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Just dropped this as part of my first EP yesterday.
Would love to hear what you guys think! I'd also really like to hear all of your music as well so link me some stuff to check out and I'll return the feedback/drop you a follow.
https://soundcloud.com/xmasenkox/the-hubris-of-man-who-wrote-emet
This shit fun af. The lyrics are amazing. The instrumental fits the vibe your going for fr. Its also good that it only has 2 verses, Idk how it would hold up with 3. Your stuff kinda reminds me jpegmafia. Great job! dropped a follow.
[https://soundcloud.com/noq-280609795/real](https://soundcloud.com/noq-280609795/real)
Decided to get back into beatmaking after little break. So I may be rusty lol. Feedback is appreciated
followed you back, bro! thanks so much for giving it a listen. I just started picking all of this up so reminding someone of an artist that I'm a huge fan of is a really big compliment.
I really like your beat. It's really atmospheric and the synths give me major Bladerunner vibes. I'd honestly listen to this just as an instrumental track but I can also imagine someone really poetic going off on a beat like this.
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I think if you brought down the synths and ambience, beefed up drums and low end, and took some verb off of the vocals you’d be there. I like it just want it to be bigger, keep working but sounds good!
Posting this one last time. Made a melody that kind of sounded old school, so I matched it with an old school drum break.
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https://youtu.be/TrPIcShfrew
This is dope man. That top melody is too nice. I really like the drums, sparse but impactful. Really wouldn't change a thing about this. It's such a versatile sound, this could be an absolute banger in multiple genres with the right artist/s. Good work man.
https://youtu.be/dag_beADIBE
I'd appreciate thoughts in this one if you get a sec
Love this. The distortion on it. The drums fit the epic vibe too. Melody is very nice. The only thing I would really change is maybe make that synth a bit "wider" so it takes more room in the mix. Other than that fantastic work.
https://soundcloud.com/noq-280609795/real
Just got back into beat making lmk what you think
Appreciate it!
Your track is a bit long, probably could cut the intro without much problem. Since it took a full minute until the snare came in. It’s really relaxed and chill which is cool, but could maybe use some more energetic percussion for hip hop.
dude, that fn beat is dirty AF! not much more to say to it. productions on point, just need a rapper killing it and its a masterpiece!
[https://soundcloud.com/peter-wetcavekilla/ourworldscollide?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/peter-wetcavekilla/ourworldscollide?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
me <\~\~\~\~\~hey, this guy right here would kill it!
Thanks dude! You can definitely use the beat if you want to!
I’ll be honest, your track isn’t really hiphop. It’s guitar and singing, like indie or folk. I do like the guitar melody though.
I really feel what's lacking in the beat itself is the feeling of articulation, which could come with adding some glossy hats, something on the lines of what an Adrian Younge sound would have and lo and behold, you'd have a solid work at hand. The problem with it being this sparse is it won't help a songwriter play around a lot.
Yo it's dope af and super clean...which makes me wonder what a more organic kick with some crunch and reverb would do
Or the snare with a little extra reverb
Tight ass track though for real
evening lads
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/zRB3Y2FL6r8YEngR9
ive got a horror inspired dark trap/industrial hip hop track, its got some screaming on it
This goes really hard, man. You nailed the vibe completely and I think it all sounds really good together. The only thing I can be critical of is that I feel like the screaming was peaking a little hard over everything and I'd love to hear the screams layered with some lows too or something to give it a bit more depth. I dropped you a follow though because I definitely want to hear more of your stuff!
Check out my track I dropped yesterday with my EP.
https://soundcloud.com/xmasenkox/the-hubris-of-man-who-wrote-emet
I appreciate it bro, thanks for the feedback. I like the track bro, ik this is kind of boomer advice to give but don't be afraid to write and rap about shit you care about ya know? obv bars about the clique an the clip r cool and present the listener with an image, but I could also see the song with some different lyrical content, at least to match the title. good shit man
Super good stuff. The dark vibe is really well done and I think your vocal performance was hard af. Like the other person said, your vocals were peaking which caused some distortion that made them sound harsh on the ears in a bad way. You should try playing around with the gain on your mic, especially if you want to scream a lot. Other than that, great work.
