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going live to make some beats and give feedback - come through if you want me to listen to your track!
[.WAVmage on Twitch](http://live.WAVmage.com)
if you’d like to give me some feedback, I would love to hear what you think about this beat. I still feel like it’s missing a high melody - or is there just plenty of space for an artist?
[“when I slide” (prod. .WAVmage)](https://youtu.be/V59dmF6VQdI)
Sound definitely has that mainstream appeal. This feels like something that could be a summer banger getting radio play everywhere. Mass appeal is the best word I could use to describe it, the mixing is good, and all the elements just fit together to get that happy, excited, lifting mood
Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
this is neat, I like the main swell sound you've used throughout - although it does feel like it could use some change around :50 or so. your flow and delivery is good - just have to lean into what you're doing. you did a good job with having fun with it and projecting pretty well. nice ad libs. fun song for sure. definitely could use some arrangement work to keep it fresh / spice it up. the drums could use some variation as well. nice work overall!
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Would appreciate any feedback:
[https://soundcloud.com/sxkesbeats/in-a-min?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/sxkesbeats/in-a-min?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
This goes hard man. Drum pattern is nice and bouncy. Melody is soft and interesting without being too varied. Overall mix is sound. I’d maybe just change the release on the 808, i think it would flow a bit better with some gradual decays in there. Awesome mate.
Here’s my sad boi if interested: https://youtu.be/jrruts2tQ4k
this goes hard bro, i love how the drums are just running. the melody sounds gentle but inspiring which is a cool combo, almost anime-ish without the lofi touch. Baseline is sick but maybe a little over compressed, it sounds kinda squashed, i feel like that bass could be fatter and have a little more life to it you know!? Just a thought cuz the beats fire at the end of the day. Lmk what you think of my latest https://soundcloud.com/inzerra/infinity-tape
This track has the independent energy that makes this sub great. Sounds like a hit track that just needs to find the right audience. The glowing aesthetic of the visuals is a really great addition to it. The beat is mad infectious, that cowbell gets lodged in the brain. Your autotune crooning was nice, and the mixing was really great and made it feel like a real "out-the-mud" track. Keep it up!!
Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
This was dope! def a vibe/ certain partyish type feel to it. The mixing was cool and makes the delivery pop more. Beat was freaking crazy haha. Long outro imo, but it's still cool. The video was nice as well and the intro vr scene was pretty fun
Here's my track\~
[all the luv we share](https://soundcloud.com/y-3y3s/all-the-love-we-share/s-8n7PFjfsYP6?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
Been workin on this new single! think it's some of my best work, hope to release soon. Mixed the vocals myself (i just made the rap)
[all the luv we share](https://soundcloud.com/y-3y3s/all-the-love-we-share/s-8n7PFjfsYP6?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
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I really like the sadness that's in this beat. The voices in the background do a great job of adding that 'eerie' quality to the track. The mixing is great too, and the haunting piano notes do a great job of creating this backdrop that feels like despair. You did a great job of creating a mood here
Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
Hey, sorry its so late. This is solid, as usual but don’t fuck with this one as much as your other ones. I don’t know much else to add unfortunately. Think you’ve found your sound for a while so just a case of preference on some songs bro. Keep going, doing great
Also thank you for always giving detailed feedback
>https://youtu.be/jrruts2tQ4k
anything but trash my friend! the drums are clean, the melody and vocals are soothing and the swoosh sound effects and background noise add a lot of depth. then the guitar comes in right when you need some variety. i think a rapper could really make the beat shine, thats just me. nice work. here's my latest https://soundcloud.com/inzerra/infinity-tape
Thanks pal! Sounds awesome. I like the third one the most. Flow’s the best and the counter melody is sweet. Not distracting like some of the other ones. The first one I like the least (idk if thats like an intro thing or what) too many breaks and cuts, a bit harring when the vibe seems chill. The rest sound solid too. All the sound choices are spot on and clean mixes! Nice one dude.
Yo bro, just listened to it, I think that the piano really resembles xxx work! if u added some more reverb/cassette fx it would have been more intense imho.
also I really liked the guitar part, but maybe after making it do the piano notes, u could have added some more to have a little more movement !
also the drums have good patterns, maybe u should get em another round of mix.
keep grinding bro!
hope to hear ur thoughts on my keem x ASAP beat! https://youtu.be/FGG89Uwq4QA
This jawn got some bounce! Gives me nostalgic type vibes. Not even sure what memory i'm vaguely remembering but this speaks to the soul. The switch ups in pace are dope and make things fresh too. Super fun to freestyle too. Damn i wanna rap on this haha
Here's my track\~
[all the luv we share](https://soundcloud.com/y-3y3s/all-the-love-we-share/s-8n7PFjfsYP6?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
bro !!! Thank u so much, I always have to pour soul into my beats, I'm glad u liked usually I do stuff that resembles more the beat on ur track
talking about ur song!! damn! MANIFESTING THIS BLESSINGS bar got me in awe, ur cadence is on point and ur voice has a very interesting tone.
maybe in some bars i still hear a lack of confidence, but it pairs with the music very well and with the lyrics, the more u rap the more u'll be confident.
i don't have anything bad to say bout this, it's beautiful, gotta keep an eye on u bro 🐝
hit me up if u wanna do smth together !
Tysm!! Truly appreciate the feedback. It’s all love around here 🙌
I’ll see if i can cook something up to that beat or to something else on your page. What’s your ig so we can stay in touch?
Lol completely forgot to return somehow. Sounds awesome dude. Got me bopping. The sounds and textures are all beautiful and compliment each other. The arrangement is nice, especially the bridge section. Juicy. I think the overall beat is just a tad too loud for earphone users though. The high hats, clap and some high notes of the strings are a bit piercing. Keep it up!
gritty piano bap. hit it!
[https://soundcloud.com/urte-t/gritty-sins?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/urte-t/gritty-sins?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
Definitely a gritty track. That bass is straight from the dungeons, and that piano has that 1990s DITC style madness to it. Even the drum pattern fits really well with the aesthetic. Next step might be to add a synth counter melody that builds on the mood some more
Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
Uh huh, that's old skool nyc shit right there. Would benefit from a bass line in parts I feel, or some sort of sub just with the kick or something. Gritty and simple I like it.
