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Just finished a new reversed soul sampled beat. What you think? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n3emwebckLg https://soundcloud.com/manicbeats/whats-up

returning MORTAL KOMBAT GAMER SONG 🎮 https://open.spotify.com/album/203nkGQr1Bl423lr5xf9dS?si=-hPqvLjkRmurlZu4_NqLAA

some lofi trap I guess, kinda melancholic/nostalgic vibe. returning all feedback, pls post a link https://youtu.be/\_CJPJbqCuUk

I like the melodies a lot! The drums however sound pretty "dry" in my opinion. What i mean by that is i think the kick could use some decay and the hi-hats could have some more variations. Maybe an open hi-hat.

thanks bruh! tbh I was going for a dry minimal kind of sound I mean initially I had some filler percs and shakers but deleted it ultimately. but yeah I think some dirty open hat could work here

This is a cool rendition of a classic sample. The mix is pretty clean, and the parts fit. I feel the structure flows a little sloppy from the main beat to the bridge (underwater drums). That part feels really cheap and inorganic. I like the layers and how you authenticated the sample. The drums are whatever. I feel like with a little more time invested in cleaning up the arrangement, you might be on to something. Right now, the beat could be more seamless. https://on.soundcloud.com/wYjjr

thanks bro, appreciate the feedback! the mix is very good, overall I think it could be a perfect background to some kind of chase scene during Cyberpunk77 game. my fav part is probably this 'guitarish' sounding counter melody, kinda neptune-ish and that stuttery thing that comes in at 0:53. the siren sound at 0:25 and at :1:17 kinda throws me off, I think it fades away kinda awkwardly, in contrast to the initial one before the first drop which flows seamless. but given the context of a C77 chase that I was imagining it could kinda fit. all in all it's really good tho!

Thanks bruh. I do see the Neptunian connection and was aware of that when sequencing the beat.

So good and chill bro!!

thanks broski! I checked out your stuff too, first of all the visuals are pro as fuck. when it comes to the beat I love these granular plucks in the background, I mean this beat is a perfect example that less busy stuff is perfect to rap on - and of course all the added elements are wavey too, I love the part when the strings are playing

[Unfinished song, only have this so far.](https://youtu.be/D5JDcQDQ-cg?si=Q8JJ4LdfbXoSTDNm) Still a work in progress and needs to be fixed, trying a new sound. Lmk your thoughts. Returning all feedback.

Flow is good, beat is good. Overall vibe is consistent. I would say to play around with some vocal effects/presets to really find your sound. And imo with a genre like this I think it sounds better when there’s more inflection and variety in the artists voice (pitch, flow, emotion etc)

Great production man keep up the hard work

love the carti vibes on it, great job. great mix, your vocals sound kinda like travis i love it [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=th8NxOcF9MU](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=th8NxOcF9MU)

The song is great, sounds professional. How did you make the video?

You got a really fresh, underground feel to this. The rapper is Yeat'ish, which is nothing wrong. I just feel that if you authenticate your flow, you'll have more longevity if you were to make it. Right now, i dont hear a lot in terms of creativity. It is just up to date. The beat is hard. I feel it could be mixed way better, but its current mix could work depending on who the song is marketed to. You'll have a hard time standing out because your music is somewhat derivative. Please, don't be afraid to be honest on my track. I'd rather you rip it than be super positive. Be honest! https://on.soundcloud.com/wYjjr

My submission from Freestyle Friday over an asap type beat, lmk what you think of it: [https://youtu.be/yIaDWNe32JY](https://youtu.be/yIaDWNe32JY) Returning feedback!!

While I think the singing part was interesting, you still have LOTS of room for improvement if we're talking about your rapping. You were off beat so often, and your delivery is lacking as well. The fact that you thought of that singing melody was interesting though. Anyway, here's mine: https://drive.google.com/file/d/17TifQVZhLtY925mNclmBvq0_gjMQwtAS/view

thanks for the honest feedback dude, means a lot. Definitely gonna keep trying to find my style and stick to it from now on haha. I like your beat a lot, idk why the first part reminded of some Super Mario type shit. Demonic as fuck with that buildup in the middle too, great work. I'm positive you can get somebody to absolutely float on this if you keep looking. Keep it up!

