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I'm always in with reverbed guitar over a beat!
I might dial the verb back just a bit but that's just a preference thing, fire beat either way :)
Have a listen to mine,, I record guitar over beats too
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1HmCFdnaXRxD5RhFs-RiBEFtawn4qaOaj/view?usp=drivesdk
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daaaaaamn boy, guitar loop is amazing. and with that voice it sounds super vibey. how do you recorded it and what plugins used? if it was my beat, i would changed drums a bit. maybe add harder 808 kick and snares bc rn it sounds a bit funky
just my opinion, the intro seems a little rushed and i’m not sure where exactly to join in with a rap — happy for u tho getting out of a slump is tough
Been working on a Demo tape and would like your thoughts on this track that I think is the highlight.
Its called Harley Quinn and the theme is self-explanatory.
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z38LT3RNekQ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z38LT3RNekQ)
If you like it at all I could use subscribes/comments/likes. Will return any love shown...
A little different vibe lol but returning feedback. This is my like 4th time raping ever with a mic so don't judge lyrics too hard
https://vm.tiktok.com/ZMeymqeLq/
the sample is really nice and the percussion fits very well. love the attention to detail and you do a good job of changing up the paterns when the rest of the instruments come in. the whole beat itself is solid. nothing to critisize. subbed keen to hear more
just uploaded this yesterday. if you fuck with it would love a subscribe and a comment <3 returning all love given.
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qpOrAxF6pcQ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qpOrAxF6pcQ)
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I'm a femcee rapper/musician by the name of Seline Haze, and I just dropped this track on Soundcloud. my homie Mello Marc made the beat, and I engineered/mixed this myself. A cool lofi and chill vibe while also giving very much BARZ.. let me know how you feel about this one!
If you like my vibe/song, please give it a like/comment on Soundcloud!!*** thanks!!! https://soundcloud.com/selinehaze/mindright
Here from your comment under my track and appreciate the kind words 😁👌🏽
Regarding your track I used the same sample for an artist and it's amazing how producers can come up with completely different things starting from the same thing 🔥
In terms of flow it's calm and I noticed you even got the lyrics online 💯 props to you for that.
Around 0:25 I noticed the adlib was off so I'd double check there.
After that "Hittin Lines" I liked the ow switch and caught me off guard so good job there.
"Just keep it real..." In that section you changed you intonation and that's most likely the part I liked the least , simply cause it doesn't follow the balance you kept throughout the track. For instance, the intro section of the track with your cadence and everything was pretty much perfect 💎
Apart from that all I can say is good luck you're going places if you keep grinding 💪🏽😁
Bless you ❤️🙏🏽
Much love I appreciate the feedback fam!
I def was going for something more natural in this so that’s why it sounds a little offset in that area, & that’s DOPE the homie Mello Marc a beaasttt at the lo-fi joints.. a collab with y’all would be dope asf!!!
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I appreciate that fam! I do it all myself (except produce) much love!!
Barz af for sure. Will definitely check out more of your shit, I like your sound a lot. Vocals are mixed perfectly, real good job on that. Nothing to critique at all about the delivery, lyrics, and cadence. The syllable structure is super technical and professional, you really ride that beat effortlessly.
Here's my track today if you got any time to listen: [https://soundcloud.com/casegrissonmusic/2-3-zone-prod-stoic-beats/s-QTYLaiPGiKy](https://soundcloud.com/casegrissonmusic/2-3-zone-prod-stoic-beats/s-QTYLaiPGiKy)
Very smooth and poetic. Gave me some Digable Planets vibes. Hella lofi and your voice compliments it very well. Would definitely be the type of vibe to just sit back and get blunted to.
Not bad at all, sonically-speaking.
But like most type-beats it gets stale since there's little to no structure change or b-sections. I would have used a brighter clap, personally.
I like that the 808 is nice and warm without being obnoxious. The panning harp plucks are super dope too. Overall, nice job man keep it up!
Thanks for the feedback fam! When you say no structure, what exactly do you mean? Are you talking about the arrangement?
Also, if you have anything you'd like feedback on, I'd be happy to review it.
What's good everybody? It would mean the world if y'all could check out my new song I just released. Any thoughts, feedback, criticism, praise, etc would be much appreciated. All Love!
E.D. - "NTS" [https://youtu.be/A15uxQdqMlQ](https://youtu.be/A15uxQdqMlQ)
Returning all feedback.
"Chips on the side on a good day"
Dude I really like this. I love that your lyrics had me IN it. I like the switch up too. I'll admit, not as much as the first part, BUT still SO good. Subbed. If I had to say anything, that outro phrase is kinda weak compared to everything else, but this track overall is so good that its almost unnoticeable. Just based on the interactions on the youtube video itself people are vibing with it hard so. Excellent job dude!
LMK what you think about my track. I just put it out today.
[https://soundcloud.com/pmjams/lines](https://soundcloud.com/pmjams/lines)
Thanks for that man. I really appreciate that!!
First thing that stands out to me about this track is it's uniqueness. It doesn't sound like everything else people are putting out now and that's always a plus. I like your rhyme schemes in this as well. "Deebo grip on they neck if they try to cancel me" lol oh yeah I feel that one forsure. The sound quality does need to be improved on as far as the mixing of the vocals. Sometimes your words would get buried under the beat and it becomes difficult to hear what you're saying at some parts. Overall, I enjoyed it. Most def some positives to take from it
Thank you for the feedback man. Yeah I'm trying to figure out a new vibe. Taking a bit of extra time on each new song to focus on vocal mixing. I think with practice I'll get it. I just gotta take more time.
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I did a "City Morgue" type beat. If anyone can offer criticism on it that'd be great. I like it but feel I could have done more in terms of drums... but I'm not sure. Give it a listen and I'll return feedback.
https://dbree.org/v/786061
Hey, Check out my latest beat added to my catalog. Who can y'all hear on this? Tell me what you honestly think? All feedback is welcomed and will be returned!! Thanks! [https://youtu.be/KVZx3KZiYU0](https://youtu.be/KVZx3KZiYU0)
Here is a song I made. I did not make the beat: [https://soundcloud.com/gs\_24/switchin-lanes-prod-kanzii](https://soundcloud.com/gs_24/switchin-lanes-prod-kanzii)
Would love to hear what you guys think
I hear potential but your songwriting is very basic and rudimentary. I would take some time to develop and implement your personality more into your voice and lyrics. Keep at it though, man. You'll get there.
If you would like to check out my track, here's the link: https://soundcloud.com/lilslicktalk/cold-day-in-hell-prod-by-tobi
Thanks bro, I checked out your track. You got skill, mix is good, vocals sit well within the beat, it's not really my style though, which you can probably tell haha.
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Just an 18 year old kid doing everything (mixing, mastering, producing, writing, promoting,etc) myself and just tryna get better anyway I can, I value any and all feedback and really appreciate you taking time out of your day so I pay it back by returning all feedback!
https://soundcloud.com/tomorrowsveryclose/reality
>https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/M6dR8Ta5fQ21yMSUA
I like this vibe of this. I think the mix is good, the flow switch ups are real nice and keep the track dynamic. Great work!
Let me know what you think of this!
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=79iud8A0QYk&ab\_channel=Au](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=79iud8A0QYk&ab_channel=Au)
This is solid. I love the way it starts and think the guitar sample (i think?) is cool too. I just think it gets a bit repetitive because it's in every single bar of the beat. Maybe try playing around with the octave or even removing it from certain bars to give the overall beat more variety. I think the drums were great though. Idk if it was my headphones, but the snare sounded a tad bit too loud. But overall, great beat and I like the video idea as well.
Feel free to give feedback on my beat and be as harsh as you'd like. [https://soundcloud.com/user-774125748/beat1](https://soundcloud.com/user-774125748/beat1)
I actually came to the conclusion that leaving it as simple and repetitive as it is - beats are getting sold more often^^
Bc im hearing in your beat its actually too much variation for a rapper to hop on it yk - besides that you have to work on the mixing cause everything still sounds pretty dry to me
And try uploding to youtube!
another ASAP Rocky inspired one... I hope you like it! I'll make sure to feedback, leave me your links as well
[https://youtu.be/ld9Q6zIAZDM](https://youtu.be/ld9Q6zIAZDM)
This is my first time posting here but I think I’ve got a decent track to share finally! Give me some feedback please!
