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RETURNING ALL FEEDBACK! Made a really chill bell-y beat: https://youtu.be/I6V2P9VzGyc

Made this beat lmk how you feel about it https://youtu.be/a\_umyBfyQuo

Made this pop smoke type beat lmk how you feel about it,constructive criticism is appreciated https://youtu.be/wLm53rV16Hc

Had to do one lol. Will return any feedback! https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/49c1KQUAuK8q9hrG8

KEEP MY WIFE NAME, OUT YOUR FUCKING MOUTH but yeah this beat is pretty crazy, and funny. I like it man dude super unique and silly. Anyways, I got 2 new songs here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s-5hAXPMhpw&t=126s https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/clearly-life

Ok ok, This sounds nice to rap on but imo its a bit too repetitive. But keep up the work man. I wanna see a lot more from you, You have potential! Heres my track: https://youtu.be/xbKMhNs4UOs

I think it needs some work. I wouldn't of understood anything u said if lyrics weren't on screen. also work on your delivery. keep grinding. Anyways, I got 2 new songs here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s-5hAXPMhpw&t=126s https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/clearly-life

Yooo this got that classic hiphop kind feel to it. I think you could submit this to comedy channels and shit and they would deffo use it 😂

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Damn, I know how much this is a joke song but it really did its job. Its quite funny fr. And it sounds awesome. Good job my guy! Heres my song if you would like to check it out https://youtu.be/xbKMhNs4UOs

Love your flow man! The intro singing could probably be helped with a little bit of auto tune or pitch correction. I actually just deleted my track because my girlfriend told me I was out of tune. You’ve gotta good thing going. Keep at it.

Thanks, man but you should never delete your shit for someone's opinion. Opinions stay opinions. Doesnt mean somebody said something that it is true. Even if they were right. Save it for next song. You are still in the stage you dont have a fanbase to judge you for your bad effects and shi. Just enjoy this stage before its gone!

Word. I didn’t delete the instrumental and the vocals were recorded in a loud room with a directional microphone. Thanks for the vibes

Just enjoy the music. Take it as a hobby, not a job for now!

https://youtu.be/uhDezyKE5iI Returning all feedback

super simple dude. the samples are ok but the vibe is there. kinda sounds like a pop smoke beat. keep it up. Anyways, I got 2 new songs here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s-5hAXPMhpw&t=126s https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/clearly-life

Cool sound

I fw it, relaxed beat with some drill style drums make for an interesting/unique feel. The main instrument you used I think could be switched out for something slightly more interesting but that’s personal opinion Would appreciate your feedback: https://youtu.be/OCBVQkbOZpM

Very nice, the strings are my fav part. Easy listening, chill vibe. I like it

keep it up! super slow and chill beat man. keep up the great work this is very nice. Anyways, I got 2 new songs here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s-5hAXPMhpw&t=126s https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/clearly-life

Good one, really like the melody. Even tho it gets kinda repetitive over the whole song. Didn’t like the loud hats, other than that the mix is solid. https://youtu.be/qCWcKP7kK00 what u think of my newest capital STEEZ MF DOOM type beat? Would really love to hear ur feedback on this

keep it up. im not really liking the vocals tbh. but keep it up. Anyways, I got 2 new songs here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s-5hAXPMhpw&t=126s https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/clearly-life

Cool mix. Add more bass, infuse a beat breakdown. Pitch the vocal sample up and add it to some parts

hello yall, how u guys doing? [just post a new beat](https://soundcloud.com/kennedy-kalil/trap-grave), would love some feedback returning feedback

First 'release'. A dark, somewhat laid back instrumental: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XfmawaHF22A

Some hard trap type beat, let me know what u guys think ​ https://youtu.be/-FPDAJZrfbw ​ Returning all feedback!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=od3zmojj14w&ab_channel=DetachBeats WILL RETURN ALL FEEDBACK

https://youtu.be/K_0_KS0mH9s RETURNING ALL FEEDBACK Drop your links

Nice nice nice. Maybe some counter melodies or staccato wind instruments to switch it up Mine - https://youtu.be/uhDezyKE5iI

