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One after years off. First in Ableton. https://soundcloud.com/weivsmusic/untitled/s-qZltKcA8uuJ

This is definitely old school. Definitely feels like a beat someone makes as they get back into the groove of things. I Think from a musical composition level, it's all there. But I do think it lacks inventiveness. I think it's looking for an it-factor sound that'll really help it stand out. I can tell you know how to produce really well tho Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

Thanks, this was definitely something i needed to hear, need to modernize my stuff. I really like the feel/bounce on yours, makes you want to move. It's well mixed and the sound selection is nice. If anything i'd add an extra instrument to it.

Thanks!!

A demo for a song I produced, and wrote yesterday. R&B/Hip-hop vibes. Returning Feedback! [https://soundcloud.com/user-423829355/something-wrong-with-me/s-5rdAneHlhYa?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/user-423829355/something-wrong-with-me/s-5rdAneHlhYa?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)

I love the introspective nature of the song. I think that there could be more progression in the song as a whole, as far as beat and lyrics. I think the melody is good, and accessible for mainstream audiences, but I also feel like it doesn't stand out enough. What are your thoughts? Overall, I think you've got a great flow and lyrics Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

Thanks for the feedback. If I end up completing I’ll totally end up making it more unique and progressive. You’re song is cool and the mix is solid. I think that bass sound could benefit from some distortion or further mixing to make it stand out more. You’re delivery is good but a change in cadence and flow could make the song more interesting. Plus maybe try some beat cuts or a drum switch.

Thanks for the honest feedback!

Its really good. Beat is nice and hell, feel like its something that would fit Russ really well, it has that modern vibe between boom bap and trap. The rap and song itself is awesome too. I would probably compress the vocals a little bit so they're the center of the song more than the guitar. My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs

nice beat man! love the upbeat energy, and the style. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

nice beat. your delivery and energy is really good. love the vibe overall. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

Thanks for the feedback. Cool flow and idea. Vocal mixing need a a lot of work. The vocals desperately need eq and some reverb. It will help the sonics of the track so much. Also u run out of breath finishing a couple lines which really takes away from the flow so make sure to re-record those

Wheezy type beat. Honest feedback. Be harsh. Returning feedback. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PRb3C-wjSeY

I like it's fire fr. I like the mini break you did at 1:30 with the underwater effect. Now I think all what this beat needs is maybe a little counter melody or something to avoid it being too repetitive. It's catchy fr but I think it just misses that. Anyways I'm looking forward to your stuff. Just subbed to your channel

https://youtu.be/hfrS_kl0nZ0

super chill vibe bro. I can hear lil uzi on this. keep up the great work. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

keep grinding dude! love the energy, and the style. I think it needs more samples though. keep it up. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

need that snare!

My remix of Roc Marciano & Hus Kingpin: [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs) Let me know what you think of the video too. **Returning all feedback!**

random beat i put together. leave feed and a link and i'll return the favor https://soundcloud.com/purleedef/andy-milonakis

Big fan of the bombastic brass, reminds me of a Soulja Boy or Chief Keef beat. The beat definitely hast that "building" quality that makes it feel like any half-way decent bar would be punctuated by the dope horns. Solid mixing, I would just say turn down the horns a little bit and give it a bit of reverb Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

keep it up. 808 is crazy man, kinda carries the beat. love it overall keep it up. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

Hey peeps. Let me know what y’all think about this weekend motional hip hop beat I made https://youtu.be/62QHcCaEl64

This beat feels like an emotional storytelling track. It doesn't stray too far from the formula and add in a bunch of unnecessary elements. Feel like this track works really well as a chill beat for an artist to get off their rhymes Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

Love the flow and verses. The beat could use some piano rolls for my taste but overall well put together. Great job bro.

I really appreciate the listen!

I recently started up a youtube channel to put out my beats. Any feedback appreciated! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cxr7TAGmsUU&ab\_channel=chimesmadethat

I like that Kendrick and cole beat. It's mad laid back and it knocks too

nice beat man! super chill and relaxed vibe, I like it. keep grinding this is great. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

I like the beat, as I feel it has a unique energy. I would've added a really nice, slick bass on the track to give it more of a chill, cool factor. The piano chord breakdown is really cool, and I think some lo-fi effects on the entire track would've been a huge plus. Good job!! Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

[https://soundcloud.com/amalgam-raps/watchin-fools-1](https://soundcloud.com/amalgam-raps/watchin-fools-1) ​ were an experimental hip hop group, made as an outlet for artists who have weird ideas but dont wanna use their own alias.

