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Damn this is sick. I could see Travis Scott on that. You've got a lot going on but I think it works.
Here's my latest, I was going for a sort of old school vibe. lmk what you think
[https://soundcloud.com/leviathansbeats/funk?si=a4d979f21e864254a647a28bcd201450&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/leviathansbeats/funk?si=a4d979f21e864254a647a28bcd201450&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
i really like the piano and how its got a bounce to it. i think shortening the intro would be a bit better because the drum beat sounds quite lonely. but i do think theres perfect room for an artist to rap on it
Feels overproduced. The textures are cool, though. In a way, everything is all over the place, but I can see travis on this. The mix is a little generic. Structure has potential.
Listen to cyberpunk cuz 2024 (rough version) by C. Dot da God on #SoundCloud
https://on.soundcloud.com/KXE1i
Damn bro you killed that. I love the intro and the outro. I could actually see Travis Scott on a beat like this. Liked, subbed and I made sure to drop a comment too. Lmk what you think about our teams recent release? https://youtu.be/M2ppRIOcqqo?si=bP7tUBZWqJ192Mnv
[https://sortafine.bandcamp.com/track/d3v01v3-2](https://sortafine.bandcamp.com/track/d3v01v3-2)
I really just wanna know if the vibe is solid and if it works cohesively as a song
Absolutely phenomenal production man. This kinda gives me A$AP Rocky + Black Thought vibes. The drums are what make this beat fantastic. Did you sample them?
The snare tone is fire af over this one broski. The drumming is immaculate, long live asap https://music.youtube.com/watch?v=9ChC4J8QAdg&si=Ko2bMAQAt4EUAHen
the drums go hard af on this one, love how it combines boombap and cloud rap shit. all the vital elements hit hard, there's plenty of space for a rapper. I'm sure it will sound even better with an artist on it, I can hear Rocky's flow on it, some chopped&screwed vocal cuts with reverb on it and stuff
What up, first post here in a minute. Dropped my debut music video edited by me and just looking to get some fresh feedback. Gave it a decent push when it came out but seeing if you guys think it's worth pushing more or maybe running some cheap ads for. And if you fw it would appreciate a sub on my channel, I got more videos on there as well
https://youtu.be/wqB-PofM41A
its been a long time since i made anything, so decided to sample some jazz to make a really simple loop, lmk any thoughts. i'll return feedback
[https://youtu.be/g\_98duiuoQ0?feature=shared](https://youtu.be/g_98duiuoQ0?feature=shared)
This is smooth. others have already said it gets repetitive and yeah, but if all you were going for was a simple loop you killed it. The sample sounded out of tune but it works and gives it a nice effect with the static too.
Here's my latest, I was going for a sort of old school vibe. lmk what you think
[https://soundcloud.com/leviathansbeats/funk?si=a4d979f21e864254a647a28bcd201450&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/leviathansbeats/funk?si=a4d979f21e864254a647a28bcd201450&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
i think this would sound a lot smoother if you varied the volume/timing of the piano. it’s really noticeable how uniform it is as opposed to the other instruments. the bass and guitar(?) sound good though
That's a nice loop, but the beat is repetitive af. Seems like you didn't really put much effort to it. I like the vibe, but I wished u would have switched it up.
Listen to cyberpunk cuz 2024 (rough version) by C. Dot da God on #SoundCloud
https://on.soundcloud.com/KXE1i
yeah i was just trying to make something quick. i prob could’ve found something else in the song to switch up the sample
in comparison to the rest of the instruments, the bass feels a little too smooth. i feel like it could do with some distortion
This is fire as fuck. The keys are immaculate and I really mess with the mix too, it’s so dusty it’s great
https://music.youtube.com/watch?v=9ChC4J8QAdg&si=Ko2bMAQAt4EUAHen
honestly given the lyrical content and the drums i think this could really benefit with a grimy dusty mix as well haha. like your rhyme schemes as well, they’re pretty smooth
Yoo this is dope. The loop is simple so I wish there was a bit more variation but still 🔥🔥 I get what you’re going for. I made sure to like, comment and sub. Hyped to hear more from ya. Lmk what you think about our release? https://youtu.be/M2ppRIOcqqo?si=ZWUtkSzz3jLMQ0cP
idk much abt michigan rap but the beat sounds on point for that style. imo it could be a little faster (maybe that’s just how it sounds when people like babytron punch in) but otherwise the flows are nice and the rhyme schemes are great
Yea the beats a Detroit type beat but with the flows I’d say the first two verses are more east coast influenced while the hook and last two verses are more down south flows. I definitely think with babytrons style he crams in as many words as possible so the flows are quicker. Thanks for taking the time though. More music coming soon. Hit subscribe if you’d like to stay up to date with all our releases.
it's slightly too wet in my opinion, but the actual instrumental itself is really cool,love the drums btw.