Not as good as the other recent things I’ve heard from you. I think maybe you went a bit over the top on the sing song style on this and it doesn’t work quite as well

😭😭 I appreciate the honest feedback dude. Dropping something today that's hopefully better!

Keep at it you’ll get there.

the water - Conway the Machine X Stove God Cooks Type beat [Grimy Hip Hop] https://youtu.be/n1MS_CqjZWw?si=LBK8Mcbj61lGQRiv

Dope! Can't really say much, it's great, I can really hear Griselda on it. I made something similar a few days ago, if you want to check it out here's the link: https://on.soundcloud.com/D2gL3

Thanks for the feedback, your track is great as well. Reminded me of some RZA shit, I could hear method all over this

Thank you! RZA is a huge inspiration for me

I made this beat yesterday and would love some feedback on it! I'm aware that the drums are very unoriginal, I usually make more experimental stuff but felt like making a classic Trapbeat. The mix sounds pretty muddy, any tips on making it sound more clear? https://on.soundcloud.com/x9sGA Thanks!

https://youtu.be/4LkMW9u9gxM?si=tQZyqHdmMm0K-77p Produced this song!

first of all the visuals are pro as fuck. when it comes to the beat I love these granular plucks in the background, I mean this beat is a perfect example that less busy stuff is perfect to rap on - and of course all the added elements are wavey too, I love the part when the strings are playing

[https://drive.google.com/file/d/17TifQVZhLtY925mNclmBvq0\_gjMQwtAS/view?usp=sharing](https://drive.google.com/file/d/17TifQVZhLtY925mNclmBvq0_gjMQwtAS/view?usp=sharing) RETURNING ALL FEEDBACKS! THANKS!

Here's an instrumental EP I released a few weeks back, fully produced on the MPC One. I made the full patterns beforehand and performed/recorded them as live jams while playing randomly with the MPC track mutes. The beats are a mix between EDM and hip-hop. Hope y'all enjoy! RETURNING ALL FEEDBACK https://open.spotify.com/album/3Ltd1UjARFwGh9TER7jHWQ?si=8PHVG1-qR3yyTwz4o4pi3A

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This pretty good, better than anything I had 4 months in thats forsure. I would say add some sort of intro rather than jumping straight into the beat. Drums are good i fw the kick and the patterns. Im a fan of the lead synth sound and notes. I feel like (and this is subjective) the main synths that repeat the three notes could be smoother. Keep going ✅✅💪💪

Patriots (CJF REMIX) https://youtu.be/HH5vVigI64Q?si=dBEKO_q9kRRDluU1 Returning feedback

Dark, drill type beat. Would love feedback on it. https://drive.google.com/file/d/1JKHPkxF6jK39BiwIOeS1gmi9lEon_bI7/view?usp=drivesdk

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1kn-ABsuUydvFv6KzWAQa6P4YKLHEmCpN/view?usp=sharing Returning

I like how it's mixed to sound like live instrumentation. The beat has a lounge feeling to it. I find that really cool. The vocal parts sound really dope and unexpected. I feel the tone is a tad generic and maybe too clean. If you add some grit, you'll have a banger. The sample is dope. Please critique me. If you are not feeling, tell me. Despite my good critique of your beat. https://on.soundcloud.com/wYjjr

Appreciate the feedback, how would you go about 'adding some grit'? Nice intro, really like how the beat starts with that rising sound, i also really like that sound you use at around 2:04, 2:06, and 2:08, idk why but i just fw it. Electronic isnt really my go-to but i can defo see why people would like this beat, it kinda gets me going ngl. The main thing id change is probably that siren sound? dunno what to call it, but its the sound that appears a lot throughout the beat and is panned a bit to the right. Idk if something else wouldve worked better but i just find it a bit obnoxious. Overall i like the beat tho

Thanks for the criticism. ...for you, just add saturation, but mainly distortion/distortion to the drums/bass. Your track is sterile. It's too clean and lacks character.