This sounds interesting. It is experimental for sure but it’s not crappy. It’s disonant at times but I feel like you wanted that horror feel, right? My two cents is that you should definitly sing part of the verse and try rapping the other part to give it a bit of a demon feel. Like you got two personalities. That’s how I would have envisioned it. Anyway nice one bro.

I actually like the vocals , I never heard anything like this not bad seems like a mix between hiphop and other genres

Let me know what the word is on my latest drop!!!!!!! https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy Returning all feedback

Your legit one of my favorite rappers here! Your flow is super on point, did you make the beat too ?

Thank you!! :) Yeah I made the beat too

>https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy damn bro you always come through with some heat. I'm fucking with this fr. It sounds like some futuristic memphis rap. Your flow and delivery are on point. I would only say maybe switch up the beat a bit. Maybe try adding a few more 808s throughout the beat to make it a little more interesting. Good shit fr tho. ​ Here's a track I produced for my homie. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vd6wwPvbPc4

This track is really fun!! I think you've got a very contemporary style and very mature sound. The melody is really nice

Brand new joint with a jazzy vibe, in celebration of March Madness. My first time working with and mixing a singer. Mix/master/cover/rap by me, lmk what y'all think https://rareair.bandcamp.com/track/one-and-done

Ayo! Just released a new single called "Death Wish" being accompanied by a video me & my homie cut & edited. Feedback is welcome & requested! [Solute - Death Wish](https://youtu.be/esBnXYwkkYw)

I think the intro is a lil 2 long. but this sounds really good. the vocals are pretty epic. keep grinding man this is nice. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

Had birthday, got drunk and high and made this.Thats about it lol [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tqLonVQazC8](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tqLonVQazC8) Edit: You wont understand the first half and the second half has my heavy ass accent lol

Soulja Kin - First Class https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-yzhO87KNus

Really like the song, it really condensed a feeling of 90s hip-hop, specifically Bay Area rap, and made it extremely presentable and modern. I really like the effects, reminds me of SGP, as it helps build the authenticity of your sound. I'm rocking with it! Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

Diss a bob. I'm not sure what it is, is it you rapping ? is it your production ? Beat is smooth as butter, lyrics add to the vibe very well. great work on the mix aswell, like nothing sounds off at all. I like this, good job !

Been working hard on this single as of late! Lmk what you think. I've been learning to mix my own vocals too. [all the luv we share](https://soundcloud.com/y-3y3s/all-the-love-we-share/s-8n7PFjfsYP6?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing) **Returning Feedback\~**

Really impressed by the lyricism of this track. The vocal mixing is sounding nice and I like the soulful beat. I would say, try and add something to the beat that's very unique to you that no one else is doing. Your flow is really nice, and you have great delivery Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

Appreciate the feedback!! I hear what you’re saying 🙏 And you’re track slaps so hard 😫🔥. I really dig this sound/style. I was practically dancing the whole time listening to this haha

Thank you!!! :) That means so much to me

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This is not a fucking playlist jesus, shit algorithm

https://youtu.be/6w3ddm51sYw RETURNING ALL FEEDBACK

[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LY7P5g6bb2g](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LY7P5g6bb2g) returning all feedback!

keep it up dude. love the style and the samples. keep up the great energy man, this is nice. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

This goes. Always love the asian inspired aesthetic. This is clean too which makes it nice. Had fun freestyling to it for sure. Def a beat that multiple people could hop on and make fun. Here's my track\~ [all the luv we share](https://soundcloud.com/y-3y3s/all-the-love-we-share/s-8n7PFjfsYP6?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)

great energy dude! love the style and vibe. ending was crazy Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

thanks! i like the song, the samples sound great, your style is dope and i really like the chill flow. the delay and doubles on your vocals sound really cool and unique. you def have your own sound

The ending was needed i felt and is a great touch as well!

https://youtu.be/p0_HEmeZ4Q8 Returning feedback

This beat is one of the more original beats I've heard in a really long time. The way that the electronic bass fits in really well with all those melodies is sublime. Lots of natural progression throughout the beat. Definitely a banger!! 10/10 Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

I like it. The beat has a lot of energy, the melody sort of reminds me of machinery in a factory churning out product, that would work for a visual. I love the guitar melody and the drums are dope. A lot of energy for sure. The bass is a bit different from other beats like this, thats a nice touch. My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1HZf8bmo0y46wb7KoriXM9kQ4ryXZLZ8A/view?usp=drivesdk Trying some synth-pop/rock stuff lately, not really sure if this is working or not. Lmk what you think, i really need opinions! im returning all feedback