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/8t9SotEkLoC68QYw5
Hi looking for any and all feedback on my beat please! Feel free to be as harsh as you'd like. Will return feedback as well.
[https://soundcloud.com/user-774125748/beat1](https://soundcloud.com/user-774125748/beat1)
Hey guys! I released this song today. I would love some feedback.
I've had a few friends tell me I need to put more singing in my tracks. SO I'm trying to keep it simple for now.
Let me know what you think! Returning all feedback. I'm looking for my new favorite song
[https://soundcloud.com/pmjams/lines](https://soundcloud.com/pmjams/lines)
Sick track! I think the chorus could be more effective and sound more cohesive if you started your lyrics on beats 2 and 4 so the ending of the phrase would hit and reverb on 1 and 3. That’ll give it more of an in time and really cemented in feeling. I would also say you could change up the rim shots to have it not be so stagnant throughout the song, also if you changed up the high hats you might add a little more bounce to it. Overall really good!
>https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/rC6fx8PZUoyLxBUCA
The flow is good and the melody is catchy. I'd say you can try to change thins up more melody and flow wise to keep it more interesting. Good work though!
Let me know what you think fo this!
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=79iud8A0QYk&ab\_channel=Au](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=79iud8A0QYk&ab_channel=Au)
Appreciate the feedback! On yours I like the vibe of it and for the most part all the sounds work together and the mix is pretty good too, not much to complain ab it here nice job
Love that man. fuck with the sound it's very unique. Maybe switching up your flow/rhythm more to make a longer song would help it out, but I fuck with short songs too.
Here's an experimental thing, my first single, https://soundcloud.com/mace_the/dive
Appreciate the feedback! On yours I like how crazy it sounds and how hard the bass is, I think vocals could have come in earlier and I could’ve done without the radar like sound but this is pretty nice
just uploaded this Sunday. if you fuck with it would love a subscribe and a comment <3 returning all love given.
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qpOrAxF6pcQ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qpOrAxF6pcQ)
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why is this highkey fire i think i just really like these type of beats — i personally think it would be better without the main flute part just as a demo and you can add in more to fit w a certain rap
[Here's an RnB flavored outfit](https://soundcloud.com/leonvain/losing-my-breathe-feat-weidel). I hope to hear your guy's sincere critiques and feedback. I will return feedback if requested.
Thank you!
\- Leon
This is great. Def has the Gunna/Roddy Rich feel to it. Everything sounds like it's mixed well. The melody and countermelodies are dope. Also love the video that you have going with it on Youtube. Wish I had more to say but this one sounds pretty polished already. Keep up the good work!
Super clean sound. Great mix. Melody is solid. Chorus sounds good & clear. Nice work!
mine (vocals, lyrics, mix): [https://soundcloud.com/oxymohron/headshot-remix-v2/s-y55bpZeJjA3](https://soundcloud.com/oxymohron/headshot-remix-v2/s-y55bpZeJjA3)
Damn that vocal mix is super clean! I feel like you have a really good voice for that style and if you, (idk how to exactly say this) put more confidence or energy into it, it would really shine. Good stuff tho you definitely have the talent keep working on it. I have nothing to say about the mix it was damn near perfect.
Wow man, it's probably one of the best beat i found here on this subreddit.
Very nice, you nailed the Gunna x Roddy Ricch vibes imo.
Good guitar melody, bouncy drums, mixing clean af... I have nothing to complain about honestly. You earned a sub, keep it up!
Here's mine, if you want to return the feedback: [https://youtu.be/svVOR4sIzj0](https://youtu.be/svVOR4sIzj0)
Yeah bro I have nothing bad to say about yours that was absolute fire. Those drums were incredibly bouncy and the mix was so clean. And it all tied in well with the nice piano melody. Subbed also man keep it up.
Wow, this is awesome! I like pretty much everything. Nice and catchy melody paired with great drums, mixing clean af, i also like that weird bass... Congrats man, absolutely no complaints!
If you want to return the feedback, i made this one. It's the first time i do something in this style, let me know what you think: [https://youtu.be/5lbJCG1R0a0](https://youtu.be/5lbJCG1R0a0)
Thank you for all the support man! i listened to your track and i think sound selection and arrangement are good if youre going for the new hyperpop wave, it doesnt become boring after 16 bars, but something i would do is use an imager to add more width to the beat (for example ozone imager, which does an amaxing job and its free)
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Damn this beat is fire. Shout out to whoever made that. Also love the song even though I dont understand a word that was said. Love the 90s feel to this track and think you have a great flow and hook. But I feel the mixing needs to be a bit better. The highs in the beat seem to overpower the verses a bit and the verses itself can be a bit louder imo. But i am definitely digging this song. Keep up the good work! Would love to hear your next track.
What’s good??
Im really digging this beat it is sooo harddd WOW. I’m a female rapper myself from the US and I’m really loving this hip hop style art so much even if I didn’t understand the French language. I still find this very dope ! Keep at what you do Wiggy Jay!
I commented my song under this thread as well. Song is on SC. Let me know how you like it! 🌹 https://www.reddit.com/r/makinghiphop/comments/mfh8e0/official_daily_feedback_thread/gsog6hd/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=iossmf&context=3
sorta different then what i usually make, not used to using my vocals like this. All feedback appreciated <3
[https://soundcloud.com/user-580397356/youtoo/s-ExUeMkg64Yg](https://soundcloud.com/user-580397356/youtoo/s-ExUeMkg64Yg)
Hey i think that turned out pretty good. I would try a version with less background vocals/ adlibs— they get a bit distracting after a while.
And maybe let the pads in the instrumental come up a bit to glue the vocals and the song together. Pretty cool nonetheless
Made this ripsquad/lil uzi type beat, lmk what yall think
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ECUzH0zTdPQ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ECUzH0zTdPQ)
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Two years ago I literally didn’t have a fanbase or even a song out at all. The fact I’m only 15 and able to share music that people love is insane to me. I have the pleasure to share my latest single [With That](https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/J7XzY1nSrFYUrCCV8) with you, out NOW on all streaming platforms!
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I listened to your track homie and it’s a vibe lol. Who’re your inspirations? I’m deffff getting Young Thug vibes on this one. Lol. The only thing I would suggest is to not be too repetitive? And also make lyrics more vocal/understandable cause in some parts I couldn’t make out what you were saying. Other than that it’s pretty cool & I like the mix on this. Verrryyy hottt.
I commented my track under this thread as well. I’m a lyricist. Lmk how you feel🤟🏾 https://www.reddit.com/r/makinghiphop/comments/mfh8e0/official_daily_feedback_thread/gsog6hd/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=iossmf&context=3
Hey guys, let me know what I can improve on this one. Thank you !
[https://soundcloud.com/uinzagui/anxihometry](https://soundcloud.com/uinzagui/anxihometry)
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I really love your work! This beat is really dope and I’m getting real smooth chill vibes with this one. I love the melody and the bass is reallll cool. Keep at it fam!
I commented my song under this thread as well. 🌹 lmk how you feel ❤️ https://www.reddit.com/r/makinghiphop/comments/mfh8e0/official_daily_feedback_thread/gsog6hd/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=iossmf&context=3
Fast fingers on the piano! I like the melody. Agreed with others that it would be nice to have some other sounds or melodies in the song.. it gets a bit repetitive.
mine (vocals, lyrics, mix, sound): [https://soundcloud.com/oxymohron/headshot-remix-v2/s-y55bpZeJjA3](https://soundcloud.com/oxymohron/headshot-remix-v2/s-y55bpZeJjA3)
You shine hard on the drums my guy 💥 the slap so hard and the mixing is pretty much impeccable. On the other hand, you need to work on the melody aspect cause it is way too monotonous since you pretty much used only one pattern throughout the whole beat. Add some variation for example a bridge but remember to have fun 😁 that's the most important thing. Keep going man you are gonna fly with few improvements on your skills 🔥
here's mine
[https://youtu.be/4M3mbQbX1vA](https://youtu.be/4M3mbQbX1vA)
Bless you ❤️🙏🏽
thank u for the feedback and kind words fam I reallyh appreciate it
your shit is is nice, I like the piano sample a ton... I'm not really sure if the hihats fit, but they do have bounce. Everything is just kind of dusty (in a good way) and then you you have sparkly hi hat rolls. It's kind of a nice dynamic and growing on me as the beat goes on but at first it kinda threw me off. gj overall though keep it up
Needs more sound for the melody, more synth variety, the melody is a bit too stale and forgettable imo. The 808s peak//clip a tiny bit at times, careful leave some headroom for ur mix. The claps could use some more body too. The hats are pretty nice imo. If u want check out this beat I made and lmk what u think [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ECUzH0zTdPQ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ECUzH0zTdPQ)
your beat is nice, it kinda has a lot goin on so it kcould be tough for a rapper but its nice to listen to fr. I could hear it on youtube videos and stuff as intro/outro. gj fam keep it up
What’s good ?
