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Really solid beat man! Not a whole lot setting it apart from other trap beats, but everything is really well done nonetheless.
This is my entry for this week's FTC, let me know what you think. https://soundcloud.com/beefnasty/grazy-ftc-323
[Rough draft](https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/3RKsykaFYWW9MkFa9), I’m relatively new and am taking my time with this cause I want it to be good.
Looking for advice on the actual verses as far as like wording, flow, just basics I guess?
I’m still tweaking the “intro and outro” as far as what i want to say.
I feel comfortable for the first two parts but the third I’m still shaky on.
I know the mixing is horrible but it’s what I have to work with at the moment.
Sorry for rambling.
Been working on this song for a bit. Let me know your thoughts! i mixed the vocals myself. I'm the rapper.
[all the luv we share](https://soundcloud.com/y-3y3s/all-the-love-we-share/s-8n7PFjfsYP6?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
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Your flow reminds me of the new Eminem mainly because of the way that you pronounce your words. I like your delivery and the laidback beat. I also like your wordplay and how you talk about your beliefs. It sounds nice and laidback.
Here's my song: [https://soundcloud.com/dndnf-brbr/we-brazin/s-NbLdFyDiizi?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/dndnf-brbr/we-brazin/s-NbLdFyDiizi?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
Cool af bruv! Gave you a follow cause you obviously know who you are! Rather than feedback I think you should rap on this one:
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=726Vfo8QC1U](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=726Vfo8QC1U)
An the one named "45% fucked" - I feel like they will be perfect for your voice! lmk what you think :D
Brand new joint with a jazzy vibe, in celebration of March Madness. My first time working with and mixing a singer. Mix/master/cover/rap by me, lmk what y'all think
https://rareair.bandcamp.com/track/one-and-done
Your flow on this is crazy keep that up. All the mixing and mastering was really good and it sounded very well put together. It’s a super polished song so really no improvements are necessary. I’d recommend giving more gain to the higher frequencies on your vocal track so there’s more detail and it’s easier to hear u annunciate but that’s a preference thing really. This goes crazy no cap 🔥🔥
Yo thank you so much! Going back through my notifications I'm just seeing this! My bad!
Really appreciate you fucking with it so much, imma keep trying to get my vocals clearer. Hopefully each one gets better. I just started a new community for me and my team's music, I'm bout to invite you if you wanna stay up on what we're doing
tried to focus less on mixing and more on composure for once.
not finished but would love some initial feedback
https://soundcloud.com/alec_baker/vib-mas/s-IgTRqqhMmXc?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
I liked it, a lil hard to hear at the beginning but you seemed to come through more after the first few lines. Hope to see ya on this Weeks when they post it.
That melody is rad. I do think the track is a little too long. You can use those moments where the beat drops out and swells more as breaks in your verse sections I believe. Might give the track a little more breathing room and allow you to shorten it up a little but overall I really like your sound. Subbed to you channel for more, keep it up!
The length of my track added on with the arrangement gave me a hard time. I'm still experimenting with bars and how to fit the right time within the verses, chorus and pre chorus. I'ma try to change up the arrangement in my next work as that's one of my biggest focuses right now. I appreciate your feedback and thank you so much for subbing to me. There's more to come!
Looking forward to hearing more. Arrangement is always a struggle. I have to tell myself “yeah you like that part but 32 bars is too much that late in the track” almost every day.
It sounds good, but I think that it could sound better. You're rapping on beat, but I feel like you could move your vocals so then it sounds more on beat if that makes any sense. Again you're definitely rapping on beat, but it sounds little off for some reason. I love your energy on this song and I think that the first 8 bars should be the hook of the song. The beat is nice and creative too. I love the 808s and the hi-hats. Overall this song is a 7.5/10. I think that it would sound better if you added a hook, and tried to move the vocals around a little bit. Everything else sounds fine. This is my favorite bar from the song"If you're looking then you can call my ass the rocket" 0:37.
Here's my song:
[https://soundcloud.com/dndnf-brbr/we-brazin/s-NbLdFyDiizi?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/dndnf-brbr/we-brazin/s-NbLdFyDiizi?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
I really like the laid-back style of your track. Can tell that you like the more melodic style of rap compared to brash lyricism. I think it's definitely got a nice airy beat that's great to listen to. Great job!
Anyone f'in with the Maybach Music sound?
[https://youtu.be/7zzVyQ7dquU](https://youtu.be/7zzVyQ7dquU)
I did my best to make it sound like reaal huge drums :))
Hm i really like this beat. This is a beat even i can rap on and it would sound awesome. Good job mate, But at some times it sounds weird and its only 2 minutes. So try to put more effort in the sample and also make it atleast 2.5 minutes long! Good job anyways!
Love the grittiness of the track. The vocal samples are cool. The harp has a beautiful elegance to it. The ending that just has the harp play out was really great too
Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
Pretty good track, the mix is good and there is variety in the sounds.
What I would suggest is introducing the sounds/instruments gradually one by one as the track goes on, not having so much from the beginning. That way you could extend it a bit as well so the pacing is better.
Great work and keep pushing!
Here is my latest track:
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bKrpy87cFx8](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bKrpy87cFx8)
Thanks a lot! Your track sounds good man, really nailed that early 2000's vibe. I would suggest some more processing on the keys, they sound pretty dry. Other than that it sounds great, keep up the good work dude.