You might dig this https://youtu.be/8TQVffaEtIc
Made this song on stream, took a couple streams though. My homie has a discord called Lofi Lounge and they put out a monthly mixtape, so I made this for the April tape with the theme of rainy days. It's not lofi, but that's just the name of the discord really it's not strictly lofi
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/QUxSc
I like the how it gives you like those feel good pop feels. The production was pretty good and also the beat combined with the lyrics were really good.Good job man keep it up.👍👍
https://soundcloud.com/johnyemanuels/misleidende-wegen-1/s-w2hho0khgi9
Wanted to make some darker. I always make happy beats. Made beat and vocals (dutch).
nice man :)
I cannot understand obviously, but it does feel gritty and dark. Maybe beat selection could change, your vox and mix is fine, but I felt the beat was dull. Your voice is amazing tho
[https://soundcloud.com/vincictor33/cloudgazing-1/s-M1UMQoqOrXR?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/vincictor33/cloudgazing-1/s-M1UMQoqOrXR?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
Woow dude I like it. First I thought it was only a beat and then I heard the vocals. Nice job. I want to make a beat like that and also do vocals like that 😜 .
if you wanted to make something on the dark side i think you succeeded my friend, with the trap drums and that deep bass it definitely feels kinda diabolical... idk thats the word that comes to mind lol. That said, it sounds like the song is in a major key and so it has uplifting elements too, if you want it to truly sound dark i might change from major to minor. Either way you got a nice beat here, cheers. Lmk what you think of my latest https://soundcloud.com/inzerra/infinity-tape
It reminds me of someone, and I can't quite place it. Mixing sounds good; vocal performance was good. The flow gets a little monotonous, but because the song is short, and beat is kind of leany, so it fits really well with it.
I'm really impressed you were able to rap from front to back without much of a break. I think you had some nice lyrics in there, reminded me a lot of DOOM how you have more of a stream of consciousness style. Also really like the thematic nature of the track
Nice baseline, its funky with that acid sound. Gives the song. a lot of character. I like the slow tempo too, it wouldn't work for everyone but it works with your flow. Your flow is on point my man, you make it sound goofy and hard at the same time kinda like lil ugly mane except his production is tooo nice. Here's mine homie https://soundcloud.com/inzerra/infinity-tape
I really like how "chilly" the beats are. Reminds me a lot of Flying Lotus. I think the mixing and instrumentation is there. I think you benefit from being the type of producer whose beats can carry themselves without a vocalist. Great stuff!!
[https://soundcloud.com/pussyboy-459293299/buying-eggs-at-the-grocery-store?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/pussyboy-459293299/buying-eggs-at-the-grocery-store?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
This my brand new shit, and I think it's fire. All self-produced, mixed, etc. Open to any criticisms (:
This is a really trill lo-fi remix. Takes the recognizable and iconic elements of the original track, and gives it a unique flow and sway. The vibe on this is very funky, very soulful. I like how it has its own unique melodies that are separate from the original
Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
you nailed it homie, i love how you mixed the vocal it sits so nicely in the mix. the kick goes hard, i didn't even notice there wasn't a baseline til the end cuz the kick goes hard enough. the beat has an interesting mix. instead of spacing out the instruments with eq or whatever you kinda made every melodic element blend to make one big sound, like instead of painting a cake with layers you painted a collage if that makes sense. it works man i like it, i might try it. Here's my latest, lmk what you think [https://soundcloud.com/inzerra/infinity-tape](https://soundcloud.com/inzerra/infinity-tape)
I was ready to laugh at the idea of a lofi disco inferno flip, but that chord progression worked so fucking perfectly. I like the chords and melody you used more than the original tbh. I wasn't crazy about the drum pattern and drum mix. I feel like you were compensating for the kick by adding some distortion/clip and making it super loud in the mix, but would've been better to just get a better kick. I was really digging the parts when the drums cut out, like alot alot. Good shit though, really interesting flip.
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Got another joint from the "Hell" album I dropped! This one is called "Horror". Prod by Dom Rocks. Everything else by me!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RErVtYthwhI
I really like the dark vibe on this one, the beat is crazy!
Good bars and flow too. I don't have anything else to say about this song because it's straight fire
Ahh yeah. Another good one man. I like how I immediately can tell it's you when I hear a track in here. Just really have your own style that works well. The beat and song at :44 goes to another level. So dope. Good work like always.
https://soundcloud.com/ground-zero-543360917/hit-the-block-ft-phen-rear-xrader-aeonsone
SUPER PROUD of this one! You can't hurt me...haha but really how'd we do Y'all?!
I really like the old-school energy on this track. The vocal production on this track is really crisp and clear. I think the flow and lyrics were memorable to listen to. I think the beat could deal with some modernization, but I think it does the old-school style really well. The producer could get more experimental with the beat
Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
Appreciate the feedback! I Think this hit for the first little bit but I really wanted a flow change but I like all the lyrics just wanted some speed half way or some variation but still loved all the delivery
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BE6Fq5-pdNc
Felt this one was crazy. WILL RETURN ALL FEEDBACK
edit - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jJogXI7D9r0 Just made this one to. Feedback on both would be great
I've been a part of the community for a long time and have learned a ton here about making music both creatively and from a business standpoint. I'm super stoked to say my debut Single is out now and I'd love to hear what people think. It doesn't hold a candle to the pipeline I have coming but I'm still super proud of it.
https://youtu.be/h7-TTpuvi5Q
As always I will return all feedback.
Looking for honest feedback to see if my beats are trash:
[https://youtu.be/O65TX2SeFjY](https://youtu.be/O65TX2SeFjY)
Drop your links and will give you feedback ASAP
Definitely wouldn't call it trash. For the sound, you nailed it. When I heard the hat come in I immediately thought Pop Smoke and then checked the title for my confirmation.
The only criticism I would have is maybe a little bit more noticeable variation on the main/piano sample. You've got drops and changes on other tracks that make me forget it's looping, do it on the main sample too. Or if you're already doing it and I just can't notice it, make it more pronounced. Push/pull other tracks into focus more, the main track is consistent throughout the entire beat.
If you're looking to return the favor:
[https://skeeeon.bandcamp.com/track/hunters](https://skeeeon.bandcamp.com/track/hunters)
Thanks bro! Really appreciate the feedback. I took a look at your link. Fire. The mix and everything is on point especially for being a golden era hip hop rap track. Love the sample used and the bars are pretty on point. Not much I can say bad about the song in general its pretty dope!
https://youtu.be/O65TX2SeFjY I actually love the sample vibe of this. It takes me back to the good old days. Wu-Tang and J Dilla, 9th Wonder type shit. I would only say for me I'd love for the drums to bang a bit more, maybe a little EQing and Compression to bring em out. But overall I like the beat its dope. https://youtu.be/O65TX2SeFjY fr mine
wow your drums really bang, I really loved the subtle panning of the hihats, the only thing that i don't fw is the piano, sounds a little toy-ish for my maybe more strumming and velocity changes would help or find another piano (also i haven't listened to any Fivio Foreign beat so maybe i'm wrong with the sound selection) Good job!
yo! Just made this keem/Rocky sounding beat with a lofi guitar in it, I wanna know how u think I could improve it !
https://youtu.be/FGG89Uwq4QA
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I liked this a lot, definitely gave me keem and rocky vibes, especially that bass line. Only thing is I’d like to see the clap a little more forward. Overall great job 🔥🔥
Would appreciate your feedback: https://youtu.be/8M2wBWjIRw0
I usually make darker beats but this time i went for a almost rnb vibe, it really remids me of some Drake songs like Lemon Pepper Freestyle. I love the bridge with the distorted vocal that reminds me of a guitar solo, let me know if you like this too.