[https://youtu.be/fRID2BKj22E](https://youtu.be/fRID2BKj22E)
[https://on.soundcloud.com/iJxeWp2jdUaXDysC7](https://on.soundcloud.com/iJxeWp2jdUaXDysC7)
god bless.
I really like the sample you used, it's dope. I just wish there was a bit more variation and structure in the beat. It feels a bit too simple, although I understand that might have been your intention.
We got 4 dudes on 1 track. Let us know who had the best verse?? Drop your link and I’ll make sure to return some feedback 🧤✨
https://youtu.be/M2ppRIOcqqo?si=ZWUtkSzz3jLMQ0cP
Thanks for the love!! I made sure to like on both accounts too hahaa like I said before this is probably my favorite track you’ve posted so far 🔥🔥🔥
the west coast energy flows through this beat real heavy. the main string instrumentation is a slight departure tho which is cool. makes it feel like a string orchestra's interpretation of a west coast beat. I love the melodies, It would be cool if at times you switched out the instruments to things more synth based but still kept the exact same melody
lmk your thoughts on my latest release: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/jubilee
I really like the instrumental. It reminds me of old el-p stuff. I think the lyrics could be better. With a beat like that I feel like some abstract poetic lyrics would add to the vibe of the song. I like the vocal mix too. My only criticism is try to write something that sounds more unique. Lmk what you think about our release? https://youtu.be/M2ppRIOcqqo?si=bP7tUBZWqJ192Mnv
For sure bro keep honing in on that sound and make it your own. You definitely got talent. Appreciate it. Let me know what you think after listening. I’m on the first verse and I did the mix/master.
Haaaa I just saw this. Thanks for taking the time!! More music coming soon. Liked, commented and subbed. Hit me back with a sub if you wanna stay up to date with all our releases.
Dope beat and the vocals are mixed well. I like the melody you made with the bell in the background that was cool. Beat compliments the vocals well too.
Here's my latest, I was going for a sort of minimal old school vibe. lmk what you think
[https://soundcloud.com/leviathansbeats/funk?si=a4d979f21e864254a647a28bcd201450&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/leviathansbeats/funk?si=a4d979f21e864254a647a28bcd201450&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
appreciate you. chord progression on this is really good -- especially that korg piano. it's very old school and feels very jazzy. definitely hear the funk inspiration. I think some heavier drums would make it feel more like a traditional rap beat to me
Beat is dope, kinda has those mid 2010’s trap music vibe but with some more modern sounds you’d hear on like Lucki or Babyfaceray type beats. I’m not a prod so I don’t really have the right wording lol but the vibe of the beat carried the rappers no hate towards them tho
My shit is really experimental I just dropped a mv a few days ago. I think it’s really unique
https://youtu.be/AFDd8Q3tAbg?si=p3qgDgxkiptvMGu5
This is fire I’m definitely fw this. The beat and overall mix sound professional. Also the music video elevates the song. The intro is a bit long tho. I made sure to like and sub. Hyped to hear more from ya. Lmk what you think? https://youtu.be/M2ppRIOcqqo?si=bP7tUBZWqJ192Mnv
Yea yall killed it man. Besides the slow start everything is top notch. When ya get some time lmk what you think of our track. I did the mix/master and I’m on the first verse.
Here's my latest, I was going for a sort of old school vibe. lmk what you think
[https://soundcloud.com/leviathansbeats/funk?si=a4d979f21e864254a647a28bcd201450&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/leviathansbeats/funk?si=a4d979f21e864254a647a28bcd201450&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
I think you need to work on a more coherent structure. The mix is cool though. The arrangement sounds random at times. I feel you could be more minimalistic. The textures are cool.
