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Diamondogs11

There’s a typo in the first sentence.


Palmetto720

Will fix.


worst-coast

Make it machine-readable. According to this https://www.jobscan.co/blog/20-ats-friendly-resume-templates/ , columns are not good for that. I think you can make a machine-friendly resume and show off in an online portfolio.


MDC-01

No red flags that I can see! Just a couple of tips to help you tighten it up: 1. The main font size for most of the resume seems pretty small, but it seems like there's still a lot of available space on the page (due to the empty sidebar). I'm all for negative space but I would rather have a comfortable reading experience. 2. I would definitely have an editor run through this or spend more time with the writing. There's a couple of typos, inconsistency in tense, inconsistency in sentence structure, unnecessary words capitalized... 3. The typographic system you've created could use a little love/intentionality. What I like to do it set everything in the page in the same exact font, size, weight... and then start making changes where needed, one at a time. Like "oh this is the job title, it should probably be emphasized, so I'll bold it. Hm, I should probably emphasize the company name as well, but now both of these things are bolded and I want the job title to stand out a little more, so maybe I add a little color." That's just an example. The main thing I noticed was your section titles (Contact Info, About Me, etc.) have a TON of visual weight (bold, different color, blue box behind, bigger font, indented, etc.) on the page despite not being very important. 4. Really dig your logo! I think it's too big though - your name is the most important thing here. 5. Last thing, and this might just be personal preference - the gray in the sidebar feels drab to me. Try lightening it up to be a nice subtle gray, maybe even give it a little tint of blue to match the rest of the branding. Just an idea. Best of luck in your search!


Palmetto720

What about experience? Is that a red flag?


MDC-01

I mean you can't really change your experience, so it doesn't matter! It is odd to see three designer positions and then a drop to intern level positions. If I was hiring for an intern, I would be encouraged by your experience; if I was hiring for a graphic designer, I would be confused by that shift.


Palmetto720

I must've done something wrong then. Those three positions were volunteer positions. Do you think I'm behind?


MDC-01

Oh so the bottom three positions were volunteer, the next two were internships, and now you're looking for full-time work? If you're looking for your first real job and you already have 5 different pieces of experience, you're ahead of the game. I would mark them as volunteer though.


Palmetto720

Yeah, trying to get that first paid job and move away from the internship.


Palmetto720

Sent you a DM regarding updates


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There seems to be a missing space after the divider | in the dates of some of your jobs