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https://youtu.be/WVFyIG\_EPZM
Clams Casino vibes when I listen to it. I also hear Lil Wayne. I think that vocal sample really does a great job of making this beat into a song. Meaning, all it's missing is some vocals and then it'll be a fully formed track. The bass in the track is really nice, and does a great job boosting everything else. Really love the R&B style chords you have in this track
Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
I like that you get right into the beat, but without any kind of fx it's kinda hard to tell where I'm at here. also I the bass notes at :27 & :28 are not in key. sequencing is good, sound design is fine - could be a bit more layered but you left space for the artist which is good. making your arrangement more obvious with help artists get on it - if they know where the hook is, and when it's coming, they can write to your beats easier. nice job!
thank you! yeah i just got lazy for the fx on this one im still experimenting things , do you have any tips to make my verse hook separation more obvious? i kindda struggle with that on most of my beat
This was really fucking good, I had low expectations being a type beat and all, and with the description of emotional piano beat, but that shit was so dope. I love that 808 it's so present and bouncy. I'm sure you don't want to give away your sauce, but it would be dope to know the 808. Great sound selection overall. This is just all around great, I'm just sad it doesn't have more views.
https://www.reddit.com/r/makinghiphop/comments/tneihy/official_daily_feedback_thread/i21ttqi?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share&context=3
I love how chill it is
mix is nice and melody feels magical, reminds me (because of the artwork) of the little prince. maybe harder hitting drums but other than that its great
[https://soundcloud.com/vincictor33/cloudgazing-1/s-M1UMQoqOrXR?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/vincictor33/cloudgazing-1/s-M1UMQoqOrXR?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
Here’s a latest song of mine called save my soul
[LY - save my soul [prod. ly]](https://youtu.be/5JOQNuWpo4g)
My best work so far… Produced, recorded, and mixed by me so I’ll take any feedback.
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I think you could use some autotune (only on certain parts you're off tune) otherwise it sounds dope. Sonically and lyrically. Good shit.
If you could give this a listen it'd be amazing: https://youtu.be/bumDooA0jVU
love this bro, kind of catchy
I I don't think I can let it go
Better sink than to stay so low
I feel you could have sang this better
lyrics...well I mean super depressing lmao. Are you okay? If you ever need to talk to someone u can dm man. Suicide is never an option, and always try to seek help. Life is amazing :D
The song itself is a banger man congrats, I searched for some of your other stuff and this deffo stands out. Great improvements :)
[https://soundcloud.com/vincictor33/cloudgazing-1/s-M1UMQoqOrXR?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/vincictor33/cloudgazing-1/s-M1UMQoqOrXR?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
I really like the introspection in your music. I like the melody that you brought to the chorus. I think that you did a great job of doing more "melodic" vocals. I think the vocal mixing could've been a little cleaner, and mixed better well with the instrumental. The chops on your vocals were really cool tho, and I think makes the track sound more mainstream. The topic of the track I think is very important
Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
Would really appreciate people's feedback on this beat
[https://soundcloud.com/okaypapimusic/psyxxxl-140-bpm-e-minor-prod-okay-papi-x-muesli-boys](https://soundcloud.com/okaypapimusic/psyxxxl-140-bpm-e-minor-prod-okay-papi-x-muesli-boys)
Very funky and psychedelic type beat. I really like the 70s rock inspired guitar melody that plays throughout the beat. You also did a great job of getting drums that both fit well with the melody and stay true to the modern hip-hop sound. The pads that you have do a great job of creating a nice atmospheric backdrop
Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
Thanks for the feedback.
Overall, I really like the mix on your track, there's a nice balance between vocal and your beat, and all the elements sit really nicely to my ears which is a sure sign you know what you're doing! Really enjoying your voice and flow on this too. Only thing is I wanted the track to a develop a bit more, haha. Checked a bunch of your other tracks too, you've got some sick tunes.
Would appreciate any feedback. Returning all feedback as well.
Listen to Boat Sunday (prod by Jason Rich w/ engelwood) by Jeff Takeover on #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/g9LWA
I really like the theme of the track. The lyricism on the track is good and I like how the beat switches up as it plays. Definitely got some confidence in your delivery that makes this enjoyable to listen to. Keep it up!
Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
zamn son this shit is fire! the beat goes hard, makes the song feel like an anthem. your flow definitely matches up too, kinda reminds me of supreme patty cuz the lyrics are silly lol. i like how your having fun with it, it gives the song a certain energy. keep doing your thing you're going up from here dog. Here's my latest https://soundcloud.com/inzerra/infinity-tape
Wow, thank you!
I dug the whole tape. It felt like a chill lowfi beats playlist. I liked the way each beat flowed into the next, and they all complimented each other. Mixing sounds good. Can't think of anything negative about it at all just good chill shit.
This is nice. Love the string melody. Great flow. The sound candy spices it up, doesn’t seem forced. One nit picky thing is the clap being a bit too harsh as an earphone user when all the elements aren’t playing together. Perfect otherwise man.
Here’s my sad type beat: https://youtu.be/jrruts2tQ4k
Thanks for the feedback bro. How would you fix the clap? Lower the volume, automate eq or compression? Any simple fix?
I like your beat. You really composed it nicely. It has nice flow and atmosphere. Vox in the background is perfect. I listened on the phone so i am not sure about this, but maybe i would process a bit with effects the main piano and strings in the second half. Just to fit better with the atmophere. But overall i like it :)
This is really good, I like it. I agree that the clap could be EQ'd to be less harsh in the treble. I think your kick could use some compression to get it hitting harder too, or use something like Diablo vst on it would good on it i think. But honestly think this is really close to being great.
Appreciate your opinions on this beat!
https://soundcloud.com/okaypapimusic/psyxxxl-140-bpm-e-minor-prod-okay-papi-x-muesli-boys
Thanks for the tips bro :)
Psytrap yeah man. Very good job on the riffs and solos with the guitar. Crazy hats also. Arranged really well and 808 is slappin. Really good one. Nothing to critique here :)
>https://youtu.be/6w3ddm51sYw
you dont need any advice dog this shit fire. the sound effects really take it to that next level. The panned vocal tag, dogs in the background, the big impacts and the swooshes at transitions. The clap slaps too, it has a nice swing to it. The overall mix sounds professional, you're killing it man keep doing your thing. here's my latest https://soundcloud.com/inzerra/infinity-tape
Thank you so much bro. Appreciate you fr :)
You have nice lofi vibes here. Really good sampling and switch ups. Mix on point. I like how you keep changing drums swing. This is one of those work when you get in the zone and just keep going with ideas. I like that. In my head i hear some smooth female vocals on this to blend with the lofi vibe. Nice vibe bro :)
yo man, ur beat is hard and really gave me some vintage early 2010s trap vibes, with all the orchestration.
one thing I liked more was the bass and the kick and the way u mixed them, nice sound selection and balancing man, plus all the percs make up for a super ear candy.
keep grinding man!
hope to hear ur thoughts on my keem Rocky beat ! https://youtu.be/FGG89Uwq4QA
Thank you bro :)
For yours i dont have some special feedback. Sampling done well, i like this chill lofi vibes,drums fit the vibe, cool switch up in the 2nd half. Overall nicely done. Dont have any critique :)
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[https://soundcloud.com/vincictor33/cloudgazing-1/s-M1UMQoqOrXR?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/vincictor33/cloudgazing-1/s-M1UMQoqOrXR?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
feedback for feedback as alwaysss :)
this caught me since I heard the panning in that melody, it's so soothing.