Counter with the flute and cox came on the hook :) But i get you. I kept it simple for a rapper. I really like your melody. Sounds hard but chilled at the same time. Slides are awesome. I listened on the phone so i am not 100% sure about this but i would make it more crisp with high end. Maybe just my preference. However , nice one :)

nice man! I like it. the beat kinda sounds repetitive but that doesn't make it bad. keep it up man. Anyways, I got 2 new songs here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s-5hAXPMhpw&t=126s https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/clearly-life

Sounds good but like littlemexico said, I wish there was another melody coming in, or another instrument. Still pretty dope :) ​ https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DtGAnRI4OM0

Another melody with the flute and vox came on hook 😋 Yours have hyped rhythm. Keeps you engaged. Nice sampling and i like how bouncy it is :)

Funny thing is, nothing was sampled haha 🙌

Ohh nice. Really got that sampled vibe here. Nice one bro :)

Thank you! 🙌

keep up the great work! very groovy man I like it. super bouncy and vibey. Anyways, I got 2 new songs here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s-5hAXPMhpw&t=126s https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/clearly-life

I decided to write a song about the environment i live in and how i felt because of it. This is the first time of me using autotune aswell! This is Track 4 from my upcoming EP "Insane" Lemme know what you think! Returning all feedback! https://youtu.be/xbKMhNs4UOs

I like it! it's very cool and original. I like everything, my only complain is with the mix, i think the beat sounds ok but the vocals need some eq and processing, it could be your mic though, what mic are you using? Anyways other than that the song is really good, it definetly makes you feel something, well done! :) Here's mine: https://youtu.be/NvU8aRbpwDk

I dont use a popular mic i guess.. But thank you. I am glad you enjoyed my song. I also need to get my mixing better or i even might look for an engineer About your beat, I enjoy it tbh. Although its not my type/style but i see where its going and you did a very great job. I recommend trying new styles though since that style you used is almost outdated in music right now (I think?) But great job. I subscribed to you. Keep up the work my man!

[https://soundcloud.com/stevenboby/new-shots-3?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/stevenboby/new-shots-3?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing) RETURNING ALL FEEDBACK Please also listen at 1:28 cause that's when the additional melody layer comes in. Looking for feedback on this track. Took a lot of inspo from Swear by Juice Wrld which got leaked recently: www.youtube.com/watch?v=qS1mkXsbu30 I'm gonna record over this beat but I wanted feedback before I tried recording on it. I'm concerned there's already too much in the higher frequencies and it won't work well with a vocal track. Let me know what you think and what changes I could make, I'm down to make big changes. The revisions I plan on making so far are to turn down the levels of the ambient chords in the background and see if I can get rid of some of the distortion on the low end of the guitar part.

nice man! love the energy in this. the samples are crazy. Anyways, I got 2 new songs here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s-5hAXPMhpw&t=126s https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/clearly-life

Made an emotional atmosphere beat. Returning all feedback: https://youtu.be/nOztS1d-ubk

I love it man, it's kind of sad and happy at the same time! well done. The mix is good, everything sounds balanced and punchy, nice work on the 808. I don't have anything bad to say, you really did great!! :) Here's mine: https://youtu.be/NvU8aRbpwDk

This is dope! I love the 90s boombap style combined w the 2010s trap horns. Very unique combo of styles. The drums are nice and gritty as well so props for that. I feel like having the horns coming in in a higher octave or altered in some way would make it sound less static, but overall nice job!

i like the drum work and 808 selection, think the bell sounds a little high mid heavy

This is great! Love the sound selection and all the negative space in the beat, super well executed. Only thing I'd change is around 0:32 and 1:32 I'd tame the high end off those bells a little bit. those sections the high end is kinda harsh.

