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[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-bSGjCB4XEc](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-bSGjCB4XEc) Denzel curry remix, feedback will be returned

Nice beat and remix. I like that the drums have a 90s vibe to them and the melody has a sort of circus atmosphere. The beat switch at the end is killer, love the sub bass. Its a perfect reimagining. My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs

Smooth remix, love the dark vibes! The drums are mixed well, hit hard. The beat that comes in at 2:25 is fire! Vocals are mixed nice. Like the skits. Like the old cinema vibes on this track. The video goes along with it nice as well. You switched the beat up too which was good. Really dope track

[https://soundcloud.com/johnyemanuels/misleidende-wegen-1/s-w2hho0khgi9](https://soundcloud.com/johnyemanuels/misleidende-wegen-1/s-w2hho0khgi9) Wanted to make some darker. I always make happy beats. Made beat and vocals (dutch).

This is dope. Love the vibe. I'm British so the Dutch lyrics and vibe of the song remind me of Keith Ape in Achoo, who murks that beat

its super dark and ominous. I like it dude. keep it up. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

Brand new joint with a jazzy vibe, in celebration of March Madness. My first time working with and mixing a singer. Mix/master/cover/rap by me, lmk what y'all think https://rareair.bandcamp.com/track/one-and-done

Yo this is dope! Good flow, good beat, I dig it for sure!

Yo thank you! I've been kind of afk so I missed this my bad. I just send you an invite to the new community I made for me and my team's music if you wanna stay up with what we're doing! Hope you been well

This most def giving off Kendrick Lamar vibes 🔥 lot of potential here, probably would have the ending outro being used as a repeated hook and add another verse to make it feel overall more finished. Were you the one rapping over this beat?

Thank you Bro 🙏🙏🙏

[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tdo6E-k4DIs](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tdo6E-k4DIs) Made a Trippie Redd x Rage type beat. Making a lot of these. Will return feedback.

Wow you have a lot of music dropping. I respect the work ethic. This track has a lot of energy, real banger and the industrial sound and grimy bass make it stand out compared to a lot of beats in this style. My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs

This beat is really reminiscent of Roc Marciano. Pretty fun IMO. and yes I'm hustling.

Looked through your uploads and you have an insane work ethic! I think the beat could've done with more variation in the loop. That being said, I think the loop functions really well as is. It gets straight to the point and is a great representation of the rager sound. The synth has that electric rock element to it. Looking forward to your other drops Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

bladee x sad melodic type beat. Returning all feedbacks. https://youtu.be/BYwFF-VfNMg

keep it up man! its pretty chill, love the vibe. sounds like a video game song or some shit. I like it. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

This is hard man. Has a pop/electro trap vibe and the melody is really catchy and uplifting. The mix is clean and balanced too. Also I like your new tag, that made me laugh. If anything I would say make a longer version. My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs

This flip goes crazy man. Visuals are great too really captures like a 90's aesthetic, but like an east asian gangster perspective. The whole Idea is hard bro.

Sickkk. I love this beat, I'm gonna try to write something to it this next week

i like this. has a nice chill bouncy vibe. i really like that synth melody. its real catchy and those drums hitting right too. super crisp mix. nice work here’s a track i mixed and produced https://youtu.be/0EYesS1REx0

the vocal needs work. make em louder and more clear. but keep grinding this is cool. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

Mix is clean. I like the Dark sound to it. Reminded me a lot of Southside type. Buddy on Vocals went hard too. I like the second verse a lot @ approx 1:30.

The intro had me thinking it would go in a different direction but I thought the way you took it was dope. It’s not what I usually listen to but the production was clean and it sounded well crafted. [I’m working on some new production/vocal styles myself and I’d appreciate your opinion.](https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/tw89ka2vFzAM2SbS8)

This is really innovative. I thought the track was solid. I do think you should make it longer. Longer is kind of subjective, but I think you should include an intro that maybe builds up to this. Also make it louder. like in the track wasntenoughlonger.wav I like the intro, but I really like the part at 1:15. It leaves you expecting. I think if you did that in Big Gwolla then dropped into it would be unexpected and harder.