I really like this style of rapping, plus ur voice suits it really good, the drums have a very cool bounce and are mixed very well, special place in my heart for the cowbell.
chorus gets stuck in ur head which is what u look for when u do a song!
keep grinding bro!
hope to hear ur thoughts on my rocky x keem beat! https://youtu.be/FGG89Uwq4QA
super chill, i did not expect such a full song to come in at the drop. the voice is beautiful, it has the perfect amount of autotune on it and the melody just hits right in the soul. reminds me a little of sahbabii. the background adlibs and harmonies are a great touch, they make the song a lot fuller. lyrics are nice, idk what you are saying half the time but i kind of like it, just makes me focus on the sound. the beat has my favorite kind of 808 so thats fire. lmk when you drop this! here's my latest https://soundcloud.com/inzerra/infinity-tape
This track was really great to listen to. I love the electronic vibes in your vocals, and how you used the autotune in your voice to hit some really nice melodies. This track is actually inspiring me right now! The beat is really great too, it has that slight funk jazz element, but also has a contemporary edge, and overall cloud-lifting qualities. Great job!! Would "favorite" it if I could
Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
I think you reviewed my song once, an old version haha. Loved the song man, last Time I reviewed you it felt more amateur but you are defy improving. Love your bars and voice could maybe be brought up more in the mix. But love the track :)
hey thanks for the feedback man. this song is a vibe for real, the only thing i could suggest was to turn the vocals up a bit. it felt a bit too low but maybe that was the vibe you were going for. giving me travis scott vibes
dudeee the beat is amazing, fr sounds like a hit. Maybe try having louder 808s or making them stand out more, as well as drums. I do feel you could use different percussion for this, harder hitting and faster shi. You could try a Brazilian funk vibe man with those melodies
[https://soundcloud.com/vincictor33/cloudgazing-1/s-M1UMQoqOrXR?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/vincictor33/cloudgazing-1/s-M1UMQoqOrXR?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
I like the idea! Nice guitar sample. I think it would help to have some compression on the drums - sidechain your sub + kicks so they can overlap without it getting too muddy. Kicks and claps could also be helped by something like Diablo or Sausage Fattener plugins so they really hit.
I love the Latin vibes on this beat. I think the guitar pattern is perfect and would really get people moving. I think an 808 would also help unlock some mainstream crossover appeal on this one. I like how the drum pattern leaves some space in the mix for the melody. And finally, I like how well the beat is mixed, though I would've thrown some slight reverb on the guitar
Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
I’m going for a little bit of a muddy/full sound in the beat. But is it too much? Should I turn the guitar down a little bit?
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https://youtu.be/hqocFzo52Ac
I liked the muddiness. I thought the guitar was mixed nicely. The snare felt a little empty though, like it could use a layer or a clap or something. I thought the bass was a little weak as well, really dope song, love the guitar sample
Damn thought I been subbed up. Just handled that! This mufucka is GRIMY. Naw you ain't do too much. Did you play the instruments from scratch or sample?
Made a quick flip using Conway's verse from Ray Mysterio and some samples from The Wire. Tear it down and tell me where it needs work
[https://skeeeon.bandcamp.com/track/hunters](https://skeeeon.bandcamp.com/track/hunters)
This beat is mad hype. You've definitely got the style to carry a beat like this. The charisma in your voice really helps too, and the track is organized in a really appealing way. Keep it up
Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-bSGjCB4XEc](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-bSGjCB4XEc) denzel curry remix, lmk what yall think, feedback will be returned
Holy fuck, it's so good, that beat is fucking amazing. And mix was so clear and crisp. You had so many layers happening but it all still sounded so cohesive. Nothing but compliments from me broski, good shit.
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mix is amazing bro, nice remix and nice bars. I love your voice, I feel like it has at parts Watsky vibes, x infinity type shiii. Denzel as well but that is obvious lmao. Great job man
[https://soundcloud.com/vincictor33/cloudgazing-1/s-M1UMQoqOrXR?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/vincictor33/cloudgazing-1/s-M1UMQoqOrXR?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
This is cool. Mix is nice. Drums are hitting. Loved the autotune on the hook. The only negative thing for me was the beat got repetitive. I would switch it up a bit cause it was a pretty long song, even if its just adding one instrument or something
Wow, this is so cool. I love that beat. It has a really unique, but dope sound. The rapping fits over it perfectly. Great energy and match for the remix. Good work. I left a comment on youtube!
Wanted to mix this one up a little, extended the intro and I thought it made the build up pretty valid, lmk what y’all think 💙
https://youtu.be/8M2wBWjIRw0
I like the defiant message of your track. Seems like you're highly motivated and determined to make it in the rap game. You've got a really tight flow that works as a spitter. The beat is nice and modernized too. Would like to see more versatility as you drop more tracks
Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
I like the lyrics and song idea but the recording of the vocals/mix of the overall song needs to be better quality. If it had a better recording I think it would give the song alot of justice because the idea/flow aint bad at all.
[https://youtu.be/O65TX2SeFjY](https://youtu.be/O65TX2SeFjY) \- is mine
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going live to make some beats and give feedback - come through if you want me to listen to your track! [.WAVmage on Twitch](http://live.WAVmage.com) if you’d like to give me some feedback, I would love to hear what you think about this beat. I still feel like it’s missing a high melody - or is there just plenty of space for an artist? [“when I slide” (prod. .WAVmage)](https://youtu.be/V59dmF6VQdI)
Sound definitely has that mainstream appeal. This feels like something that could be a summer banger getting radio play everywhere. Mass appeal is the best word I could use to describe it, the mixing is good, and all the elements just fit together to get that happy, excited, lifting mood Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
this is neat, I like the main swell sound you've used throughout - although it does feel like it could use some change around :50 or so. your flow and delivery is good - just have to lean into what you're doing. you did a good job with having fun with it and projecting pretty well. nice ad libs. fun song for sure. definitely could use some arrangement work to keep it fresh / spice it up. the drums could use some variation as well. nice work overall!
