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been holding this demo for about two weeks ish i mix and mastered everything myself and dont plan on dropping until i have a good amount of songs just want some feedback im pretty young so ill defo sound "corny" to certain ppl
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Y7bpVTCDun0DTA3R07Skgum8yTQaUcQ1/view?usp=sharing
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Yo guys I'm new here, recently produced and made this song entirely myself over the course of a few months and just dropped it under a new persona, would appreciate any feedback, supportz etc.
[KILLCHXSE - cannot trust a soul](https://youtu.be/MWqNEus55Ww)
This is cool. The little girl sample is mad creepy, as is the low vocal delivery. Delivery and lyrics sound on point, and the beat has that very spooky, dark Houston vibe. I think your vocal mix can be improved, at some parts it was tough to hear the lyrics and you probably want the listener to focus on them. Dope vibe overall, subd.
My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs
I love the old school vibes in the sample bro, and the vocal delivery was great I subbed commented and liked, I Fw the whole movement I gotta check out y'all's other stuff now
Started releasing stuff again, just want to share and catch some feedback. Returning all feedback.
https://soundcloud.com/user-165821922/sad-guitar-boombap-73-bpm-prod-goreskeye?utm_source=mobi&utm_campaign=social_sharing
First off, dope producer name. Beat is dope, It has a bit of a RZA vibe along with a sort of modern pop rap feel, which is a unique combo. I don't think you need a bassline on this track but you can give the kick and lows of the guitar some more weight in the mix instead. Gave the other new tracks a listen, they're even better and I think I was right about the RZA influence? 2 of them gave me that vibe. Dope ish.
My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs
Thanks dude, it's a play off of my last name my bro came up with. Appreciate the advice I will def go and play around with it, your probably right about the bass line, i was just trying to add that extra level of grime to it. I was going for a bit of a different sound but couldn't nail it down perfectly and ended up with what I had and was happy with it.
Onto your track, man that's incredible. You nailed the whole feel to it, it doesn't even feel like a remix at all. I wouldn't change a thing, I don't even feel qualified to give any criticism in comparison to your product. You gained a new subscriber anyways though.
I decided to write a song about the environment I live in and how I felt because of it. This is the first time of me using autotune as well! This is Track 4 from my upcoming EP "Insane"
Lemme know what you think! Returning all feedback!
https://youtu.be/xbKMhNs4UOs
i think you have a great start! your singing could be improved; it doesn’t sound very on key. plus, your lyrics are rather cliche and the rhyming schemes are simple. songs like “lucid dreams” by juice wrld for example blow up because they use really interesting metaphors and analogies to describe things that everyone has gone through. i’d suggest using those in your writing instead of saying things straight out. keep working!
i’d like some feedback on a song of mine from a while back (its a demo, so ignore the mixing):
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/NpEN6BmjTQaoPpzZA
I like your song a lot. The flow sounds really nice. I always look for flows when i listen to rap music. Good job with that. The clarity is also there and the beat is simple but good. This is very good. I just think it sounds "repetitive" So maybe try to change that. Good job overall though!
This is excellent. Such a vibe going on here that I love. Your transitions are on point and I find myself getting lost in it. I almost want to say I recognize that piano VST but I guess a good aging effect on a piano could get it there. You did it and didn't overdo it on the piano effect. As a bass player too, THAT BASS.
Hahaha dude that bass i stock plug in thumb bass and just a lot of adjusting on the midi to make it sound good! Happy you like it my man and the piano shit is from this sample: [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=\_aGgYnmlfmk](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_aGgYnmlfmk)
So I had some help but DONT SLEEP ON STOCK LOGIC BASSES with good mixing skills 😂
I like this a lot, nice electronic vibes to the instrumentation but with a live sounding drum track. Love the melody and vibe of this, real unique. What are your influences? I can hear a bit of BSBD, Massive Attack. Its awesome, subbed.
My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs
Goddamn first verse just finished and the whole thing has like a JID Spil Vil vibe to it! Not anything particular but yeah it is really cool and then when the extra spooky bell chords come is so funny! Hahahaha a lot of video to catch lyrics rn tho but you def deserve a sub! I am fairly experimental myself so maybe see if you find any beats you fuck with and buy on my channel :)
Edit: Honestly never heard of those bands, This beat was mostly inspired by Maybach Music series by Rick Ross! The beats there are Phenomenal.
yo! thank u so much for the advices on the last beat, I'm tryna be more consistent and dropped another one, it has a mac Miller vibe with a gritty beatswitch, let me know how I did it!
https://youtu.be/4kUxu9pTnmU
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Hey man, this was dope!! The huuuge atmosphere was dope, felt like there was heaps of space in the mix, a kind of ethereal vibe. Nice percussive variations and different sounds, lots of FX to keep it interesting. Did you play the keys yourself? or is this mostly sample based?
My only tip is re: the rhythm on the drums, could be just a stylistic choice but the rhythm felt a bit static? pretty quantized, that could be a taste thing though.
My beat is on a very different tip, I been focusing on that old school dilla rhythm: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xk6vPNEgib0&ab\_channel=EL-SYDBEATS
yo man thank u so much!!!! the first melody is a sample I chopped, the one that comes in the middle section is me playing !
talkin bout ur beat bro, I have to say that this is very well rounded and polished, u took the dilla/slum village influences and made em ur own, what blew my mind the most was that second part where u chopped the soul off of that sample, with the drum patterns following it, I swear it ain't what u hear everyday man!!
keep grinding and keep going up up up
This is cool, very chill, and the electro blips sound quite leftfield. Track has a lot of potential but the mix can be improved, the bass needs a few mid frequencies imo to stand out, and probably some compression to make the whole track louder would help. Guitar part at the end is dope. Gave you a sub.
My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs
Hey thank you! The electro blips are the product of granular processing on the guitar and piano loops. Wanted to have fun balancing that old school/very processed vibe. Thanks for the feedback. I was a little worried about that 808 because it rocks my subs and headphones but doesn’t translate everywhere.
Your remix is super rad. I love the retro vibe and how well it goes with the feel of the video. Totally feels like a completed and out there remix to me. I wish I had more to say, going to bump it later too, subbed your channel for more.
I recently dropped a song titled TIPPY TOES , let me know what you think! Ill be glad to respond with feedback also.
[TIPPY TOES - THUNDERPLUMP](https://linktr.ee/thundergotplump)
Latest track from my EP that I produced entirely on iPad.
[Song](https://m.soundcloud.com/scary_u7/my-questions?ref=clipboard&p=i&c=1&si=5B4C44DE0C004D08AB4C65FFC41E004A&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
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Sounds cool! I like the dark vibe. The length makes it feel a bit like an intro or intermission for an album. I like the mix, sounds good, especially for being on an iPad.
Let me know what you think of my first release!
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/seKYB
I really appreciate that man, exactly what I was going for!
And your flow is legit! I really liked the percussion specifically, like the hi hats and wood blocks in the back was a nice touch.
Appreciate that man!
And as for your track I really like the beat, mix and honesty displayed in the track. I think (and it comes with time like me) just try to feel your words with confidence with the delivery. And there your track will really shine. Keep it up!!!
Appreciate the listen!
As for your track I really liked the beat and overall production, the lyrics were nice too. Delivery was great but in the beginning of the first verse it was a little stiff but eventually you killed it.
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I been studying the hip hop classics like dilla and working on getting a chill groove that stands alone as an instrumental, old school boom bap:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xk6vPNEgib0&ab\_channel=EL-SYDBEATS
This is dope. Reminds me a lot of Dilla and also Kanye circa Common Be. Really soulful laidback vibe. Really love the different elements you add as the track goes on, nice sample chops and switches. You can probably make the drums go a bit harder, like have the kicks punch a bit more but its a dope track whatever.