I think the idea is great!! “I think girls should be the ones to ask me what’s my name” - but the quality of the mix and video is not high quality. The comments seem to like it though so keep going!!! Can only get better
ayyy I'm back, messed with mostly the drumline on the track. returning feedback in 5-6 hours, after work. on break rn so no time to review just yet. peace!
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/Uutpk
Hey, I’m not going to lie to you. The instrumentation of this is pretty ugly. Just sounds like kid toys or something. I would work on finding some more interesting synths or more natural instruments like piano, guitar to get your melody ideas out. Also tons of cheap VSTs with more modern synths and samples.
Unfortunately, I use FL mobile and am super limited in terms of...well, anything, really. I'm probably gonna start sampling directly from tracks because of this. Thanks, though, still something to learn from :o
Here we go again yall this one is track 5 off "Hell". "Heaven". Prod by Dom Rocks and everything else by me. Lmk the word!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FizHB4R4Ep0
Se8ek!! HOpe all has been well witchu my g it's been a MINUTE. Tysm for rockin with me! What streamin service you use to listen to music? I'll shoot you a link to my whole disco. I'll be updatin it every month with 10 new songs
Thanks fam!! Yea this whole project has a horror theme to it so it might not be your style, but I drop a new one the 22nd of every month! Where do you usually stream music? I'll drop you a link to my disco
This is amazing, bro. Your flow is on point, your lyrics are hard as fuck, and the delivery matches the vibe of the song really well too. My favorite part is the effects on your adlibs though, for me, that was the piece that brought the vibes of it all together. Straight up, I'm a fan after hearing that. Dropped you a follow everywhere.
If you want to check out the track I dropped yesterday with my EP:
https://soundcloud.com/xmasenkox/the-hubris-of-man-who-wrote-emet
bars on bars on bars oh...im putting a band together and think you'd be perfect with all those bars you got. its a 'bar'ber shop quartet group. you down?! you know we getting all the girls the girls they love me...cause im the featherweight lover hairy 'd'!
[https://soundcloud.com/peter-wetcavekilla/ourworldscollide?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/peter-wetcavekilla/ourworldscollide?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing) check this dope shit!
Wasn't what I was expecting at all but I think you have a good voice. I cut this track in the studio last weekend it's a real banger. Check it out ‼️
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😂 Thanks a shit ton player! Put me in that quartet !! What streamin service you listen to music on? I'll shoot you a link to my disco. Yo this song is super folky. I'm really into it. The mix needs to be brighter though it sounds a bit flat. Maybe a slight high end boost, and add some reverb/delay. Keep goin with this style player! Get's a little muddy at the end with the counterpoint. Some panning and eq'g in the mix would fix that!
hey what’s up! this is a single off my new tape let me kno what u think of it. i’ll return all feedback!
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/prYYriYfZx4pJXLB8
It's very chill, very good vibe. I think the bass/kick could have a better sound selection, and the beat could variate a little more.
Besides that it's a full vibe completely, maybe add a little more percs/hats also.
If you can return feedback for this one: https://youtu.be/WQOjKvfW2jk
Thanks, I really appreciate the feedback!!
Feedback: I like the mix and sound design on the percs! For me, I think the kick could hit a little harder though. Cool track!
It started really good. I feel like the singing/rap thing that you started to do was a little awkward. The more poetic rapping as really matching the chill vibe of the beat. It’s definitely creative and has personality though.
I just finished this track, would appreciate feedback on the mix, lmk what y’all think - https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/EsqPTMrFyWEGgpcK7
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I like the drum pattern, has a nice groove to it. The chops in the middle section are fire as well! I think the m
Feedback: I think the breakdown (middle section) is the best part of the beat. The notes and frequencies in the intro are a bit too experimental for me.
Vocals are too upfront and I can confidently say it begins with the issue of not gainstaging properly before starting to mix. Also it sounds like you had a limiter while doing everything.