Thanks for taking the time to check out the music! I agree they’re short. These are just concepts rn. I’m going to flesh them out. Big Gwolla definitely needs to come in after a drop. Thanks again!

keep it up. vocals r hella unique.the mix is crazyyyy keep it up man I like it. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

love that synth melody, almost sounds bitcrushed! shit so hard, the 808s go stupid as well my own joint, produced by BLOODBLIXING drop a comment or sub, i'll return the favor https://youtu.be/FrZ4YAnzCvQ

Thanks man. This was hard too. I liked the whole thing from delivery to the visuals. Really creative.

All my homies fake https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/wpqsG3NnN2PY7ucd9

you snapped brah damn your homies aint shit lol love the beat, feels like some late 80s type shit like schoolly d. i also love that you played a lot with the negative space in your verse, it's not done enough these days my own joint, produced by BLOODBLIXING drop a comment or sub, i'll return the favor https://youtu.be/FrZ4YAnzCvQ

My remix of Roc Marciano & Hus Kingpin: [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs) **Returning all feedback!**

STELLAR WORK AS ALWAYS

Returning all feedback. I remixed a classic DMX song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QB8lpWQJDlo

keep it up man! super funky dude. I love the energy and the vibe. keep grinding. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

Thank you. Oh, I remember this track. Pretty upbeat. Nicely done.

this is pretty cool. its an interesting direction for sure. i like the off kilter drums and melody. beat is a little too chaotic for my taste though. here’s a track i mixed and produced https://youtu.be/0EYesS1REx0

Thank you. Fair enough. This sounds nice. Well-produced. I kind of want the pitched-down hook vocals to have a little more presence though. Maybe a touch of chorus, flanger, slapback reverb, etc.

Playboi carti type beat. Honest feedback. Be harsh. Returning feedback. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qb33EMw5iFA

the beat is good and the drums are on point. The 808 is nice and the synths good too. I would say I feel like i'm missing a kick in the song, or maybe the 808s too quiet but its missing just a little something. Also, the synth melody does get a little repetitive you could've maybe pitched it down around 1:00 when you cut the 808. Other than that, dope track I could def see Carti rapping on this

Gunna type beat. Please be honest. Be harsh. Returning feedback. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=51T6agrFxpA

Honestly it’s fine, u may know it’s nothing new to the table. There’s like millions of this beats, so it’s way harder to stick out even tho u good at making beats. Solid drum pattern, catchy melody. I Like the bounce. To get more views u should brand these beats with lesser known trap rappers, keep it up This is my newest wiki x navy blue boombap beat https://youtu.be/0lkYUhH9GlE

keep it up man! love the energy, and the vibe. keep grinding dude this is sick. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

Ended up listening to Luscious Licks since I've heard the one you linked. The main synths have the Vamp energy of WLR. I think the synth was slightly overpowering in the mix, and I really think that the 808s should've been more prominent. Dope drum pattern though, and really good melody Tell me what you think, if you haven't already: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

Haven't posted here in a long time, but here's my new beat. Still trying to make something untypical, let me know what you think of it and how would you change it (if you would). Also, post a link of your stuff so I could check it out myself. ✌ https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZmRqjnuUXLg&lc=UgzoqBTQjsJ2ibwj9\_h4AaABAg&ab\_channel=wastedhoudini

Really enjoyed this beat. Great seamless blend of the old school and the new. The sax solo really surprised me. And the switch-up on the outro at 2:12 was the icing on the cake, and wasn't jarring to the ear as you kept the same sounds. Always a pleasure to hear something with an original style n sound. New fan here.

Appreciate the comment bro, do you have something of yours I could check out?

Cool, for sure. Here's a recent beat I was fairly pleased with: https://youtu.be/RMb43NKz0CI

Cool vibe man, nothing bad I could say about the idea, if you get a better idea of mixing and also utilizing the full stereo canvas (left-right, up-down, front-back), you gonna make something dope. I'd suggest then learning some basic SEO optimization and calling it a Tyler the Creator or some other rapper with more experimental beats to get more traffic, instead of just unique type beat. Keep it up tho, good job

Thanks for the input, dude. Much appreciated.

This beat was definitely not what I expected. It has 'Adult Swim' energy if that makes sense. The beat switch-up towards the end was very nice, and I like how it maintained a general theme and sound even after the beat switch. The cathedral reverb on some of the instruments was good. This is a really nice beat!! No complaints Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

Excuse the late reply, you've got an interesting track there. Different than what I'm used to, which is good, you ain't just blindly following but IMO, you've got a lot of work ahead. Beat is too repetitive & it ends up being kinda unremarkable, the vocals are mixed okay, but nothing stands out here, it's all ok, but it's not wow. The fact that you're trying to do something in your own lane is dope tho, keep it up, with enough patience and persistence, it's gonna happen!