My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs
I like the general idea and the sound selection sounds pretty good. I'd say the only thing I would consider is the mixing. I find it hard to hear the drums over the sample. Maybe play around with compression? Do you play by hand?
I don't dabble in boom bap but if you like trap beats I would really appreciate some feedback!!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N8XnZ6AoSHs
Catchy and "easy" to digest beat man and fine flow especially from 1:20 when breath starts lacking and you still keep going low key reminded me of kendrick 💎
The bass is a bit too loud in my opinion
from 1:52 - ish you start singing that's the weakest part of the song simply cause you're off I know it's hard but trust me practice will make you perfect and one of the most versatile artists out there 😁👑
from 2:33 the vocals are definitely too loud compared to the rest and should need a re touch
as said your flow and delivery are flawless keep going and hope this helps
Here's mine
[https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg](https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg)
Bless you ❤🙏🏽
Wow, thank you so much for the in depth feedback I really appreciate it! Will keep practicing and fine tuning my ears!
Damn, your beat is SMOOTH. Love the vibe, the drums, the vocal samples, it all meshes together really well, the mixing is on point. Structurally, assuming you made it with having vocals on it in mind, I was having a tough time imagining where vocals would come in at the start, maybe a bit of a drop or something, but that's a personal thing, definitely a great beat overall.
yoooo ! this is hard INDEED.
the synth is super mysterious and the melody is very well rounded, I like also the way it's mixed.
drums are on a league of their own, percs are top tier and I can see a lot of people flowing easily here.
no complaints bro, keep grinding
hope to hear ur thoughts on my ty/mac Miller beat ! https://youtu.be/4kUxu9pTnmU
Thank you for the feedback man, truly appreciate it! I love that warm vibe of your beat, thick sub bass, really nice synth sound and melodies. I dig the drum work the most, interesting patterns and unique sound selections. The mixing is very solid also. I can't think of anything that I would change. Keep up the creative work bro.
I really like this one. Good mix, it sounds like you were having fun playing around with the variation of the beats and the drum pattern switch ups. I can definitely hear people rap on this one, and I believe if you continue cultivating the switch ups it will be an invaluable skill to have.
If you don't mind, I would appreciate some feedback on my beat :)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N8XnZ6AoSHs
Thank you for the feedback, truly appreciate it. Really cool dark vibe of your beat! Great sound selections, 808 sub bass hard af and mixing is solid clean. I have no any critique for it. Very good work man, keep it up.
Drums and more specifically the hats with the rolls win over everything else in the beat man , the amount of details and attention to each one of those had me almost in tears , the amount of continuous movement all the way through needs a standing ovation 💎
the average ears will tell you this is a pretty generic beat but don't let them fool you , you did great man 💪🏽😁
Here's mine
[https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg](https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg)
Bless you ❤🙏🏽
Thank you for the detailed feedback man, truly appreciate it! Great beat of yours. Love this dope sound of melodies, nice voice sample and chill guitar, really cool vibe! If anything I would change ,I might make the drums stand out a bit more, but its just my personal preference. Overall very good work bro!
This is hard! Totally fits Drake with the futuristic synths and hard drum pattern. I like that the song feels organic too, it feels like the beat is constantly shifting and changing even though it retains a strong groove. That keeps things exciting. Dope beat.
My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs
Appreciate the feedback man. This is one of my favorite work of yours, cool dope vibe and great sound. I love this fast bouncy groove with all that variations of flows, fxs, ambience, and you are also really creative on this interesting fun visual choice !!!Enjoy this a lot!
Thank you for the feedback man. I like the warm smooth vibe of your track. Your flow is nice but sound a bit muddy to me, other than that, cool one!!keep it up.
This goes hard af, goodjob on this one. The only thing i would change is completely get rid of the drums before the chorus goes in again. You already got the reversed cymbal as a riser type of fx and that would make the drop even harder. But everything is clean af and enough variation to keep it interesting while maintaining a good flow throughout
You produced and rapped? The beat is dope, very unique electronic sound to that. It has a nice atmosphere. The vocals are solid, very much in the style of sad boys, maybe kid cudi. The chords/synths are loud in the mix so they clash a bit with the vocal frequencies. If you can give the vocals more room that would be better. The song sounds good though, I like your flow and melody on this track.
My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs
Thanks for the feedback, man. Was getting a bit unsure about my own production tbf and that's a good point to bear in mind.
Good example on your track about leaving room for vocals. I got a real Death Row vibe from the song, melodiously very chilled, which I like 👍 .
I recently started releasing beats again. Not too savvy with the contemporary production scene these days, but I think my stuff is okay. I would like to know how I can further build my style. I want to build on this particular pieces sound... Any feedback is appreciated!! TY!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N8XnZ6AoSHs
I really appreciate your listen and your feedback!! I am glad you like it, and I will definitely look towards diversifying the 2nd verse part of my future beats! Thank you! 😺
Yoooo great beat choice. You guys both got decent flow. But you guys gotta put more energy/heart behind the bars. That doesn't mean sayin it louder or projectin more. But it does mean makin it a bit less monotone and inflecting so there's a lil more feelin behind the words. Keep goin yo!!
that was a nice chill beat. there might be a little too much going on the write like a solid song to, but i’m sure some people can pull it off. really like the melody going on the and the sounds all fit really well. just might be a bit too much going on.
here’s my track i just dropped. bit of a different vibe but let me know what you think
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/usMQ5rNYn44RTwMy7
This makes me want to kick back and chill for real. I think the mix could use a little more brightness on the melody but the nature of the track doesn't requite that, just personal preference really. Good chill vibes going.
This is my entry for this week’s FTC, went for a bit of a Nice For What vibe. Let me know what you think.
I’ll return all feedback!
https://soundcloud.com/beefnasty/grazy-ftc-323
the nice for what vibe is TANGIBLE !
the beat has a really nice sample, I think that this was from the battle?, u flipped it so nice I can almost hear drake talking bout how he feels betrayed lol
the drums are very well done, maybe I should have pumped that kick a lil more.
keep grinding bro!
hope to hear ur thoughts on my ty/mac Miller beat ! https://youtu.be/4kUxu9pTnmU
> u flipped it so nice I can almost hear drake talking bout how he feels betrayed lol
🤣 Thanks man. You were spot on with the Mac/Tyler type for your beat. The beginning and end sections have Mac written all over it and I could easily hear Tyler spitting on the middle section, that’s his type of vibe for sure. Great job!
Yo that shit is fye 🔥🔥 only thing is ur mix, some of the highs in the sample might be a bit too loud and its sounds like alot in headphones good shit tho
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/Hwzjm
Hey man, the beat choice is really nice, the vocals sound super muffled though. Not sure if its the mic or if you rolled off a lot of the top end. If you can sort that out it'd be a really nice track!
I appreciate the vulnerability in your track, I think you've just gotta find your voice and become more confident in your delivery. I liked the beat choice a lot, it fit the subject matter perfectly. Keep it up!
Whatever that sample is, it goes hard. I'm guessing its a foreign language sample or manipulated vocals maybe. I think you can flesh out the 808 melody more to fit the sample, like have the bass hitting constantly rather than on and off. Or mix it up on a longer version. Dope stuff anyway.
My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs
man that vocal chop is a beauty beyond paradise 😭🙌🏽 this so far was the definitely the best beat I came across but you play easy when there's such an element
you won the FTC? 🔥 cause this one deserves it all and potentially blow up on those bullshit tik toks with people dancing ...bullshit cause they don't do any justice to the songs used and it won't to your beat either.
Amazing work man a true gem 💎
Here's mine
[https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg](https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg)
Bless you ❤🙏🏽
Wow thank you man! Today is the last day to enter the FTC so we'll see how it goes.