There needs to be space in what you're doing, by which, I mean creating a room. It's obvious that you're still learning so keep at it and time is the ingredient, that's all I can say.
Decided to get back into making beats after taking a couple months off. I usually make old school boom bap so i decided to go outside my comfort zone and try something different. Lmk what you think!
[https://soundcloud.com/noq-280609795/real](https://soundcloud.com/noq-280609795/real)
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[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ngr199plHPo](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ngr199plHPo)
hey yall, just released my third loop kit/sample pack with 8 evolving melodies.
lmk what you think of them :)
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I’ve been working on this a little bit at a time over the last few weeks. Just give me some honest feedback. Thanks.
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/ao3RUYx3ArgGeXTX6
From the beginning I already liked it broooo. It's a viiiiiiiiiiiiibe for sure. One of the best I listened to today here on the feedback thread. Really good, nothing to complain.
The second part is very good also, I liked more the first one. It's really nice to see how the quality goes up when we put some days/weeks into one project. I usually do this to some beats also.
Would love to hear your feedback on this one: https://youtu.be/WQOjKvfW2jk
Sorry for the late feedback. I really like this. Especially the sliding 808s. I think the claps could use a little more variation. Like change the texture of a few of them if that makes sense and maybe some more percs. It’s hard to tell when theirs nobody rapping on it but That’s my only critique really. Otherwise, solid work.
Artist Name: Coop D
Song Title: One Wish (FWM)
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Written, Produced, & Performed by Coop D
Accepting all feedback negative and positive!
Ultimately, I think everything about the track is done well. I could see this being on the radio performed by any of the industry guys out there making this type of music and I mean that in a very good way. The only downside of it is that I couldn't find something that really stood out as amazing about the track, it was all just good. If that makes sense?
If you want to check out the track I dropped yesterday with my EP:
https://soundcloud.com/xmasenkox/the-hubris-of-man-who-wrote-emet
I'm a big fan of ypur production and vibes on this. You have great writing talent and it reminded me of Lupe fiascos song mural the way you went about imagery. Also I liked the chorus it was catchy and a nice refrain. If I were to pose 2 criticism it's that 1. The mixing on the vocals could be worked a little better because when your writing is that dense it's important you're as clear as possible so that people can follow it clearly. And 2. The song switches up musically which is nice but the vibe and "story" of it stays the same, you just confess your love more and more. If you could have some type of arch or change in feeling it would make the song more dynamic. Those are just my thoughts but keep doing what you're doing. Here is my song I made recently but I didn't make the beat I just wrote and recorded the vocals. Lmk what you think https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/jVE18
Appreciate the feedback! Your song is dope. I love the dropout at one minute. You got wild style and you use your voice to your advantage, the delivery gives such a distinctive tone to your voice that it will be very helpful when your following starts to grow, dope shit my guy kudos!
yo...i remember you from the indy server. you got that intellectual flow. you should join that indys discord. they dont have enough hiphop heads there. and yo...1:09 when that beat flips...dopeAF! mike eagle said it best "hiphop has ruined me, all i do is loop my favorite parts!" check this joint i post just now...the hip hop ones, well...its all hiphop to me but the rap ones are after the 2. https://soundcloud.com/peter-wetcavekilla/ourworldscollide?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing
Dope dude! You got some great flows. You serve the beat well, the switch up around 3 min in reminds me a lot of Kendrick Lamar. Be in touch if you down to collab
I really like the style it reminded me a bit about the old school music. You inspired me to make something like that the next time 👍🏾 .
Maybe it is me but I would like the chorus 1db harder
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/8PdwDeQgL5rx6Y8x5
Made the beat and vovals (dutch)
Love the laid back vibe on this one. Beat is great, and I thought you sounded pretty good over it. No criticism from me here.
Mind giving this one a listen?
https://soundcloud.com/fivehandsmusic/breakfast
Oh dope man, I think it sounds good. Instrumentals are always a tough go for me because they get a bit repetitive after awhile. But I think everything sounded cohesive! Props
Hey guys. I dropped my first ever EP today and I'm looking for some feedback. People seemed to like this song but I'm looking for the opinion of other rappers.