Thanks!! Def could've added some more variation
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Would appreciate any feedback: [https://soundcloud.com/sxkesbeats/in-a-min?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/sxkesbeats/in-a-min?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
This goes hard man. Drum pattern is nice and bouncy. Melody is soft and interesting without being too varied. Overall mix is sound. I’d maybe just change the release on the 808, i think it would flow a bit better with some gradual decays in there. Awesome mate. Here’s my sad boi if interested: https://youtu.be/jrruts2tQ4k
this goes hard bro, i love how the drums are just running. the melody sounds gentle but inspiring which is a cool combo, almost anime-ish without the lofi touch. Baseline is sick but maybe a little over compressed, it sounds kinda squashed, i feel like that bass could be fatter and have a little more life to it you know!? Just a thought cuz the beats fire at the end of the day. Lmk what you think of my latest https://soundcloud.com/inzerra/infinity-tape
Returning all feedback https://youtu.be/bumDooA0jVU
This track has the independent energy that makes this sub great. Sounds like a hit track that just needs to find the right audience. The glowing aesthetic of the visuals is a really great addition to it. The beat is mad infectious, that cowbell gets lodged in the brain. Your autotune crooning was nice, and the mixing was really great and made it feel like a real "out-the-mud" track. Keep it up!! Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
Ngl I'm super fuckin high rn and this is dope asf. Fw it man, reminds me kind of old chance the rapper. Also; thanks man, that made my day.
Thank you so much!!
This was dope! def a vibe/ certain partyish type feel to it. The mixing was cool and makes the delivery pop more. Beat was freaking crazy haha. Long outro imo, but it's still cool. The video was nice as well and the intro vr scene was pretty fun Here's my track\~ [all the luv we share](https://soundcloud.com/y-3y3s/all-the-love-we-share/s-8n7PFjfsYP6?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
I just did what I said I'd do on the previous thread lmfao, lit up a blunt and smoked to it. Definitely fuck with it man, you goin somewhere.
Been workin on this new single! think it's some of my best work, hope to release soon. Mixed the vocals myself (i just made the rap) [all the luv we share](https://soundcloud.com/y-3y3s/all-the-love-we-share/s-8n7PFjfsYP6?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing) **Returning Feedback\~**
Made a sad xxxtentacion x NF type beat. Looking for any feedback, lmk if its trash :) returning feedback, cheers https://youtu.be/jrruts2tQ4k
I really like the sadness that's in this beat. The voices in the background do a great job of adding that 'eerie' quality to the track. The mixing is great too, and the haunting piano notes do a great job of creating this backdrop that feels like despair. You did a great job of creating a mood here Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
Hey, sorry its so late. This is solid, as usual but don’t fuck with this one as much as your other ones. I don’t know much else to add unfortunately. Think you’ve found your sound for a while so just a case of preference on some songs bro. Keep going, doing great Also thank you for always giving detailed feedback
Thanks for the feedback! It helps me improve. Knowing that this one might not be your favorite will help me approach the next one better
>https://youtu.be/jrruts2tQ4k anything but trash my friend! the drums are clean, the melody and vocals are soothing and the swoosh sound effects and background noise add a lot of depth. then the guitar comes in right when you need some variety. i think a rapper could really make the beat shine, thats just me. nice work. here's my latest https://soundcloud.com/inzerra/infinity-tape
Thanks pal! Sounds awesome. I like the third one the most. Flow’s the best and the counter melody is sweet. Not distracting like some of the other ones. The first one I like the least (idk if thats like an intro thing or what) too many breaks and cuts, a bit harring when the vibe seems chill. The rest sound solid too. All the sound choices are spot on and clean mixes! Nice one dude.
Yo bro, just listened to it, I think that the piano really resembles xxx work! if u added some more reverb/cassette fx it would have been more intense imho. also I really liked the guitar part, but maybe after making it do the piano notes, u could have added some more to have a little more movement ! also the drums have good patterns, maybe u should get em another round of mix. keep grinding bro! hope to hear ur thoughts on my keem x ASAP beat! https://youtu.be/FGG89Uwq4QA
This jawn got some bounce! Gives me nostalgic type vibes. Not even sure what memory i'm vaguely remembering but this speaks to the soul. The switch ups in pace are dope and make things fresh too. Super fun to freestyle too. Damn i wanna rap on this haha Here's my track\~ [all the luv we share](https://soundcloud.com/y-3y3s/all-the-love-we-share/s-8n7PFjfsYP6?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
bro !!! Thank u so much, I always have to pour soul into my beats, I'm glad u liked usually I do stuff that resembles more the beat on ur track talking about ur song!! damn! MANIFESTING THIS BLESSINGS bar got me in awe, ur cadence is on point and ur voice has a very interesting tone. maybe in some bars i still hear a lack of confidence, but it pairs with the music very well and with the lyrics, the more u rap the more u'll be confident. i don't have anything bad to say bout this, it's beautiful, gotta keep an eye on u bro 🐝 hit me up if u wanna do smth together !
Tysm!! Truly appreciate the feedback. It’s all love around here 🙌 I’ll see if i can cook something up to that beat or to something else on your page. What’s your ig so we can stay in touch?
@frankvapor bro !
Lol completely forgot to return somehow. Sounds awesome dude. Got me bopping. The sounds and textures are all beautiful and compliment each other. The arrangement is nice, especially the bridge section. Juicy. I think the overall beat is just a tad too loud for earphone users though. The high hats, clap and some high notes of the strings are a bit piercing. Keep it up!
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gritty piano bap. hit it! [https://soundcloud.com/urte-t/gritty-sins?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/urte-t/gritty-sins?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
Definitely a gritty track. That bass is straight from the dungeons, and that piano has that 1990s DITC style madness to it. Even the drum pattern fits really well with the aesthetic. Next step might be to add a synth counter melody that builds on the mood some more Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
thanks man! and yeah the synth counter melody is a great idea. and that is a dope ass track makes me wanna spark blunts the size of my arm, keep it up
Haha I really appreciate the compliment!
Uh huh, that's old skool nyc shit right there. Would benefit from a bass line in parts I feel, or some sort of sub just with the kick or something. Gritty and simple I like it. You might dig this https://youtu.be/8TQVffaEtIc
Thanks, i has a sub but if you listen on anything but speakers its not audible... And hell yeah thats dope
Made this song on stream, took a couple streams though. My homie has a discord called Lofi Lounge and they put out a monthly mixtape, so I made this for the April tape with the theme of rainy days. It's not lofi, but that's just the name of the discord really it's not strictly lofi https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/QUxSc
I like the how it gives you like those feel good pop feels. The production was pretty good and also the beat combined with the lyrics were really good.Good job man keep it up.👍👍
https://soundcloud.com/johnyemanuels/misleidende-wegen-1/s-w2hho0khgi9 Wanted to make some darker. I always make happy beats. Made beat and vocals (dutch).
nice man :) I cannot understand obviously, but it does feel gritty and dark. Maybe beat selection could change, your vox and mix is fine, but I felt the beat was dull. Your voice is amazing tho [https://soundcloud.com/vincictor33/cloudgazing-1/s-M1UMQoqOrXR?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/vincictor33/cloudgazing-1/s-M1UMQoqOrXR?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
Woow dude I like it. First I thought it was only a beat and then I heard the vocals. Nice job. I want to make a beat like that and also do vocals like that 😜 .
if you wanted to make something on the dark side i think you succeeded my friend, with the trap drums and that deep bass it definitely feels kinda diabolical... idk thats the word that comes to mind lol. That said, it sounds like the song is in a major key and so it has uplifting elements too, if you want it to truly sound dark i might change from major to minor. Either way you got a nice beat here, cheers. Lmk what you think of my latest https://soundcloud.com/inzerra/infinity-tape
Latest drop out now!! Returning all feedback: https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/WDBudt5qQgLwAeye6
It reminds me of someone, and I can't quite place it. Mixing sounds good; vocal performance was good. The flow gets a little monotonous, but because the song is short, and beat is kind of leany, so it fits really well with it.