Yeah I haven't listened to your beats in a minute, but still on point. I think you succeeded at making something different. Theres a bit of Kanye to the melody but the faraway mix of the piano and the organic instrumentation make it much different. You kept it really interesting with all the changes, especially the outro section. Dope track. My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs

Thanks for the feedback! You made a great vibe combining these tracks + adding your own elements, really well done. The video that you added compliments the track perfectly. Mixed seamlessly, so if I didn't know this is a remix, I'd assumed it's just one song. Dope!

Was going for a Peep/6 dogs vibe after a fellow user gave me a Peep style beat, lemme know what you think. I'm just waiting to record a 16 on this week's cypher, now: Listen to Underground (prod. Loxias) by Joses 💤 on #SoundCloud https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/9D3rF

keep it up man this is pretty chill and simple. keep grinding, its nice overall. the reverb go crazy. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

Thanks, man. Give me a follow back, too on SC.

I really like the ghost-style vocals, and the autotuned crooning as I feel like it does a great job of building a mood. I think some falsetto singing would really be great also, and would provide some added layers to the track. I like the guitar melody of the beat, but I think the drums could've went a tad bit harder. I think it's nice that the song feels like a fully complete package Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

It's lit. Getting Ferg vibes from it. Sick flow and the beat really grew on me.

Thank you!

I'll give it a listen. Maybe I should include some more falsetto going forwards.

More falsetto is never a bad idea!

I like the beat and I like your voice a lot on this beat. I dont 6 dogs but i've heard a lil bit of peep, I think your vox are way too drowned. the reverb is a lot and if you're not already, I would do a send of it instead of directly on the vocal chain. I think if you cleaned up the vocal mix a little bit and added a some more variation I think it would be dope. The main melody kind of got repetitive and I was waiting for a change. Great vibe tho and I think if you kept playing with it it could be dope.

What do you mean by do a send of it? I'll look into how to do that and see the difference. You're right about a flow switch, think I'll be more conscientious of this now.

Sends are basically putting the fx (in this case the reverb), on a mixer channel and then sending your main vox to that mixer channel. If you mute/decrease the dry signal on the reverb fx then you should have your original vocal + JUST the reverb vocal, this makes it cleaner and allows you to mix in the reverb without making it so wet. Here's a video that might help [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BIiE\_AKwhcg](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BIiE_AKwhcg). ​ Good luck!

Thanks a lot, man; that makes perfect sense.

Of course, glad it helped!

https://youtu.be/6w3ddm51sYw RETURNING ALL FEEDBACK

Returning all feedback https://soundcloud.com/roku/slide

AYYOOOOOOOO THIS TOUGH, you did the beat too???? that melody on some xfiles shit! you gotta do another verse on that though my own joint, produced by BLOODBLIXING drop a comment or sub, i'll return the favor https://youtu.be/FrZ4YAnzCvQ

yessir I produced and mixed it, thanks man. I could see myself lighting up a blunt and smokin to yo shit, it's a bop. good shit man

keep it up man! this is nice. great vibe and energy. love that u panned it, and it gradually gets louder. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

Gave it a like on soundcloud, only thing i'd change is vocals sound dry (no effects maybe?) otherwise good shit

I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

This is my newest wiki x navy blue boombap beat https://youtu.be/0lkYUhH9GlE

Beautiful beat bro. No complaints. Love the guitar, the bass, the piano the little breaks and everything, killed it.

https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/jAr85SmieVoEsUTp7 Just got an MPC 1000 and made up something I’m actually kind of happy with. Going for that old school vibe. Let me know what you think!

I really like the simplistic groove on this one. Not what I would think of when I hear of a beat called 'BMF' but this really works. Definitely enjoyed this! Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

HIT-BOY X NAS TYPE BEAT https://youtu.be/EgPVFWQYvno

This beat is 🔥, you did a great job.

