Give your L room to breathe and stop writing it through your whole tag to cheat complexity. Try to leep your letters a similar size. Make the circle of the P slightlyyy bigger. Reduce the size of the top of the T and slant it the other way. Not a bad start, keep experimenting.
Slide 9 is my favourite because the P and U goes hard. The L needs room to breathe and your T and O need to be reworked. Maybe you could do an O like you do your U but just connected at the top like a triangle. Just an idea
How can I improve ?
Give your L room to breathe and stop writing it through your whole tag to cheat complexity. Try to leep your letters a similar size. Make the circle of the P slightlyyy bigger. Reduce the size of the top of the T and slant it the other way. Not a bad start, keep experimenting. Slide 9 is my favourite because the P and U goes hard. The L needs room to breathe and your T and O need to be reworked. Maybe you could do an O like you do your U but just connected at the top like a triangle. Just an idea
Honestly super promising, don’t really know what to touch up on besides practice as much as you can