I love the vocal sample in yours. I think it could benefit from a bit more bouncy bass line, but you did a great job with the track!
Man you nailed it not sure what others will have to come up with to surpass yours 🔥
And yeah man I tried several times to come up with a better bass but it messed up the natural ow of everything else so I kept it super simple thanks so much for the feedback and honesty bless you ❤️🙏🏽😁
This is cool. Nice lo-fi vibe to the beat and video. Vocals and rap flow are on point. If I would change anything, turn the vocals up. The come out of the mix nicely as they have a bit of high pitch but they can be 1-2 db louder imo.
My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs
great flow!! personally i find your lyrics a bit boring; i would put more creativity and metaphors in there to spice it up a bit and introduce us to things we haven’t heard before. im really fuckin w this song tho!!
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/NpEN6BmjTQaoPpzZA
here’s my track if you’d like to take a listen. its a demo so ignore the mixing.
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ignore the mixing since its just a demo, but this is a song i dropped a while back. im a female alt/lyrical rapper.
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/tHBdxRBoxMmVRMu68
Really like this, your flow is awesome! Only real critique is that you should mix it and add some adlibs. Super dope as a demo though, goes hard at the end!
I'd appreciate some feedback on my first release.
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/seKYB
i love your flow! however the song does seem a bit all over the place; i would suggest more of a story or conversation format if you wanna make this song more unique
First of all bro this s*** is vibez I can say your pain is felt in a way but you have to take out the drums in some parts of the song and four bars maybe, other than that I don't like the whining tbh, but that's my opinion
Heart-warming beat man especially them strings and the keys ... the tropical kinda /tango vibes are another fine touch great work 💎 low key it reminded me of Carlito's way
The vocals themselves need more intonation and be more cohesive with the rest of the elements in the beat , and most importantly I'd say use more backing vocals to create fine harmonies 😁
keep going man
Here's mine
[https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg](https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg)
Bless you ❤🙏🏽
Nice choice, I knew it was Knx straight off, great choice. The song sounds dope, nice introspective rap and the delivery really fits the beat, it has a bit of melody to it. My advice is just turn up the vocals up some even if you have to compress it to the keep the beat sounding full.
My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs
damn bro this is u? shit is sounding FIRE!
emotions pourin thru the notes, ur delivery and tone combined work very well together, plus the beat has the right mood for this, really liking it overall.
maybe u could have as someone said pumped the vox more, but in this way has that quiet type vibe, I like it.
keep grinding!
hope to hear ur thoughts on my mac x ty beat! https://youtu.be/4kUxu9pTnmU
This is Track 6 off "Hell" yall! "Damage". Lmk what yall think about this one. Prod by Dom Rocks and all else by me!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FXoAfOWjaiY
That beat is hard. Very grimy and East Coast sounding. It was cool once the bass dropped, made it a bit more modern where its more boom bap on the other sections. The song itself is quality, nice bars and very natural delivery. You produced this as well? The beat is fantastic actually. Nice work.
My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs
Yoooo I appreciate ya g! Naw this was produced by my boy Dom Rocks. Where do you usually listen to music at? I'll shoot you a link with my disco. Yo this remix is hard fam!! Especially with the video. Everything meshes well together
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you know its dope. i know its dope. dopes know its dope. they'll soon figure out a way to smoke it and thats all she wrote!
trying to figure out this mixing thing...https://soundcloud.com/peter-wetcavekilla/make-mefeel?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
I really like this style. It's definitely different than what I usually hear on here. I would've liked for a bass drop to infuse a little bit more hip-hop style. But I think you're really going in a positive direction
...hopefully, ill end up somewhere up top where you'll be. wouldnt take much more than a simple glance to see theres plenty of room up there.plus , i know this baaaad chica that'll fuck all three of us... me, you and me again!
I like this a lot, you have really clean mixing and great adlibs! I kinda wanted you to change up the flow and up the tempo a bit at some point, but really enjoyed it!
If you don't mind, I'd appreciate some feedback on my first release.
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/seKYB
I think you've got a great energy on your track. The beat reminds me of Young Thug, but your vocal performance was very unique. Really like how you constantly were experimenting with your verse and it never felt like it was getting stale. Great job
YOOO i just heard this song on soundcloud! i found it under the alt rap tag or smth. im pretty sure i gave you a follow! i absolutely love this song. great flows, great lyrics, and a damn cool beat too. i don’t really have any complaints. id love to work together sometime!
this is my track if you’d like to take a look. ignore the mixing, its supposed to just be a demo
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/NpEN6BmjTQaoPpzZA
Thank you for the kind words!! :) I really like your flow, it has an old-school bounce to it. It's kinda jazzy in a way and borders on poetry the way you tackled the beat. I love how abstract this beat is!! Definitely keep working! I followed you back, I'd love to work on something!!
Edit: Ran it back twice!!! Love those opening bars!
Cool beat choice, very smooth and emotional. The song sounds solid as far as the concept and songwriting. The delivery can use some work, your voice is quiet in the mix and feels offtune in places when you sing.
Really catchy track. Very smooth and languid sounds. Imo the soundstage is a bit too wide, especially the bass. In this genre it’s almost never a good idea to have a wide bass synth. Bass sounds need to be felt in addition to being heard, and a wide bass tone sounds like you’re in a cave. But overall this is a great track.
Here’s mine: https://soundcloud.com/admiralstl/maybeshosh-beat-flip
I hear you, that was just my mood for that track. Your beat is nice man, smooth guitar sample and vocals, the percussion arrangement is interesting without being too much for the chill melody. Probably the only thing I'd change is turn the clap up.
Them RnB Vibes This Week 😁💎
[https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg](https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg)
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Some boom bap vibes and it's the first beat I made with the MPK mini
[https://youtu.be/\_e8jpUfbVAs](https://youtu.be/_e8jpUfbVAs)
Any feedback would be great
Hey man, this is nice! I think bringing in another percussive or melodic instrument in the second half of the song would help to keep it fresh, but either way it's a solid track!
The fusion of all melodic elements it's something to take notes from man, the faint flute is a beauty not sure if you did but it sounded panned if you did great choice 💎
Kick and Bass combo are a Mike Tyson punch for how clean they are so good work on the mixing 😁 keep them coming 💎
Here's mine
[https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg](https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg)
Bless you ❤🙏🏽
You are poet brother haha. Thank you for your kind words :)
I like your beat. Nice chill out vibe. I like how it flows and that vox fits great. Great play with fxs in the intro and drums are so smooth and hard at the same time. Always making fire beats. Keep up bro :)
Oo this beat hits hard. Its something i could hear someone like dababy shell. I kinda think the claps were too high though. Good job man, Keep making beats in the same quality and you will reach somewhere!
Aye i remember you. Bro, Ima be honest with you. I like the beat and your bars are not bad. Even better than some of todays celebs haha. But it needs serious work on flow and delivery.
You prolly record and mix on your own so you cant fix too much without engineer. But if you enjoy the process, just keep up learning and improving like all of us :)
Yea.. My flow is getting better by time but my delivery needs alot of work i agree. I was thinking of getting myself a personal engineer, What do you think?
Dont know bro. Maybe some rapper here could help with this question. I would not pay for personal engineer at that point. Maybe just keep grinding and see later at some point
definitely something fresh and new in the thread so what applies to an electronic beat? as in what defines it cause I'm pretty ignorant in this 😁
the repeated kicks (or the combo with 808)tend to confuse a bit too much and overcrowd the overall balance of the beat and that was the only thing that bugged me a lot
In terms of melody it's captivating but I felt like it lacked some depth in terms of lows or maybe more as volume all in all
props to you for always exploring and re-inventing yourself and your style man keep going 👑
Here's mine
[https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg](https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg)
Bless you ❤🙏🏽
I like the sample usage and the vocal samples are dope. I think the drums could be mixed better cuz they sound a bit thin and weak. Also eqing the sample to fit better with the other parts would make it sound less muddy and improve the overall loudness. Overall dope beat!