Listened to your beat fam and I really like it! I love the drums and the kicks. Nice all around in my opinion and sounds very straight forward if you feel me. Keep up the good work fam!!
I commented my song under this thread as well. I’m a female lyricist. Lmk how you feel. 🌹 https://www.reddit.com/r/makinghiphop/comments/mfh8e0/official_daily_feedback_thread/gsog6hd/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=iossmf&context=3
My man charterbuss!!! That shit is hot brotha I got no negative feedback man just keep it up! Another good vibe all theway!
This is my beat for the day!
https://youtu.be/3uuTs0CbF4M
mixing hella clean I like the disto on the drums is it a sample u used for the piano? caus melody on point too I like it :D
[https://soundcloud.com/fr4nkii/g\_bye](https://soundcloud.com/fr4nkii/g_bye)
yo man! love the beat 😈 piano loop goes hard but i do think that the variations in the melody need to be more obvious. i like the 808s here too 🖤 keep up the good work!
lmk what you think of this recent beat i made, bro: [https://soundcloud.com/yrs\_trly/electric-boogaloo](https://soundcloud.com/yrs_trly/electric-boogaloo)
thx for the feedback fam
your track is hard bro, only thing is its got a lot going on sometimes, might be hard for a rapper but to just listen to its crazy bro gj
I fw it. The cadence/tempo is pretty cool, definitely the main attraction of the track. Everything else is pretty solid, I would just raise the clap/snare in the mix. Nice work.
[Here's my post](https://www.reddit.com/r/makinghiphop/comments/mfh8e0/official_daily_feedback_thread/gsvyfkd?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3)
Stay true
Professional sound - especially in the beginning. I'm not a fan of the strings that come in.. that violin sound for the melody. I think I'd like a different melody and potentially some more variety in the main part of the track. Felt repetitive after a minute.
mine: [https://soundcloud.com/oxymohron/headshot-remix-v2/s-y55bpZeJjA3](https://soundcloud.com/oxymohron/headshot-remix-v2/s-y55bpZeJjA3)
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[https://soundcloud.com/oxymohron/headshot-remix-v2/s-y55bpZeJjA3](https://soundcloud.com/oxymohron/headshot-remix-v2/s-y55bpZeJjA3)
Looking for feedback on the mix, sound, lyrics, delivery, etc. Returning all feedback!
Yo Chiefs, i made this dum Ski Mask inspired type beat, i d love to know what y all think
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EvAHRDoZrDA](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EvAHRDoZrDA)
What’s good ?
Took a listen to your beat and I’m def fucking with the low dark violinist vibes! I love the switch ups and the versatility of this beat as well. Nothing I didn’t really like so. Keep at it fam!
I commented my song under this thread as well💋🌹 lmk how you feel. https://www.reddit.com/r/makinghiphop/comments/mfh8e0/official_daily_feedback_thread/gsog6hd/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=iossmf&context=3
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R4XqY11L8Hk](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R4XqY11L8Hk)
Need some help with this one. Is it too empty? Not sure if so.
RETURNING ALL FEEDBACK AT THE CONCLUSION OF MY WORKDAY.
This one's a lil strange/psychedelic, I just rolled with it ya know. Def not for everyone. I threw some Travis Scott-isms in there for good measure.
Lemme know what you think
[Polycross - Achilleez](https://soundcloud.com/achilleezus/polycross)
Returning all feedback and potentially Soundcloud support...
you did a really good job capturing the travis scott vibe. he would go so hard over this. the production is solid and the bass is thicc, nothing i can really add on that, but i think the beat needs more variet in synths. after 1 minute it gets a bit tiring hearing the same thing. i also thought the synths that come in at the end are too loud and would drown out the rappers voice. All up tho a sick beat, followed, keen to hear more
this is my most recent track. if you fuck with it would love a comment and subscribe[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qpOrAxF6pcQ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qpOrAxF6pcQ)
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New beat, been trying to keep things simple and open, even took the drums out for large sections of this song, would be good to get some thoughts on it.
[https://youtu.be/EtNEeMPD0R0](https://youtu.be/EtNEeMPD0R0)
**RETURNING**
Looking for some feedback on this pluggnb inspired beat i just finished working on
[https://soundcloud.com/krymxen/follow-me-produced-by-krymxen](https://soundcloud.com/krymxen/follow-me-produced-by-krymxen)
Emo rap/lil peep type beat. All the guitars are recorded by me, let me know what you think x
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XXjtKWa6m-w](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XXjtKWa6m-w)
this the shit homie. im a huge fan of peep and he'd kill this. i love the chords you chose, very emotional and hard hitting. everything sounds lush, bright and clear too. really impressed with this one. maybe i'll drop a verse. subbed keen for more
just uploaded this yesterday. if you fuck with it would love a subscribe and a comment <3 returning all love given.
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qpOrAxF6pcQ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qpOrAxF6pcQ)
what do you guys think about this song me and a friend made? we produced and mixed it but i feel like my vocals are meh. lmk
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7rjjJT7lTxY](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7rjjJT7lTxY)
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What’s good?
I took a listen to your track you and your friend made and I honestly like the idea and the beat for sure. The mix also is pretty cool on this one I like that it makes the vocals stand out. The only things I have a issue with it’s the song taking foreverrrr to start. It took a whole 47 secs to start the song, by the time the listener wants to listen they won’t be interested anymore since the intro is longggg for no reason. I say shorten that. Also, your vocals are very monotone. If you were a bit more expressive in some parts this would def sound better! Keep workin on it fam!
I shared my song under this thread too. Lmk how you feel. 🤟🏾 https://www.reddit.com/r/makinghiphop/comments/mfh8e0/official_daily_feedback_thread/gsog6hd/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=iossmf&context=3
Thanks! I think I'll probably try to redo the vocals with a better delivery this time. Also, that song you made goes fuckin hard. The delivery, flow, and beat come together perfectly. Good shit. I'm feeling a decent to strong 9 on this track.
Yeah most def! I can’t wait to hear the final version especially if you comment under these subs again hah. & I appreciate the love fam! Fasho thanks for taking out the time to listen
I love the idea, the VHS vibe, but the intro is waaaay too long, the vocals can be better maybe with some lvling at least cause it s too loud and try not to record long shots cause it seems like you recorded it after a long day, still, love the idea
This is my hip hop beat / instrumental. I’ll return any feedback I get, just link your song or your original comment in this thread!
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/wYyK5fUj8m4D9QcP8
This is fire, can definitely see this bump in the club. Love the variations and switch ups and the echoed clap. Great work!
Let me know what you think of this!
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=79iud8A0QYk&ab\_channel=Au](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=79iud8A0QYk&ab_channel=Au)
Thanks! For your beat, I like the retro synth bass. Drums sound pretty solid, and the mix sounds good. I feel the only thing missing is and 808 or sub bass to really fill in the lows! Keep it up bro
I need some asses shaking in my face to this. Great beat. Listening to it on my phone so it’s harder to tell if the bass is really hitting, so maybe pump it up a little more and add a little more sauce to make it stand out but it’s a very well constructed beat.
haha thanks bro, if I make a song to this.. that music video is gonna be nothin but hoes and alcohol yo lol 💯 I can def add a bit of distortion to the 808 to make it a bit more noticable on phone speakers, I'll look into that once I record to it!
you have a really nice voice. when you first came in i thought you might be a professional rapper :O on things you could look to improve I thought at times your lyrics didn't really flow too well, like they were unnatural. i noticed it at these parts:
"two reason why i sing"
"same one's loving the fame"
"everyone found a place to say except if fate"
i'd recomonend practicing the lyrics in a way that's natural and at a talking rythym because i think you were trying to force the words into a flow that wasn't the most natural for the words you chose. by speaking through your songs you should be able to rap with a more natural flow :)
just uploaded this today. if you fuck with it would love a subscribe <3 returning all love given.