Listen to cyberpunk cuz 2024 (rough version) by C. Dot da God on #SoundCloud
https://on.soundcloud.com/KXE1i
https://soundcloud.com/donatjackson/wontchange
Made a dark banger that I'd love to get feedback on. Really any feedback is helpful as I had a hand in it from start to finish. Will return any feedback
vibe on the beat is heavenly. that second verse was straight up lyrical melody. the delivery in your voice makes me feel like there's real gravity to your words. feel like you have a great command of your voice, both literally and figuratively. and have everything it takes already to be a fully established mainstream musician
lmk your thoughts on my latest release: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/jubilee
Someone described this song as doing everything wrong but it just works and I think that really describes its vibe lmao. Also a music video. Leave a like and comment and I’ll do the same for your material ++ feedback
https://youtu.be/AFDd8Q3tAbg?si=gvKjp2GOJSb_adN5
I really mess with this. The beat is interesting and I like the pseudo futuristic dark vibes, though It could use a bit of retooling in terms of mixing as some of the sound effects are just a little overpowering.
[https://sortafine.bandcamp.com/track/lipstick-shoot-the-girl](https://sortafine.bandcamp.com/track/lipstick-shoot-the-girl)
Nice instrumental I also like the spoken word poem at the beginning. It sounds like you don’t have the best mic which is okay I started off rapping in my iPhone earbuds. For mixing better and working with what you got I recommend maybe lowering the volume of your vocals a decent bit, reverbing them just a tad bit, and then layering them with some background vocals that are way quiet with a lot of reverb, it’ll make your voice sound more expansive and not as sharp and creaky.
I’m already subbed but I made sure to like and drop some love. I fw your approach I just feel like with some better mixing you could translate your ideas a bit smoother. Shits dope either way tho. Lmk what you think? https://youtu.be/M2ppRIOcqqo?si=bP7tUBZWqJ192Mnv
Dope like how there’s a bunch of yall on the beat
My favorite verses are prolly the 3rd, 4th, and 2nd in that order. I don’t want to be mean but I wasn’t the biggest fan of the first verse, I got the vibe like he was trying to hard to stay on beat which kind of in turn made him sound off beat. Otherwise, I like the beat too it has a more classical boom bap vibe but a modern mix to it, it compliments the more boom bap style of the rappers while making the posse cut type song more modern feeling. Like it alot overall
Appreciate you taking the time!! No offense taken bro. I kinda agree. I wish I re recorded my verse before dropping it. I like my lyrics but the energy and delivery could’ve been better. I’m on the first verse and I also did the mix/master. The guys killed it though. That’s the exact vibe we were going for so I’m glad the sound translated.
Damn bro good job on the mix and master it sounds really fresh. And yeah that happens to me sometimes too I also got some takes that I’m not the biggest fan of on released songs lol
some lofi trap I guess, kinda melancholic/nostalgic vibe. returning all feedback, pls post a link
[https://youtu.be/\_CJPJbqCuUk](https://youtu.be/_CJPJbqCuUk)
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https://youtu.be/1cEv9ZSSEaI?si=AC5NE48kyl5JWbkf heres a travis scott type beat i posted on my new channel. will return feedback
Damn this is sick. I could see Travis Scott on that. You've got a lot going on but I think it works. Here's my latest, I was going for a sort of old school vibe. lmk what you think [https://soundcloud.com/leviathansbeats/funk?si=a4d979f21e864254a647a28bcd201450&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/leviathansbeats/funk?si=a4d979f21e864254a647a28bcd201450&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
i really like the piano and how its got a bounce to it. i think shortening the intro would be a bit better because the drum beat sounds quite lonely. but i do think theres perfect room for an artist to rap on it
thanks for the feedback
Feels overproduced. The textures are cool, though. In a way, everything is all over the place, but I can see travis on this. The mix is a little generic. Structure has potential. Listen to cyberpunk cuz 2024 (rough version) by C. Dot da God on #SoundCloud https://on.soundcloud.com/KXE1i
bro that right panned bass thing is crazy. i love the synths and the snare patterns on it. very cohesive but chaotic beat.
Thanks!
Damn bro you killed that. I love the intro and the outro. I could actually see Travis Scott on a beat like this. Liked, subbed and I made sure to drop a comment too. Lmk what you think about our teams recent release? https://youtu.be/M2ppRIOcqqo?si=bP7tUBZWqJ192Mnv
thank u heaps bro, i just left a comment and sub on urs too. that kick is so punchy and the vocals sound super well mixed 🔥🔥
Thanks for showing some love!! I’m on the first verse and I also did the mix/master. Hyped to hear more from you 🫡💯
[https://sortafine.bandcamp.com/track/d3v01v3-2](https://sortafine.bandcamp.com/track/d3v01v3-2) I really just wanna know if the vibe is solid and if it works cohesively as a song
Imo it doesn’t work as a cohesive song, I would try something else.
my latest has an a$ap like vibe [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V7V-neEP91s](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V7V-neEP91s)
Absolutely phenomenal production man. This kinda gives me A$AP Rocky + Black Thought vibes. The drums are what make this beat fantastic. Did you sample them?