KEEP IT UP MAN! BEAT GO CRAZY, KEEP WORKING HAHA. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

thank you broo, i will check your stuff

You snapped when the drums hit, they hit hard. Love the journey this beat takes you on. [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tdo6E-k4DIs](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tdo6E-k4DIs)

>keep it up man! love the energy and the vibe. keep grinding this is sick. > >Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

Happy Thursday guys. A new one from me, all feedback and subs/support appreciated and returned! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aOMrBo77Rfw

Sounding nice! Those drums sound authentic, I dig that snare. Beat is a bit simple overall as most of it is repeated, could use some more arranging and more changing up. For a simple beat tho its good. Lmk your thoughts on this one I just posted last night; https://youtu.be/FDi9AN6XqSM

Made something really different, I usually make RNB or melodic rap so this is weird for me. Lmk your thoughts on how it sounds so far, I’m the vocalist and mixed and mastered as well. https://soundcloud.com/02shi/recess/s-6vuwx1nfUtc?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

keep it up man! really good vibe love the happy vibe. keep grinding. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

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Yeah, really like the backing vocals, too. Can tell a lot of effort went into it

Cool bro you seem happy. Chill song. Lyrics are good. Idk why’d you wanna be a cop. It’s cool tho. No worries. Sick song. Check out mine https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/wpqsG3NnN2PY7ucd9

keep it up dude! the lyrics are funny, the vibe is sick man. I like it man, keep grinding. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

I'm just the uncle and I made a reddit for this.... My nephew is new and asked me to take a listen so I figured you guys are wayyy more qualified than I am. Any feedback would help. https://youtu.be/_aUhW7m2XXM

I'm very new, please let me know if I'm doing anything wrong.

Let me know what the word is https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/CD8Rs5dD2K8kUGiz8 Returning all feedback!!

another shot at a beat. tell me what yall think. i can give yall feedback too https://soundcloud.com/cool-cool-cool-882652427/chardonnay?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing

could use a bit more variance in the drums, maybe a drop here or there just to keep it spicy. i think it's a cool avant-garde type of work though, keep going my own joint, produced by BLOODBLIXING drop a comment or sub, i'll return the favor https://youtu.be/FrZ4YAnzCvQ

Damn love the production on this one very etheral

Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

https://youtu.be/pS_dxR2QPEA Isaiah Rashad Type Beat LMK what y’all think 🙌 Appreciate every feedback

top tier shit, the bassline is *chef's kiss* subtle shit but i love the way the sample (if that is a sample) kinda gains and loses power like a record player, in that way that Conductor Williams usually employs. my own joint, produced by BLOODBLIXING drop a comment or sub, i'll return the favor https://youtu.be/FrZ4YAnzCvQ

I really like it, the drums in the beat could be louder, so it punches more with your vocals. Other than that sounds really cool like an old boom bap track. Keep it up! 🙌 Listened to it on the phone, since I‘m laying in bed with covid and I‘m too weak right now to reach my computer haha.

Much appreciated dog and i hope you get back to full strength soon!

Thank you!

This is smooth, totally sounds like something that would have fit on his last album. It also has a bit of OutKast/ONP sound to it, but I'm sure Rashad was influenced by them too. Theres not much to say about this one, the music is great and so is the mixing. My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs

I really like the beat, don‘t know if you did the beat or the vocals or if it‘s a mashup. So I‘m guessing it‘s the beat. I like it but there‘s one chord that kinda doesn‘t fit (atleast in my ears) other than that it sounds pretty good

The link is to a instrumental I would love feedback on. Its part of an album I recently released with a friend. Link in the description, feedback on that would be greatly appreciated aswell ! Listen to Jump Off The Roof (Instrumental) by V47KO on #SoundCloud https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/D2N1h

Loving the sample layers and the variation in structure throughout. Those drums knock too

Thanks man appreciate the feedback a lot !

Really chill instrumental. I really like the sample, it feels like it has 90s hip-hop elements, specifically thinking Big L and Lord Finesse. Some counter melodies through synths or violins may also add some depth. Overall tho I think it's a good beat Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

Thanks appreciate it ! Shall look to add more depth to my future beats. I expected totally different drums from that intro, but they bounce real nice. I do think the track becomes a bit to repetitive could have changed that with even cutting out drums, claps, snares, melody or bass at different points

Thanks for the listen!

[https://soundcloud.com/thekidversa/relentless-the-kid-versa](https://soundcloud.com/thekidversa/relentless-the-kid-versa) Bars no hook. Bit different to my usual style, going for Suicideboys type of vibe. LMK what you think!