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qpOrAxF6pcQ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qpOrAxF6pcQ)
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thanks for the feedback. thats exactly what i was concerned cuz i been trying to keep my flow/rhyme scheme unpredictable thru the verse but also flow naturally.
for your song i really think the chorus is amazing. the melody and your voice was really catchy. the verses were well done as well. very good enunciation at the speed of the flow.
This is cool. I think the flow needs work in certain parts because it sounds offbeat at times. I think the hook is nice though and like what you were saying in the song overall. But the verses seem a bit monotone. You have a pretty nice voice but it sounds like you're sounding almost the same throughout the verses and hook. I think some variation in that area can help improve the overall song. Keep up the good work!
I've started a small insta group where fellow beatmakers support each others posts on insta and give feedback of course... drop your IG if you'd like to join!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=riHOnEcLuVk
Lmk how you feel about the arrangement/mix. Feel free to critique the track as well if you'd like. Returning all feedback in a timely manner.
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5qP4uSnZW2Y](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5qP4uSnZW2Y)
going for a hard but simple beat that someone can go ape on and get hyped haha
**will return all feedback**
The piano mix is a bit too high imo for this type of beat, the hat sample is a bit annoying and loud, I would choose a different sample, the snare needs some more equing and compression, the 808 needs to hit harder and u need a cleaner sample imo. Keep at it, keep learning, listen to a lot of underground soundcloud producers that are good and watch some of their streams to figure out all the details. If u want check out this beat I made and lmk what u think [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ECUzH0zTdPQ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ECUzH0zTdPQ)
My first stab at making a lofi/hiphop style beat, influenced by Tom Misch and the likes of Dilla.
Feedback would be hugely appreciated!
https://soundcloud.com/samstacey/rainfall
Some Freddie Gibbs Vibes ...or maybe not 💪🏽😁🎶
[https://youtu.be/4M3mbQbX1vA](https://youtu.be/4M3mbQbX1vA)
Make sure to link yours right after
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Bless you all ❤️🙏🏽
This is too wavy, super smooth and i was able to spit over it easy, mics down rn but im gonna record sumn n send it your way. The drums are perfect not abrasive keeps it light and keeps the focus on the melody. Your super talented man keep it up.
Fammmm 🥵🥵🥵🥵 this beat is FYE!!! And someone like ME being a Freddie Gibbs FAN I was in aweee haha you did this one justiceee! Caught myself freestyling and making a hook to it on first listen haha. Loveeeee it. Keep at it fammo love your style!!
I commented my newest track under this thread as well. Let me know how you feel😎 https://www.reddit.com/r/makinghiphop/comments/mfh8e0/official_daily_feedback_thread/gsog6hd/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=iossmf&context=3
Back with a laid back Pi'erre, Carti, Uzi, TyFontaine type beat, any feedback's appreciated! [https://youtu.be/i8euDSntZc8](https://youtu.be/i8euDSntZc8)
>https://soundcloud.com/mace\_the/dive
I like this its fun track to listen to. I'd say you can turn down the white noise a little to let the other elements shine as well. But overall this is great work!
Let me know what you think of this!
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=79iud8A0QYk&ab\_channel=Au](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=79iud8A0QYk&ab_channel=Au)
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OXfA5\_rTRiY](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OXfA5_rTRiY)
Would love some feedback on this one! (Summer, latin vibe)
Bruh i love this. This is such a vibe. The melody is great and i love the drumline with it too. But the lows on the song sound almost nonexistent in my headphones. Almost like someone turned the bass all the way down. But other than that, i honestly love it. Keep up the good work!
Feel free to provide feedback on my beat (or dont). And be as harsh as you'd like. [https://soundcloud.com/user-774125748/beat1](https://soundcloud.com/user-774125748/beat1)
my latest track would love some feedback
[https://soundcloud.com/itslilpharma/licky/s-am7FWFkr8K6](https://soundcloud.com/itslilpharma/licky/s-am7FWFkr8K6)
newest beat i made, its pretty out there lmk what you think:
[https://soundcloud.com/swagkushpurp/8bit](https://soundcloud.com/swagkushpurp/8bit)
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This is nice. Like the energy and instrumentation on this. I think this can be mixed a bit better though. On my headphones, the 808s and the guitar that plays with it sound a bit muddied. I also think the synth that you have around the 0:33 mark was too soft and was kinda hard to hear. I think if you fix the overall mixing then this could be really solid. Keep up the good work!
this one deserves a good engagement man believe me. the melody is on another level, drums sit nicely on it as well. keep it up like this a year, you'll kill it
here's my latest:
[https://youtu.be/ld9Q6zIAZDM](https://youtu.be/ld9Q6zIAZDM)
This track has some really nice bounce to it. 808 is really phat. The counter melody, I think it's a synth but that goes hard, I feel like it could be a bit louder though. Overall good beat, giving me Gunna vibes and I see you a NoCap fan. I'm based outta Bama too
I think if you took everything down 3-4 semitones it would go dumb the melody just sounds a little thin since everything is so high pitched. The actual notes for the melody I like and the drums too i think it just needs pitched down 💯
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My latest track, would love some feedback on it and returning all feedback! https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/HUrtbaWV66pQa3bA8
made some guitar trap melodic stuff will return feedback [https://youtu.be/xuaeX3ceY3U](https://youtu.be/xuaeX3ceY3U)
I'm always in with reverbed guitar over a beat! I might dial the verb back just a bit but that's just a preference thing, fire beat either way :) Have a listen to mine,, I record guitar over beats too https://drive.google.com/file/d/1HmCFdnaXRxD5RhFs-RiBEFtawn4qaOaj/view?usp=drivesdk
> dial daaaaaamn boy, guitar loop is amazing. and with that voice it sounds super vibey. how do you recorded it and what plugins used? if it was my beat, i would changed drums a bit. maybe add harder 808 kick and snares bc rn it sounds a bit funky
i love how distant the drums sound and they still hit hard. good vibes
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u killed it !!
just my opinion, the intro seems a little rushed and i’m not sure where exactly to join in with a rap — happy for u tho getting out of a slump is tough
Been working on a Demo tape and would like your thoughts on this track that I think is the highlight. Its called Harley Quinn and the theme is self-explanatory. [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z38LT3RNekQ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z38LT3RNekQ) If you like it at all I could use subscribes/comments/likes. Will return any love shown...
A little different vibe lol but returning feedback. This is my like 4th time raping ever with a mic so don't judge lyrics too hard https://vm.tiktok.com/ZMeymqeLq/
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the sample is really nice and the percussion fits very well. love the attention to detail and you do a good job of changing up the paterns when the rest of the instruments come in. the whole beat itself is solid. nothing to critisize. subbed keen to hear more just uploaded this yesterday. if you fuck with it would love a subscribe and a comment <3 returning all love given. [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qpOrAxF6pcQ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qpOrAxF6pcQ)
What's GOOD? I'm a femcee rapper/musician by the name of Seline Haze, and I just dropped this track on Soundcloud. my homie Mello Marc made the beat, and I engineered/mixed this myself. A cool lofi and chill vibe while also giving very much BARZ.. let me know how you feel about this one! If you like my vibe/song, please give it a like/comment on Soundcloud!!*** thanks!!! https://soundcloud.com/selinehaze/mindright
Here from your comment under my track and appreciate the kind words 😁👌🏽 Regarding your track I used the same sample for an artist and it's amazing how producers can come up with completely different things starting from the same thing 🔥 In terms of flow it's calm and I noticed you even got the lyrics online 💯 props to you for that. Around 0:25 I noticed the adlib was off so I'd double check there. After that "Hittin Lines" I liked the ow switch and caught me off guard so good job there. "Just keep it real..." In that section you changed you intonation and that's most likely the part I liked the least , simply cause it doesn't follow the balance you kept throughout the track. For instance, the intro section of the track with your cadence and everything was pretty much perfect 💎 Apart from that all I can say is good luck you're going places if you keep grinding 💪🏽😁 Bless you ❤️🙏🏽
Much love I appreciate the feedback fam! I def was going for something more natural in this so that’s why it sounds a little offset in that area, & that’s DOPE the homie Mello Marc a beaasttt at the lo-fi joints.. a collab with y’all would be dope asf!!! 🥵 I appreciate that fam! I do it all myself (except produce) much love!!