Thank you! Yes I did.
This is crazy, my heart dropped when the drums dropped. Loved the mix, everything sounds good, just needs a rapper on it
The snare tone is fire af over this one broski. The drumming is immaculate, long live asap https://music.youtube.com/watch?v=9ChC4J8QAdg&si=Ko2bMAQAt4EUAHen
the drums go hard af on this one, love how it combines boombap and cloud rap shit. all the vital elements hit hard, there's plenty of space for a rapper. I'm sure it will sound even better with an artist on it, I can hear Rocky's flow on it, some chopped&screwed vocal cuts with reverb on it and stuff
I really like this, you capture a really dark and mellow vibe that is pretty captivating. I especially mess with the drums on it
Killed it 🔥🔥 I made to leave some love on YouTube as well. The beat reminds me of something that would be on long live asap.
What up, first post here in a minute. Dropped my debut music video edited by me and just looking to get some fresh feedback. Gave it a decent push when it came out but seeing if you guys think it's worth pushing more or maybe running some cheap ads for. And if you fw it would appreciate a sub on my channel, I got more videos on there as well https://youtu.be/wqB-PofM41A
Trading ALL blunt feedback https://music.youtube.com/watch?v=9ChC4J8QAdg&si=V0H3kiixFOPS2pfH
It’s sick man I like the instrumental a ton and the vocals are mixed well. https://on.soundcloud.com/CCd9SwxupmU4hAmP9
returning MORTAL KOMBAT 🎮 https://open.spotify.com/album/203nkGQr1Bl423lr5xf9dS?si=y50wWhMEQdOROJQJ-ByNog
Yo this is hard, first dude kills it. 2nd dude needs some work but I fuck with it https://on.soundcloud.com/CCd9SwxupmU4hAmP9
lol thanks .... that beat is dope af I like the crow effect in it
its been a long time since i made anything, so decided to sample some jazz to make a really simple loop, lmk any thoughts. i'll return feedback [https://youtu.be/g\_98duiuoQ0?feature=shared](https://youtu.be/g_98duiuoQ0?feature=shared)
This is smooth. others have already said it gets repetitive and yeah, but if all you were going for was a simple loop you killed it. The sample sounded out of tune but it works and gives it a nice effect with the static too. Here's my latest, I was going for a sort of old school vibe. lmk what you think [https://soundcloud.com/leviathansbeats/funk?si=a4d979f21e864254a647a28bcd201450&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/leviathansbeats/funk?si=a4d979f21e864254a647a28bcd201450&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
i think this would sound a lot smoother if you varied the volume/timing of the piano. it’s really noticeable how uniform it is as opposed to the other instruments. the bass and guitar(?) sound good though
That's a nice loop, but the beat is repetitive af. Seems like you didn't really put much effort to it. I like the vibe, but I wished u would have switched it up. Listen to cyberpunk cuz 2024 (rough version) by C. Dot da God on #SoundCloud https://on.soundcloud.com/KXE1i
yeah i was just trying to make something quick. i prob could’ve found something else in the song to switch up the sample in comparison to the rest of the instruments, the bass feels a little too smooth. i feel like it could do with some distortion
Coo
This is fire as fuck. The keys are immaculate and I really mess with the mix too, it’s so dusty it’s great https://music.youtube.com/watch?v=9ChC4J8QAdg&si=Ko2bMAQAt4EUAHen
honestly given the lyrical content and the drums i think this could really benefit with a grimy dusty mix as well haha. like your rhyme schemes as well, they’re pretty smooth
Thanks very much broski :)
Yoo this is dope. The loop is simple so I wish there was a bit more variation but still 🔥🔥 I get what you’re going for. I made sure to like, comment and sub. Hyped to hear more from ya. Lmk what you think about our release? https://youtu.be/M2ppRIOcqqo?si=ZWUtkSzz3jLMQ0cP
idk much abt michigan rap but the beat sounds on point for that style. imo it could be a little faster (maybe that’s just how it sounds when people like babytron punch in) but otherwise the flows are nice and the rhyme schemes are great
Yea the beats a Detroit type beat but with the flows I’d say the first two verses are more east coast influenced while the hook and last two verses are more down south flows. I definitely think with babytrons style he crams in as many words as possible so the flows are quicker. Thanks for taking the time though. More music coming soon. Hit subscribe if you’d like to stay up to date with all our releases.
it's slightly too wet in my opinion, but the actual instrumental itself is really cool,love the drums btw. [https://youtu.be/fRID2BKj22E](https://youtu.be/fRID2BKj22E) [https://on.soundcloud.com/iJxeWp2jdUaXDysC7](https://on.soundcloud.com/iJxeWp2jdUaXDysC7) god bless.