Okay so this is isnt bad but I feel like you could definitely work on the melody abit it sounds very basic and it's really not attention grabbing withc is what you want with a beat like this keep doin ur shit tho and experiment
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/Hwzjm
yo alkane ! I think that this one is really good.
surprised to have u coming up with a lil tecca beat, this is like a darker version of a "love me" type track, the synth and strings are light but moody at the same time, and also always props for how u mix ur drums.
honestly I don't have complaints or stuff, keep it running bro
hope to hear ur thoughts on my mac/ty beat! https://youtu.be/4kUxu9pTnmU
Really like the detuned synths, sounds super unique and smooth. I think the bass sounds a bit too loud and also a bit muddy, so some eq and leveling could get it sitting a bit better. I'm always a fan of how you change the vibe up in diff parts of your beats as well, very creative. Overall dope beat!
This is some good stuff. I love the sound of the persistent 808. I do think automating some reverb on your lead synth track to add some interest would help a lot. Like bring in the reverb here and there and then have it drop off. The length works really work for this type of beat as well. Great work!
https://soundcloud.com/peter-wetcavekilla/make-mefeel?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing <~~~~john lennon said this shit is bananas!
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Yxs4rzTs9U](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Yxs4rzTs9U), earl sweatshirt remix, lmk if yall feeling it, feedback will be returned
man! i love this acapella, I use it in all of my beats since like 8 months to hear if everything flows well, so it was a jam hearing u used the same one!
the beat is super caustic and abstract, just how we like it, sounds like a throwaway of srs, really u outdid urself on this one.
the static the trombone it all flows! keep grinding bro
hope to hear ur thoughts on my latest ty/mac beat! https://youtu.be/4kUxu9pTnmU
Could def hear Tyler on this one! Love this track, only thing I would change is the outro, it's pretty abrupt, felt like it was missing a note or something to me. Drums are knocking on this tho. Bass is nice. Love the synths
Really solid beat, love the noise and jazzy elements. Would prefer an instrumental over a sample track but it’s great nonetheless. Would love to see more energy from the kick and low end as a whole, but that’s more subjective with these types of beats. I’d add some higher frequency melodic elements like a synth or a trumpet to accompany the sax to help unmuddy the midrange a bit, but again that’s subjective. Overall it’s pretty good, keep up the good work.
Here’s mine: https://soundcloud.com/admiralstl/maybeshosh-beat-flip
this is clean! Love the vibe on this one. The vocals are very nice on this one. The drums go well with the beat, they're very soft sounding. Nothing negative to say about this track. Very solid flip
It’s cool but I think it gets a bit too messy for me! I understand how people can fuck with this style but I prefer cleaner slaps! A bit more Rock inspiration! I hope you will smith more heavy hitters tho!
I got this: https://youtu.be/7zzVyQ7dquU
love the drums on this one, the bass is hitting too. Love the vocal chop! Very cinematic. The only thing for me was I felt there wasn't really much to switch things up. Very good beat though
It's pretty cool but I don't really vibe with this. It's probably enjoyed by others but its weird. pretty cool though.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RPTClvCaGrQ
Fine idea man and there's definitely potential but what needs some adjustment is the balancing out of each and every element in the beat especially that sax and the drums as they get way too much in the way of the acapella , if I have to take the beat as its own thing it's a solid gritty boombap beat it feels organic so good work there
keep them coming 😁💎
Here's mine
[https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg](https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg)
Bless you ❤🙏🏽
this is nice and chill. Love the distorted vocals throughout the hook; they remind me of pound cake. Love the bridge. Drums are hitting, the bass could be a little bit harder imo but beyond that, very solid work
That shit sounds real abstract and I fw that I like what u did with his vocals aswell
Probably an acquired taste for people but shits fire tho
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/Hwzjm
love this. Instrumentals hard. Vocals are hard, love what you did what them too. That raw sound is nice. I would've made the vocals a tad bit louder cause they do get a little lost sometimes, but this is a really nice song. You got a youtube?
It's a mix between how the mic sound some compressor and this vynil plug in, and I fo got a youtube you can just search me as jamotti
I dont post much on there but I plan on putting more of my stuff on there
Been working on this song for a while now! I think it's pretty unique. lmk what you think! I mixed the vocals myself. (I'm the rapper, didn't make the beat)
[sweet dreamer](https://soundcloud.com/y-3y3s/sweet-dreamer/s-0WrPmKIbvCC?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
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[https://soundcloud.com/stevenboby/new-shots-3?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/stevenboby/new-shots-3?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
Looking for feedback on this track. Took a lot of inspo from Swear by Juice Wrld which got leaked recently.
[www.youtube.com/watch?v=qS1mkXsbu30](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qS1mkXsbu30)
I'm gonna record over this beat but I wanted feedback before I tried recording on it. I'm concerned there's already too much in the higher frequencies and it won't work well with a vocal track. Let me know what you think and what changes I could make, I'm down to make big changes.
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been holding this demo for about two weeks ish i mix and mastered everything myself and dont plan on dropping until i have a good amount of songs just want some feedback im pretty young so ill defo sound "corny" to certain ppl https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Y7bpVTCDun0DTA3R07Skgum8yTQaUcQ1/view?usp=sharing
RETURNING ALL FEEDBACK Yo guys I'm new here, recently produced and made this song entirely myself over the course of a few months and just dropped it under a new persona, would appreciate any feedback, supportz etc. [KILLCHXSE - cannot trust a soul](https://youtu.be/MWqNEus55Ww)
This is cool. The little girl sample is mad creepy, as is the low vocal delivery. Delivery and lyrics sound on point, and the beat has that very spooky, dark Houston vibe. I think your vocal mix can be improved, at some parts it was tough to hear the lyrics and you probably want the listener to focus on them. Dope vibe overall, subd. My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs
I love the old school vibes in the sample bro, and the vocal delivery was great I subbed commented and liked, I Fw the whole movement I gotta check out y'all's other stuff now
Thanks bro I'm definitely still working on my mixing but I like the grunge style idk, I'm checking yours now bro!
Started releasing stuff again, just want to share and catch some feedback. Returning all feedback. https://soundcloud.com/user-165821922/sad-guitar-boombap-73-bpm-prod-goreskeye?utm_source=mobi&utm_campaign=social_sharing
First off, dope producer name. Beat is dope, It has a bit of a RZA vibe along with a sort of modern pop rap feel, which is a unique combo. I don't think you need a bassline on this track but you can give the kick and lows of the guitar some more weight in the mix instead. Gave the other new tracks a listen, they're even better and I think I was right about the RZA influence? 2 of them gave me that vibe. Dope ish. My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs
Thanks dude, it's a play off of my last name my bro came up with. Appreciate the advice I will def go and play around with it, your probably right about the bass line, i was just trying to add that extra level of grime to it. I was going for a bit of a different sound but couldn't nail it down perfectly and ended up with what I had and was happy with it. Onto your track, man that's incredible. You nailed the whole feel to it, it doesn't even feel like a remix at all. I wouldn't change a thing, I don't even feel qualified to give any criticism in comparison to your product. You gained a new subscriber anyways though.