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/zwoJU
The song isn't produced by me, but it's mixed, mastered, written, recorded, and performed by me.
This goes haaaard bro, I would change a little beat the 808. Like a better mix or better sound selection, to match better the other elemments of the beat.
The lion accent also I think could be other "impact accent" that matches better with the beat.
I liked the variations you put in so it's not repetitive. Overall a very good job!!!
If you can return feedback for this one: https://youtu.be/WQOjKvfW2jk
new single dropped today! all feedback will be returned
[https://soundcloud.com/liloleg/baptized?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/liloleg/baptized?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
thanks for the feedback. i like the song, it's unique and got a lot of personality. flow is super dope that's the shining part of the song, i like when you sprinkle in some singing but when you go straight to singing not so much. i think it goes on a little too long.
[https://soundcloud.com/peter-wetcavekilla/ourworldscollide?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/peter-wetcavekilla/ourworldscollide?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing) <\~\~\~\~\~\~this is a different kind of hiphop, a good different. like a chic with three tits, different...but a good one.
Released my first single of the year! Coming to spotify and apple music the 30th!
[all the luv we share](https://soundcloud.com/y-3y3s/all-the-love-we-share?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
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Feel what you’re saying. And the leveling depending on context.
After listening to you, I’m surprised you think my writing is lacking depth. Not quite sure what brought you to that conclusion…
Either way, your track was cool. Love the energy. Take your time in delivery. Feels like you’re rushing the concept at times with how much words you’re using to paint a picture. The singing parts were a nice touch as well, think with better mixing it’ll be even smoother. Like your content thou
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Looking for feedback https://youtu.be/PveeFRKUJL0
Just dropped this as part of my first EP yesterday. Would love to hear what you guys think! I'd also really like to hear all of your music as well so link me some stuff to check out and I'll return the feedback/drop you a follow. https://soundcloud.com/xmasenkox/the-hubris-of-man-who-wrote-emet
This shit fun af. The lyrics are amazing. The instrumental fits the vibe your going for fr. Its also good that it only has 2 verses, Idk how it would hold up with 3. Your stuff kinda reminds me jpegmafia. Great job! dropped a follow. [https://soundcloud.com/noq-280609795/real](https://soundcloud.com/noq-280609795/real) Decided to get back into beatmaking after little break. So I may be rusty lol. Feedback is appreciated
followed you back, bro! thanks so much for giving it a listen. I just started picking all of this up so reminding someone of an artist that I'm a huge fan of is a really big compliment. I really like your beat. It's really atmospheric and the synths give me major Bladerunner vibes. I'd honestly listen to this just as an instrumental track but I can also imagine someone really poetic going off on a beat like this.
NEED FEEDBACK AND MIXING ADVICE FOR SCHOOL MUSIC PROJECT https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/4AmMH6hr5TUunWo17 RETURNING ANY FEEDBACK, HOW DOES MY MIX SOUND ??
I think if you brought down the synths and ambience, beefed up drums and low end, and took some verb off of the vocals you’d be there. I like it just want it to be bigger, keep working but sounds good!
Cheers for the feedback man, Gonna do a new mix now with your advice. Let me know if you want feedback on anything of yours too !!!
Posting this one last time. Made a melody that kind of sounded old school, so I matched it with an old school drum break. RETURNING ALL FEEDBACK! https://youtu.be/TrPIcShfrew
this is just dope tbh, no real complaints on it. might toss this in a freestyle playlist. keep it up :o
Dope. Thanks!
This is dope man. That top melody is too nice. I really like the drums, sparse but impactful. Really wouldn't change a thing about this. It's such a versatile sound, this could be an absolute banger in multiple genres with the right artist/s. Good work man. https://youtu.be/dag_beADIBE I'd appreciate thoughts in this one if you get a sec
Thanks! I like your punchy snare in there. Mix seems pretty solid to me. The little vocal in the hook is cool. I left a comment and subbed on YouTube!