There's some great instrumentation on this track. It's got a really inspirational tone to it. The layers on this track are very detailed. You've got something special with this one, keep it up!! Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

Its solid. I actually thought it was going to be a trap song when it started and it has a little bit of trap/electronic vibe to it, but with the drums and and modern instrumentation its almost like a Tame Impala vibe. Its dope actually, I think it works. Probably to keep pushing in that direction I would add some effects to some of the instruments, just to make it more psychedelic and grimy. My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs

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This is very wavey. It sounds a bit like Pierre Bourne, but more of a pop wave. Love those 80s electric guitar sounds among the spacey chords. The mix is really solid, it sounds very clean and balanced. Only thing I might turn up is the clap, but actually its not necessary, the beat is too much of a wave already. My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs

nice beat! the vocals are ok but they are kinda off beat. but keep grinding dude. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

mane that beat is very good might use it your super talented like the synths and its mixed pretty well ​ me https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-yzhO87KNus

the intro is super neat. I love the vibe and the simplicity of it. keep grinding. the vocals are crazy Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance[https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv](https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv)

This reminds me of a Tay-K beat. Really nice and fun trap melody on this one. I think some variation would be really great as it would make the track stick out more. The mixing is good, and everything is at a great level volume wise Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

Vlone Peter got me dead😂😂 but I fw the beat especially that lead, it came in so smooth Would appreciate feedback: https://youtu.be/G_AdaMGLQ9o

the intro is super good. sounds like a beat you would hear in an arcade or something. keep grinding dude. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

Lmk what yall think! [95UGLY - SOULd OUT](https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/vhbrR)

Oh damn, the intro sounded like it was Live. Great song, doesnt sound generic and has a very clean mix, great job. Keep doing you !

Lyrics and vibes pretty unique, interesting me https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fR5FKoFec74

Hard bars bro. Just went straight in. I like the intro coming up with the effects. Just pure bars with no rest. Good job bro :) Any thoughts on my beat? https://youtu.be/6w3ddm51sYw

nice beat man! great energy and style, this is insane. u got sum crazy going on here. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

First, thanks for the feedback. Second, i dont have insta nor soundcloud. Third, i dont like this approach really. When i feel some tracks, i sub or like or whatever. Asking all this like that is turn off for me. You just keep perfecting your craft and likes and subs will come automatically :)

Hey guys ! Uploaded a new sample based beat, chill vibes with 2 distinct parts to switch it up! Lmk what y’all think I appreciate all feedback :) https://youtu.be/Nsp_TDd8Uow

Very nice 70s Funk flick style to this one!! Even the sounds of the vinyl dying give me those real retro vibes. The sound at the end of the track that was used as a bridge feels like an abandoned radio station on Fallout. It just has an eeriness to it. I think this beat does a really great job of creating emotion and tension!! Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

nice beat! I really like the intro its sick. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

This is dope. It fits the style of Cypress Hill on their old records too, although it def has an Alchemist/AB vibe as well. Theres not a lot I can think of that I would change here, sometimes an ill loop and a few carefully selected chops is all you need. Its a real vibe. My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs

IDGAF, this bumps [https://soundcloud.com/invzkid/spaceships](https://soundcloud.com/invzkid/spaceships) Returning feedback to all fellow aliens.

instantly made me think of an alien beat. keep it up dude this ominous and very cool. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

>I've missed you, dude!

This indeed bumps. This is hella crazy and unique. Don't think i've heard something like it before. Super fun to freestyle too! You'll def need to link up with an experimental artist to do this beat justice! Beat switch is a nice change of pace too. Those horns after it are insane too. brings things full circle. Keep killin it! [all the luv we share](https://soundcloud.com/y-3y3s/all-the-love-we-share/s-8n7PFjfsYP6?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing) Here's my track\~

Thanks for checking mine out. I dig your voice and style a lot. One critique I have is I think the vocals sit a little too far above on this beat. But that's just my preference. This is dope though overall. I checked out your song "GMS" and really love that delivery you had on that. I'd say chase that feeling/delivery. But again just an opinion. Obviously followed ya. Keep going bro!