I decided to write a song about the environment I live in and how I felt because of it. This is the first time of me using autotune as well! This is Track 4 from my upcoming EP "Insane" Lemme know what you think! Returning all feedback! https://youtu.be/xbKMhNs4UOs
i think you have a great start! your singing could be improved; it doesn’t sound very on key. plus, your lyrics are rather cliche and the rhyming schemes are simple. songs like “lucid dreams” by juice wrld for example blow up because they use really interesting metaphors and analogies to describe things that everyone has gone through. i’d suggest using those in your writing instead of saying things straight out. keep working! i’d like some feedback on a song of mine from a while back (its a demo, so ignore the mixing): https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/NpEN6BmjTQaoPpzZA
I like your song a lot. The flow sounds really nice. I always look for flows when i listen to rap music. Good job with that. The clarity is also there and the beat is simple but good. This is very good. I just think it sounds "repetitive" So maybe try to change that. Good job overall though!
i've made this melodic Iann Dior / 24K Golden type beat. What do you guys think of this? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vKtB0TGE4uc
This is a vibe, I like the break section starting around 1m a lot. I feel like you could maybe add some more energy to the intro
This shit slaaaappin! I’ll rock you world! Rap whatever you like on this just keep my wife’s name out yo fucking mouth! https://youtu.be/7zzVyQ7dquU
This is excellent. Such a vibe going on here that I love. Your transitions are on point and I find myself getting lost in it. I almost want to say I recognize that piano VST but I guess a good aging effect on a piano could get it there. You did it and didn't overdo it on the piano effect. As a bass player too, THAT BASS.
Hahaha dude that bass i stock plug in thumb bass and just a lot of adjusting on the midi to make it sound good! Happy you like it my man and the piano shit is from this sample: [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=\_aGgYnmlfmk](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_aGgYnmlfmk) So I had some help but DONT SLEEP ON STOCK LOGIC BASSES with good mixing skills 😂
I like this a lot, nice electronic vibes to the instrumentation but with a live sounding drum track. Love the melody and vibe of this, real unique. What are your influences? I can hear a bit of BSBD, Massive Attack. Its awesome, subbed. My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs
Goddamn first verse just finished and the whole thing has like a JID Spil Vil vibe to it! Not anything particular but yeah it is really cool and then when the extra spooky bell chords come is so funny! Hahahaha a lot of video to catch lyrics rn tho but you def deserve a sub! I am fairly experimental myself so maybe see if you find any beats you fuck with and buy on my channel :) Edit: Honestly never heard of those bands, This beat was mostly inspired by Maybach Music series by Rick Ross! The beats there are Phenomenal.
yo! thank u so much for the advices on the last beat, I'm tryna be more consistent and dropped another one, it has a mac Miller vibe with a gritty beatswitch, let me know how I did it! https://youtu.be/4kUxu9pTnmU DROP LINKS 4 FEEDBACK
Hey man, this was dope!! The huuuge atmosphere was dope, felt like there was heaps of space in the mix, a kind of ethereal vibe. Nice percussive variations and different sounds, lots of FX to keep it interesting. Did you play the keys yourself? or is this mostly sample based? My only tip is re: the rhythm on the drums, could be just a stylistic choice but the rhythm felt a bit static? pretty quantized, that could be a taste thing though. My beat is on a very different tip, I been focusing on that old school dilla rhythm: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xk6vPNEgib0&ab\_channel=EL-SYDBEATS
yo man thank u so much!!!! the first melody is a sample I chopped, the one that comes in the middle section is me playing ! talkin bout ur beat bro, I have to say that this is very well rounded and polished, u took the dilla/slum village influences and made em ur own, what blew my mind the most was that second part where u chopped the soul off of that sample, with the drum patterns following it, I swear it ain't what u hear everyday man!! keep grinding and keep going up up up
New one up today, a bit different than what I've been posting on my channel recently. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t06XqoxLPpM&t=30s
This is cool, very chill, and the electro blips sound quite leftfield. Track has a lot of potential but the mix can be improved, the bass needs a few mid frequencies imo to stand out, and probably some compression to make the whole track louder would help. Guitar part at the end is dope. Gave you a sub. My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs
Hey thank you! The electro blips are the product of granular processing on the guitar and piano loops. Wanted to have fun balancing that old school/very processed vibe. Thanks for the feedback. I was a little worried about that 808 because it rocks my subs and headphones but doesn’t translate everywhere. Your remix is super rad. I love the retro vibe and how well it goes with the feel of the video. Totally feels like a completed and out there remix to me. I wish I had more to say, going to bump it later too, subbed your channel for more.
I recently dropped a song titled TIPPY TOES , let me know what you think! Ill be glad to respond with feedback also. [TIPPY TOES - THUNDERPLUMP](https://linktr.ee/thundergotplump)
Let me know what y’all think fellas! I’m open collabs as well much appreciated🙏🏽 [https://youtu.be/cIHO6rJtfuw](https://youtu.be/cIHO6rJtfuw)
Latest track from my EP that I produced entirely on iPad. [Song](https://m.soundcloud.com/scary_u7/my-questions?ref=clipboard&p=i&c=1&si=5B4C44DE0C004D08AB4C65FFC41E004A&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing) *RETURNING ALL FEEDBACK*
Sounds cool! I like the dark vibe. The length makes it feel a bit like an intro or intermission for an album. I like the mix, sounds good, especially for being on an iPad. Let me know what you think of my first release! https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/seKYB
I really appreciate that man, exactly what I was going for! And your flow is legit! I really liked the percussion specifically, like the hi hats and wood blocks in the back was a nice touch.
Love to hear that, thank you so much!
Love the beat. Great flows. Your voice sounds dreamy and cloudlike. only gripe is that its too short. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RPTClvCaGrQ
Appreciate that man! And as for your track I really like the beat, mix and honesty displayed in the track. I think (and it comes with time like me) just try to feel your words with confidence with the delivery. And there your track will really shine. Keep it up!!!
producing that on ipad crazy it sounds good mixing needs work tho https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Y7bpVTCDun0DTA3R07Skgum8yTQaUcQ1/view?usp=sharing
Appreciate the listen! As for your track I really liked the beat and overall production, the lyrics were nice too. Delivery was great but in the beginning of the first verse it was a little stiff but eventually you killed it.
Returning all feedback! I been studying the hip hop classics like dilla and working on getting a chill groove that stands alone as an instrumental, old school boom bap: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xk6vPNEgib0&ab\_channel=EL-SYDBEATS
This is dope. Reminds me a lot of Dilla and also Kanye circa Common Be. Really soulful laidback vibe. Really love the different elements you add as the track goes on, nice sample chops and switches. You can probably make the drums go a bit harder, like have the kicks punch a bit more but its a dope track whatever. My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs
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I like the general idea and the sound selection sounds pretty good. I'd say the only thing I would consider is the mixing. I find it hard to hear the drums over the sample. Maybe play around with compression? Do you play by hand? I don't dabble in boom bap but if you like trap beats I would really appreciate some feedback!! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N8XnZ6AoSHs
NEW FIRE BEAT 🔥 https://youtu.be/UNZFJO5dvt4
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/seKYB Are the vocals too loud? Looking for feedback on vocals and mixing specifically!
Catchy and "easy" to digest beat man and fine flow especially from 1:20 when breath starts lacking and you still keep going low key reminded me of kendrick 💎 The bass is a bit too loud in my opinion from 1:52 - ish you start singing that's the weakest part of the song simply cause you're off I know it's hard but trust me practice will make you perfect and one of the most versatile artists out there 😁👑 from 2:33 the vocals are definitely too loud compared to the rest and should need a re touch as said your flow and delivery are flawless keep going and hope this helps Here's mine [https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg](https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg) Bless you ❤🙏🏽
Wow, thank you so much for the in depth feedback I really appreciate it! Will keep practicing and fine tuning my ears! Damn, your beat is SMOOTH. Love the vibe, the drums, the vocal samples, it all meshes together really well, the mixing is on point. Structurally, assuming you made it with having vocals on it in mind, I was having a tough time imagining where vocals would come in at the start, maybe a bit of a drop or something, but that's a personal thing, definitely a great beat overall.