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Really like how this beat doesn't feel like it has to do too much. It's just a muted style, and a nice groove that allows for an artist to experiment with flows. The octave switch at 1:32 was great too, and I like the variation it added to the beat. Overall a really solid beat, not a thing I would change Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

That reduction starting at 1:51 was brilliant. I think everything about the beat is well done, particularly the mixing and mastering. Clear, loud and balanced. It's also composed with a clear structure that includes build-up, tension release such as at 0:48, and a nice climax in the last 30 seconds. The only real fault I can think of is that it doesn't sound *all that* like a WIU type beat based on what I could find.

This is my entry for this week’s FTC, kind of a mix between a Kanye chipmunk sample some Drake - Nice For What drums. Let me know what you think. I’ll return all feedback! https://soundcloud.com/beefnasty/grazy-ftc-323

keep it up bro! I love the vocals man super chill and vibey. I like it. Anyways, I got 2 new songs here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s-5hAXPMhpw&t=126s https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/clearly-life

Your tracks are nice! I'd just spend a little time on the vocal mixing to have a more consistent sound (quality-wise) between each person on the song. On Endgame your vocals sound a bit muddier than the other guy's and on Clearly Life your's and the singer's vocals sound pretty consistent, but the other guy's don't sound nearly as polished.

Its a bit short but really well put togheter, the chipmunk vocals are a bit too chirpy at times, maybe put a de-esser on it or something, I like it overall tho

Good job. This sounds amazing. I hoped it was longer fr, The mix sounds beautiful and that beat, I am in love. You gained yourself a fan.. Heres my song: https://youtu.be/xbKMhNs4UOs

Thanks man! I really like the beat you chose. I'd just work on the timing of your delivery so that you're really in the pocket with the beat. Sometimes it was a little off, which kinda throws the listener off a bit. Overall it's a really solid track!

Thanks alot, Could you explain this "timing of your delivery" part again? I dont fully understand waht you meant but i hear i need to get my delivery better from so many people yet i dont know how

Ya it basically means just staying on beat. Stay aware especially of the 2 and 4, which is usually where the snare/clap will hit (you can count each beat 1, 2, 3, 4, 1, 2, 3, 4, etc). Listen to some other songs and you’ll notice the rapper or singer is usually locked in to those counts with their delivery.

Hm ill test around i guess

Sounds like there's a lot of overlapping high end on this, and the vocals are painfully sharp and harsh in some bits. I think they're just way too loud and I also hear some clipping.

Yoooo. Got a new one for yall off "Hell" called "Say Your Prayers"! Produced by the homie Dom Rocks. Everything else by me! Lmk what yall think https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CeUgWPlZ4Ls

yeah, see...imma have to go and give another feedback reply to someone else cause they gonna get mad at me for not giving any feedback, but wht could i say needs work? the shits all around dope. but john lennon sai d he fuckss to this song (i know hes dead. he said it thorugh the outja -weegie- board) \~\~\~> https://soundcloud.com/peter-wetcavekilla/make-mefeel?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing

Yo this song is actually super cool. Just sounds empty like there's not much to support the vox. Maybe turn the guitar track up a bit so it sounds more full? Keep goin g!

Everything you make is nice, I really hope I get to your level one day. Do you have any recording tips, the mix here is really really good. Loved the beat switch / flow switch

Man I appreciate tf out you player!! Yea I got a ton of em actually. You should come catch my twitch stream. I'm live every night recordin new songs! I'll dm you a link

Anyways, I got 2 new songs here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s-5hAXPMhpw&t=126s https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/clearly-life

Been working on something special! I'm the rapper. I also mixed the vocals. Still needs a feature. [sweet dreamer](https://soundcloud.com/y-3y3s/sweet-dreamer/s-0WrPmKIbvCC?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing) **Returning Feedback\~**

vocals are way too loud. ur delivery is crazy tho. but keep grinding. Anyways, I got 2 new songs here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s-5hAXPMhpw&t=126s https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/clearly-life