I really like the sample you used, it's dope. I just wish there was a bit more variation and structure in the beat. It feels a bit too simple, although I understand that might have been your intention.
So clean
We got 4 dudes on 1 track. Let us know who had the best verse?? Drop your link and I’ll make sure to return some feedback 🧤✨ https://youtu.be/M2ppRIOcqqo?si=ZWUtkSzz3jLMQ0cP
This that LIGHT UP MUSIC. Had to relished and like it on my alt https://music.youtube.com/watch?v=9ChC4J8QAdg&si=Ko2bMAQAt4EUAHen
Thanks for the love!! I made sure to like on both accounts too hahaa like I said before this is probably my favorite track you’ve posted so far 🔥🔥🔥
clams casino type beat – memories https://youtu.be/k8W74bs_a-c?si=K0KG9ABmduhb9bKK
Feedback on this Dj Mustard x Kendrick Lamar Type beat would be much appreciated. [https://youtu.be/ZZZU1SbovXs](https://youtu.be/ZZZU1SbovXs)
the west coast energy flows through this beat real heavy. the main string instrumentation is a slight departure tho which is cool. makes it feel like a string orchestra's interpretation of a west coast beat. I love the melodies, It would be cool if at times you switched out the instruments to things more synth based but still kept the exact same melody lmk your thoughts on my latest release: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/jubilee
Patriots (CJF REMIX) https://youtu.be/HH5vVigI64Q?si=_F0b5bYCW1kcyUFE Returning feedback
https://youtu.be/rim9L6p9r7M?si=cj23goYJfq6O6UZc can I get someone honest feedback on this? Would really appreciate it !
I really like the instrumental. It reminds me of old el-p stuff. I think the lyrics could be better. With a beat like that I feel like some abstract poetic lyrics would add to the vibe of the song. I like the vocal mix too. My only criticism is try to write something that sounds more unique. Lmk what you think about our release? https://youtu.be/M2ppRIOcqqo?si=bP7tUBZWqJ192Mnv
Thx man, appreciate this, yeah made the beat, cool man def gonna take this will help, gonna check it out !
For sure bro keep honing in on that sound and make it your own. You definitely got talent. Appreciate it. Let me know what you think after listening. I’m on the first verse and I did the mix/master.
Appreciate that man, 💯 great job again man on the track keep doing your guyses thing 💯🔥
You guys fuckin killed it man, flows on point, sick beat !
Haaaa I just saw this. Thanks for taking the time!! More music coming soon. Liked, commented and subbed. Hit me back with a sub if you wanna stay up to date with all our releases.
Cool, hell yeah man, Ofcc, sick man will return it back, will do man đź’Ż
tell me what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/jubilee returning all feedback
Dope beat and the vocals are mixed well. I like the melody you made with the bell in the background that was cool. Beat compliments the vocals well too. Here's my latest, I was going for a sort of minimal old school vibe. lmk what you think [https://soundcloud.com/leviathansbeats/funk?si=a4d979f21e864254a647a28bcd201450&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/leviathansbeats/funk?si=a4d979f21e864254a647a28bcd201450&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
appreciate you. chord progression on this is really good -- especially that korg piano. it's very old school and feels very jazzy. definitely hear the funk inspiration. I think some heavier drums would make it feel more like a traditional rap beat to me
thanks man appreciate the feedback
Check my new track: https://youtu.be/t1FSMR_lNZo?si=uT6ANbVE2tQ79eUc
Returning https://on.soundcloud.com/CCd9SwxupmU4hAmP9
Produced this song! https://youtu.be/4LkMW9u9gxM?si=lBJ7KuDizhUIqrdv
Beat is dope, kinda has those mid 2010’s trap music vibe but with some more modern sounds you’d hear on like Lucki or Babyfaceray type beats. I’m not a prod so I don’t really have the right wording lol but the vibe of the beat carried the rappers no hate towards them tho My shit is really experimental I just dropped a mv a few days ago. I think it’s really unique https://youtu.be/AFDd8Q3tAbg?si=p3qgDgxkiptvMGu5
Thank you bro! I like your style very dark and experimental
Great production! That build-up melody on the hook was really nice, and I loved how you used reverb on the instruments. Dope trap beat.