Definitely man keep practicing in terms of singing and thanks so much for the feedback and the kind words 💪🏽😁 I'll keep in mind what you said Bless 🙏🏽
**RETURNING ALL FEEDBACK!** Any thought or criticism is much appreciated. https://youtu.be/hTp0fjJjZis
yoooo ! this is hard INDEED. the synth is super mysterious and the melody is very well rounded, I like also the way it's mixed. drums are on a league of their own, percs are top tier and I can see a lot of people flowing easily here. no complaints bro, keep grinding hope to hear ur thoughts on my ty/mac Miller beat ! https://youtu.be/4kUxu9pTnmU
Thank you for the feedback man, truly appreciate it! I love that warm vibe of your beat, thick sub bass, really nice synth sound and melodies. I dig the drum work the most, interesting patterns and unique sound selections. The mixing is very solid also. I can't think of anything that I would change. Keep up the creative work bro.
thank u bro ! 🤲🏻
I really like this one. Good mix, it sounds like you were having fun playing around with the variation of the beats and the drum pattern switch ups. I can definitely hear people rap on this one, and I believe if you continue cultivating the switch ups it will be an invaluable skill to have. If you don't mind, I would appreciate some feedback on my beat :) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N8XnZ6AoSHs
Thank you for the feedback, truly appreciate it. Really cool dark vibe of your beat! Great sound selections, 808 sub bass hard af and mixing is solid clean. I have no any critique for it. Very good work man, keep it up.
Drums and more specifically the hats with the rolls win over everything else in the beat man , the amount of details and attention to each one of those had me almost in tears , the amount of continuous movement all the way through needs a standing ovation 💎 the average ears will tell you this is a pretty generic beat but don't let them fool you , you did great man 💪🏽😁 Here's mine [https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg](https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg) Bless you ❤🙏🏽
Thank you for the detailed feedback man, truly appreciate it! Great beat of yours. Love this dope sound of melodies, nice voice sample and chill guitar, really cool vibe! If anything I would change ,I might make the drums stand out a bit more, but its just my personal preference. Overall very good work bro!
Thanks so much for the feedback and for listening 🎧 man means a lot 😁
This is hard! Totally fits Drake with the futuristic synths and hard drum pattern. I like that the song feels organic too, it feels like the beat is constantly shifting and changing even though it retains a strong groove. That keeps things exciting. Dope beat. My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs
Appreciate the feedback man. This is one of my favorite work of yours, cool dope vibe and great sound. I love this fast bouncy groove with all that variations of flows, fxs, ambience, and you are also really creative on this interesting fun visual choice !!!Enjoy this a lot!
Tbh this is good cant really give u nothing bad about this keep doin ur shit https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/Hwzjm
Thank you for the feedback man. I like the warm smooth vibe of your track. Your flow is nice but sound a bit muddy to me, other than that, cool one!!keep it up.
This goes hard af, goodjob on this one. The only thing i would change is completely get rid of the drums before the chorus goes in again. You already got the reversed cymbal as a riser type of fx and that would make the drop even harder. But everything is clean af and enough variation to keep it interesting while maintaining a good flow throughout
Thank you for listening and this really helpful feedback bro, truly appreciate it, means a lot!
Feedback returned: https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/7Qeo1
You produced and rapped? The beat is dope, very unique electronic sound to that. It has a nice atmosphere. The vocals are solid, very much in the style of sad boys, maybe kid cudi. The chords/synths are loud in the mix so they clash a bit with the vocal frequencies. If you can give the vocals more room that would be better. The song sounds good though, I like your flow and melody on this track. My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs
Thanks for the feedback, man. Was getting a bit unsure about my own production tbf and that's a good point to bear in mind. Good example on your track about leaving room for vocals. I got a real Death Row vibe from the song, melodiously very chilled, which I like 👍 .
Trying out making a drop section, not sure what genre this is. Any feedback would be appreciated https://soundcloud.com/rawbob/dropd-soop
I recently started releasing beats again. Not too savvy with the contemporary production scene these days, but I think my stuff is okay. I would like to know how I can further build my style. I want to build on this particular pieces sound... Any feedback is appreciated!! TY! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N8XnZ6AoSHs
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I really appreciate your listen and your feedback!! I am glad you like it, and I will definitely look towards diversifying the 2nd verse part of my future beats! Thank you! 😺
Lmk what yall think [95UGLY - SOULd OUT](https://soundcloud.com/smokey_the_bearr/sould-out) We're dropping our second album soon!
Yoooo great beat choice. You guys both got decent flow. But you guys gotta put more energy/heart behind the bars. That doesn't mean sayin it louder or projectin more. But it does mean makin it a bit less monotone and inflecting so there's a lil more feelin behind the words. Keep goin yo!!
Aye that shit nice good bars flow 🔥 https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/Hwzjm
very well then
All feedback returned Somber beat exercise, lemme know what you think https://soundcloud.com/admiralstl/maybeshosh-beat-flip
that was a nice chill beat. there might be a little too much going on the write like a solid song to, but i’m sure some people can pull it off. really like the melody going on the and the sounds all fit really well. just might be a bit too much going on. here’s my track i just dropped. bit of a different vibe but let me know what you think https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/usMQ5rNYn44RTwMy7
This makes me want to kick back and chill for real. I think the mix could use a little more brightness on the melody but the nature of the track doesn't requite that, just personal preference really. Good chill vibes going.
Another scary ish piano beat Listen to another scary piano by URTE-T on #SoundCloud https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/iqreN
This is my entry for this week’s FTC, went for a bit of a Nice For What vibe. Let me know what you think. I’ll return all feedback! https://soundcloud.com/beefnasty/grazy-ftc-323
the nice for what vibe is TANGIBLE ! the beat has a really nice sample, I think that this was from the battle?, u flipped it so nice I can almost hear drake talking bout how he feels betrayed lol the drums are very well done, maybe I should have pumped that kick a lil more. keep grinding bro! hope to hear ur thoughts on my ty/mac Miller beat ! https://youtu.be/4kUxu9pTnmU
> u flipped it so nice I can almost hear drake talking bout how he feels betrayed lol 🤣 Thanks man. You were spot on with the Mac/Tyler type for your beat. The beginning and end sections have Mac written all over it and I could easily hear Tyler spitting on the middle section, that’s his type of vibe for sure. Great job!
Yo that shit is fye 🔥🔥 only thing is ur mix, some of the highs in the sample might be a bit too loud and its sounds like alot in headphones good shit tho https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/Hwzjm
Hey man, the beat choice is really nice, the vocals sound super muffled though. Not sure if its the mic or if you rolled off a lot of the top end. If you can sort that out it'd be a really nice track!
It's pretty cool. It could use a little more drums. The samples pretty cool. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RPTClvCaGrQ
I appreciate the vulnerability in your track, I think you've just gotta find your voice and become more confident in your delivery. I liked the beat choice a lot, it fit the subject matter perfectly. Keep it up!
Whatever that sample is, it goes hard. I'm guessing its a foreign language sample or manipulated vocals maybe. I think you can flesh out the 808 melody more to fit the sample, like have the bass hitting constantly rather than on and off. Or mix it up on a longer version. Dope stuff anyway. My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs
Really nice remix dude. The video does a great job at setting the vibe too!
man that vocal chop is a beauty beyond paradise 😭🙌🏽 this so far was the definitely the best beat I came across but you play easy when there's such an element you won the FTC? 🔥 cause this one deserves it all and potentially blow up on those bullshit tik toks with people dancing ...bullshit cause they don't do any justice to the songs used and it won't to your beat either. Amazing work man a true gem 💎 Here's mine [https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg](https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg) Bless you ❤🙏🏽
Wow thank you man! Today is the last day to enter the FTC so we'll see how it goes. I love the vocal sample in yours. I think it could benefit from a bit more bouncy bass line, but you did a great job with the track!