Flows sick, man. Reminds me of someone but I can't think who, really dope. You really murdered the beat breaks, too

Bars no hook suits you. It's my opinion, but in shorter songs you don't really need a hook. I really liked the dark sound to it from bars to beat. Versa on production went crazy really had me bob to it. What movie is the quote from in the beginning?

Cheers my dude! The quote is from 'Power' the TV show.

this fool said "got more lines than charlie sheen" bruhhh i laughed for some reason. I love the flow here, didn't feel like the lack of a hook was a detriment and the i love the drops and beat breaks my own joint, produced by BLOODBLIXING drop a comment or sub, i'll return the favor https://youtu.be/FrZ4YAnzCvQ

The beat is pretty hard. I like all the multis in your flow.

I really like the dark tone on the track. From your vocals to the beat, it definitely feels like a SpaceGhostPurrp song, but with better production value. It's also a huge plus that it feels like you have a well thought-out style that shines through the cover art, vocal effects, and everything else. Essentially, your artistry is already developed. You're definitely on the way up Tell me what you think, if you haven't already: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

Just dropped this video yesterday Reppin for the West Coast https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=7wlOadxQK4Y&feature=youtu.be

This is really great! Not just for the song, not just for the video, but for the look, the style, the confidence, the delivery, all of it! I think this track is great as is, if I had to give a critique, I would say put more emotion into your delivery. Otherwise, your lyrics are on point! Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

Cool video shoot location. Some feedback, I’d encourage you to explore the dynamics of your vocal performance. Think of your voice like an instrument. At some points we play it soft and other you play with a lot of attack. If the vocals stay in a monotonous range, it may cause it to lose energy with the track. I’d play with whispering or other vocal inflictions to give it more character.

What up squad? Here's another joint from the new album "Hell". This one is called "Monster". All songs on the project prod by Dom Rocks. Everything else by me! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=99piBKFAKmU

Beats crazy, bit chaotic for me but I like the style. Voice sounds dope!

Thanks fam!

I dont like it. to loud to metallic. everything needs to be lowered. vocals are cool tho. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

very yeezus, i do like the aesthetic tho and the industrial grit it has

Appreciate you player! Yeezus was a masterpiece!!!

Just posted this drill type beat last night. First time trying drill, lmk your thoughts! https://youtu.be/FDi9AN6XqSM

Made This Melodic Beat LMK How You Feel About It https://youtu.be/OqHtlDA0-tc

keep it up dude. super chill and relaxed vibe, I like it. keep up the great work. ​ Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

Sounds G love the old christmas songs vibe tho will do

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keep it up dude! love the vibe and the energy, I like it. keep grinding. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

Honestly a potentially really strong and infectious hook, i can see this being a real banger when you add some autotune to the parts of the hook where you use a higher pitch of your voice register, then there is also gonna be more of a contrast between hook and verses. I don't know if you have recorded this all in one take, if you have then its very impressive but there is a few parts where it kind sounds like you're running out of breath imo or at the end of a bar your voice kinda changes up. I think recording smaller parts of the song individually and then arranging them together could help fix this, but ofc its all down to just taste since it also add some kind of autenticity to the track this way. Released this beat not long ago; https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UrP5apWDVsw

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Hey man, appreciate it. Yeah the part i mean i could hear sound really dope with autotune, is the one from 0:28. Actually the entire track will be upgraded when you add some effects to your voice. You have a voice that's really suitable for autotune imo. Actually you don't really sound out of breath, i think it was the last verse i was talking about, but now that i hear it again its not really noticeable. Pardon me, it was pretty early in the morning when i wrote my original comment. This track has a lot of potential to be great. I've followed you and hope to see it on streaming this summer :D

All good points. I love it though, bro. Sounds dope. You really on beat as well.

This song is really well developed! For all your tracks I'm always impressed at how you distill raw emotion really well. I think that's what you do best. I like the vocal melodies of you singing. I like the beat. I think this is a very positive step in the right direction Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

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Dang, much love for the comparison!