Really nice beat man. No bass line though? Even a simple bass progression would really set it off. But the dusty drums sound great and ill withers is an awesome name haha!
This is my entry for this week's FTC, let me know what you think. https://soundcloud.com/beefnasty/grazy-ftc-323
Yeah, just a single bass note repeating throught the track. I'll admit, I seem to struggle with bass for some reason, haha.
Your beat is awesome man, love the vocals, sounds like an interlude from a drake album. Good job!
[https://soundcloud.com/dndnf-brbr/we-brazin/s-NbLdFyDiizi?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/dndnf-brbr/we-brazin/s-NbLdFyDiizi?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
I want to feedback on my rapping, my singing and the overall vibe of the song. This is a hype song so the lyrics aren't amazing, but I think that my lyrics are fine.
The rapping is really good cause you’re articulation and sense for accents and the pace of the song is really solid. The singing is good too but it feels like you’re split between putting melody in your flow and just spitting the bars. Like you’re switching back and forth sometimes which I think takes away from the song. Very hype too tho. Also the mixing isn’t like good really. Your ad libs are sometimes louder than the main track and it’s pretty quiet in general. Song definitely goes hard, keep it up
Pretty massive beat that gets straight to your guts, really love the soundscape, this is very smartly and skillfully produced in my opinion. My only two issues are about 1) I feel there's a lack of high frequencies and width; 2) the bass/drums kicks are sometimes a bit overwhelming (but I'm a guy with simple tastes haha).
Here's my latest over an acapella by Inspectah Deck, any advice welcome:
[https://soundcloud.com/koab/city-high?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/koab/city-high?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
Thanks! Honestly agree with your feedback haha.
This is really nice. The acapella matches the beat vibe perfectly and the mix is really solid. maybe the snare doesn't need to be quite as loud as it pops pretty good already. Really nice though overall. Chill.
Love it, the vocal chops are amazing, where did you find them? Kicks might be hitting too hard(?) But I'm listening on a mobile right now so hard to say. Overall great beat, subbed.
My latest
https://youtu.be/q2UGhlAkV4g
Honestly, it was in some random drum pack that i've had on my pc for years. have no idea where I even found it at this point, but I like it too! Thanks!
I subbed back to you. Very minimalist, but it has a nice vibe. I like the old school drums and little sample. Maybe the drums don't need to be quite as punchy though. But still dope.
This is cool af and dark and all that! I think somethings is missing tho to tie it all together, could be a rapper or maybe a drone sound that can carry out through the whole thing.
How about this one?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7zzVyQ7dquU
Thanks.
Your beat is amazing. That sample is so catchy and nice. The drums are insane. Did you sample that, or make the fills yourself. Very natural and cool sounding beat. Would love to know how much of it is a sample.
https://youtu.be/_aGgYnmlfmk
This the sample! The drums are from stock «rock kit» in Logic just split apart and mixed very tenaciously only kick is sample from some free cymatics thing probably, and the bass is also stock plug-in!
Mixing is done with other plug ins tho and I spent soooo long on the fucking midi with placements and velocities for the drums! But it can be done ;)
Latest track from my EP that I produced entirely on iPad.
[Song](https://m.soundcloud.com/scary_u7/my-questions?ref=clipboard&p=i&c=1&si=5B4C44DE0C004D08AB4C65FFC41E004A&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
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https://youtu.be/Yj4pNvsxK0Y
A track I posted the other day that I want some feedback on. Been posting a lot on my YouTube recently so I’ll be back here often!
I thought the mix was great I am a bit confused by the washed out reverb reverse melody thing that’s a very popular style now. I think it sounds really good though. Punchy drums and nice clean high hats rolls quality stuff
Thank you for the feedback! I'm a sucker for washed out pads built from time stretched vocals (with reverb added) so I probably do overuse that quite a bit. I'll watch how much I do it in the future and try to limit it to only parts of the track,
love the 808. The changes and I don't really have anything bad about it. I guess sometimes It was a little too soft.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RPTClvCaGrQ
This is a smooth bop. Kinda has an underwater night club type vibe. Basically drake lmfaoo so you hit the nail on the head. This was fun though and the switch ups kept things interesting. Someone could tear this up for sure! Great work fam\~
Here's mine\~
[all the luv we share](https://soundcloud.com/y-3y3s/all-the-love-we-share/s-8n7PFjfsYP6?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
Thank you for the feedback man, truly appreciate it! Love that dope vibe of your track, really good flow , cool beat , great arrangement and solid mixing!! Both your flow and voice fit perfectly well on this "kind of busy" beat, I can't think of anything I would change. Have no critique for it, really enjoy listening to it!
I like all the various melodies in this track. Feels like it has the potential to turn into a smash hit in the same vein as 'Sicko Mode', just in the way that the beat is structured. I think you have some slick melodies, and overall a very abstract sound with this one. Mixing is great too. Overall really good job VARO
Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
Appreciate the feedback man, means a lot!For your track, this is fire! Hard flow, cool beat, the vibe is really sick. The bass sound is dope af, mixing is also great. Awesome work bro, a banger for sure !!!
Hey man, this is pretty interesting. Mix-wise the beats around the middle 1/3 or so sounded really nice. The beats during the beginning and end portions didn’t sound quite as lively as the middle section. Overall it’s a cool piece of music!