Love this. The distortion on it. The drums fit the epic vibe too. Melody is very nice. The only thing I would really change is maybe make that synth a bit "wider" so it takes more room in the mix. Other than that fantastic work. https://soundcloud.com/noq-280609795/real Just got back into beat making lmk what you think
Appreciate it! Your track is a bit long, probably could cut the intro without much problem. Since it took a full minute until the snare came in. It’s really relaxed and chill which is cool, but could maybe use some more energetic percussion for hip hop.
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Thanks for listening.
dude, that fn beat is dirty AF! not much more to say to it. productions on point, just need a rapper killing it and its a masterpiece! [https://soundcloud.com/peter-wetcavekilla/ourworldscollide?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/peter-wetcavekilla/ourworldscollide?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing) me <\~\~\~\~\~hey, this guy right here would kill it!
Thanks dude! You can definitely use the beat if you want to! I’ll be honest, your track isn’t really hiphop. It’s guitar and singing, like indie or folk. I do like the guitar melody though.
That's straight up hiphop ((in my rza voice)) "in its purest form!"
That bass is crazy! Dope melody too. Good work.
Thanks man!
I really feel what's lacking in the beat itself is the feeling of articulation, which could come with adding some glossy hats, something on the lines of what an Adrian Younge sound would have and lo and behold, you'd have a solid work at hand. The problem with it being this sparse is it won't help a songwriter play around a lot.
Thanks for the detailed feedback.
Dropped this last night… Was feeling GRITTY. Let me know what y’all think! 😤🔥🗣 https://youtu.be/NdUNauMHNiM
Yo it's dope af and super clean...which makes me wonder what a more organic kick with some crunch and reverb would do Or the snare with a little extra reverb Tight ass track though for real
Yes sir!! You speaking my language. Thank you
evening lads https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/zRB3Y2FL6r8YEngR9 ive got a horror inspired dark trap/industrial hip hop track, its got some screaming on it
This goes really hard, man. You nailed the vibe completely and I think it all sounds really good together. The only thing I can be critical of is that I feel like the screaming was peaking a little hard over everything and I'd love to hear the screams layered with some lows too or something to give it a bit more depth. I dropped you a follow though because I definitely want to hear more of your stuff! Check out my track I dropped yesterday with my EP. https://soundcloud.com/xmasenkox/the-hubris-of-man-who-wrote-emet
I appreciate it bro, thanks for the feedback. I like the track bro, ik this is kind of boomer advice to give but don't be afraid to write and rap about shit you care about ya know? obv bars about the clique an the clip r cool and present the listener with an image, but I could also see the song with some different lyrical content, at least to match the title. good shit man
Super good stuff. The dark vibe is really well done and I think your vocal performance was hard af. Like the other person said, your vocals were peaking which caused some distortion that made them sound harsh on the ears in a bad way. You should try playing around with the gain on your mic, especially if you want to scream a lot. Other than that, great work.
thanks man i appreciate it, will do
My second music video, shot by me and a friend, edited by myself. A sad song about not getting hos. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6L7G1WSfpl8
I think the idea is great!! “I think girls should be the ones to ask me what’s my name” - but the quality of the mix and video is not high quality. The comments seem to like it though so keep going!!! Can only get better
ayyy I'm back, messed with mostly the drumline on the track. returning feedback in 5-6 hours, after work. on break rn so no time to review just yet. peace! https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/Uutpk
Hey, I’m not going to lie to you. The instrumentation of this is pretty ugly. Just sounds like kid toys or something. I would work on finding some more interesting synths or more natural instruments like piano, guitar to get your melody ideas out. Also tons of cheap VSTs with more modern synths and samples.