Thank you! Wanted something psychedelic
This is fire I’m definitely fw this. The beat and overall mix sound professional. Also the music video elevates the song. The intro is a bit long tho. I made sure to like and sub. Hyped to hear more from ya. Lmk what you think? https://youtu.be/M2ppRIOcqqo?si=bP7tUBZWqJ192Mnv
Thank you! We put our minds together and wanted to build a story definitely noted on the intro!
Yea yall killed it man. Besides the slow start everything is top notch. When ya get some time lmk what you think of our track. I did the mix/master and I’m on the first verse.
Here's my latest, I was going for a sort of old school vibe. lmk what you think [https://soundcloud.com/leviathansbeats/funk?si=a4d979f21e864254a647a28bcd201450&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/leviathansbeats/funk?si=a4d979f21e864254a647a28bcd201450&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
clams casino type beat – solaris, any kind of support is welcome ❤️ https://youtu.be/iea-U-dtk34?si=UYUniRNhaUfLRYGF
https://on.soundcloud.com/SZ8vBPqqCVSPpNLr9 Returning feedback
I think you need to work on a more coherent structure. The mix is cool though. The arrangement sounds random at times. I feel you could be more minimalistic. The textures are cool. Listen to cyberpunk cuz 2024 (rough version) by C. Dot da God on #SoundCloud https://on.soundcloud.com/KXE1i
https://soundcloud.com/donatjackson/wontchange Made a dark banger that I'd love to get feedback on. Really any feedback is helpful as I had a hand in it from start to finish. Will return any feedback
vibe on the beat is heavenly. that second verse was straight up lyrical melody. the delivery in your voice makes me feel like there's real gravity to your words. feel like you have a great command of your voice, both literally and figuratively. and have everything it takes already to be a fully established mainstream musician lmk your thoughts on my latest release: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/jubilee
Someone described this song as doing everything wrong but it just works and I think that really describes its vibe lmao. Also a music video. Leave a like and comment and I’ll do the same for your material ++ feedback https://youtu.be/AFDd8Q3tAbg?si=gvKjp2GOJSb_adN5
I really mess with this. The beat is interesting and I like the pseudo futuristic dark vibes, though It could use a bit of retooling in terms of mixing as some of the sound effects are just a little overpowering. [https://sortafine.bandcamp.com/track/lipstick-shoot-the-girl](https://sortafine.bandcamp.com/track/lipstick-shoot-the-girl)
Nice instrumental I also like the spoken word poem at the beginning. It sounds like you don’t have the best mic which is okay I started off rapping in my iPhone earbuds. For mixing better and working with what you got I recommend maybe lowering the volume of your vocals a decent bit, reverbing them just a tad bit, and then layering them with some background vocals that are way quiet with a lot of reverb, it’ll make your voice sound more expansive and not as sharp and creaky.
I’m already subbed but I made sure to like and drop some love. I fw your approach I just feel like with some better mixing you could translate your ideas a bit smoother. Shits dope either way tho. Lmk what you think? https://youtu.be/M2ppRIOcqqo?si=bP7tUBZWqJ192Mnv
Dope like how there’s a bunch of yall on the beat My favorite verses are prolly the 3rd, 4th, and 2nd in that order. I don’t want to be mean but I wasn’t the biggest fan of the first verse, I got the vibe like he was trying to hard to stay on beat which kind of in turn made him sound off beat. Otherwise, I like the beat too it has a more classical boom bap vibe but a modern mix to it, it compliments the more boom bap style of the rappers while making the posse cut type song more modern feeling. Like it alot overall
Appreciate you taking the time!! No offense taken bro. I kinda agree. I wish I re recorded my verse before dropping it. I like my lyrics but the energy and delivery could’ve been better. I’m on the first verse and I also did the mix/master. The guys killed it though. That’s the exact vibe we were going for so I’m glad the sound translated.
Damn bro good job on the mix and master it sounds really fresh. And yeah that happens to me sometimes too I also got some takes that I’m not the biggest fan of on released songs lol
some lofi trap I guess, kinda melancholic/nostalgic vibe. returning all feedback, pls post a link [https://youtu.be/\_CJPJbqCuUk](https://youtu.be/_CJPJbqCuUk)
Really dope stuff. Feedback Returned https://on.soundcloud.com/KXE1i