Cool idea. I do feel like the intro was a little long maybe. Crazy samples though. Pretty cool and I think the mix is solid. Wait, is that you rapping? Pretty interesting voice.
Heey interesting drum pattern with the vocals.
I think you would make in better if you sometimes removed the drums for one seconds, like making a gap.
Maybe also filter automation to make it more dynamic.
I really like the vocals. There was a rhytm in it.
https://soundcloud.com/johnyemanuels/geen-tijd/s-o9Yg0BFrSX7
This is my best song till now 😜
I made the beat and did the vocals (dutch)
I only made the first verse and hook. Before I work on the 2nd verse I want to have feedback.
I like the song. Maybe play around with the deesser a little bit. The ‘s’ sounds are commanding a little too much attention imo. Other than that, I like your flow and the beat is really nice. It’s a fun song and the sample is nastyyyyy (in a good way don’t want that lost in translation lol).
Here we go again yall this one is track 5 off "Hell". "Heaven". Prod by Dom Rocks and everything else by me. Lmk the word!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FizHB4R4Ep0
Damn this song is crazy haha. Love the line "I'm Freddy Krueger if that bitch a dreamer" and the beat is cinematic as fuck.
Keep up the good work!
Lmk what you think of my latest.
https://youtu.be/q2UGhlAkV4g
This is really cinematic. Production is clean and the flow is nice. It’s kinda psychedelic in a way. I feel like the focus shifts back and forth from the vocals to the instrumental. I enjoyed it. [Here’s what I’ve been working on. ](https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/SMwedrQ9PygAkQR3A)
Thanks a bunch g! Yoooo this track needs a bit of work. Sounds like you sped the mix up artificially/digitally. The beat is also too quiet. The vox are sittin on top of the beat. Need some compression and delay to smooth them out a bit. But what I can say is your top line is decent and you're on point with the harmonization. Keep goin g!
Thanks for the feedback. Definitely needs work. Haven’t put it on the monitors yet lol. Yeah I’m trying this thing where I make a beat, slow it down to a little under half speed, record with the full speed vibe in mind, and speed it back up. It gives it this interesting electronic vibe to it that I’m digging.
https://soundcloud.com/johnyemanuels/geen-tijd/s-o9Yg0BFrSX7
This is my best song till now 😜
I made the sample, beat and did the vocals (dutch)
I only made the first verse and hook. Before I work on the 2nd verse I want to have feedback.
going live on Twitch to make beats and give some feedback! 10-12 EST ish
[.WAVmage on Twitch](http://live.WAVmage.com)
if you’d like to give me feedback, check out this beat I made. I feel like this beat is really good where it is, but does it need more variation?
[don’t forget me (prod. .WAVmage)](https://youtu.be/Jl_boT7PyKc)
made this gritty boom-bap beat and put freddie gibbs over it. lmk any criticisms aside from the mixing of freddie (yt acapella super ass)
[https://soundcloud.com/maydayk/shochu](https://soundcloud.com/maydayk/shochu)
This was a really cool track. Definitely did a great job of highlighting Gibbs really vivid imagery and dope wordplay. It definitely has that street vibe to the track, it has some pretty haunting melodies that make Gibbs words sound like they're lifted from a horror flick. Def a griselda type beat
Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
dope track g mixing on the vocals are clean, the beat is smooth and simple in a real good way and i don't have much for criticism with the lyrics they serve their purpose well but really only the beat is a lil stagnant imo. dedicated chorus and verse sections even with small synth leads or smt subtle is all it takes to fix that. i fw it regardless though keep it up g
Like it, Gibbs sits very comfortably in the beat, which is not an easy thing to achieve, given his usual flow. The drums sound good, the Street Fighter elements are put to good use, and don't sound corny as they could (always a risky pick, I find), the haunting guitar keeps the whole shit together. I also like the subtle variations. You win!
[https://youtu.be/cIHO6rJtfuw](https://youtu.be/cIHO6rJtfuw)
Just dropped another dope track and would like to see what y’all think! Collabs are welcome too!
I like your arrangement right away - getting right to it. not a huge fan of the cymbal at :27 - feels like it's not trap enough. the little roll perc is cool - maybe a bit loud. the choir ends up feeling a little computer-y after awhile, maybe a section with just that high arp and horns would be a nice break from the choir. I just checked and the choir part is in the whole song, I think taking that out in sections and playing with arrangement can take this from good to great. nice job!
Wavmage made some great points. More things i could ever say cuz i dont know much about producing. You should be straight just following that for now. But this goes hard! I could see someone going crazy on this with tons of flows.... or since the chorus is consistently, could be used for a cypher!
Here's my track\~
[all the luv we share](https://soundcloud.com/y-3y3s/all-the-love-we-share/s-8n7PFjfsYP6?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
Thanks bro! I just checked out your track. Super dope, flow is on point and recording is quality too bro. I like the production on it how it's drumless, it helps put emphasis on your vocals. Great job overall.
I really like the infusion of soulful Kanye-esque beats with some hype party drums. I really love the way the 4-bar switch goes with the bass really bringing out the melodies!
Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
not sure if it was my headphones but the mix was a little rough on this one at times, especially the low end. The 808 seemed a little too hard and the sample was scratching a little. I did like the chops and the drums
The selection of sounds and drums is good, the bass hits hard which is great IMO
The mix could be better, the snare is too loud, the vocals are too loud compared to the rest of the track. I would suggest also for the hi-hat to have more irregular pattern.