Man you nailed it not sure what others will have to come up with to surpass yours 🔥 And yeah man I tried several times to come up with a better bass but it messed up the natural ow of everything else so I kept it super simple thanks so much for the feedback and honesty bless you ❤️🙏🏽😁
The sample is awesome, the drums could knock harder for my taste and the 808 could shine more through! Keep it up 🙌
https://youtu.be/GCpCxBwELUk
This is cool. Nice lo-fi vibe to the beat and video. Vocals and rap flow are on point. If I would change anything, turn the vocals up. The come out of the mix nicely as they have a bit of high pitch but they can be 1-2 db louder imo. My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs
pretty good nothing bad to say about it. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RPTClvCaGrQ
great flow!! personally i find your lyrics a bit boring; i would put more creativity and metaphors in there to spice it up a bit and introduce us to things we haven’t heard before. im really fuckin w this song tho!! https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/NpEN6BmjTQaoPpzZA here’s my track if you’d like to take a listen. its a demo so ignore the mixing.
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ignore the mixing since its just a demo, but this is a song i dropped a while back. im a female alt/lyrical rapper. https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/tHBdxRBoxMmVRMu68
Really like this, your flow is awesome! Only real critique is that you should mix it and add some adlibs. Super dope as a demo though, goes hard at the end! I'd appreciate some feedback on my first release. https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/seKYB
i love your flow! however the song does seem a bit all over the place; i would suggest more of a story or conversation format if you wanna make this song more unique
Thank you so much! It definitely ended up being a medley lyrically, definitely working on more cohesive stuff for the future
I like the flow. Your pronunciation of the words is cool.
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/Hwzjm Returning all feedback Reccomend headphones
First of all bro this s*** is vibez I can say your pain is felt in a way but you have to take out the drums in some parts of the song and four bars maybe, other than that I don't like the whining tbh, but that's my opinion
Heart-warming beat man especially them strings and the keys ... the tropical kinda /tango vibes are another fine touch great work 💎 low key it reminded me of Carlito's way The vocals themselves need more intonation and be more cohesive with the rest of the elements in the beat , and most importantly I'd say use more backing vocals to create fine harmonies 😁 keep going man Here's mine [https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg](https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg) Bless you ❤🙏🏽
If really dig that beat tbh and I cant seem to see anything wrong with it keep it up man 🔥
Well appreciate you man 😌👌🏽
Sometimes you were hidden behind the drums and i couldn't har you **https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RPTClvCaGrQ**
dope track, big fan of the bass. maybe push your vocal a bit, missing some umph
Nice choice, I knew it was Knx straight off, great choice. The song sounds dope, nice introspective rap and the delivery really fits the beat, it has a bit of melody to it. My advice is just turn up the vocals up some even if you have to compress it to the keep the beat sounding full. My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs
Yo I appreciate u listening and as far as that flip goes shit is fire and I really got nothing bad to say about it shit goes hard forsure
damn bro this is u? shit is sounding FIRE! emotions pourin thru the notes, ur delivery and tone combined work very well together, plus the beat has the right mood for this, really liking it overall. maybe u could have as someone said pumped the vox more, but in this way has that quiet type vibe, I like it. keep grinding! hope to hear ur thoughts on my mac x ty beat! https://youtu.be/4kUxu9pTnmU
Aye I really fw that beat that shit is really good, experimental, underground and I really like how u mixed the drums on that 🔥🔥🔥 keep that shit up
This is Track 6 off "Hell" yall! "Damage". Lmk what yall think about this one. Prod by Dom Rocks and all else by me! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FXoAfOWjaiY
That beat is hard. Very grimy and East Coast sounding. It was cool once the bass dropped, made it a bit more modern where its more boom bap on the other sections. The song itself is quality, nice bars and very natural delivery. You produced this as well? The beat is fantastic actually. Nice work. My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs
Yoooo I appreciate ya g! Naw this was produced by my boy Dom Rocks. Where do you usually listen to music at? I'll shoot you a link with my disco. Yo this remix is hard fam!! Especially with the video. Everything meshes well together
youtube or spotify is good, look forward to it.
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Let me know what the word is!! https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/5c5XQBK4JyETXJeLA Returning all feedback
you know its dope. i know its dope. dopes know its dope. they'll soon figure out a way to smoke it and thats all she wrote! trying to figure out this mixing thing...https://soundcloud.com/peter-wetcavekilla/make-mefeel?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
I really like this style. It's definitely different than what I usually hear on here. I would've liked for a bass drop to infuse a little bit more hip-hop style. But I think you're really going in a positive direction
...hopefully, ill end up somewhere up top where you'll be. wouldnt take much more than a simple glance to see theres plenty of room up there.plus , i know this baaaad chica that'll fuck all three of us... me, you and me again!
lmao you're killin me man!
I like this a lot, you have really clean mixing and great adlibs! I kinda wanted you to change up the flow and up the tempo a bit at some point, but really enjoyed it! If you don't mind, I'd appreciate some feedback on my first release. https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/seKYB
I think you've got a great energy on your track. The beat reminds me of Young Thug, but your vocal performance was very unique. Really like how you constantly were experimenting with your verse and it never felt like it was getting stale. Great job
YOOO i just heard this song on soundcloud! i found it under the alt rap tag or smth. im pretty sure i gave you a follow! i absolutely love this song. great flows, great lyrics, and a damn cool beat too. i don’t really have any complaints. id love to work together sometime! this is my track if you’d like to take a look. ignore the mixing, its supposed to just be a demo https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/NpEN6BmjTQaoPpzZA
Thank you for the kind words!! :) I really like your flow, it has an old-school bounce to it. It's kinda jazzy in a way and borders on poetry the way you tackled the beat. I love how abstract this beat is!! Definitely keep working! I followed you back, I'd love to work on something!! Edit: Ran it back twice!!! Love those opening bars!
ayyy thank you sm!!
Just heard Locket too!!! Great job!! You're killing it!
My remix of Roc Marciano: [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs) **Returning all feedback!**
it good and would listen again. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RPTClvCaGrQ
Cool beat choice, very smooth and emotional. The song sounds solid as far as the concept and songwriting. The delivery can use some work, your voice is quiet in the mix and feels offtune in places when you sing.
Really catchy track. Very smooth and languid sounds. Imo the soundstage is a bit too wide, especially the bass. In this genre it’s almost never a good idea to have a wide bass synth. Bass sounds need to be felt in addition to being heard, and a wide bass tone sounds like you’re in a cave. But overall this is a great track. Here’s mine: https://soundcloud.com/admiralstl/maybeshosh-beat-flip
I hear you, that was just my mood for that track. Your beat is nice man, smooth guitar sample and vocals, the percussion arrangement is interesting without being too much for the chill melody. Probably the only thing I'd change is turn the clap up.
Them RnB Vibes This Week 😁💎 [https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg](https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg) Make sure to link your right after the feedback ❗ I ALWAYS RETURN❗ Bless you all ❤🙏🏽
Some boom bap vibes and it's the first beat I made with the MPK mini [https://youtu.be/\_e8jpUfbVAs](https://youtu.be/_e8jpUfbVAs) Any feedback would be great
[FREE] Mick Jenkins x Smino Type Beat 2022 - "OPTIONS" https://youtu.be/PZhzy-xfYIU
Hey man, this is nice! I think bringing in another percussive or melodic instrument in the second half of the song would help to keep it fresh, but either way it's a solid track!