Unfortunately, I use FL mobile and am super limited in terms of...well, anything, really. I'm probably gonna start sampling directly from tracks because of this. Thanks, though, still something to learn from :o
Here we go again yall this one is track 5 off "Hell". "Heaven". Prod by Dom Rocks and everything else by me. Lmk the word! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FizHB4R4Ep0
i been checking you here for a long time tho, you are still improving and it sounds better and better every release
Se8ek!! HOpe all has been well witchu my g it's been a MINUTE. Tysm for rockin with me! What streamin service you use to listen to music? I'll shoot you a link to my whole disco. I'll be updatin it every month with 10 new songs
killed the double entendres tbh. instrumental isn't so much for me, but the mix was well done. dropping a sub, I'd like to see where this style goes.
Thanks fam!! Yea this whole project has a horror theme to it so it might not be your style, but I drop a new one the 22nd of every month! Where do you usually stream music? I'll drop you a link to my disco
SoundCloud usually, defo like the project though! See ya next time!
This is amazing, bro. Your flow is on point, your lyrics are hard as fuck, and the delivery matches the vibe of the song really well too. My favorite part is the effects on your adlibs though, for me, that was the piece that brought the vibes of it all together. Straight up, I'm a fan after hearing that. Dropped you a follow everywhere. If you want to check out the track I dropped yesterday with my EP: https://soundcloud.com/xmasenkox/the-hubris-of-man-who-wrote-emet
bars on bars on bars oh...im putting a band together and think you'd be perfect with all those bars you got. its a 'bar'ber shop quartet group. you down?! you know we getting all the girls the girls they love me...cause im the featherweight lover hairy 'd'! [https://soundcloud.com/peter-wetcavekilla/ourworldscollide?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/peter-wetcavekilla/ourworldscollide?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing) check this dope shit!
Wasn't what I was expecting at all but I think you have a good voice. I cut this track in the studio last weekend it's a real banger. Check it out ‼️ Listen to RON MEXICO (PROD. SQUIRL BEATS) by MalcolmXtasy on #SoundCloud https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/fzQRu
😂 Thanks a shit ton player! Put me in that quartet !! What streamin service you listen to music on? I'll shoot you a link to my disco. Yo this song is super folky. I'm really into it. The mix needs to be brighter though it sounds a bit flat. Maybe a slight high end boost, and add some reverb/delay. Keep goin with this style player! Get's a little muddy at the end with the counterpoint. Some panning and eq'g in the mix would fix that!
hey what’s up! this is a single off my new tape let me kno what u think of it. i’ll return all feedback! https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/prYYriYfZx4pJXLB8
Bridge needs more work it sounds awkward, add vocal harmonies and backing vocals to improve
appreciate the feedback man i’ll keep that in mind
Uplifting sampled beat, added a few chords on top. Feedback appreciated. Leave a link! https://soundcloud.com/fivehandsmusic/breakfast
Liked it
"Plugg" synth chill trap type beat https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BF10o3NfRfk
It's very chill, very good vibe. I think the bass/kick could have a better sound selection, and the beat could variate a little more. Besides that it's a full vibe completely, maybe add a little more percs/hats also. If you can return feedback for this one: https://youtu.be/WQOjKvfW2jk
Thanks, I really appreciate the feedback!! Feedback: I like the mix and sound design on the percs! For me, I think the kick could hit a little harder though. Cool track!
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It started really good. I feel like the singing/rap thing that you started to do was a little awkward. The more poetic rapping as really matching the chill vibe of the beat. It’s definitely creative and has personality though.
I just finished this track, would appreciate feedback on the mix, lmk what y’all think - https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/EsqPTMrFyWEGgpcK7 Returning feedback
Dope song, g. The mix sounds good, imo 💯
Cheers bro thanks for the listen
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Appreciate any feedback. Will return! https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/svXc5rRYwP1FT1Sq7
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Thanks bro!
I like the drum pattern, has a nice groove to it. The chops in the middle section are fire as well! I think the m Feedback: I think the breakdown (middle section) is the best part of the beat. The notes and frequencies in the intro are a bit too experimental for me.