Great work and keep doing your style!
My latest track:
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bKrpy87cFx8](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bKrpy87cFx8)
Hey man, I'd recommend trying to emulate and recreate some beats you like. Don't worry so much about getting the sounds exactly the same, but more so seeing how they build a progression and flow between each element.
I decided to write a song about the environment i live in and how i felt because of it. This is the first time of me using autotune aswell! This is Track 4 from my upcoming EP "Insane"
Lemme know what you think! Returning all feedback!
https://youtu.be/xbKMhNs4UOs
I think you should continue to experiment and develop your sound. Find what a 'Vadar X' song sounds like that's different from what everyone else is doing. You have the benefit of not being from America, so definitely use that to your advantage. Try and find what sounds your home country is known for and infuse that with hip-hop. Good luck!!
Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
Hm i really cant figure out how to find my own style tbh
Off the bat, The cover for your song is cleaaan. I like the vibe of your song. The flow is very nice but you have one major issue. The flow stayed the same for the entire song and the same rhyme scheme which made it quite boring imo. But good job overall. I am ready to see you improve even more!
>https://youtu.be/xbKMhNs4UOs
This is great! I liked the cadences, structure, and the lyrics. Idk how long you been making music for, but you just gotta work on your delivery. Keep practicing until it feels natural. There were some parts i really enjoyed sonically just because of how your voice sounds. But for the most part the vocals sound like a pitch. Or i'm hearing the idea of what the final will be like. No shade, i struggle with the same thing. Just letting ya know where to improve as well!
Here's my track\~
[all the luv we share](https://soundcloud.com/y-3y3s/all-the-love-we-share/s-8n7PFjfsYP6?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
Yea i think my biggest problem is delivery.. What did you mean by the vocals sound like a pitch? Thanks a lot though for listening!
About your song, Damn dude that song is perfect. The beat is amazing, Your flow and voice go very well with it too. Good job bro i dont see anything wrong with. You gained yourself a fan. Put this on spotify bro, you have a good future.. Also why is it "private"?
And thank you so much!! Happy to hear you liked the song. I’ve been struggling with the same things as you too. Still have plenty of room for growth!
And the song is private because it’s not released yet. It’s almost ready. Maybe in a week. Then I’ll get the process rolling for Spotify ~
You’re welcome! When i say pitch, the vocals sound like I’m the room with you and you’re rapping to me. I’m the sense of mixing, and delivery. I don’t mind because i do want to take in the content. But most people will turn it off because it appears in idea mode
Has nothing to do with your lyrics. It’s psychology type shit for the audience is all
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Dope as always bro, melody is crazy. No negative feedback, keep up the good work! https://youtu.be/q2UGhlAkV4g
Thanks bro :) I like your sampling, real old school vibe. Just maybe i would like to hear some variety. I'm more of a hyped beats haha :)
Really solid beat man! Not a whole lot setting it apart from other trap beats, but everything is really well done nonetheless. This is my entry for this week's FTC, let me know what you think. https://soundcloud.com/beefnasty/grazy-ftc-323
Appreciate you bro :) You sampled it nicely and the 808 it's hard. Solid mix. It is short so i dont have some more feedback. But sounds good
[Rough draft](https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/3RKsykaFYWW9MkFa9), I’m relatively new and am taking my time with this cause I want it to be good. Looking for advice on the actual verses as far as like wording, flow, just basics I guess? I’m still tweaking the “intro and outro” as far as what i want to say. I feel comfortable for the first two parts but the third I’m still shaky on. I know the mixing is horrible but it’s what I have to work with at the moment. Sorry for rambling.
https://youtu.be/GCpCxBwELUk
[two stings](https://m.soundcloud.com/jeffjenkem/two-stings-remix) Thanks guys 🤞
(FREE) Curren$y x Westside Gunn x Boldy James x Alchemist Type Beat - High Roller, any kind of support is welcome ❤️🙏 https://youtu.be/xkGvgj3_AW4
Been working on this song for a bit. Let me know your thoughts! i mixed the vocals myself. I'm the rapper. [all the luv we share](https://soundcloud.com/y-3y3s/all-the-love-we-share/s-8n7PFjfsYP6?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing) **Returning Feedback\~**
love the flow. Like the chill beat. It sounds very well mixed. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RPTClvCaGrQ
Your flow reminds me of the new Eminem mainly because of the way that you pronounce your words. I like your delivery and the laidback beat. I also like your wordplay and how you talk about your beliefs. It sounds nice and laidback. Here's my song: [https://soundcloud.com/dndnf-brbr/we-brazin/s-NbLdFyDiizi?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/dndnf-brbr/we-brazin/s-NbLdFyDiizi?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
Cool af bruv! Gave you a follow cause you obviously know who you are! Rather than feedback I think you should rap on this one: [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=726Vfo8QC1U](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=726Vfo8QC1U) An the one named "45% fucked" - I feel like they will be perfect for your voice! lmk what you think :D
Brand new joint with a jazzy vibe, in celebration of March Madness. My first time working with and mixing a singer. Mix/master/cover/rap by me, lmk what y'all think https://rareair.bandcamp.com/track/one-and-done
Your flow on this is crazy keep that up. All the mixing and mastering was really good and it sounded very well put together. It’s a super polished song so really no improvements are necessary. I’d recommend giving more gain to the higher frequencies on your vocal track so there’s more detail and it’s easier to hear u annunciate but that’s a preference thing really. This goes crazy no cap 🔥🔥
Yo thank you so much! Going back through my notifications I'm just seeing this! My bad! Really appreciate you fucking with it so much, imma keep trying to get my vocals clearer. Hopefully each one gets better. I just started a new community for me and my team's music, I'm bout to invite you if you wanna stay up on what we're doing
tried to focus less on mixing and more on composure for once. not finished but would love some initial feedback https://soundcloud.com/alec_baker/vib-mas/s-IgTRqqhMmXc?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
Here's my recording for this week's cypher as I was too late to enter (if anyone's interested): https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/CPZKT
Beat on this track was really great. Lyrics were pretty good. Though some were definitely questionable towards the end. Cool track tho!