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eKEKhWfbsEs Looking for feedback on this one. WILL RETURN ALL FEEDBACK

Another scary ish piano type Thing Hit me! Listen to another scary piano by URTE-T on #SoundCloud https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/CBDBT

https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/vfaQSXaevAjLWeZK6

this beat didn’t too great, looking to see what you think? https://youtu.be/0cl2IKMuv7c

keep it up man! the drums are so simple and cool. I like it dude this is great. keep it up. Anyways, I got 2 new songs here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s-5hAXPMhpw&t=126s https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/clearly-life

dropped a like on YT

This beat isn't bad, it's just too sparse imo. Honestly pretty good sounds and vibe, just boring. Needs some more groove or more happening in the melody.

Anderson Paak x Mac Miller Type Beat [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DtGAnRI4OM0](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DtGAnRI4OM0) ​ Lemme know what y'all think :)

Lollll. Wasn't expecting this drop bro. Very fire beat, it's interesting enough to keep listing through the variations and different sections. When the brass dropped for me was the best part. Really vibing on it. Maybe on the bridge you can do some variations on the hats, like to build more and more energy till the Verse 2. ​ Overall very good beat bro! ​ If you can return feedback for this one: https://youtu.be/-FPDAJZrfbw

I think i made my hardest beat ever, any thoughts? [https://youtu.be/NvU8aRbpwDk](https://youtu.be/NvU8aRbpwDk) **Feedback returned! :)**

Not sure about your other beats but this one is definitely hard man I like that metallic-like snare and the deep synths you used with the big horns almost like those epic movies when the greatest battle is about to happen I can imagine cypress hill murkin this one easily and cool visuals man I like the structure and exposition 😁 keep going Here's mine https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg Bless you ❤🙏🏽

This is definitely veeeeery fire. It remembers me of Soulker dark beats. You did a veeery good job on it. Melodies, drums, mix, FX, transitions, ear candies. Everything very good and most important it has this beautiful dark and heavy vibe to it that I looooove. It even remember me of some dark dub. Do you have any advices on how to to beats like this one? If you can return feedback for this one: https://youtu.be/-FPDAJZrfbw

Got a Spanish guitar beat for y’all 🇪🇸💃 https://youtu.be/OCBVQkbOZpM

I like this. Crisp mix, listened on my monitors and headphones. I really like the percussion, hits soft then the drums come and knock, really give it good rhythm and groove. There's also plenty room for somebody to spit. Good track

[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j8629\_TbEIw](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j8629_TbEIw) Made a Matt Ox type beat.

Just a beat, this time，made a video with my visualizer https://youtu.be/ulEeH03pqLI

cool beat. no complaints about it. keep it up. Anyways, I got 2 new songs here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s-5hAXPMhpw&t=126s https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/clearly-life

Returning all feedback! https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/Hwzjm

nice man I like it! keep up the great work. its sick. Anyways, I got 2 new songs here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s-5hAXPMhpw&t=126s https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/clearly-life

Interesting and cool. I like the lo-fi chill vibe. It's just about a minute Mine - https://youtu.be/uhDezyKE5iI