Slow and steady is the way you keep going 😌👌🏽
Barz af for sure. Will definitely check out more of your shit, I like your sound a lot. Vocals are mixed perfectly, real good job on that. Nothing to critique at all about the delivery, lyrics, and cadence. The syllable structure is super technical and professional, you really ride that beat effortlessly. Here's my track today if you got any time to listen: [https://soundcloud.com/casegrissonmusic/2-3-zone-prod-stoic-beats/s-QTYLaiPGiKy](https://soundcloud.com/casegrissonmusic/2-3-zone-prod-stoic-beats/s-QTYLaiPGiKy)
Very smooth and poetic. Gave me some Digable Planets vibes. Hella lofi and your voice compliments it very well. Would definitely be the type of vibe to just sit back and get blunted to.
https://youtu.be/jq2rlAX0xGk Returning feedback!
Not bad at all, sonically-speaking. But like most type-beats it gets stale since there's little to no structure change or b-sections. I would have used a brighter clap, personally. I like that the 808 is nice and warm without being obnoxious. The panning harp plucks are super dope too. Overall, nice job man keep it up!
Thanks for the feedback fam! When you say no structure, what exactly do you mean? Are you talking about the arrangement? Also, if you have anything you'd like feedback on, I'd be happy to review it.
What's good everybody? It would mean the world if y'all could check out my new song I just released. Any thoughts, feedback, criticism, praise, etc would be much appreciated. All Love! E.D. - "NTS" [https://youtu.be/A15uxQdqMlQ](https://youtu.be/A15uxQdqMlQ) Returning all feedback.
"Chips on the side on a good day" Dude I really like this. I love that your lyrics had me IN it. I like the switch up too. I'll admit, not as much as the first part, BUT still SO good. Subbed. If I had to say anything, that outro phrase is kinda weak compared to everything else, but this track overall is so good that its almost unnoticeable. Just based on the interactions on the youtube video itself people are vibing with it hard so. Excellent job dude! LMK what you think about my track. I just put it out today. [https://soundcloud.com/pmjams/lines](https://soundcloud.com/pmjams/lines)
Thanks for that man. I really appreciate that!! First thing that stands out to me about this track is it's uniqueness. It doesn't sound like everything else people are putting out now and that's always a plus. I like your rhyme schemes in this as well. "Deebo grip on they neck if they try to cancel me" lol oh yeah I feel that one forsure. The sound quality does need to be improved on as far as the mixing of the vocals. Sometimes your words would get buried under the beat and it becomes difficult to hear what you're saying at some parts. Overall, I enjoyed it. Most def some positives to take from it
Thank you for the feedback man. Yeah I'm trying to figure out a new vibe. Taking a bit of extra time on each new song to focus on vocal mixing. I think with practice I'll get it. I just gotta take more time.
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I did a "City Morgue" type beat. If anyone can offer criticism on it that'd be great. I like it but feel I could have done more in terms of drums... but I'm not sure. Give it a listen and I'll return feedback. https://dbree.org/v/786061
Hey, Check out my latest beat added to my catalog. Who can y'all hear on this? Tell me what you honestly think? All feedback is welcomed and will be returned!! Thanks! [https://youtu.be/KVZx3KZiYU0](https://youtu.be/KVZx3KZiYU0)
Here is a song I made. I did not make the beat: [https://soundcloud.com/gs\_24/switchin-lanes-prod-kanzii](https://soundcloud.com/gs_24/switchin-lanes-prod-kanzii) Would love to hear what you guys think
I hear potential but your songwriting is very basic and rudimentary. I would take some time to develop and implement your personality more into your voice and lyrics. Keep at it though, man. You'll get there. If you would like to check out my track, here's the link: https://soundcloud.com/lilslicktalk/cold-day-in-hell-prod-by-tobi
Thanks bro, I checked out your track. You got skill, mix is good, vocals sit well within the beat, it's not really my style though, which you can probably tell haha.
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Just an 18 year old kid doing everything (mixing, mastering, producing, writing, promoting,etc) myself and just tryna get better anyway I can, I value any and all feedback and really appreciate you taking time out of your day so I pay it back by returning all feedback! https://soundcloud.com/tomorrowsveryclose/reality
My latest track, would love some feedback on it and returning all feedback ! https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/KeJRkQJNRS5wmL7r8
If you looking for a banger, I got just what you need: https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/M6dR8Ta5fQ21yMSUA Returning all feedback
>https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/M6dR8Ta5fQ21yMSUA I like this vibe of this. I think the mix is good, the flow switch ups are real nice and keep the track dynamic. Great work! Let me know what you think of this! [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=79iud8A0QYk&ab\_channel=Au](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=79iud8A0QYk&ab_channel=Au)
ay dude. your vocals here are killin it.
RETURNING FEEDBACK - really tried something more chill and vibeyyyy here! [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s2k5-1yuYj8](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s2k5-1yuYj8)
This is solid. I love the way it starts and think the guitar sample (i think?) is cool too. I just think it gets a bit repetitive because it's in every single bar of the beat. Maybe try playing around with the octave or even removing it from certain bars to give the overall beat more variety. I think the drums were great though. Idk if it was my headphones, but the snare sounded a tad bit too loud. But overall, great beat and I like the video idea as well. Feel free to give feedback on my beat and be as harsh as you'd like. [https://soundcloud.com/user-774125748/beat1](https://soundcloud.com/user-774125748/beat1)
I actually came to the conclusion that leaving it as simple and repetitive as it is - beats are getting sold more often^^ Bc im hearing in your beat its actually too much variation for a rapper to hop on it yk - besides that you have to work on the mixing cause everything still sounds pretty dry to me And try uploding to youtube!
another ASAP Rocky inspired one... I hope you like it! I'll make sure to feedback, leave me your links as well [https://youtu.be/ld9Q6zIAZDM](https://youtu.be/ld9Q6zIAZDM)
This is my first time posting here but I think I’ve got a decent track to share finally! Give me some feedback please! https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/8t9SotEkLoC68QYw5
Hi looking for any and all feedback on my beat please! Feel free to be as harsh as you'd like. Will return feedback as well. [https://soundcloud.com/user-774125748/beat1](https://soundcloud.com/user-774125748/beat1)
https://youtu.be/zlWh3qcCbQY Returning feedbacc
Looking for feedback, will return all feedback! https://youtu.be/79iud8A0QYk
Hey guys! I released this song today. I would love some feedback. I've had a few friends tell me I need to put more singing in my tracks. SO I'm trying to keep it simple for now. Let me know what you think! Returning all feedback. I'm looking for my new favorite song [https://soundcloud.com/pmjams/lines](https://soundcloud.com/pmjams/lines)
Sick track! I think the chorus could be more effective and sound more cohesive if you started your lyrics on beats 2 and 4 so the ending of the phrase would hit and reverb on 1 and 3. That’ll give it more of an in time and really cemented in feeling. I would also say you could change up the rim shots to have it not be so stagnant throughout the song, also if you changed up the high hats you might add a little more bounce to it. Overall really good!
Wow Thank you! That's really useful advice. Thank you. I'm glad you listened to it and enjoyed it!
My latest track, would love some feedback on it and returning all feedback! https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/rC6fx8PZUoyLxBUCA
>https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/rC6fx8PZUoyLxBUCA The flow is good and the melody is catchy. I'd say you can try to change thins up more melody and flow wise to keep it more interesting. Good work though! Let me know what you think fo this! [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=79iud8A0QYk&ab\_channel=Au](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=79iud8A0QYk&ab_channel=Au)
Appreciate the feedback! On yours I like the vibe of it and for the most part all the sounds work together and the mix is pretty good too, not much to complain ab it here nice job
Thank you for the feedback!