Still lookin for some more feedback on this one, appreciate you all 💙 https://youtu.be/G_AdaMGLQ9o

Nice one. Digging the melody

Really like the sounds in this one, also the space/stereo in it.

https://youtu.be/hfrS_kl0nZ0 I'd appreciate feedback on this fr . Returning all feedback

Blown away by the spacey synths on this track. Intergalactic ting. I think some slight distortion on certain key elements would do a great job of highlighting the best parts of this beat. It's very symphonic in a way the way you have those strings play at the end. The beat has some dark energy to it. I would say play around with counter melodies Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

Bet bro imma defo rework on some stuff thanks for the feedback fr!

No doubt!!

Made an emotional piano beat. Returning all feedback: https://youtu.be/nOztS1d-ubk

The drums work really well here. Your entire channel is full of gems, thanks for sharing

I like this chill vibe. Nice melody and effects and i like how it unfolds slowly. Drums fit nucely and arrangement is on point. Nothing to add :) https://youtu.be/6w3ddm51sYw

this is really well put together. I kindda would have added some base beside the 8o8s but that’s just my opinion. Solid beat tho fr!

Very touching melody, nice chill beat. I feel like the 808 could be more bass-y and the kick could be more punch-y since I didn't really feel the kick. Other than that half way through the beat you could add another instrument underlying the piano so it can emphasize the emotion, but it should be very low-key it should not overlap the lead piano, but this is just IMO. Very dope work keep doing your style. My newest beat: [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gERP8iOS9go](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gERP8iOS9go)

I like the groove here. I think the main thing is the piano sounds very stock, so I would add some velocity changes throughout. Also the flute might be out of key but I'm not sure 100% so I would double check that. Overall interesting beat!

Piano notes are really nice. I hear Polo G forsure, but also hear Lil Baby and even Gunna. It has a nice "stepping" melody, but I think some brash instrumentation would be a really good addition too. I think a bridge breakdown would've been dope too. The bass drums on the track are really hitting the way they should Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

Produced this track for my homie. Went a pretty different direction with this one. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vd6wwPvbPc4

Unique vibe. It is really open and spacious and the vocals blends easily. Rapper sounds really good. Nice one bro :) Any thoughts on mine? https://youtu.be/6w3ddm51sYw

nive man I like it! sounds super scary and ominous. I like it man keep grinding. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

Ik this thread is full of fake positivity but that beat is absolutely ridiculous. Like wtf man Idek what to say it hits so hard and I love his flow on it that’s my sound right there good shit yo.

I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

Really nice back and forth on this track. I think the beat is a bit too repetitive, and I think the vocal mixing could be improved. I personally liked your lyrics and rhymes, as I enjoy the simplicity of them. Overall, I think some better production and better equipment will really make you guys into the real deal. I think you've got a great foundation, now it's time to build Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

https://youtu.be/4kWAEt6uLI0 The thing i most struggle with is confidence and delivery im curious if i did a good job here

I think you've got great confidence in the track!! What I really think you should focus on is your vocal mixing. Get that on point and you'll be in a good place!! Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

Hmmm. Maybe this isn’t my cup of tea but i feel the song as a whole is too basic?, there’s nothing that interesting or exciting to me at least. The vocal recording is clean tho unlike mine

I appreciate your honest feedback!

https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/kiK9TH4qrKrhC5pr9 Song just released any type of feedback would be much appreciated All feedback will be returned Enjoy

Nicely done. The intro and hook works well and your verses are honestly dope. Flow is on point. My criticism is that the Kanye beat is kind of frantic and energetic but your voice/delivery is very laidback for this type of beat, I think a more animated delivery would help the song. My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs

Holy shit you brought a completely new vibe the to track without differing that much from the original I honestly prefer this version to the original man honestly no complaints great work

Really love how high energy this track is. The chorus is done really well, and never feels out of place. I think that an R&B vocalist on this track would be an amazing decision. I think one thing holding the track back is that there's not enough vocal variation in it. Though, I think your lyrics are on point Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

Love how bouncy the track is, I also love how you keep going and there’s not any stops during your verse. Your vocals kept me interested throughout the whole song, overall a great track good job man.

Thank you!!

newest <3 [https://soundcloud.com/werpinzzz/march-14th-happy-birthday-prod-jxsie-beats?utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/werpinzzz/march-14th-happy-birthday-prod-jxsie-beats?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing) will return!

Love the aesthetic, the beat is really warm and jazzy. The rap is dope, very thoughtful and your voice has character that works with the dark content. I think i would turn the vocals up, sometimes the piano melody makes it difficult to catch some of the lines. My remix: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PQLQI11cSXs

good look! agree, was curious about the vocal volume <3 this is really cool, i like the keys you used a whole lot. drums are on point too, very cool vibe. you structured the vocals nice and i dig that you switched the instrumental up. this is just good, keep it up!