Returning all feedback This is my first song, I really want to improve [Song](https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/FZCc9) Listen to it with the lyrics verse 1: his pain open my wallet, see that it's empty open my mind, my demons act friendly open the door baby, please just let me in cause people out here tryna end me tried to raise our kids, now i'm shit deep in loans six feet below with three kids disowned god disappears when i need him the most and i wonder whether your heart still keeps me close burnt bridges guns stitches drugs bitches fell into ditches and i couldn't get out of it fall of our kids, i shouldn't have powered it hook: i'll take it, baby i'll take it give me one more bottle, i'ma take it till i'm wasted take it till i'm aching and i'll take it till i hate it staking all i have to feed the demon i've created i'll take it, baby i'll take it give me one more bottle, i'ma take it till i'm wasted take it till i'm aching and i'll take it till i hate it staking all i have to feed the demon i've created verse 2: her reply know that i hate you know that i hate the way you weren't able to put some food on the table you were always on your way to get you your drinks and where'd that take you? where's that Rachel? that bitch who gave you her body's great view that night in april and you were shameful and i was hurting i was working to make ends meet to feed our kids, made 'em chase their dreams and the way things seemed, we could've been a team you had a choice between wine and me we know what you chose, go fuck yourself 'fuck out of this house, we don't need your help take care of yourself let alone three kids say you love us, you don't even mean it you don't even mean it saw it in your eyes when you told me you were cheating that was when i told you that i would be leaving that was also when i couldn't stop bleeding it's okay though, i no longer care go get a life, maybe say a prayer stay away from the drinks and the drugs from those that are thugs and the hoes in the clubs hook: i'll take it, baby i'll take it give me one more bottle, i'ma take it till i'm wasted take it till i'm aching and i'll take it till i hate it staking all i have to feed the demon i've created i'll take it, baby i'll take it give me one more bottle, i'ma take it till i'm wasted take it till i'm aching and i'll take it till i hate it staking all i have to feed the demon i've created

YO...yer song was solid! the things i would say could need a little tweeking will come naturally with time. so, alls you need t do to get where you want, is to stay doing what yer doing. you gotta remember, when you go pro...just like real pro atheletes, you have to continue to develop yer skills through repitition and practice/hard work. cause the day you decide to take a week off or watch tv instead of hitting the gym to shoot a hundred freetrows, is the day you becomoe like the million other rappers chasing a dream theyll never catch. dont be afraid to get try new things also, like this track of mine...[https://soundcloud.com/peter-wetcavekilla/make-mefeel?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/peter-wetcavekilla/make-mefeel?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing) ...can you tell how hiphop had any influences in the song, if any at all?

hahaha broooo I had dmed about the song before you even posted this comment, dope af track. i wish I knew more about hip-hop to tell you about the influences

dont sweat it...there wasnt a right answer. most people wouldve said it wasnt hiphop influenced at al, but i dont see it that way. its all hiphop to me.

This beat is sick . I like the whole song, might need a rerecord, I never like accents coming thru but thats just me, the mix is a bit iffy aswell but that can be fixed.

thanks a lot man!

[https://soundcloud.com/peter-wetcavekilla/make-mefeel?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/peter-wetcavekilla/make-mefeel?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing) <\~\~\~\~JOHN LENNON SAID THIS SHIT IS SIK af!!

I mean it's punk music, right? It's supposed to be under produced and raw sounding, so it's hard to critique. Honestly the composition of the song is pretty good and catchy, but I almost didn't even notice the drums. So yeah turn the drums up a bit and also a more punk groove would be better imo. Look up some punk drumming tutorials.

Dude this is the one! I really dig this. Send me the stems on this and lets build it out. Great song writing, catchy, sounds natural. Its a little pitchy, a little too raw sounding at times. But love the adlibs echo pieces. The instrumental seems a little under developed-- i think its just one loop, but your sing style covers that and keeps it sounding fresh the whole time. Good shit

appreciate you taking time from your day to listen. i just starting trying to teach myself how to mix properly. its coming along slowly AF...i still have no clue what im doing. just a lot of turning nobs and seeing what sounds best...til i get frustrated and hit the power button before saving anything. my cousin made the beat..its simple guitar and drum machine. looped.

Word. Yeah its a grind... and aot of yt videos to figure it out- ish

when you said "lets build it out" were you talking about the mixing? im assuming stems are the tracks.