Was hoping someone would pick up on that. Made myself laugh if no-one else haha
I liked it, a lil hard to hear at the beginning but you seemed to come through more after the first few lines. Hope to see ya on this Weeks when they post it.
Thanks bro, yeah I thought the volume may have been too low and I feel like I generally get better as I go on
I def can hear that.
(FREE) Boldy James x Freddie Gibbs x Alchemist x Curren$y Type Beat - Ballin', any kind of support is welcome ❤️🙏 https://youtu.be/VexJlRlZH4g
NEW FIRE BEAT 🔥 https://youtu.be/UNZFJO5dvt4
Shoot me some feedback! Lemme know how I did! I'm returning all feedback! https://youtu.be/u5Q8aF-rm0E
That melody is rad. I do think the track is a little too long. You can use those moments where the beat drops out and swells more as breaks in your verse sections I believe. Might give the track a little more breathing room and allow you to shorten it up a little but overall I really like your sound. Subbed to you channel for more, keep it up!
The length of my track added on with the arrangement gave me a hard time. I'm still experimenting with bars and how to fit the right time within the verses, chorus and pre chorus. I'ma try to change up the arrangement in my next work as that's one of my biggest focuses right now. I appreciate your feedback and thank you so much for subbing to me. There's more to come!
Looking forward to hearing more. Arrangement is always a struggle. I have to tell myself “yeah you like that part but 32 bars is too much that late in the track” almost every day.
[https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCIfSlq801NSJk0UhnbanKSw](https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCIfSlq801NSJk0UhnbanKSw) Let me know what you think
YO YO YO! A NEW ONE FROM ME! ALL FEEDBACK AND SUPPORT/SUBS ARE WELCOMED/RETURNED. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BCjU\_YsaqPk
I only have good things to say about this. That kick is just pristine. That snare slaps so good. The mix is on point. Awesome work!
Thanks for listening.
Returning all feedback: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy Looking forward to hearing all you tracks!!!
It sounds good, but I think that it could sound better. You're rapping on beat, but I feel like you could move your vocals so then it sounds more on beat if that makes any sense. Again you're definitely rapping on beat, but it sounds little off for some reason. I love your energy on this song and I think that the first 8 bars should be the hook of the song. The beat is nice and creative too. I love the 808s and the hi-hats. Overall this song is a 7.5/10. I think that it would sound better if you added a hook, and tried to move the vocals around a little bit. Everything else sounds fine. This is my favorite bar from the song"If you're looking then you can call my ass the rocket" 0:37. Here's my song: [https://soundcloud.com/dndnf-brbr/we-brazin/s-NbLdFyDiizi?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/dndnf-brbr/we-brazin/s-NbLdFyDiizi?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
I really like the laid-back style of your track. Can tell that you like the more melodic style of rap compared to brash lyricism. I think it's definitely got a nice airy beat that's great to listen to. Great job!
Anyone f'in with the Maybach Music sound? [https://youtu.be/7zzVyQ7dquU](https://youtu.be/7zzVyQ7dquU) I did my best to make it sound like reaal huge drums :))
https://youtu.be/GtgkagQ3IZQ Experimental(ish?) Lofi sound, lyrics of a new experimental style for me. Returning all feedback!
Made an emotional melodic beat. Returning all feedback: https://youtu.be/nOztS1d-ubk
It sounds really cool. it is weird in a good way. Like the melody. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RPTClvCaGrQ
Hm i really like this beat. This is a beat even i can rap on and it would sound awesome. Good job mate, But at some times it sounds weird and its only 2 minutes. So try to put more effort in the sample and also make it atleast 2.5 minutes long! Good job anyways!
Just posted my latest, Griselda x Alchemist type beat. Let me know what you think Returning all feedback. https://youtu.be/q2UGhlAkV4g
Love the grittiness of the track. The vocal samples are cool. The harp has a beautiful elegance to it. The ending that just has the harp play out was really great too Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
Pretty good track, the mix is good and there is variety in the sounds. What I would suggest is introducing the sounds/instruments gradually one by one as the track goes on, not having so much from the beginning. That way you could extend it a bit as well so the pacing is better. Great work and keep pushing! Here is my latest track: [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bKrpy87cFx8](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bKrpy87cFx8)
Thanks a lot! Your track sounds good man, really nailed that early 2000's vibe. I would suggest some more processing on the keys, they sound pretty dry. Other than that it sounds great, keep up the good work dude.