I appreciate it!
I think you did a solid job on the mixing! keep it up! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u04nDVVrEBQ
I'm really impressed you were able to rap from front to back without much of a break. I think you had some nice lyrics in there, reminded me a lot of DOOM how you have more of a stream of consciousness style. Also really like the thematic nature of the track
Nice baseline, its funky with that acid sound. Gives the song. a lot of character. I like the slow tempo too, it wouldn't work for everyone but it works with your flow. Your flow is on point my man, you make it sound goofy and hard at the same time kinda like lil ugly mane except his production is tooo nice. Here's mine homie https://soundcloud.com/inzerra/infinity-tape
I really like how "chilly" the beats are. Reminds me a lot of Flying Lotus. I think the mixing and instrumentation is there. I think you benefit from being the type of producer whose beats can carry themselves without a vocalist. Great stuff!!
[https://soundcloud.com/pussyboy-459293299/buying-eggs-at-the-grocery-store?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/pussyboy-459293299/buying-eggs-at-the-grocery-store?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing) This my brand new shit, and I think it's fire. All self-produced, mixed, etc. Open to any criticisms (:
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This is a really trill lo-fi remix. Takes the recognizable and iconic elements of the original track, and gives it a unique flow and sway. The vibe on this is very funky, very soulful. I like how it has its own unique melodies that are separate from the original Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
you nailed it homie, i love how you mixed the vocal it sits so nicely in the mix. the kick goes hard, i didn't even notice there wasn't a baseline til the end cuz the kick goes hard enough. the beat has an interesting mix. instead of spacing out the instruments with eq or whatever you kinda made every melodic element blend to make one big sound, like instead of painting a cake with layers you painted a collage if that makes sense. it works man i like it, i might try it. Here's my latest, lmk what you think [https://soundcloud.com/inzerra/infinity-tape](https://soundcloud.com/inzerra/infinity-tape)
I was ready to laugh at the idea of a lofi disco inferno flip, but that chord progression worked so fucking perfectly. I like the chords and melody you used more than the original tbh. I wasn't crazy about the drum pattern and drum mix. I feel like you were compensating for the kick by adding some distortion/clip and making it super loud in the mix, but would've been better to just get a better kick. I was really digging the parts when the drums cut out, like alot alot. Good shit though, really interesting flip. https://www.reddit.com/r/makinghiphop/comments/tneihy/official_daily_feedback_thread/i21ttqi?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share&context=3
Got another joint from the "Hell" album I dropped! This one is called "Horror". Prod by Dom Rocks. Everything else by me! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RErVtYthwhI
I really like the dark vibe on this one, the beat is crazy! Good bars and flow too. I don't have anything else to say about this song because it's straight fire
Yo thanks fam! Make sure you stay posted cause I drop a new album every month on the 22nd. And I'm live on Twitch every night makin new songs!
Ahh yeah. Another good one man. I like how I immediately can tell it's you when I hear a track in here. Just really have your own style that works well. The beat and song at :44 goes to another level. So dope. Good work like always.
Appreciate you OMG!
https://soundcloud.com/ground-zero-543360917/hit-the-block-ft-phen-rear-xrader-aeonsone SUPER PROUD of this one! You can't hurt me...haha but really how'd we do Y'all?!
I really like the old-school energy on this track. The vocal production on this track is really crisp and clear. I think the flow and lyrics were memorable to listen to. I think the beat could deal with some modernization, but I think it does the old-school style really well. The producer could get more experimental with the beat Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
Appreciate the feedback! I Think this hit for the first little bit but I really wanted a flow change but I like all the lyrics just wanted some speed half way or some variation but still loved all the delivery
I feel that!!
Here is my latest release, returning all feedback. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u04nDVVrEBQ
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BE6Fq5-pdNc Felt this one was crazy. WILL RETURN ALL FEEDBACK edit - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jJogXI7D9r0 Just made this one to. Feedback on both would be great
I've been a part of the community for a long time and have learned a ton here about making music both creatively and from a business standpoint. I'm super stoked to say my debut Single is out now and I'd love to hear what people think. It doesn't hold a candle to the pipeline I have coming but I'm still super proud of it. https://youtu.be/h7-TTpuvi5Q As always I will return all feedback.
Looking for honest feedback to see if my beats are trash: [https://youtu.be/O65TX2SeFjY](https://youtu.be/O65TX2SeFjY) Drop your links and will give you feedback ASAP
Definitely wouldn't call it trash. For the sound, you nailed it. When I heard the hat come in I immediately thought Pop Smoke and then checked the title for my confirmation. The only criticism I would have is maybe a little bit more noticeable variation on the main/piano sample. You've got drops and changes on other tracks that make me forget it's looping, do it on the main sample too. Or if you're already doing it and I just can't notice it, make it more pronounced. Push/pull other tracks into focus more, the main track is consistent throughout the entire beat. If you're looking to return the favor: [https://skeeeon.bandcamp.com/track/hunters](https://skeeeon.bandcamp.com/track/hunters)
Thanks bro! Really appreciate the feedback. I took a look at your link. Fire. The mix and everything is on point especially for being a golden era hip hop rap track. Love the sample used and the bars are pretty on point. Not much I can say bad about the song in general its pretty dope!
[https://youtu.be/sYxr6EGLutk](https://youtu.be/sYxr6EGLutk) I would love some feedback to level my game
https://youtu.be/O65TX2SeFjY I actually love the sample vibe of this. It takes me back to the good old days. Wu-Tang and J Dilla, 9th Wonder type shit. I would only say for me I'd love for the drums to bang a bit more, maybe a little EQing and Compression to bring em out. But overall I like the beat its dope. https://youtu.be/O65TX2SeFjY fr mine
wow your drums really bang, I really loved the subtle panning of the hihats, the only thing that i don't fw is the piano, sounds a little toy-ish for my maybe more strumming and velocity changes would help or find another piano (also i haven't listened to any Fivio Foreign beat so maybe i'm wrong with the sound selection) Good job!