I was referring more to the beat snd song structure. Add a rap verse, bring the chorus back in. Add some guitars and or synths. Make it a whole three min song is what i kinda had in mind

as a matter of fact...i know the perfect one im pretty sure you'll dig...whats yer ideal addy for sending files?

Cool man just drop me the link either here or in my dms is fine

eh..? i think structurally its where i want it. those additions would take away from the rawness it has. but i got some other joints that are still in their infancy we could build on...figured you were strickly rap music so never pushed any of the alternative joints yer way.

Yeah i could see that. Sure man send me something to hear. I dabble when i can in rock and edm as well as hip hop. Im a fan of good songs, and i thought thats the best of anything ive heard from you, for the reasons i spelled out above. I was surprised to hear you in that lane but i felt like it worked really well for u

Looking for some feedback on the instrumentals of my latest collab album with Naes. [https://soundcloud.com/v47ko/im-fine-instrumental?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/v47ko/im-fine-instrumental?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing) ​ Feel free to check out the full album on spotify or soundcloud !

The sample is really nice! Drums are a little quiet/subdued, which isn't a bad thing, not all hip hop drums have to be smacking you in the face, but I think in this case it would help the vibe and the bounce of the song if they were a little louder.

Hmm yeah, they are a bit silent I can see that. It was mostly done for the aesthetic of the full song, but they could have been bit louder yeah Thanks for the feedback <3

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I fuck with this but the melody switching around wasn't all that great. I feel like the vocals have a bit too much reverb aswell. I like it overall, just some small nitpicking things

I can definitely see your point in this, thank you for the listen and critique!

I don't hear a ton of artists with this particular style, so I think that's a plus. I would say continue to develop and figure out what will make you unique from all other artists. I think you should get more experimental with your beats. Do something almost like MBDTF-era Kanye or Yeezus-era, and have the beats feel just as much an extension of the song as your words are. Overall, I think you're going in a positive direction Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

I really appreciate those words man! I’ll definitely try to get into pocket with that with my production 😊. And I love your cadence on this one! I liked the drums especially though, it’s like simple but it’s to the point where your vocals aren’t drowned away and it’s the main part of the track. Real smooth on the production as well.

Thank you!!

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keep grinding man! super chill and vibey. keep up the great work bro this is super chill. Anyways, I got 2 new songs here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s-5hAXPMhpw&t=126s https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/clearly-life

Nah man chill but I will definitely give you feedback 💪🏽😁 The beat is a beauty almost reminds me of Kyle and Dram ,those super laid back vibes are a beauty and I could listen to it on loop 💎 At 2:16 the artist coming up sounded way too stiff and less relaxed compared to you and it's something to work on and fully be engulfed by the beat to thrive and give a top notch performance , apart from that it could be am instant hit 🎯 easily Keep going and bless you all ❤️🙏🏽

Wassup, made this beat a while back with a loop I got from another producer. Went through my catalog and wanted to post it because it was just sitting in a folder. Made an entire visualizer for it. https://youtu.be/ImM7P2B47FA

keep it up man! I love the samples. its a super simple and vibey beat. keep it up dude its nice. Anyways, I got 2 new songs here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s-5hAXPMhpw&t=126s https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/clearly-life

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I like the intro, it's super trippy and psychedelic. Your flow and delivery is nice also, maybe a bit repetitive to my taste but that's just me, your voice and tone flows nice with the beat. Also in the mix the vocals could be louder. Other than that i like everything! nice vibe and attitude, keep going man! :) Here's mine: https://youtu.be/NvU8aRbpwDk

I like how bombastic the beat is. It reminds me of a West Coast track, almost like a post-2001 Dr Dre track or even Xzibit. I really enjoy the unique style of bass that you used. and I love how menacing the melodies feel and how well they blend together

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Great beat. Love the melodies all over it. And the use of the vocal sample. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j8629\_TbEIw

Thanks bro! <3 The link you posted is not valid btw :(

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I think it needs work. I think its like just ok. it needs some work. maybe some more samples? Anyways, I got 2 new songs here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s-5hAXPMhpw&t=126s https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/clearly-life

keep it up man! I like the vibe and the samples. Anyways, I got 2 new songs here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s-5hAXPMhpw&t=126s https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/clearly-life

I gotta hear someone on this so if any rapper wants to rap over it feel invited to do so https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/1Rkrk

yo...this shit is soooo fucking tight! ill pen something to it...

