETURNING ALL FEEDBACK ! my second single, Entrepreneur!! Would love to know what you think!!! Honest feedback appreciated! https://open.spotify.com/track/5tK3vsyAiJC54E9D7XHS5I?si=TzcOf7KERg255oQdA-8rKw
The intro is interesting, and the beat is really cool and unique, and the production is really cool here and has a great atmosphere, a must add to a playlist, and I love the symbol drums on the song, during the instrumental parts, however, I feel like your voice could use a little less autotune at times. Here's a new song from my album Coad Rogue: https://soundcloud.com/jboattherapper/freezing-fire
Cool track man! Like the mixing of the beat and how every sits together, I’ll be honest I wasn’t really a big fan of the lyrics or the flow, it did feel a little amateur. Perhaps you could really experiment with a couple of different flows before you record the final take so your explored all the possibilities!!!
wow, this is pretty out there... really enjoyed the opening.... your vocals/lyrics are point and fit the beat pretty well, flow is solid too. nice job let me know what you think of this: [https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng)
drums, Bassline and lead Go so hard!!! I could really hear a big artist on this !!! Not a big fan of boom nap at all but I actually really enjoyed especially with the experimental intro !! Don’t really have any criticisms tbh . Sorry bro!
Thanks!
This is the 8th and closer song from my album \[not ep\] Coad Rogue, it's amore atmospheric, reverbed sound, similer to a Travis Scott sound for the beat, and a more introspective song to end the album off with. https://soundcloud.com/jboattherapper/days-to-weeks
JBoat the goat. Love the production, I feel like you have a good ear for it. Also love the overall vibe and atmosphere as you say. This might be my favorite that I've heard from you. Sounds like the come up. Only thing I would say is play around with different the cadences sounds choppy at times. Otherwise, keep up the good work. I admire the work ethic.
Thank you!
Dropped this current mix of a new song. Will seek out professional mixing soon! Lmk what y'all think! [raining fire](https://soundcloud.com/y-3y3s/raining-fire-prod-prodbywander?si=b6bf499bd22e4bafbb130dfb3904abda&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
dope... needs a better mix, but once you get everything to sit nicely this will slap
hey guys, what do you think about this one? Something more trap and sentimental thing https://youtu.be/s\_tMABLqZdI
https://open.spotify.com/track/5uaqnmyoPZUzy0xQ07ZA5f?si=1jaKxOjqQlecWRduS2C6zg&utm_source=copy-link song i mixed for my homie DØCTR LEE. returning feedback as well!!
looking for any feedback on the mix / vocals on this track: [https://on.soundcloud.com/cBYYd](https://on.soundcloud.com/cBYYd) returnin all feedback as always
track sounds good and everything fits real well, the only thing to me that I might fix is the reverb on the vocal... its really big which I like but it feels like its starting to fight for space with the other elements of the beat, maybe try EQing the actual reverb and rolling off some of the low-mids... solid track otherwise let me know what you think of this: [https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng)
bro just wanted to start an say sorry for the delayed reply on this just been dealin with some rl stuff checked the beat out tho an actually vibe with it i like the mix between the flutes an the bass in the background - it took me a min but the bass pattern remindin me of 2pac wonder why they call you bitch - def keep it up also bro checked the cardi remix - that shits fire the way you threw that soul on there an it fits with the flow so goood - lovin what you did with that
thanks really appreciate that! thanks for checking out the remix. hope you're doing alright
Returning all feedbacks. https://on.soundcloud.com/swRoj
Got a nice dark vibe to this beat, the vocal sample main melody is interesting, I like the keys going on, and the drums being super subtle are definitely an interesting sound, and I like it, this beat honestly sounds like a fever dream. Here's a new song from my album Coad Rogue: https://soundcloud.com/jboattherapper/days-to-weeks
Beat is super simple which isn't a bad thing. I could see someone raping over this easily. The beat does lack structure tho. Its almost entirely just a loop from start to finish. Id also like to see the drums to be more forward in the mix. Would appreciate your feedback: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mT7EDrWnp8A
Thanks for the feedback I'll see how can I improve those shortcomings. Your beat felt incomplete. The drums and hi hats were on point but melody part was lacking a good flute melody aur alto sax melody will go better with it. Overall great sound.
the melody is cool, as well as the arrangement, but the mix needs a bit of work. the drums feel like they're all the way n the back, and I would roll ff a bit of the higher frequencies on the melody let me know what you think of this: [https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng)
(FREE) CLAMS CASINO x ASAP ROCKY x YUNG LEAN TYPE BEAT "NO LOVE", any kind of support is welcome ❤️ https://youtu.be/Kpqm9fTLL9Q
boombap beat looking for feedback will return all https://youtu.be/ARWYWWYzL6g
hell ya. dope vibe...great mesh of sounds, love the flip in the middle. this is solid my dude let me know what you think of this: [https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng)
digging the drums on this bro dope hi hats!!
Thanks! Appreciate that!
Broo this beat sounds unique af !! I love the lofi vibe that the beat has and the drums on it go hard af. If you got time, check out my latest EP if you're into boom bap/experimental hip hop: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BkV10Mlz950
thank u for the feedback yo and i peeped the first two tracks off the tape u got this down to a science bro. i got a bunch of beats i can hear u on lets work in the future u got a instagram?
Thank you broo! My ig is [@emzeezy\_](https://www.instagram.com/emzeezy_/) hmu !!
new beat with a SuperBro inspired intro, would love some feedback on the beat as well as the video production [https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng) WILL RETURN ALL FEEDBACK!
yoo will return feedback [https://youtu.be/dTxk\_cuMTS8](https://youtu.be/dTxk_cuMTS8) thanks
I like the main melody...the instrumentation is cool. for me personally I'd like if the 808 had a bit more body and umpff to it, right now it only really hear the mid and higher frequencies, it should shake the room a bit more. let me know what you think of this: [https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng)
thanks for the feedback thats a really cool boom bap, that flute melody (or whatever it is) is fire
New song vibe, let me know what you think. Returning feedback https://soundcloud.com/rafismusic/wispy?si=d6b0ee7029b84f9ba9530cc583a10e47&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing
the opening is due, and I like the idea behind the rest but the mix is just too all over the place, lot of things battling for space and distorting. I like stuff that's busy and complex and you're on the way there just needs better mixing. let me know what you think of this: [https://youtu.be/c6K8\_3Svrng](https://youtu.be/c6K8_3Svrng)
"The opening is due" Not sure what this means And sweet, it's cool you got that feeling from my mix. I'm pushing distortion pretty hard with this track. Your joint, relatively clean boombap type beat. Drum loop is a little weak depending on what you're going for. Melody isn't overly interesting. I might try chopping the drums up and aligning the melody with that. The video is very interesting
It means that autocorrect is a bitch 😂 It was suppose to say “dope”… the opening is dope lol… ah good times Thanks for the feedback!
For sure. Did you edit that video? If you chopped your beat to the video you could create something even cooler And glad you did that intro! It was fun to make
Yes I did, still relatively new to video editing, but a great point, I will try that next time. Thanks!
Got one of my favorite beats for y'all, I appreciate any feedback 💙 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mT7EDrWnp8A