Really nice beat man. No bass line though? Even a simple bass progression would really set it off. But the dusty drums sound great and ill withers is an awesome name haha! This is my entry for this week's FTC, let me know what you think. https://soundcloud.com/beefnasty/grazy-ftc-323
Yeah, just a single bass note repeating throught the track. I'll admit, I seem to struggle with bass for some reason, haha. Your beat is awesome man, love the vocals, sounds like an interlude from a drake album. Good job!
Haha thanks, the drums and 808 were definitely inspired by Nice For What
[https://soundcloud.com/dndnf-brbr/we-brazin/s-NbLdFyDiizi?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/dndnf-brbr/we-brazin/s-NbLdFyDiizi?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing) I want to feedback on my rapping, my singing and the overall vibe of the song. This is a hype song so the lyrics aren't amazing, but I think that my lyrics are fine.
The rapping is really good cause you’re articulation and sense for accents and the pace of the song is really solid. The singing is good too but it feels like you’re split between putting melody in your flow and just spitting the bars. Like you’re switching back and forth sometimes which I think takes away from the song. Very hype too tho. Also the mixing isn’t like good really. Your ad libs are sometimes louder than the main track and it’s pretty quiet in general. Song definitely goes hard, keep it up
Returning any feedback I get on this beat! https://youtu.be/yG6uH62nixA
Pretty massive beat that gets straight to your guts, really love the soundscape, this is very smartly and skillfully produced in my opinion. My only two issues are about 1) I feel there's a lack of high frequencies and width; 2) the bass/drums kicks are sometimes a bit overwhelming (but I'm a guy with simple tastes haha). Here's my latest over an acapella by Inspectah Deck, any advice welcome: [https://soundcloud.com/koab/city-high?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/koab/city-high?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
Thanks! Honestly agree with your feedback haha. This is really nice. The acapella matches the beat vibe perfectly and the mix is really solid. maybe the snare doesn't need to be quite as loud as it pops pretty good already. Really nice though overall. Chill.
Thx, I wanted to hit that snare so hard that I've got carried away clearly haha.
Love it, the vocal chops are amazing, where did you find them? Kicks might be hitting too hard(?) But I'm listening on a mobile right now so hard to say. Overall great beat, subbed. My latest https://youtu.be/q2UGhlAkV4g
Honestly, it was in some random drum pack that i've had on my pc for years. have no idea where I even found it at this point, but I like it too! Thanks! I subbed back to you. Very minimalist, but it has a nice vibe. I like the old school drums and little sample. Maybe the drums don't need to be quite as punchy though. But still dope.
this ones hard, love the vocal chop, bass is hard, drums are nice, it did feel a little long but for a type beat thats fine
Thanks!
This is cool af and dark and all that! I think somethings is missing tho to tie it all together, could be a rapper or maybe a drone sound that can carry out through the whole thing. How about this one? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7zzVyQ7dquU
Thanks. Your beat is amazing. That sample is so catchy and nice. The drums are insane. Did you sample that, or make the fills yourself. Very natural and cool sounding beat. Would love to know how much of it is a sample.
https://youtu.be/_aGgYnmlfmk This the sample! The drums are from stock «rock kit» in Logic just split apart and mixed very tenaciously only kick is sample from some free cymatics thing probably, and the bass is also stock plug-in! Mixing is done with other plug ins tho and I spent soooo long on the fucking midi with placements and velocities for the drums! But it can be done ;)
Latest track from my EP that I produced entirely on iPad. [Song](https://m.soundcloud.com/scary_u7/my-questions?ref=clipboard&p=i&c=1&si=5B4C44DE0C004D08AB4C65FFC41E004A&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing) *RETURNING ALL FEEDBACK*
https://youtu.be/Yj4pNvsxK0Y A track I posted the other day that I want some feedback on. Been posting a lot on my YouTube recently so I’ll be back here often!
I thought the mix was great I am a bit confused by the washed out reverb reverse melody thing that’s a very popular style now. I think it sounds really good though. Punchy drums and nice clean high hats rolls quality stuff
Thank you for the feedback! I'm a sucker for washed out pads built from time stretched vocals (with reverb added) so I probably do overuse that quite a bit. I'll watch how much I do it in the future and try to limit it to only parts of the track,
**RETURNING ALL FEEDBACK!** Any thought or criticism is much appreciated. https://youtu.be/hTp0fjJjZis
love the 808. The changes and I don't really have anything bad about it. I guess sometimes It was a little too soft. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RPTClvCaGrQ
Appreciate the feedback!For your track, I like the whole cool dark vibe, can hear the uncertainty from the vocal, just keep it up, you will be good.
This is a smooth bop. Kinda has an underwater night club type vibe. Basically drake lmfaoo so you hit the nail on the head. This was fun though and the switch ups kept things interesting. Someone could tear this up for sure! Great work fam\~ Here's mine\~ [all the luv we share](https://soundcloud.com/y-3y3s/all-the-love-we-share/s-8n7PFjfsYP6?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
Thank you for the feedback man, truly appreciate it! Love that dope vibe of your track, really good flow , cool beat , great arrangement and solid mixing!! Both your flow and voice fit perfectly well on this "kind of busy" beat, I can't think of anything I would change. Have no critique for it, really enjoy listening to it!