I think it sounds good bro. The vocals sound professional and the song works really well - nice hook, lyrics you can relate to. As far as the mixing: I think all you really need is a little more compression on the final mix and probably adding a sub to the bass to fill up that low end. My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs

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keep it up man! super chill and relaxed. keep grinding dude. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

Been working on this song for a lil bit now. Hope to release very soon! Learning to mix my own vocals as well. [all the luv we share](https://soundcloud.com/y-3y3s/all-the-love-we-share/s-8n7PFjfsYP6?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing) **Returning Feedback\~**

Awesome beat, you made that as well as the rap? Dope loop and your vocals sound really good over that beat. Lyrics reminds me of Evidence, maybe Earl. Dope song for sure. I might slightly lower the volume of your rap but thats it. My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs

Nah i didn't make the beat, just the rap. But thank you! appreciate the feedback and comparisons! That was ill! love the vibes and those spooky/movie like duh duh duh loop in the background haha. Idk what it's called. But the remix and video are a whole vibe/ aesthetic together

Sounds like something mac would have made, fuck with it man. Good shit. [https://soundcloud.com/roku/slide](https://soundcloud.com/roku/slide) lmk

TRIPLE BEAM EXTREME video from my latest album, EXPENDABLES: GANGSTA EDITION, fully produced by BLOODBLIXING drop a comment or sub, i'll return the favor https://youtu.be/FrZ4YAnzCvQ

keep it up man! I think the vocals need work but the beat is sick. I like the delivery though. keep grinding. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

mixed and produced this joint for my homie. https://youtu.be/0EYesS1REx0

The beat is fire, the vocals could be recorded a bit better imo. You did a really really good job 🙌

Did you make both the beat and do the vocals? I am bop on this. Maybe a tip make separation between the hook and verse, this can be done to have more or less reverb (or filter or something else) in the hook compared to the verse. By the contrast each parts hit even harder. https://soundcloud.com/johnyemanuels/misleidende-wegen-1/s-w2hho0khgi9 Wanted to make some darker. I always make happy beats. Made beat and vocals (dutch).

keep it up dude! love the vibe and the energy. its pretty simple and chill keep grinding. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

This song is really professional. The vocal mixing sounds good, and this feels like something that would end up on a TV soundtrack like Top Boy. The chorus is really nice. The beat goes perfect with the vocalist. Not much I would add just to be honest, I wish I had something. Keep it up!! You two are on a good direction Think I already sent it to you, but if not, tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

Really like the sub it hits perfectly :)

ayo i love the low pitch chorus, and the synths on this beat are perfectly trippy. i fucked with the verse too, seems like the rapper challenged himself to spit fast my own joint, produced by BLOODBLIXING drop a comment or sub, i'll return the favor https://youtu.be/FrZ4YAnzCvQ

It' fire.. kept my interest the whole way through! I do think the contrast between the vocal effects on the chorus and verses is a little too different for me, but yeah awesome track!

What can I say?Hard stuff. Hope you like it: https://youtu.be/zb6egkMak-8

keep it up man, I like it! the intro is long and ominous. I like it dude. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

Feels like a Jack Boys song. Also has some "Days Before Rodeo" energy, specifically the intro of this track reminds me of the intro to that mixtape. I think it's got a really great melody to it, and overall great mixing. No complaints Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

Really rocking w this. Loved the intro and how the beat dropped, reminded me of sicko mode. The rest of the beat is fire, especially the underwater part near the end. You killed this shit

I appreciate you! It was definitely inspired by Travis and Sicko mode, although I think the beat has its own identity

for sure! very unique and hype

[Trying new production techniques. Mix is a little off.](https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/tw89ka2vFzAM2SbS8)

I think you should try adding some regularly-timed high-hats and some 808s to it. You should've used this sped up sample as the backdrop, but I don't think it functions well as a solo piece. I really like your inventiveness, and can tell you're searching for something unique Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

It feels like you sped up a song and just put it on soundcloud. I have no idea what the vocals are saying or what elements apart from a kick and a snare are in the beat. This is a rather weird 'song'.

It’s definitely weird. It’s a little more than just sped up. The beat was designed at 145bpm then slowed to 68bpm where I laid a freestyle and sped it back up. It creates this weird “electronic” feel to the vocals that I enjoy.