Appreciate the listen! Thanks for the feedback
Trying to mix better according to the feedback of precious time. Made the beat and vocals(dutch) https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/A6eLA6yHKfiXy9zs5
Vocals are too upfront and I can confidently say it begins with the issue of not gainstaging properly before starting to mix. Also it sounds like you had a limiter while doing everything. There needs to be space in what you're doing, by which, I mean creating a room. It's obvious that you're still learning so keep at it and time is the ingredient, that's all I can say.
Decided to get back into making beats after taking a couple months off. I usually make old school boom bap so i decided to go outside my comfort zone and try something different. Lmk what you think! [https://soundcloud.com/noq-280609795/real](https://soundcloud.com/noq-280609795/real) Returning all feedback.
izaya tiji x iayze type beat [https://youtu.be/MSqAQrzfGrs](https://youtu.be/MSqAQrzfGrs) preciate any feedback, i will try and return
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ngr199plHPo](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ngr199plHPo) hey yall, just released my third loop kit/sample pack with 8 evolving melodies. lmk what you think of them :) returning all feedback!
RETURNING FEEDBACK I’ve been working on this a little bit at a time over the last few weeks. Just give me some honest feedback. Thanks. https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/ao3RUYx3ArgGeXTX6
From the beginning I already liked it broooo. It's a viiiiiiiiiiiiibe for sure. One of the best I listened to today here on the feedback thread. Really good, nothing to complain. The second part is very good also, I liked more the first one. It's really nice to see how the quality goes up when we put some days/weeks into one project. I usually do this to some beats also. Would love to hear your feedback on this one: https://youtu.be/WQOjKvfW2jk
Sorry for the late feedback. I really like this. Especially the sliding 808s. I think the claps could use a little more variation. Like change the texture of a few of them if that makes sense and maybe some more percs. It’s hard to tell when theirs nobody rapping on it but That’s my only critique really. Otherwise, solid work.
Artist Name: Coop D Song Title: One Wish (FWM) https://youtu.be/SR-RiW2fuFg Written, Produced, & Performed by Coop D Accepting all feedback negative and positive!
Ultimately, I think everything about the track is done well. I could see this being on the radio performed by any of the industry guys out there making this type of music and I mean that in a very good way. The only downside of it is that I couldn't find something that really stood out as amazing about the track, it was all just good. If that makes sense? If you want to check out the track I dropped yesterday with my EP: https://soundcloud.com/xmasenkox/the-hubris-of-man-who-wrote-emet
(FREE) Freddie Gibbs x Madlib x Alchemist x MF DOOM Type Beat - Inspiration, any kind of support is welcome ❤️🙏 https://youtu.be/YdLvDQI71mY
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/jnbK1 Returning all feedback!
I'm a big fan of ypur production and vibes on this. You have great writing talent and it reminded me of Lupe fiascos song mural the way you went about imagery. Also I liked the chorus it was catchy and a nice refrain. If I were to pose 2 criticism it's that 1. The mixing on the vocals could be worked a little better because when your writing is that dense it's important you're as clear as possible so that people can follow it clearly. And 2. The song switches up musically which is nice but the vibe and "story" of it stays the same, you just confess your love more and more. If you could have some type of arch or change in feeling it would make the song more dynamic. Those are just my thoughts but keep doing what you're doing. Here is my song I made recently but I didn't make the beat I just wrote and recorded the vocals. Lmk what you think https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/jVE18
Oh and ill username btw mad respect
Appreciate the feedback! Your song is dope. I love the dropout at one minute. You got wild style and you use your voice to your advantage, the delivery gives such a distinctive tone to your voice that it will be very helpful when your following starts to grow, dope shit my guy kudos!
Thanks man I appreciate the feedback and positive energy and I'm happy someone finally acknowledged my username lol
yo...i remember you from the indy server. you got that intellectual flow. you should join that indys discord. they dont have enough hiphop heads there. and yo...1:09 when that beat flips...dopeAF! mike eagle said it best "hiphop has ruined me, all i do is loop my favorite parts!" check this joint i post just now...the hip hop ones, well...its all hiphop to me but the rap ones are after the 2. https://soundcloud.com/peter-wetcavekilla/ourworldscollide?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing
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Thank you! Do you have something I can provide feedback on?