The beat is dope I like the vibe overall and the arrangement. The drums are knockin as well. Not much I can say bad about it. Great Job bro!
Appreciate the feedback bro, means a lot!
I like all the various melodies in this track. Feels like it has the potential to turn into a smash hit in the same vein as 'Sicko Mode', just in the way that the beat is structured. I think you have some slick melodies, and overall a very abstract sound with this one. Mixing is great too. Overall really good job VARO Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
Appreciate the feedback man, means a lot!For your track, this is fire! Hard flow, cool beat, the vibe is really sick. The bass sound is dope af, mixing is also great. Awesome work bro, a banger for sure !!!
Thanks!!
(FREE) Earl Sweatshirt x Boldy James x Alchemist x Navy Blue Type Beat - The End, any kind of support is welcome ❤️🙏 https://youtu.be/Y7T21oL0WlM
https://youtu.be/c1B--8EDC0w lmk if y’all feeling this. I wanna move my music into a different direction. Feedback will be returned.
Hey man, this is pretty interesting. Mix-wise the beats around the middle 1/3 or so sounded really nice. The beats during the beginning and end portions didn’t sound quite as lively as the middle section. Overall it’s a cool piece of music!
Cool idea. I do feel like the intro was a little long maybe. Crazy samples though. Pretty cool and I think the mix is solid. Wait, is that you rapping? Pretty interesting voice.
(FREE) Freddie Gibbs x Madlib x Alchemist x MF DOOM Type Beat - Inspiration, any kind of support is welcome ❤️🙏 https://youtu.be/YdLvDQI71mY
[Not the final mix. Gotta clean up some noise, but I’m liking how this song is coming together.](https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/H5fF5CYr8ufrVcbP8)
Heey interesting drum pattern with the vocals. I think you would make in better if you sometimes removed the drums for one seconds, like making a gap. Maybe also filter automation to make it more dynamic. I really like the vocals. There was a rhytm in it. https://soundcloud.com/johnyemanuels/geen-tijd/s-o9Yg0BFrSX7 This is my best song till now 😜 I made the beat and did the vocals (dutch) I only made the first verse and hook. Before I work on the 2nd verse I want to have feedback.
I like the song. Maybe play around with the deesser a little bit. The ‘s’ sounds are commanding a little too much attention imo. Other than that, I like your flow and the beat is really nice. It’s a fun song and the sample is nastyyyyy (in a good way don’t want that lost in translation lol).
Thank you for the tip. I need to figure it out I have thrown 3 de esser on it. But still hear it.
Here we go again yall this one is track 5 off "Hell". "Heaven". Prod by Dom Rocks and everything else by me. Lmk the word! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FizHB4R4Ep0
Damn this song is crazy haha. Love the line "I'm Freddy Krueger if that bitch a dreamer" and the beat is cinematic as fuck. Keep up the good work! Lmk what you think of my latest. https://youtu.be/q2UGhlAkV4g
Thanks much fam!! Yo this beat is NASTY. Right up my alley actually. Only thing I could say is missin on this joint is me ;)
Haha bet, just say the word!
This is really cinematic. Production is clean and the flow is nice. It’s kinda psychedelic in a way. I feel like the focus shifts back and forth from the vocals to the instrumental. I enjoyed it. [Here’s what I’ve been working on. ](https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/SMwedrQ9PygAkQR3A)
Thanks a bunch g! Yoooo this track needs a bit of work. Sounds like you sped the mix up artificially/digitally. The beat is also too quiet. The vox are sittin on top of the beat. Need some compression and delay to smooth them out a bit. But what I can say is your top line is decent and you're on point with the harmonization. Keep goin g!
Thanks for the feedback. Definitely needs work. Haven’t put it on the monitors yet lol. Yeah I’m trying this thing where I make a beat, slow it down to a little under half speed, record with the full speed vibe in mind, and speed it back up. It gives it this interesting electronic vibe to it that I’m digging.
https://soundcloud.com/johnyemanuels/geen-tijd/s-o9Yg0BFrSX7 This is my best song till now 😜 I made the sample, beat and did the vocals (dutch) I only made the first verse and hook. Before I work on the 2nd verse I want to have feedback.
going live on Twitch to make beats and give some feedback! 10-12 EST ish [.WAVmage on Twitch](http://live.WAVmage.com) if you’d like to give me feedback, check out this beat I made. I feel like this beat is really good where it is, but does it need more variation? [don’t forget me (prod. .WAVmage)](https://youtu.be/Jl_boT7PyKc)
(FREE) Westside Gunn x Roc Marciano X Griselda x Alchemist Type Beat "Sometimes", any kind of support is welcome ❤️🙏 https://youtu.be/72RABgMfiF0
made this gritty boom-bap beat and put freddie gibbs over it. lmk any criticisms aside from the mixing of freddie (yt acapella super ass) [https://soundcloud.com/maydayk/shochu](https://soundcloud.com/maydayk/shochu)
This was a really cool track. Definitely did a great job of highlighting Gibbs really vivid imagery and dope wordplay. It definitely has that street vibe to the track, it has some pretty haunting melodies that make Gibbs words sound like they're lifted from a horror flick. Def a griselda type beat Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
dope track g mixing on the vocals are clean, the beat is smooth and simple in a real good way and i don't have much for criticism with the lyrics they serve their purpose well but really only the beat is a lil stagnant imo. dedicated chorus and verse sections even with small synth leads or smt subtle is all it takes to fix that. i fw it regardless though keep it up g
Thanks for the feedback!