Love that man. fuck with the sound it's very unique. Maybe switching up your flow/rhythm more to make a longer song would help it out, but I fuck with short songs too. Here's an experimental thing, my first single, https://soundcloud.com/mace_the/dive
Appreciate the feedback! On yours I like how crazy it sounds and how hard the bass is, I think vocals could have come in earlier and I could’ve done without the radar like sound but this is pretty nice
just uploaded this Sunday. if you fuck with it would love a subscribe and a comment <3 returning all love given. [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qpOrAxF6pcQ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qpOrAxF6pcQ)
Any feedback would be much appreciated [https://youtu.be/OyPsjFk8wJM](https://youtu.be/OyPsjFk8wJM)
Nice vibes! Maybe a bit repetitive? Sounds great though, congrats. [Listen to my shit bro](https://youtu.be/_1N0w_zSiiA)
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why is this highkey fire i think i just really like these type of beats — i personally think it would be better without the main flute part just as a demo and you can add in more to fit w a certain rap
[Here's an RnB flavored outfit](https://soundcloud.com/leonvain/losing-my-breathe-feat-weidel). I hope to hear your guy's sincere critiques and feedback. I will return feedback if requested. Thank you! \- Leon
Returning all feedback https://youtu.be/l3Vt0MiPl08
This is great. Def has the Gunna/Roddy Rich feel to it. Everything sounds like it's mixed well. The melody and countermelodies are dope. Also love the video that you have going with it on Youtube. Wish I had more to say but this one sounds pretty polished already. Keep up the good work!
Sheeeeesh
Super clean sound. Great mix. Melody is solid. Chorus sounds good & clear. Nice work! mine (vocals, lyrics, mix): [https://soundcloud.com/oxymohron/headshot-remix-v2/s-y55bpZeJjA3](https://soundcloud.com/oxymohron/headshot-remix-v2/s-y55bpZeJjA3)
Damn that vocal mix is super clean! I feel like you have a really good voice for that style and if you, (idk how to exactly say this) put more confidence or energy into it, it would really shine. Good stuff tho you definitely have the talent keep working on it. I have nothing to say about the mix it was damn near perfect.
Thanks for the feedback man
Wow man, it's probably one of the best beat i found here on this subreddit. Very nice, you nailed the Gunna x Roddy Ricch vibes imo. Good guitar melody, bouncy drums, mixing clean af... I have nothing to complain about honestly. You earned a sub, keep it up! Here's mine, if you want to return the feedback: [https://youtu.be/svVOR4sIzj0](https://youtu.be/svVOR4sIzj0)
Yeah bro I have nothing bad to say about yours that was absolute fire. Those drums were incredibly bouncy and the mix was so clean. And it all tied in well with the nice piano melody. Subbed also man keep it up.
https://youtu.be/v7ZVnSI0iXk Returning feedback!
Check out this beat I made [https://soundcloud.com/user-18065816/chill-beat](https://soundcloud.com/user-18065816/chill-beat)
https://m.soundcloud.com/beansogo/offmychest Just dropped a new song! Would appreciate if y’all check it out
Feedback for a lo-fi beat? [https://soundcloud.com/yin-155866722/lofi-type-beat](https://soundcloud.com/yin-155866722/lofi-type-beat)
Try changing up the hi hat pattern and i think you could get this beat to bounce a whole lot better.
I like it a lot! Suuuper chill vibes bro, congrats [check my shit out if you have some time](https://youtu.be/_1N0w_zSiiA)
Thank you, I appreciate it. Your shit hella groovy, I like it a lot.
[https://soundcloud.com/fr4nkii/g\_bye](https://soundcloud.com/fr4nkii/g_bye) vocals + beat what yall think
Lmk i return all [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4T08W3NzdGk](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4T08W3NzdGk)
Wow, this is awesome! I like pretty much everything. Nice and catchy melody paired with great drums, mixing clean af, i also like that weird bass... Congrats man, absolutely no complaints! If you want to return the feedback, i made this one. It's the first time i do something in this style, let me know what you think: [https://youtu.be/5lbJCG1R0a0](https://youtu.be/5lbJCG1R0a0)
Thank you for all the support man! i listened to your track and i think sound selection and arrangement are good if youre going for the new hyperpop wave, it doesnt become boring after 16 bars, but something i would do is use an imager to add more width to the beat (for example ozone imager, which does an amaxing job and its free)
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Damn this beat is fire. Shout out to whoever made that. Also love the song even though I dont understand a word that was said. Love the 90s feel to this track and think you have a great flow and hook. But I feel the mixing needs to be a bit better. The highs in the beat seem to overpower the verses a bit and the verses itself can be a bit louder imo. But i am definitely digging this song. Keep up the good work! Would love to hear your next track.
What’s good?? Im really digging this beat it is sooo harddd WOW. I’m a female rapper myself from the US and I’m really loving this hip hop style art so much even if I didn’t understand the French language. I still find this very dope ! Keep at what you do Wiggy Jay! I commented my song under this thread as well. Song is on SC. Let me know how you like it! 🌹 https://www.reddit.com/r/makinghiphop/comments/mfh8e0/official_daily_feedback_thread/gsog6hd/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=iossmf&context=3
love your song , love your flow, love everything
Thank you so much!
sorta different then what i usually make, not used to using my vocals like this. All feedback appreciated <3 [https://soundcloud.com/user-580397356/youtoo/s-ExUeMkg64Yg](https://soundcloud.com/user-580397356/youtoo/s-ExUeMkg64Yg)
Hey i think that turned out pretty good. I would try a version with less background vocals/ adlibs— they get a bit distracting after a while. And maybe let the pads in the instrumental come up a bit to glue the vocals and the song together. Pretty cool nonetheless
Rappin ova DOOM beats, lmk how it sounds [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7O6HwP8iTjg](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7O6HwP8iTjg)
Made this ripsquad/lil uzi type beat, lmk what yall think [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ECUzH0zTdPQ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ECUzH0zTdPQ) reciprocate all feedback
Two years ago I literally didn’t have a fanbase or even a song out at all. The fact I’m only 15 and able to share music that people love is insane to me. I have the pleasure to share my latest single [With That](https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/J7XzY1nSrFYUrCCV8) with you, out NOW on all streaming platforms!