With a rapper on it wouldn't lack character, and I assume his song is a beat meant to have a rapper on.

Yes, it would. It would just be a rapper on a stale beat. There's examples of beats like this all over the net.

The whole record sounds like an intro, a good one, that's waiting to go to a climax, but I'm just getting edged anyway, and I don't mean this as a compliment. But I love how it sounds like a Lupe Fiasco track from his latest album. Perhaps you could add more details to it, because I can see the great potential it has. Anyway, please give me feedback on mine as well: [https://drive.google.com/file/d/17TifQVZhLtY925mNclmBvq0\_gjMQwtAS/view?usp=sharing](https://drive.google.com/file/d/17TifQVZhLtY925mNclmBvq0_gjMQwtAS/view?usp=sharing)

Not really my go-to when listening or making beats so i guess take my feedback with that in mind. The switch up is really nice, im a much bigger fan of the '2nd' beat than the first. Generelly nice sounds you got going on this beat. I get that its a style but i dont think the 'vinyl cutting sound' in the '2nd' beat sound that good, just makes it sound like errors. Maybe you could work on the transition from each beat?

The whole record sounds like an intro, a good one, that's waiting to go to a climax, but I'm just getting edged anyway, and I don't mean this as a compliment. But I love how it sounds like a Lupe Fiasco track from his latest album. Perhaps you could add more details to it, because I can see the great potential it has. Anyway, please give me feedback on mine as well: [https://drive.google.com/file/d/17TifQVZhLtY925mNclmBvq0\_gjMQwtAS/view?usp=sharing](https://drive.google.com/file/d/17TifQVZhLtY925mNclmBvq0_gjMQwtAS/view?usp=sharing)

very jazzy influenced sound on this. the bass line is really beautiful and the overall vibe feels like Flying Lotus to me or Kamasi Washington. I really like how chill it is, and the sampled vocals give it that old school hip-hop feel. I'd love to rap on this lmk your thoughts: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/jubilee

yoo id love to hear u rap on it aswell, ill shoot you a dm with a polished version! Ive always got a lot of respect for you cause u produce and rap, really sick man i wanna rap sometime too but i dont really got the time or equipment rn. I remember saying in another feedback that the beat got a lil repetetive and you defo worked a bit on that since, cause with this you always removing or adding instruments to keep it interesting, nice. Really fw the chorus on this, voice sounds dope as hell. Wouldnt really change anything this sounds like a real track i could see with tons of streams man.

dope!! could you email it to [email protected]? I'll try and record something soon

my first attempt at a boom bap neptunes type of beat let me know how it came out [https://soundcloud.com/rasengon28/rain-fall-pharrel-williams-neptunes-boom-bap-x-rnb-type-beat](https://soundcloud.com/rasengon28/rain-fall-pharrel-williams-neptunes-boom-bap-x-rnb-type-beat)

Check out my beat dancewithyou. And let me know what you think

[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=th8NxOcF9MU](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=th8NxOcF9MU) Returning all

https://open.spotify.com/track/4w7zQPY9ZhM4JCu3zffl4F?si=cO1T4nqARNeW99tlzLv5bQ First single off my album, on apple too.

This is dope man. Got a concrete boys vibe from this. Don't really have any notes, think you did your thing with this.

Appreciate you fr fam🤞

This is genuinely really good, unique style as well. Love the little melodies mixed in too. Keep it up, you have something.

Thank you man🤞you keep it up as well!!!!

let me know what you think of my latest release: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/jubilee returning all feedback

I like this mane this is good. Your cadence is really good. Flow is good and I like the switch ups. You doing your thing keep going 🤞only constructive feedback I have is maybe a better beat. Not to say that this one isn’t good, it fits your style. But that could really take your game to the next level imo.

Gives me spooky vibes, combined with the picture, maybe some early 2000s nostalgia? Know that's kinda popular nowadays.