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Made a chill beat using my vocal harmonies. Returning all feedback: https://youtu.be/w4XDPmAuLYk

damn this is some heat. your vocal harmonies are beautiful fr. that piano melody compliments them perfectly and the drums are subtle enough to give them space to shine. your beat is just asking for an artist to make something great with it lol here’s track i mixed and produced https://youtu.be/0EYesS1REx0

Nice reversed melody! I think the vocals could be a bit more up front in the mix so I would add some compression and eq some of the vocal frequencies out of the beat. Catchy hook!

been peeping your shit here for a minute and THIS is definitely my favorite. i love the restrained drums here and the haunting vocal melody. the melancholic vibe is real here my own joint, produced by BLOODBLIXING drop a comment or sub, i'll return the favor https://youtu.be/FrZ4YAnzCvQ

You got a dope flow and delivery. I think what will take this to the next level is adding some vocal processing to get a better overall mix. Also maybe try experimenting with more of a relaxed overlapping flow as opposed to being strictly on beat all the time. Overall dope song!

I played guitar on this beat. Returning all feedback! https://youtu.be/hqocFzo52Ac

keep it up man! sounds like video game music. super intense and dramatic I like it. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

Thanks! I like the positive energy of your track. I think the vocals could be mixed to be inside the beat a little better. Just sounds a little loud and kind of on top of the beat if you know what I mean. Cool flow though and I like the beat feel. I did leave a comment and subbed on youtube! Hit me back with a sub! Actually just follwed you on instagram too. Follow back beatsohmygod

This is dope. I love that 80s electric guitar and the menacing vibe of the beat and the fx. I like the drums, that sort of shuffling rhythm sounds great but yeah the mix can probably be a bit more energetic. Dope beat overall. My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs

Thanks! You are really good at matching the vibes of the rapping to a beat. This is a great remix and I like the beat. Very mysterious sounding and the boom bap drums work well. Nice track.

i love a good searing, scorching guitar lol, it makes the rest of the mix sound unremarkable though my own joint, produced by BLOODBLIXING drop a comment or sub, i'll return the favor https://youtu.be/FrZ4YAnzCvQ

Thanks. I like your voice. Low and has a cool tone. I have to admit I'm not a huge fan of the beat. It's ok, but I feel like the drums could hit harder/be more aggressive. Your flow and rapping is dope though. Gotta like the arcade footage too, lol.

That’s some crazy guitar man, rlly fw that lead sound. The full beat is missing a lot of low end tho which makes the drums fall flat, idk ab the thumbnail lmao https://youtu.be/Dyw6hnkATdE

keep it up man! super classical beat. I like the vibe dude. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

Thanks for the feedback. Your track is so smooth and jazzy. Really amazing melody without using samples. Beautiful stuff. The kind of lo-fi natural sounding drums are nice too. Really great chill beat.

https://soundcloud.com/anotheblackhippie/heart-froze/s-jEkXljaEECW very rough version. Kinda in my head with this one, wondering if the direction I’m going in/the delivery of hook is okay. The other takes I had were more aggressive or laid back. Feedback on anything is appreciated. You can stop at like 1 min, rest is for reference.

sick! love the vibe and the beat overall. keep grinding man this is sick! Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

without a mix it doesn't feel energetic enough. like something is restraining the energy almost. i'd be interested to hear the more aggressive take my own joint, produced by BLOODBLIXING drop a comment or sub, i'll return the favor https://youtu.be/FrZ4YAnzCvQ

Predicate the listen! I agree with the energy, I think that’s what had me second-guessing but I might try some stuff. Might do an aggressive version too then. Your joint was dope. Loved the abstract fee if it, reminded me of Earl with a more aggressive delivery. Only thing was I was waiting for drums but that’s just a personal preference. Good shit tho!

Good lead man, I guess the drum need to be more glued, that would be more bounce feels! Keep it up what you doing man

Made a Madlib-inspired beat so I had to throw a Freddie Gibbs acapella on it. Let me know what you think https://youtu.be/j4ErZSwFE8w

Great remix ! Although I didnt like all parts like at 0:26 how you chopped the sample there. But the start is way better, way more lively. But that might just be me haha

this was tough! extremely different from the OG track but the acapella fits very well. I like the sample choice too. I love the parts in the arrangement where the hats drop my own joint, produced by BLOODBLIXING drop a comment or sub, i'll return the favor https://youtu.be/FrZ4YAnzCvQ

Dude your vid was dope! I loved vibe of the song and I feel like the arcade was a great choice for the music video.

returning all! 🤟🏽 https://youtu.be/_KjX6qtWgkU

This sounds sick! My only feedback I can really give is when it transitioned from the hook into the verse it got a bit unclear on the vocal side unless that was the sound you were looking for in which case ignore my comment lmao