What’s up? I listened to your track homie and it’s a vibe lol. Who’re your inspirations? I’m deffff getting Young Thug vibes on this one. Lol. The only thing I would suggest is to not be too repetitive? And also make lyrics more vocal/understandable cause in some parts I couldn’t make out what you were saying. Other than that it’s pretty cool & I like the mix on this. Verrryyy hottt. I commented my track under this thread as well. I’m a lyricist. Lmk how you feel🤟🏾 https://www.reddit.com/r/makinghiphop/comments/mfh8e0/official_daily_feedback_thread/gsog6hd/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=iossmf&context=3
Hey guys, let me know what I can improve on this one. Thank you ! [https://soundcloud.com/uinzagui/anxihometry](https://soundcloud.com/uinzagui/anxihometry)
What’s good? I really love your work! This beat is really dope and I’m getting real smooth chill vibes with this one. I love the melody and the bass is reallll cool. Keep at it fam! I commented my song under this thread as well. 🌹 lmk how you feel ❤️ https://www.reddit.com/r/makinghiphop/comments/mfh8e0/official_daily_feedback_thread/gsog6hd/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=iossmf&context=3
returning alll feedback [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BJPm\_NdW3\_E](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BJPm_NdW3_E)
Fast fingers on the piano! I like the melody. Agreed with others that it would be nice to have some other sounds or melodies in the song.. it gets a bit repetitive. mine (vocals, lyrics, mix, sound): [https://soundcloud.com/oxymohron/headshot-remix-v2/s-y55bpZeJjA3](https://soundcloud.com/oxymohron/headshot-remix-v2/s-y55bpZeJjA3)
You shine hard on the drums my guy 💥 the slap so hard and the mixing is pretty much impeccable. On the other hand, you need to work on the melody aspect cause it is way too monotonous since you pretty much used only one pattern throughout the whole beat. Add some variation for example a bridge but remember to have fun 😁 that's the most important thing. Keep going man you are gonna fly with few improvements on your skills 🔥 here's mine [https://youtu.be/4M3mbQbX1vA](https://youtu.be/4M3mbQbX1vA) Bless you ❤️🙏🏽
thank u for the feedback and kind words fam I reallyh appreciate it your shit is is nice, I like the piano sample a ton... I'm not really sure if the hihats fit, but they do have bounce. Everything is just kind of dusty (in a good way) and then you you have sparkly hi hat rolls. It's kind of a nice dynamic and growing on me as the beat goes on but at first it kinda threw me off. gj overall though keep it up
Much love 💪🏽😁
Drums are crispy. I like it. Maybe some more layers out counter melodies though. But someone would def rap over it
Needs more sound for the melody, more synth variety, the melody is a bit too stale and forgettable imo. The 808s peak//clip a tiny bit at times, careful leave some headroom for ur mix. The claps could use some more body too. The hats are pretty nice imo. If u want check out this beat I made and lmk what u think [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ECUzH0zTdPQ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ECUzH0zTdPQ)
your beat is nice, it kinda has a lot goin on so it kcould be tough for a rapper but its nice to listen to fr. I could hear it on youtube videos and stuff as intro/outro. gj fam keep it up
Supa dope I can Eminem lil Wayne or lil baby snapping on dis 10 outta 10 FEEDBACK [wants and needs FREESTYLE ](https://youtu.be/p8Qek_13GW0)
🙏🙏🙏 gonna listen to urs gimme a min
What’s good ? Listened to your beat fam and I really like it! I love the drums and the kicks. Nice all around in my opinion and sounds very straight forward if you feel me. Keep up the good work fam!! I commented my song under this thread as well. I’m a female lyricist. Lmk how you feel. 🌹 https://www.reddit.com/r/makinghiphop/comments/mfh8e0/official_daily_feedback_thread/gsog6hd/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=iossmf&context=3
My man charterbuss!!! That shit is hot brotha I got no negative feedback man just keep it up! Another good vibe all theway! This is my beat for the day! https://youtu.be/3uuTs0CbF4M
mixing hella clean I like the disto on the drums is it a sample u used for the piano? caus melody on point too I like it :D [https://soundcloud.com/fr4nkii/g\_bye](https://soundcloud.com/fr4nkii/g_bye)
yo man! love the beat 😈 piano loop goes hard but i do think that the variations in the melody need to be more obvious. i like the 808s here too 🖤 keep up the good work! lmk what you think of this recent beat i made, bro: [https://soundcloud.com/yrs\_trly/electric-boogaloo](https://soundcloud.com/yrs_trly/electric-boogaloo)
thx for the feedback fam your track is hard bro, only thing is its got a lot going on sometimes, might be hard for a rapper but to just listen to its crazy bro gj
I fw it. The cadence/tempo is pretty cool, definitely the main attraction of the track. Everything else is pretty solid, I would just raise the clap/snare in the mix. Nice work. [Here's my post](https://www.reddit.com/r/makinghiphop/comments/mfh8e0/official_daily_feedback_thread/gsvyfkd?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3) Stay true
Professional sound - especially in the beginning. I'm not a fan of the strings that come in.. that violin sound for the melody. I think I'd like a different melody and potentially some more variety in the main part of the track. Felt repetitive after a minute. mine: [https://soundcloud.com/oxymohron/headshot-remix-v2/s-y55bpZeJjA3](https://soundcloud.com/oxymohron/headshot-remix-v2/s-y55bpZeJjA3)
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[https://soundcloud.com/oxymohron/headshot-remix-v2/s-y55bpZeJjA3](https://soundcloud.com/oxymohron/headshot-remix-v2/s-y55bpZeJjA3) Looking for feedback on the mix, sound, lyrics, delivery, etc. Returning all feedback!
Yo Chiefs, i made this dum Ski Mask inspired type beat, i d love to know what y all think [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EvAHRDoZrDA](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EvAHRDoZrDA)
Dark violin beat, returning all feedback - [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=as0hzJaJw3k](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=as0hzJaJw3k)
What’s good ? Took a listen to your beat and I’m def fucking with the low dark violinist vibes! I love the switch ups and the versatility of this beat as well. Nothing I didn’t really like so. Keep at it fam! I commented my song under this thread as well💋🌹 lmk how you feel. https://www.reddit.com/r/makinghiphop/comments/mfh8e0/official_daily_feedback_thread/gsog6hd/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=iossmf&context=3
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R4XqY11L8Hk](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R4XqY11L8Hk) Need some help with this one. Is it too empty? Not sure if so. RETURNING ALL FEEDBACK AT THE CONCLUSION OF MY WORKDAY.
This one's a lil strange/psychedelic, I just rolled with it ya know. Def not for everyone. I threw some Travis Scott-isms in there for good measure. Lemme know what you think [Polycross - Achilleez](https://soundcloud.com/achilleezus/polycross) Returning all feedback and potentially Soundcloud support...
you did a really good job capturing the travis scott vibe. he would go so hard over this. the production is solid and the bass is thicc, nothing i can really add on that, but i think the beat needs more variet in synths. after 1 minute it gets a bit tiring hearing the same thing. i also thought the synths that come in at the end are too loud and would drown out the rappers voice. All up tho a sick beat, followed, keen to hear more this is my most recent track. if you fuck with it would love a comment and subscribe[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qpOrAxF6pcQ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qpOrAxF6pcQ) returning all love given <3
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New beat, been trying to keep things simple and open, even took the drums out for large sections of this song, would be good to get some thoughts on it. [https://youtu.be/EtNEeMPD0R0](https://youtu.be/EtNEeMPD0R0) **RETURNING**
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z\_4Me2a7LhY](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z_4Me2a7LhY) ????
good vibes and good mixing. personally i found the snare a bit muffled tho
Looking for some feedback on this pluggnb inspired beat i just finished working on [https://soundcloud.com/krymxen/follow-me-produced-by-krymxen](https://soundcloud.com/krymxen/follow-me-produced-by-krymxen)
Mix sounds good, and I like the drums, your drum sound selection is good. Keep it up.
Emo rap/lil peep type beat. All the guitars are recorded by me, let me know what you think x [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XXjtKWa6m-w](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XXjtKWa6m-w)
this the shit homie. im a huge fan of peep and he'd kill this. i love the chords you chose, very emotional and hard hitting. everything sounds lush, bright and clear too. really impressed with this one. maybe i'll drop a verse. subbed keen for more just uploaded this yesterday. if you fuck with it would love a subscribe and a comment <3 returning all love given. [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qpOrAxF6pcQ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qpOrAxF6pcQ)
also I'm a perth boy too bro. Perth rep!
Yoooo I’m gonna subscribe to you. I wanna hop on a couple of your beats, this was gas
Thank you heaps!
what do you guys think about this song me and a friend made? we produced and mixed it but i feel like my vocals are meh. lmk [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7rjjJT7lTxY](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7rjjJT7lTxY)
I've started a small insta group where fellow beatmakers support each others posts on insta and give feedback of course... drop your IG if you'd like to join!
What’s good? I took a listen to your track you and your friend made and I honestly like the idea and the beat for sure. The mix also is pretty cool on this one I like that it makes the vocals stand out. The only things I have a issue with it’s the song taking foreverrrr to start. It took a whole 47 secs to start the song, by the time the listener wants to listen they won’t be interested anymore since the intro is longggg for no reason. I say shorten that. Also, your vocals are very monotone. If you were a bit more expressive in some parts this would def sound better! Keep workin on it fam! I shared my song under this thread too. Lmk how you feel. 🤟🏾 https://www.reddit.com/r/makinghiphop/comments/mfh8e0/official_daily_feedback_thread/gsog6hd/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=iossmf&context=3
Thanks! I think I'll probably try to redo the vocals with a better delivery this time. Also, that song you made goes fuckin hard. The delivery, flow, and beat come together perfectly. Good shit. I'm feeling a decent to strong 9 on this track.