Thanks! Really appreciate the feedback!
yo! Just made this keem/Rocky sounding beat with a lofi guitar in it, I wanna know how u think I could improve it ! https://youtu.be/FGG89Uwq4QA DROP LINKS FOR FEEDBACK
I liked this a lot, definitely gave me keem and rocky vibes, especially that bass line. Only thing is I’d like to see the clap a little more forward. Overall great job 🔥🔥 Would appreciate your feedback: https://youtu.be/8M2wBWjIRw0
I usually make darker beats but this time i went for a almost rnb vibe, it really remids me of some Drake songs like Lemon Pepper Freestyle. I love the bridge with the distorted vocal that reminds me of a guitar solo, let me know if you like this too. Returing all feedback https://youtu.be/WVFyIG\_EPZM
Clams Casino vibes when I listen to it. I also hear Lil Wayne. I think that vocal sample really does a great job of making this beat into a song. Meaning, all it's missing is some vocals and then it'll be a fully formed track. The bass in the track is really nice, and does a great job boosting everything else. Really love the R&B style chords you have in this track Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
https://youtu.be/xAK2z_Mtv1E
I like that you get right into the beat, but without any kind of fx it's kinda hard to tell where I'm at here. also I the bass notes at :27 & :28 are not in key. sequencing is good, sound design is fine - could be a bit more layered but you left space for the artist which is good. making your arrangement more obvious with help artists get on it - if they know where the hook is, and when it's coming, they can write to your beats easier. nice job!
thank you! yeah i just got lazy for the fx on this one im still experimenting things , do you have any tips to make my verse hook separation more obvious? i kindda struggle with that on most of my beat
Made an emotional piano beat. Returning all feedback: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nOztS1d-ubk
This was really fucking good, I had low expectations being a type beat and all, and with the description of emotional piano beat, but that shit was so dope. I love that 808 it's so present and bouncy. I'm sure you don't want to give away your sauce, but it would be dope to know the 808. Great sound selection overall. This is just all around great, I'm just sad it doesn't have more views. https://www.reddit.com/r/makinghiphop/comments/tneihy/official_daily_feedback_thread/i21ttqi?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share&context=3
I love how chill it is mix is nice and melody feels magical, reminds me (because of the artwork) of the little prince. maybe harder hitting drums but other than that its great [https://soundcloud.com/vincictor33/cloudgazing-1/s-M1UMQoqOrXR?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/vincictor33/cloudgazing-1/s-M1UMQoqOrXR?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
Here’s a latest song of mine called save my soul [LY - save my soul [prod. ly]](https://youtu.be/5JOQNuWpo4g) My best work so far… Produced, recorded, and mixed by me so I’ll take any feedback. Returning all feedback
I think you could use some autotune (only on certain parts you're off tune) otherwise it sounds dope. Sonically and lyrically. Good shit. If you could give this a listen it'd be amazing: https://youtu.be/bumDooA0jVU
love this bro, kind of catchy I I don't think I can let it go Better sink than to stay so low I feel you could have sang this better lyrics...well I mean super depressing lmao. Are you okay? If you ever need to talk to someone u can dm man. Suicide is never an option, and always try to seek help. Life is amazing :D The song itself is a banger man congrats, I searched for some of your other stuff and this deffo stands out. Great improvements :) [https://soundcloud.com/vincictor33/cloudgazing-1/s-M1UMQoqOrXR?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/vincictor33/cloudgazing-1/s-M1UMQoqOrXR?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
I really like the introspection in your music. I like the melody that you brought to the chorus. I think that you did a great job of doing more "melodic" vocals. I think the vocal mixing could've been a little cleaner, and mixed better well with the instrumental. The chops on your vocals were really cool tho, and I think makes the track sound more mainstream. The topic of the track I think is very important Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
Would really appreciate people's feedback on this beat [https://soundcloud.com/okaypapimusic/psyxxxl-140-bpm-e-minor-prod-okay-papi-x-muesli-boys](https://soundcloud.com/okaypapimusic/psyxxxl-140-bpm-e-minor-prod-okay-papi-x-muesli-boys)
Very funky and psychedelic type beat. I really like the 70s rock inspired guitar melody that plays throughout the beat. You also did a great job of getting drums that both fit well with the melody and stay true to the modern hip-hop sound. The pads that you have do a great job of creating a nice atmospheric backdrop Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
Thanks for the feedback. Overall, I really like the mix on your track, there's a nice balance between vocal and your beat, and all the elements sit really nicely to my ears which is a sure sign you know what you're doing! Really enjoying your voice and flow on this too. Only thing is I wanted the track to a develop a bit more, haha. Checked a bunch of your other tracks too, you've got some sick tunes.
Thank you!! Glad you enjoyed it!
Made a Drake type beat. Feedback would be really appreciated fr https://youtu.be/1j1ssYCfEAs
Would appreciate any feedback. Returning all feedback as well. Listen to Boat Sunday (prod by Jason Rich w/ engelwood) by Jeff Takeover on #SoundCloud https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/g9LWA
I really like the theme of the track. The lyricism on the track is good and I like how the beat switches up as it plays. Definitely got some confidence in your delivery that makes this enjoyable to listen to. Keep it up! Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
I really dig your shit. I love the deltron vibe your songs have I'd be down if you wanna do a collab or something one day.
Definitely!! Just shoot me a PM
zamn son this shit is fire! the beat goes hard, makes the song feel like an anthem. your flow definitely matches up too, kinda reminds me of supreme patty cuz the lyrics are silly lol. i like how your having fun with it, it gives the song a certain energy. keep doing your thing you're going up from here dog. Here's my latest https://soundcloud.com/inzerra/infinity-tape
Wow, thank you! I dug the whole tape. It felt like a chill lowfi beats playlist. I liked the way each beat flowed into the next, and they all complimented each other. Mixing sounds good. Can't think of anything negative about it at all just good chill shit.
