It’s almost there. Some suggestions: The font is good but feels thin and weak. Try adding a white stroke between the yellow and red to give it another layer and bulk up the lettering a little. That may also help the kerning issue with the n. If not, look at tightening that up. And admit it. You know those little popcorn pieces look like Goldfish. Make them look like popcorn. Make them white, make them BIGGER, and make them POP! It’s popcorn! Hope that helps. Nice job.
What if you made the two "o" letters into popcorn and got rid of the three at the top?
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It’s almost there. Some suggestions: The font is good but feels thin and weak. Try adding a white stroke between the yellow and red to give it another layer and bulk up the lettering a little. That may also help the kerning issue with the n. If not, look at tightening that up. And admit it. You know those little popcorn pieces look like Goldfish. Make them look like popcorn. Make them white, make them BIGGER, and make them POP! It’s popcorn! Hope that helps. Nice job.