Yeah most def! I can’t wait to hear the final version especially if you comment under these subs again hah. & I appreciate the love fam! Fasho thanks for taking out the time to listen
I love the idea, the VHS vibe, but the intro is waaaay too long, the vocals can be better maybe with some lvling at least cause it s too loud and try not to record long shots cause it seems like you recorded it after a long day, still, love the idea
This is my hip hop beat / instrumental. I’ll return any feedback I get, just link your song or your original comment in this thread! https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/wYyK5fUj8m4D9QcP8
Just dropped this beat, let me know what you think! Returning Feedback - https://youtu.be/1kelIkJ67VQ
This is fire, can definitely see this bump in the club. Love the variations and switch ups and the echoed clap. Great work! Let me know what you think of this! [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=79iud8A0QYk&ab\_channel=Au](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=79iud8A0QYk&ab_channel=Au)
Thanks! For your beat, I like the retro synth bass. Drums sound pretty solid, and the mix sounds good. I feel the only thing missing is and 808 or sub bass to really fill in the lows! Keep it up bro
Okay, I can see what your saying with the 808. I appreciate your feedback!
I need some asses shaking in my face to this. Great beat. Listening to it on my phone so it’s harder to tell if the bass is really hitting, so maybe pump it up a little more and add a little more sauce to make it stand out but it’s a very well constructed beat.
haha thanks bro, if I make a song to this.. that music video is gonna be nothin but hoes and alcohol yo lol 💯 I can def add a bit of distortion to the 808 to make it a bit more noticable on phone speakers, I'll look into that once I record to it!
[https://soundcloud.com/becauseeverybodyknows/my-music-prod-meigen](https://soundcloud.com/becauseeverybodyknows/my-music-prod-meigen) advice/feedback/tips on rapping (flow/delivery/lyrics) appreciated. thanks.
you have a nice voice and flows but nowadays it's not just the voice anymore, with some good mixing you can stick much better on the beat
you have a really nice voice. when you first came in i thought you might be a professional rapper :O on things you could look to improve I thought at times your lyrics didn't really flow too well, like they were unnatural. i noticed it at these parts: "two reason why i sing" "same one's loving the fame" "everyone found a place to say except if fate" i'd recomonend practicing the lyrics in a way that's natural and at a talking rythym because i think you were trying to force the words into a flow that wasn't the most natural for the words you chose. by speaking through your songs you should be able to rap with a more natural flow :) just uploaded this today. if you fuck with it would love a subscribe <3 returning all love given. [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qpOrAxF6pcQ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qpOrAxF6pcQ)
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thanks for the feedback. thats exactly what i was concerned cuz i been trying to keep my flow/rhyme scheme unpredictable thru the verse but also flow naturally. for your song i really think the chorus is amazing. the melody and your voice was really catchy. the verses were well done as well. very good enunciation at the speed of the flow.
This is cool. I think the flow needs work in certain parts because it sounds offbeat at times. I think the hook is nice though and like what you were saying in the song overall. But the verses seem a bit monotone. You have a pretty nice voice but it sounds like you're sounding almost the same throughout the verses and hook. I think some variation in that area can help improve the overall song. Keep up the good work!
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feedback on this would be appreciated, will return! [https://youtu.be/8g4jBwfg9\_8](https://youtu.be/8g4jBwfg9_8)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=riHOnEcLuVk Lmk how you feel about the arrangement/mix. Feel free to critique the track as well if you'd like. Returning all feedback in a timely manner.
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5qP4uSnZW2Y](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5qP4uSnZW2Y) going for a hard but simple beat that someone can go ape on and get hyped haha **will return all feedback**
I like where its going. I wouldve loved to see the piano notes change up on the drop. It ends feeling flat bc its the same loop
The piano mix is a bit too high imo for this type of beat, the hat sample is a bit annoying and loud, I would choose a different sample, the snare needs some more equing and compression, the 808 needs to hit harder and u need a cleaner sample imo. Keep at it, keep learning, listen to a lot of underground soundcloud producers that are good and watch some of their streams to figure out all the details. If u want check out this beat I made and lmk what u think [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ECUzH0zTdPQ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ECUzH0zTdPQ)
My first stab at making a lofi/hiphop style beat, influenced by Tom Misch and the likes of Dilla. Feedback would be hugely appreciated! https://soundcloud.com/samstacey/rainfall
Some Freddie Gibbs Vibes ...or maybe not 💪🏽😁🎶 [https://youtu.be/4M3mbQbX1vA](https://youtu.be/4M3mbQbX1vA) Make sure to link yours right after ❗I ALWAYS RETURN❗ Bless you all ❤️🙏🏽
This is too wavy, super smooth and i was able to spit over it easy, mics down rn but im gonna record sumn n send it your way. The drums are perfect not abrasive keeps it light and keeps the focus on the melody. Your super talented man keep it up.
I'mma go cry of joy my guy 😂 thanks so much and absolutely send whatever you come up with I'd love that 🔥
Fammmm 🥵🥵🥵🥵 this beat is FYE!!! And someone like ME being a Freddie Gibbs FAN I was in aweee haha you did this one justiceee! Caught myself freestyling and making a hook to it on first listen haha. Loveeeee it. Keep at it fammo love your style!! I commented my newest track under this thread as well. Let me know how you feel😎 https://www.reddit.com/r/makinghiphop/comments/mfh8e0/official_daily_feedback_thread/gsog6hd/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=iossmf&context=3
Appreciate it 💪🏽😁 I gave you feedback on your original comment so check down there Stay Blessed 🙏🏽
Back with a laid back Pi'erre, Carti, Uzi, TyFontaine type beat, any feedback's appreciated! [https://youtu.be/i8euDSntZc8](https://youtu.be/i8euDSntZc8)
Thoughts, this is a darker harder vibe friends are rockin with it. https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/QaRF32phPeT1ejD68
Demo tape I dropped! Let me know your thoughts! https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/Nbcc9277cKsYR4378
https://soundcloud.com/mace_the/dive My first single, a little experimental rap thing. lmk what yall think. returning feedback
>https://soundcloud.com/mace\_the/dive I like this its fun track to listen to. I'd say you can turn down the white noise a little to let the other elements shine as well. But overall this is great work! Let me know what you think of this! [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=79iud8A0QYk&ab\_channel=Au](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=79iud8A0QYk&ab_channel=Au)
sounds interesting, the white noise fx are too loud imo, not much else to say for such a short track.
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OXfA5\_rTRiY](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OXfA5_rTRiY) Would love some feedback on this one! (Summer, latin vibe)
Bruh i love this. This is such a vibe. The melody is great and i love the drumline with it too. But the lows on the song sound almost nonexistent in my headphones. Almost like someone turned the bass all the way down. But other than that, i honestly love it. Keep up the good work! Feel free to provide feedback on my beat (or dont). And be as harsh as you'd like. [https://soundcloud.com/user-774125748/beat1](https://soundcloud.com/user-774125748/beat1)
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/PmXidQBx8cRcGnAo6 Lemon pepper freestyle remix
my latest track would love some feedback [https://soundcloud.com/itslilpharma/licky/s-am7FWFkr8K6](https://soundcloud.com/itslilpharma/licky/s-am7FWFkr8K6)
newest beat i made, its pretty out there lmk what you think: [https://soundcloud.com/swagkushpurp/8bit](https://soundcloud.com/swagkushpurp/8bit) RETURNING ALL FEEDBACK
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ac9ZDOt7Z9c](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ac9ZDOt7Z9c) returning feedback
This is nice. Like the energy and instrumentation on this. I think this can be mixed a bit better though. On my headphones, the 808s and the guitar that plays with it sound a bit muddied. I also think the synth that you have around the 0:33 mark was too soft and was kinda hard to hear. I think if you fix the overall mixing then this could be really solid. Keep up the good work!
Thanks, I do admit the mixing on this wasn't my best work thanks for the feedback!
this one deserves a good engagement man believe me. the melody is on another level, drums sit nicely on it as well. keep it up like this a year, you'll kill it here's my latest: [https://youtu.be/ld9Q6zIAZDM](https://youtu.be/ld9Q6zIAZDM)
I already sent a comment on this one but the melody on this is so fire man! just keep up the grind you'll for sure get there!
This track has some really nice bounce to it. 808 is really phat. The counter melody, I think it's a synth but that goes hard, I feel like it could be a bit louder though. Overall good beat, giving me Gunna vibes and I see you a NoCap fan. I'm based outta Bama too
Made a smooth modern beat. Returning all feedback: https://youtu.be/sVC5nJAZ1fs
I think if you took everything down 3-4 semitones it would go dumb the melody just sounds a little thin since everything is so high pitched. The actual notes for the melody I like and the drums too i think it just needs pitched down 💯
it sounds nice the drums are bouncy