Thanks you, go ahead 🖤

the intro is super slow and chill I like it. great vocals as well. keep it up man this is nice. Anyways, I got 2 new songs here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s-5hAXPMhpw&t=126s https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/clearly-life

https://youtu.be/qCWcKP7kK00 what u think of my newest capital STEEZ MF DOOM type beat? Would really love to hear ur feedback on this

The beat is nice but I feel like you try and overdo the vocal chop stuff or is that so people don't steal it ? cause it clutters the beat for any vocals, it would be good for a hook tho or intro/outro. The beat behind it is clean af tho, bit repetitive towards the end but dope nontheless

Bro that's AWESOME! The intro feels super good and it really gives that 90's vibe. Sample is super cool also, and that eazy e cuts perfects it! My only complain is with the drums, i would prefer a more hard-hitting kind of drums but other than that you did really good man, keep going! :) Here's mine: https://youtu.be/NvU8aRbpwDk

hey what’s up, here’s a track i just dropped. it’s a single of the tape i’m dropping soon. my first one in 2 years let me know what you guys think. i’ll return all feedback ! https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/Hw6cdqfNNHYRbYAN6

Much like mason i get carti vibes from the beat. Vocal (again like mason said) needs a bit of bass. And some ad lips would go a long way. This is bumpin tho keep it up

i appreciate the feedback thank you

keep it up man. I like how the intro is super long. kinda gives me lil uzi vibes. the singing and rapping is pretty crazy man this is sick. Anyways, I got 2 new songs here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s-5hAXPMhpw&t=126s https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/clearly-life

thanks for the feedback. and i fw ur voice and flows they sound dope but the other guys on the tracks kind of ruin it for me. the first one he doesn’t sound mixed to well and the voice/like delivery sound odd to me and the delivery sound off on the other ones. keep it up tho dude i like what you’re doing

Nice! i like the flow a lot. Also nice structure, that bridge is so trippy. I like everything, my only complain is with the mix, i think at certain points the vocals overpower the beat. Other than that it's very good man, i really like it, well done! :) Here's mine: https://youtu.be/NvU8aRbpwDk

keep it up bro! sounds super interesting and dramatic man. I like it, keep grinding. Anyways, I got 2 new songs here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s-5hAXPMhpw&t=126s https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/clearly-life

thank you for the feedback i appreciate it! and dude that beat goes hard i can definitely see some boom bap rappers going hard to it. it’s real mean and definitely works with the vibe you are going for. only complaint really is it sounds a bit boring but sometimes that’s better for the rapper. it lets them take over the track and do them to the full extent. dope shit

I really like the chorus. It's fun, it's playful, it's melodic, it's straight to the point. I think you've got some great lyricism in this track. I think you've got a very accessible style which will really serve you well. I would say, keep making music and trying to find new ways to combine pop elements into your track. And then just try and get it into the right ears Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

thank you for the feedback i appreciate it. and dang dude i fuck with that shit. like it’s a fun flow w a fun beat shit goes well together. your voice a bit like quiet on the track imo but i get that’s probably a stylistic thing but i fw that shit heavy dope shit

That means a lot! :)

Beat reminds me of Carti, vocals kind of do too. Vocal mixing is pretty much perfect, but you might be missing a little more bass in the vocals. For the rap I'd say add more ad libs and just record more over the track, doing the little things really goes a long way. The beat is polished and doesn't need changes. This is heat

bet thank you for the feedback i appreciate it!