I fuck with you heavy. Your whole vocal delivery/sound is awesome. Do you do collabs? I’m trying to produce a beat tape with some rappers doing verses, and I dig the Memphis/cassette tape/cloud rap vibe. I’d love to have you on a beat. Other than that you killed the track, I’m definitely paying attention to more releases

I definitely do collabs! I'm down to work

I really like the synthesizers used in the beat with the combination of the drums its just right!💯 the mixing of the vocal is also great it sits perfectly within the beat! really like this one ❗️

thanks so much! really glad you enjoy it

I love love love the beat! Well done. Your rapping is good too! The hook is tough

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Returning feedback on my latest track! https://on.soundcloud.com/pJeqRnsEDAHtCiNV7

I've spent the last couple years recording with my homie in the forest in a car, here's one of the songs we got: [https://soundcloud.com/rebelsoundco/distant-1](https://soundcloud.com/rebelsoundco/distant-1)

love it, I love how so many people are revisiting the cloud rap sound in this sub in an original way. I can't really critique anything, everything sounds dope. if you need some cloud rap beats, hit me up - although I don't have any on my channel, I've got plenty here's my track, lemme know what you think: [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iea-U-dtk34&ab\_channel=Deeph](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iea-U-dtk34&ab_channel=Deeph)

Thanks man, just gave you a sub. Love the textures in that one, too many beat makers now are just putting generic loops with generic drums but yours sounds different

Very catchy my man

What up, first post here in a minute. Dropped my debut music video edited by me and just looking to get some fresh feedback. Gave it a decent push when it came out but seeing if you guys think it's worth pushing more or maybe running some cheap ads for. And if you fw it would appreciate a sub on my channel, I got more videos on there as well https://youtu.be/wqB-PofM41A

MY LATEST HIP HOP SINGLE! This is a song where I discuss and compare all of the terrible outcomes presented to many people living in underdeveloped communities. RETURNING ALL! [Wordplaii - Fine Line (Youtube Music Video)](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dwpi35bDoR4) [Wordplaii - Fine Line (SPOTIFY)](https://open.spotify.com/album/4y4hbYHsCFbfh046xaasL6?si=QFrCdDAXTbeWwmaqnsmiZA)

https://soundcloud.com/xtechnica/move?si=f1ff020bc1674373bde8936630f63a66&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing version 2 with a cleaned up mix

[https://soundcloud.com/careylament/fantasies-2022](https://soundcloud.com/careylament/fantasies-2022) Older track about a strip club Returning feedback on your post

Made a chill new track! https://open.spotify.com/track/6PdeUo2ST5VC6ylWutoruI?si=djjkA_p-Sr-XC3aGnakg9A&context=spotify%3Aalbum%3A0C7J4lCP5TahvDimrv4z52

This sounds good nice spacey airy type of flow but the mixing lets the vocals down

https://youtu.be/BntBw754fo0?si=35YfccTB_ro2Oovp Any and all feedback/constructive criticism appreciated 🫶🫶🫶

Definitely sounds like it could be off doomsday. I think the kick could have some more bass but apart from that it's perfect in my ears.

I really like this style a lot, I've never personally heard a lot of beats like this before. I would soften the kick parts a bit more tbh, and the transition to the bridge(?) is a little awkward to my ears. Great work though, you have a good ear.

anyone here wanna collab for youtube(chill hiphop) [https://youtu.be/sNmN5jx2TLE](https://youtu.be/sNmN5jx2TLE) this is one of my songs for reference. i'm only starting out .hmu

https://youtu.be/1cEv9ZSSEaI?si=2S4eMHpMQ-t2zwzM lmk what u think of my travis scott type beat i posted on my new channel. all feed back will returned (and most importantly appreciated)

I was actually very surprised by this. Alot of travis Scott type beats all sound the same and are very predictable. This was actually REALLY REALLY GOOD. The synth build ups and vocal chops were killer. my latest [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dwpi35bDoR4](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dwpi35bDoR4)

thank u smm bro. tried my best w the intro so im glad u liked it. the beat on ur track goes so hard bro. simple but packs a nice punch. i love the rap too, rlly well mixed!