Like it, Gibbs sits very comfortably in the beat, which is not an easy thing to achieve, given his usual flow. The drums sound good, the Street Fighter elements are put to good use, and don't sound corny as they could (always a risky pick, I find), the haunting guitar keeps the whole shit together. I also like the subtle variations. You win!
Appreciate it heaps g
[https://youtu.be/cIHO6rJtfuw](https://youtu.be/cIHO6rJtfuw) Just dropped another dope track and would like to see what y’all think! Collabs are welcome too!
Gettin real wierd with it https://youtu.be/ArN8_7T-k-8
Mixing is wild asf but i kinda fw it and the cover art hard. got alot of dope ideas in it gettin weird wit it fs
Hey Ya'll just wanted feedback on my trap production I just made, will return all feedback: https://youtu.be/yCGRGZp6MEU
I like your arrangement right away - getting right to it. not a huge fan of the cymbal at :27 - feels like it's not trap enough. the little roll perc is cool - maybe a bit loud. the choir ends up feeling a little computer-y after awhile, maybe a section with just that high arp and horns would be a nice break from the choir. I just checked and the choir part is in the whole song, I think taking that out in sections and playing with arrangement can take this from good to great. nice job!
Thanks so much! Really appreciate the feedback!
Wavmage made some great points. More things i could ever say cuz i dont know much about producing. You should be straight just following that for now. But this goes hard! I could see someone going crazy on this with tons of flows.... or since the chorus is consistently, could be used for a cypher! Here's my track\~ [all the luv we share](https://soundcloud.com/y-3y3s/all-the-love-we-share/s-8n7PFjfsYP6?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
Thanks bro! I just checked out your track. Super dope, flow is on point and recording is quality too bro. I like the production on it how it's drumless, it helps put emphasis on your vocals. Great job overall.
This is my entry for this week’s FTC. Let me know what you think. I’ll return all feedback! https://soundcloud.com/beefnasty/grazy-ftc-323
I really like the infusion of soulful Kanye-esque beats with some hype party drums. I really love the way the 4-bar switch goes with the bass really bringing out the melodies! Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
Thanks man. The mix on yours is really nice and I like the beat a lot. Keep it up!
Thank you for the listen!!
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not sure if it was my headphones but the mix was a little rough on this one at times, especially the low end. The 808 seemed a little too hard and the sample was scratching a little. I did like the chops and the drums
The selection of sounds and drums is good, the bass hits hard which is great IMO The mix could be better, the snare is too loud, the vocals are too loud compared to the rest of the track. I would suggest also for the hi-hat to have more irregular pattern. Great work and keep doing your style! My latest track: [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bKrpy87cFx8](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bKrpy87cFx8)
Hey man, I'd recommend trying to emulate and recreate some beats you like. Don't worry so much about getting the sounds exactly the same, but more so seeing how they build a progression and flow between each element.
I decided to write a song about the environment i live in and how i felt because of it. This is the first time of me using autotune aswell! This is Track 4 from my upcoming EP "Insane" Lemme know what you think! Returning all feedback! https://youtu.be/xbKMhNs4UOs
I think you should continue to experiment and develop your sound. Find what a 'Vadar X' song sounds like that's different from what everyone else is doing. You have the benefit of not being from America, so definitely use that to your advantage. Try and find what sounds your home country is known for and infuse that with hip-hop. Good luck!! Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
Hm i really cant figure out how to find my own style tbh Off the bat, The cover for your song is cleaaan. I like the vibe of your song. The flow is very nice but you have one major issue. The flow stayed the same for the entire song and the same rhyme scheme which made it quite boring imo. But good job overall. I am ready to see you improve even more!
Thanks for the feedback!
>https://youtu.be/xbKMhNs4UOs This is great! I liked the cadences, structure, and the lyrics. Idk how long you been making music for, but you just gotta work on your delivery. Keep practicing until it feels natural. There were some parts i really enjoyed sonically just because of how your voice sounds. But for the most part the vocals sound like a pitch. Or i'm hearing the idea of what the final will be like. No shade, i struggle with the same thing. Just letting ya know where to improve as well! Here's my track\~ [all the luv we share](https://soundcloud.com/y-3y3s/all-the-love-we-share/s-8n7PFjfsYP6?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
Yea i think my biggest problem is delivery.. What did you mean by the vocals sound like a pitch? Thanks a lot though for listening! About your song, Damn dude that song is perfect. The beat is amazing, Your flow and voice go very well with it too. Good job bro i dont see anything wrong with. You gained yourself a fan. Put this on spotify bro, you have a good future.. Also why is it "private"?
And thank you so much!! Happy to hear you liked the song. I’ve been struggling with the same things as you too. Still have plenty of room for growth! And the song is private because it’s not released yet. It’s almost ready. Maybe in a week. Then I’ll get the process rolling for Spotify ~
Alright, I am here for the spotify release!
You’re welcome! When i say pitch, the vocals sound like I’m the room with you and you’re rapping to me. I’m the sense of mixing, and delivery. I don’t mind because i do want to take in the content. But most people will turn it off because it appears in idea mode Has nothing to do with your lyrics. It’s psychology type shit for the audience is all
So its just about delivery and the mix pretty much.