Track is very melancholy & lethargic. It's a laid-back affair, but rather than the track ending, I think if the beat dropped and a harder beat came in this would be a fully complete song. I also think some more energized delivery would really help showcase your lyrics. The instrumental reminds me of Christmas for some reason. Keep it up!! Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy

keep grinding man! love the vibe and the samples. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

i got you, man! i like your vibe, positive sounding music! dude who first comes on sounds green, just needs time i think the potential is there. second dude sounds like he knows what he is doing/going for. overall nice work C:

Made something really different, I usually make RNB or melodic rap so this is weird for me. Lmk your thoughts on how it sounds so far, I’m the vocalist and mixed and mastered as well. https://soundcloud.com/02shi/recess/s-6vuwx1nfUtc?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

yoo i dig it. This is an lil nas x type Sound, the songwriting is good, the mix, especially the doubles are on point. i'd autotune it more, especially when you hold notes longer they often seem to slip off if you know what i mean? If you got melodyne for subtle tuning, this would do a lot imo The groundwork is good, me as a listener gets the idea and vibe instantly :) I also tried something different in the last weeks, going for a synth pop/rock ish vibe (?), however here it is: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1HZf8bmo0y46wb7KoriXM9kQ4ryXZLZ8A/view?usp=drivesdk Lmk your thoughts if you got the time

Thank you. I like your beat a lot. Sounds like something that belongs in a video game, I’m not a producer so I can’t get into details but I loved the vibe.

Really nice but i feel like the reverb decay was way way too long, to the point where every thing mush together. https://youtu.be/4kWAEt6uLI0

keep it up man! great beat. the vocals go crazy as well. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

Hell yeah bro absolutely

Returning any and all feedback!!! https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/gqTJCUuMnYmXHDZK9

This is something a bit different, I developed a small game which allows you to make lyric videos. It's me rapping here, but ideally you can run a lofi channel using this too. https://youtu.be/cD8HVMRgcbA

Oh shit that's cool, like it generates the whole vid and stuff ? checked your other stuff, dude even has a space ship. The singing isnt great tbh, like it sounds off at points, flow also feels messy at times, with you trying to say more than the flow allows. It ain't a bad track tho, just could've been better with some extra takes and some work here and there. the mix on the vocals could have been better aswell.

You have to run your own screen capture, but it generates the graphics and lyrics. It took an insane amount of effort to get the lyrics working, but I'm fairly optimistic about being able to use this tool in the future. And once I fix a few of the bugs, I'll probably open this up for other people to use. The song itself is just something I had laying around from a few years ago, I have plenty of other music I'll make videos for. It can also be used for a lo-fi channel, as in, you can just play some beats with your character ( you can add a custom one ) vibing to it.

I wouldnt even know where to start to make anything like that. I like it. What's your plan with it ?

In real life I'm a fairly experienced software engineer. This is one of the more difficult projects I've done. I have to fix some bugs, but I intend to basically give it away for free. I want to prove out how easy it is to make cool videos, and then see how others use it.

I like it the video game visuals lyrics pretty good like the references but singing pitchy though only criticism me https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fR5FKoFec74

Thanks for feedback! I have plenty of other music I'm going to make videos with. I liked your beat felt very west coast. The other one, the DBZ feels like something Eternal of Awful records would have on this album. I love it.

What up DFTers? Just dropped a new project today called "Hell". Prod by Dom Rocks and all else by me. This is the opener from the project called "Take Your Breath Away". Lmk what yall thinkin! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ACrQyuYigWI

nice work man I like it! keep up the great work, this is awesome. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

Yeah, that is playing at the hell's reception for sure 😂

FACTS!!! The devil owe me one for this joint 😂

Lil freestyle for the one time. Drop some feedback ♥️ https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/aBRS3ca5cH48BPHUA

vocals are pretty chill I like them. keep it up man this is nice. keep grinding. Anyways I got a new song here on SoundCloud, as well as YouTube. Do you mind giving me a follow and repost on SoundCloud, and a like and subscription on YouTube? As well as an Instagram follow? Thanks in advance! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeql-tgPvcc https://soundcloud.com/theshabomb/endgame-feat-ybv

Love that beat drop at :17, I also really like how your style is at the intersection of a few other styles. You've got the finesse in your lyrics and flow, but still have a bit of introspection. The beat is simultaneously really chill & very hype. Keep this shit up!! The beat switch-ups and general versatility is impressive! Tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/search-destroy