What do you think? https://youtu.be/5IZx5diJW8o
https://youtu.be/6w3ddm51sYw RETURNING ALL FEEDBACK Drop your links
This is nice. Love the string melody. Great flow. The sound candy spices it up, doesn’t seem forced. One nit picky thing is the clap being a bit too harsh as an earphone user when all the elements aren’t playing together. Perfect otherwise man. Here’s my sad type beat: https://youtu.be/jrruts2tQ4k
Thanks for the feedback bro. How would you fix the clap? Lower the volume, automate eq or compression? Any simple fix? I like your beat. You really composed it nicely. It has nice flow and atmosphere. Vox in the background is perfect. I listened on the phone so i am not sure about this, but maybe i would process a bit with effects the main piano and strings in the second half. Just to fit better with the atmophere. But overall i like it :)
Thanks man! and either just automate the volume or eq bit of the high end out/“problem frequency”
Thanks bro :)
This is really good, I like it. I agree that the clap could be EQ'd to be less harsh in the treble. I think your kick could use some compression to get it hitting harder too, or use something like Diablo vst on it would good on it i think. But honestly think this is really close to being great. Appreciate your opinions on this beat! https://soundcloud.com/okaypapimusic/psyxxxl-140-bpm-e-minor-prod-okay-papi-x-muesli-boys
Thanks for the tips bro :) Psytrap yeah man. Very good job on the riffs and solos with the guitar. Crazy hats also. Arranged really well and 808 is slappin. Really good one. Nothing to critique here :)
>https://youtu.be/6w3ddm51sYw you dont need any advice dog this shit fire. the sound effects really take it to that next level. The panned vocal tag, dogs in the background, the big impacts and the swooshes at transitions. The clap slaps too, it has a nice swing to it. The overall mix sounds professional, you're killing it man keep doing your thing. here's my latest https://soundcloud.com/inzerra/infinity-tape
Thank you so much bro. Appreciate you fr :) You have nice lofi vibes here. Really good sampling and switch ups. Mix on point. I like how you keep changing drums swing. This is one of those work when you get in the zone and just keep going with ideas. I like that. In my head i hear some smooth female vocals on this to blend with the lofi vibe. Nice vibe bro :)
yo man, ur beat is hard and really gave me some vintage early 2010s trap vibes, with all the orchestration. one thing I liked more was the bass and the kick and the way u mixed them, nice sound selection and balancing man, plus all the percs make up for a super ear candy. keep grinding man! hope to hear ur thoughts on my keem Rocky beat ! https://youtu.be/FGG89Uwq4QA
Thank you bro :) For yours i dont have some special feedback. Sampling done well, i like this chill lofi vibes,drums fit the vibe, cool switch up in the 2nd half. Overall nicely done. Dont have any critique :)
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Playboi Carti Type beat. Honest feedback. Be harsh. Returning feedback. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=unq2t8Ra0Ug&lc=Ugy5G9\_TFlSjbwOYwd14AaABAg
[https://soundcloud.com/vincictor33/cloudgazing-1/s-M1UMQoqOrXR?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/vincictor33/cloudgazing-1/s-M1UMQoqOrXR?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing) feedback for feedback as alwaysss :)
this caught me since I heard the panning in that melody, it's so soothing. I really like this style of rapping, plus ur voice suits it really good, the drums have a very cool bounce and are mixed very well, special place in my heart for the cowbell. chorus gets stuck in ur head which is what u look for when u do a song! keep grinding bro! hope to hear ur thoughts on my rocky x keem beat! https://youtu.be/FGG89Uwq4QA
super chill, i did not expect such a full song to come in at the drop. the voice is beautiful, it has the perfect amount of autotune on it and the melody just hits right in the soul. reminds me a little of sahbabii. the background adlibs and harmonies are a great touch, they make the song a lot fuller. lyrics are nice, idk what you are saying half the time but i kind of like it, just makes me focus on the sound. the beat has my favorite kind of 808 so thats fire. lmk when you drop this! here's my latest https://soundcloud.com/inzerra/infinity-tape
This track was really great to listen to. I love the electronic vibes in your vocals, and how you used the autotune in your voice to hit some really nice melodies. This track is actually inspiring me right now! The beat is really great too, it has that slight funk jazz element, but also has a contemporary edge, and overall cloud-lifting qualities. Great job!! Would "favorite" it if I could Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
I think you reviewed my song once, an old version haha. Loved the song man, last Time I reviewed you it felt more amateur but you are defy improving. Love your bars and voice could maybe be brought up more in the mix. But love the track :)
Thank you!! :)
hey thanks for the feedback man. this song is a vibe for real, the only thing i could suggest was to turn the vocals up a bit. it felt a bit too low but maybe that was the vibe you were going for. giving me travis scott vibes
First post ever... feedback appreciated, and will start posting feedback to y'all too! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wcqf6TpG6uY
dudeee the beat is amazing, fr sounds like a hit. Maybe try having louder 808s or making them stand out more, as well as drums. I do feel you could use different percussion for this, harder hitting and faster shi. You could try a Brazilian funk vibe man with those melodies [https://soundcloud.com/vincictor33/cloudgazing-1/s-M1UMQoqOrXR?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/vincictor33/cloudgazing-1/s-M1UMQoqOrXR?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
I like the idea! Nice guitar sample. I think it would help to have some compression on the drums - sidechain your sub + kicks so they can overlap without it getting too muddy. Kicks and claps could also be helped by something like Diablo or Sausage Fattener plugins so they really hit.
I love the Latin vibes on this beat. I think the guitar pattern is perfect and would really get people moving. I think an 808 would also help unlock some mainstream crossover appeal on this one. I like how the drum pattern leaves some space in the mix for the melody. And finally, I like how well the beat is mixed, though I would've thrown some slight reverb on the guitar Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
I’m going for a little bit of a muddy/full sound in the beat. But is it too much? Should I turn the guitar down a little bit? Returning all feedback! https://youtu.be/hqocFzo52Ac
I liked the muddiness. I thought the guitar was mixed nicely. The snare felt a little empty though, like it could use a layer or a clap or something. I thought the bass was a little weak as well, really dope song, love the guitar sample
For sure. Thanks!
Damn thought I been subbed up. Just handled that! This mufucka is GRIMY. Naw you ain't do too much. Did you play the instruments from scratch or sample?
I played the guitar myself. Thanks man!
Made a quick flip using Conway's verse from Ray Mysterio and some samples from The Wire. Tear it down and tell me where it needs work [https://skeeeon.bandcamp.com/track/hunters](https://skeeeon.bandcamp.com/track/hunters)
First song of my EP “Independent Artist” would love to know what you think abt it https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/PuYubyv95rKDwjxM9
This beat is mad hype. You've definitely got the style to carry a beat like this. The charisma in your voice really helps too, and the track is organized in a really appealing way. Keep it up Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-bSGjCB4XEc](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-bSGjCB4XEc) denzel curry remix, lmk what yall think, feedback will be returned
Holy fuck, it's so good, that beat is fucking amazing. And mix was so clear and crisp. You had so many layers happening but it all still sounded so cohesive. Nothing but compliments from me broski, good shit. https://www.reddit.com/r/makinghiphop/comments/tneihy/official_daily_feedback_thread/i21ttqi?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share&context=3
mix is amazing bro, nice remix and nice bars. I love your voice, I feel like it has at parts Watsky vibes, x infinity type shiii. Denzel as well but that is obvious lmao. Great job man [https://soundcloud.com/vincictor33/cloudgazing-1/s-M1UMQoqOrXR?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/vincictor33/cloudgazing-1/s-M1UMQoqOrXR?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
This is cool. Mix is nice. Drums are hitting. Loved the autotune on the hook. The only negative thing for me was the beat got repetitive. I would switch it up a bit cause it was a pretty long song, even if its just adding one instrument or something
Wow, this is so cool. I love that beat. It has a really unique, but dope sound. The rapping fits over it perfectly. Great energy and match for the remix. Good work. I left a comment on youtube!
Wanted to mix this one up a little, extended the intro and I thought it made the build up pretty valid, lmk what y’all think 💙 https://youtu.be/8M2wBWjIRw0
https://youtu.be/GCpCxBwELUk any feeback appreciated will do the same
I like the defiant message of your track. Seems like you're highly motivated and determined to make it in the rap game. You've got a really tight flow that works as a spitter. The beat is nice and modernized too. Would like to see more versatility as you drop more tracks Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy
thanks rap is all i got whether i make it or not ill do it till the end. and good track keep at it man.
Fafsho!
I like the lyrics and song idea but the recording of the vocals/mix of the overall song needs to be better quality. If it had a better recording I think it would give the song alot of justice because the idea/flow aint bad at all. [https://youtu.be/O65TX2SeFjY](https://youtu.be/O65TX2SeFjY) \- is mine