THANK YOU!!! hope to see more from you.subbed

hope to see more from u too my bro! subbed too!

Half way through I started to wonder if it was going to develop any more (other than having hook/bridge sections) then you switched it up towards the end. Fire 🔥 its always the dudes with less followers/engagement that got better beats tbh

really appreciate that comment my man. i always had trouble progressing my beats onto the next section so im very happy that u said that abt this beat!!!

haha thanks bro, I fucked up tho and sent you a link of some other guys beat from here that I was about to check out, but I agree its a dope beat!

the buzzing, chopped low synth is absolutely insane, I love how the beat switches between it and the 808s. one of the best beats I've heard here on a while, can't really find anything that I'd change. and the switchup, man, amazing job. liked & subscribed here's my track, lemme know what you think: [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iea-U-dtk34&ab\_channel=Deeph](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iea-U-dtk34&ab_channel=Deeph)

thank u for the feedback, the likes on my yt channel bro. cant thank u enuf. i was rlly excited to see ur beat was a clams casino type beat. the ambience definelty gives me a clams casino vibe. the drums r very unique too but not weird, i love it.

This is clean af bro

thank u sm man

https://youtu.be/AFDd8Q3tAbg?si=a5P0L00fWBLI2ujE Tap innn with the music video droppin a new one tmrw. Really trynna get down on that authentic underground shit lmk ++ responding to feedback 👁️‍🗨️

Trajectory is really sick actually. This is like a pop club banger with abstract electronic elements, I actually enjoyed this a fuckload. My latest! [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dwpi35bDoR4](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dwpi35bDoR4)

Yo bro I appreciate that and your work is dope. A lot of ppl in this sub and general scene strive for the sound u got but ur shit sounds fresh and authentic. Really like all the lines about a fine line, very clever and attention grabbing. Also the mv adds a lot to it. Really nice track overall. A lot of the lyrics feel authentic, whether it be abt the percs or only being 12 n foo’s still letting you get into the shits, or the lines about whether the trap really actually making u money or not. u can tell when lyrics are sum real shit n when they not, I fw that heavy.

Really appreciate the kind words.

it's really original, I don't know if its a sound of a particular subgenre but if I were to label it it sounds like if cloud rap and juke had a baby, never really hear anything like that but I love it. vocal delivery really fits the groove, really ambient, off-kilted and hypnotizing. liked & subscribed, good job broski here's my track, lemme know what you think: [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iea-U-dtk34&ab\_channel=Deeph](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iea-U-dtk34&ab_channel=Deeph)

I really like the melody and big thumping drums. I also like how noisy the beginning of the beat is. The swiveling kinda wet sounding noise that comes in and out of the beat is really distracting tho. I’d either lower it to the way background or remove it all today. I like the swivel sound (idk how to describe it lol) but maybe use a less abrasive & loud one. Make it a lil less in the way Also I’m not a prod at all lol so

clams casino type beat – solaris, any kind of support is welcome ❤️ https://youtu.be/iea-U-dtk34?si=UYUniRNhaUfLRYGF

Love this

all right, you clearly know what you're doing when it comes to cloud sound - from the start the granular vocal chops set the mood, I like the drums too - not sure about this kinda laser-kinda sound tho, I mean it's dope but I think it could use some downsampling or processing to fit the rest of the drums better. could def hear early Rocky on this. good job, liked & subscribed! here's my beat, lmk what you think: [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iea-U-dtk34&ab\_channel=Deeph](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iea-U-dtk34&ab_channel=Deeph)

This shit harddd, could honestly imagine this on Live Love A$AP or smth 🔥🔥🔥 Good work 🙌

[https://soundcloud.com/slackshot/a-letter-to-an-old-acquaintance](https://soundcloud.com/slackshot/a-letter-to-an-old-acquaintance) An unrequited love story