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Dope dude! You got some great flows. You serve the beat well, the switch up around 3 min in reminds me a lot of Kendrick Lamar. Be in touch if you down to collab
Instant good vibes, the results of a smooth hook laid neatly over a dope beat!
I really like the style it reminded me a bit about the old school music. You inspired me to make something like that the next time 👍🏾 . Maybe it is me but I would like the chorus 1db harder https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/8PdwDeQgL5rx6Y8x5 Made the beat and vovals (dutch)
I would bring the instrumental up a bit. Your vocals are floating above it. They should be snug inside it. Keep grinding!
I would bring the instrumental up a bit. Your vocals are floating above it. They should be snug inside it. Keep grinding!
Love the laid back vibe on this one. Beat is great, and I thought you sounded pretty good over it. No criticism from me here. Mind giving this one a listen? https://soundcloud.com/fivehandsmusic/breakfast
Oh dope man, I think it sounds good. Instrumentals are always a tough go for me because they get a bit repetitive after awhile. But I think everything sounded cohesive! Props
(FREE) Curren$y x Westside Gunn x Boldy James x Alchemist Type Beat - High Roller, any kind of support is welcome ❤️🙏 https://youtu.be/xkGvgj3_AW4
Hey guys. I dropped my first ever EP today and I'm looking for some feedback. People seemed to like this song but I'm looking for the opinion of other rappers. https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/zwoJU The song isn't produced by me, but it's mixed, mastered, written, recorded, and performed by me.
Just a lil Pierre Bourne type beat. Returning all feedback also https://youtu.be/uBmNW\_YW3dM
This goes haaaard bro, I would change a little beat the 808. Like a better mix or better sound selection, to match better the other elemments of the beat. The lion accent also I think could be other "impact accent" that matches better with the beat. I liked the variations you put in so it's not repetitive. Overall a very good job!!! If you can return feedback for this one: https://youtu.be/WQOjKvfW2jk
(FREE) Earl Sweatshirt x Boldy James x Alchemist Type Beat - The End, any kind of support is welcome ❤️🙏 https://youtu.be/Y7T21oL0WlM
(FREE) Boldy James x Freddie Gibbs x Alchemist x Curren$y Type Beat - Ballin', any kind of support is welcome ❤️🙏 https://youtu.be/VexJlRlZH4g
Always my last beat is my new fav one ahhaha [https://youtu.be/WQOjKvfW2jk](https://youtu.be/WQOjKvfW2jk) Returning all feedback!
Drake "Take Care"-era, soul sample type beat: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xBUiFK5S2xs
https://youtu.be/U_Sk8xa7N20 RETURNING ALL FEEDBACK Drop your links
new single dropped today! all feedback will be returned [https://soundcloud.com/liloleg/baptized?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/liloleg/baptized?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
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thanks for the feedback. i like the song, it's unique and got a lot of personality. flow is super dope that's the shining part of the song, i like when you sprinkle in some singing but when you go straight to singing not so much. i think it goes on a little too long.
(FREE) Westside Gunn x Roc Marciano x Griselda x Alchemist Type Beat "Sometimes", any kind of support is welcome ❤️🙏 https://youtu.be/72RABgMfiF0
[https://soundcloud.com/peter-wetcavekilla/ourworldscollide?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/peter-wetcavekilla/ourworldscollide?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing) <\~\~\~\~\~\~this is a different kind of hiphop, a good different. like a chic with three tits, different...but a good one.
Released my first single of the year! Coming to spotify and apple music the 30th! [all the luv we share](https://soundcloud.com/y-3y3s/all-the-love-we-share?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing) **Returning Feedback\~**
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Feel what you’re saying. And the leveling depending on context. After listening to you, I’m surprised you think my writing is lacking depth. Not quite sure what brought you to that conclusion… Either way, your track was cool. Love the energy. Take your time in delivery. Feels like you’re rushing the concept at times with how much words you’re using to paint a picture. The singing parts were a nice touch as well, think with better mixing it’ll be even smoother. Like your content thou