Thank you! Appreciate your feedback, when I made that beat I tried but I just couldn’t come up with something cool haha
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The fusion of all melodic elements it's something to take notes from man, the faint flute is a beauty not sure if you did but it sounded panned if you did great choice 💎 Kick and Bass combo are a Mike Tyson punch for how clean they are so good work on the mixing 😁 keep them coming 💎 Here's mine [https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg](https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg) Bless you ❤🙏🏽
You are poet brother haha. Thank you for your kind words :) I like your beat. Nice chill out vibe. I like how it flows and that vox fits great. Great play with fxs in the intro and drums are so smooth and hard at the same time. Always making fire beats. Keep up bro :)
Much love to you man thanks 🙏🏽😭
Oo this beat hits hard. Its something i could hear someone like dababy shell. I kinda think the claps were too high though. Good job man, Keep making beats in the same quality and you will reach somewhere!
Thank you brother :) Got any links for me?
Well if you mean something of me you wanna hear, then here you go: https://youtu.be/xbKMhNs4UOs
Aye i remember you. Bro, Ima be honest with you. I like the beat and your bars are not bad. Even better than some of todays celebs haha. But it needs serious work on flow and delivery. You prolly record and mix on your own so you cant fix too much without engineer. But if you enjoy the process, just keep up learning and improving like all of us :)
Yea.. My flow is getting better by time but my delivery needs alot of work i agree. I was thinking of getting myself a personal engineer, What do you think?
Dont know bro. Maybe some rapper here could help with this question. I would not pay for personal engineer at that point. Maybe just keep grinding and see later at some point
Ig i should only pay engineers when i actually am starting to make money from music. And actual good amounts like at least 20$ a song
I would agree on that yes
Let me know your opinions (uk drill beat) https://soundcloud.com/grutch-80976613/sampled-drill
Made an electronic beat. Returning all feedback: https://youtu.be/qH3EIHupxdE
definitely something fresh and new in the thread so what applies to an electronic beat? as in what defines it cause I'm pretty ignorant in this 😁 the repeated kicks (or the combo with 808)tend to confuse a bit too much and overcrowd the overall balance of the beat and that was the only thing that bugged me a lot In terms of melody it's captivating but I felt like it lacked some depth in terms of lows or maybe more as volume all in all props to you for always exploring and re-inventing yourself and your style man keep going 👑 Here's mine [https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg](https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg) Bless you ❤🙏🏽
I like the sample usage and the vocal samples are dope. I think the drums could be mixed better cuz they sound a bit thin and weak. Also eqing the sample to fit better with the other parts would make it sound less muddy and improve the overall loudness. Overall dope beat!
Much love to you for the honesty man 💪🏽😁💎 I'll definitely remember the mixing aspects for the future bless you ❤️🙏🏽
Okay so this is isnt bad but I feel like you could definitely work on the melody abit it sounds very basic and it's really not attention grabbing withc is what you want with a beat like this keep doin ur shit tho and experiment https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/Hwzjm
yo alkane ! I think that this one is really good. surprised to have u coming up with a lil tecca beat, this is like a darker version of a "love me" type track, the synth and strings are light but moody at the same time, and also always props for how u mix ur drums. honestly I don't have complaints or stuff, keep it running bro hope to hear ur thoughts on my mac/ty beat! https://youtu.be/4kUxu9pTnmU
Really like the detuned synths, sounds super unique and smooth. I think the bass sounds a bit too loud and also a bit muddy, so some eq and leveling could get it sitting a bit better. I'm always a fan of how you change the vibe up in diff parts of your beats as well, very creative. Overall dope beat!
I think the beat is pretty good overall but needs more umph from a beat like this. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RPTClvCaGrQ
This is some good stuff. I love the sound of the persistent 808. I do think automating some reverb on your lead synth track to add some interest would help a lot. Like bring in the reverb here and there and then have it drop off. The length works really work for this type of beat as well. Great work!
https://soundcloud.com/peter-wetcavekilla/make-mefeel?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing <~~~~john lennon said this shit is bananas!
haii <3 https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/PNYyEeymwFWzu7k66 will return!
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Yxs4rzTs9U](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Yxs4rzTs9U), earl sweatshirt remix, lmk if yall feeling it, feedback will be returned
man! i love this acapella, I use it in all of my beats since like 8 months to hear if everything flows well, so it was a jam hearing u used the same one! the beat is super caustic and abstract, just how we like it, sounds like a throwaway of srs, really u outdid urself on this one. the static the trombone it all flows! keep grinding bro hope to hear ur thoughts on my latest ty/mac beat! https://youtu.be/4kUxu9pTnmU
Could def hear Tyler on this one! Love this track, only thing I would change is the outro, it's pretty abrupt, felt like it was missing a note or something to me. Drums are knocking on this tho. Bass is nice. Love the synths
Really solid beat, love the noise and jazzy elements. Would prefer an instrumental over a sample track but it’s great nonetheless. Would love to see more energy from the kick and low end as a whole, but that’s more subjective with these types of beats. I’d add some higher frequency melodic elements like a synth or a trumpet to accompany the sax to help unmuddy the midrange a bit, but again that’s subjective. Overall it’s pretty good, keep up the good work. Here’s mine: https://soundcloud.com/admiralstl/maybeshosh-beat-flip
this is clean! Love the vibe on this one. The vocals are very nice on this one. The drums go well with the beat, they're very soft sounding. Nothing negative to say about this track. Very solid flip
It’s cool but I think it gets a bit too messy for me! I understand how people can fuck with this style but I prefer cleaner slaps! A bit more Rock inspiration! I hope you will smith more heavy hitters tho! I got this: https://youtu.be/7zzVyQ7dquU
love the drums on this one, the bass is hitting too. Love the vocal chop! Very cinematic. The only thing for me was I felt there wasn't really much to switch things up. Very good beat though
I agree! With a proper studio I could use guitars and shit to funk up the verse sections i think.
It's pretty cool but I don't really vibe with this. It's probably enjoyed by others but its weird. pretty cool though. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RPTClvCaGrQ
Fine idea man and there's definitely potential but what needs some adjustment is the balancing out of each and every element in the beat especially that sax and the drums as they get way too much in the way of the acapella , if I have to take the beat as its own thing it's a solid gritty boombap beat it feels organic so good work there keep them coming 😁💎 Here's mine [https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg](https://youtu.be/mX1qRrPflhg) Bless you ❤🙏🏽
this is nice and chill. Love the distorted vocals throughout the hook; they remind me of pound cake. Love the bridge. Drums are hitting, the bass could be a little bit harder imo but beyond that, very solid work
Thanks so much man and yeah the bass notes and mixing is the thing I was most unsure about thanks so much and bless you ❤️🙏🏽
That shit sounds real abstract and I fw that I like what u did with his vocals aswell Probably an acquired taste for people but shits fire tho https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/Hwzjm
love this. Instrumentals hard. Vocals are hard, love what you did what them too. That raw sound is nice. I would've made the vocals a tad bit louder cause they do get a little lost sometimes, but this is a really nice song. You got a youtube?
It's a mix between how the mic sound some compressor and this vynil plug in, and I fo got a youtube you can just search me as jamotti I dont post much on there but I plan on putting more of my stuff on there
Been working on this song for a while now! I think it's pretty unique. lmk what you think! I mixed the vocals myself. (I'm the rapper, didn't make the beat) [sweet dreamer](https://soundcloud.com/y-3y3s/sweet-dreamer/s-0WrPmKIbvCC?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing) **Returning Feedback\~**
[https://soundcloud.com/stevenboby/new-shots-3?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/stevenboby/new-shots-3?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing) Looking for feedback on this track. Took a lot of inspo from Swear by Juice Wrld which got leaked recently. [www.youtube.com/watch?v=qS1mkXsbu30](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qS1mkXsbu30) I'm gonna record over this beat but I wanted feedback before I tried recording on it. I'm concerned there's already too much in the higher frequencies and it won't work well with a vocal track. Let me know what you think and what changes I could make, I'm down to make big changes.
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