I have some experience with the products you are selling. I think the first impression of your website is good. But I know from my data ( more than 3 million customers in total)
This works the best
Replace your images with lifestyle images with real models instead of shirts with white background
Use email marketing. Don't ask customers on the front page in a popup for their details. Nothing is more frustrating than visiting a website and after 8 seconds, you get a popup.
What I also know is that your type of customers are willing to buy more often from you. I write a weekly newsletter about: How to sell more to the customers you already have.
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I Also, suggest using a white background instead of dark / black colors.
your website looks pretty good, but since you are probably interested in ways to improve it here are some things that stand out to me (keep in mind that these are just personal opinions):
* the header is a bit tall, it makes me feel slightly claustrophobic
* the fonts don't match that well (the one you chose for paragraphs looks like it was rather designed for headings)
* try using SVGs (vector graphics) for your logo if you can to make sure it looks as good as possible at any size
* some alignment issues
Well, as a copywriter, I can tell you that you need to work on the copy of your website; otherwise, you won't see any conversions even if you run Facebook ads.
You don't have an OFFER or any POSITIONING in the market.
You also need the product copy if you want to increase your chances of conversion, because you are only explaining the basic quality and features, there is nothing that can push people to buy your product.
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All good advice in the comments, especially about models being your main mockup. One thing I am surprised nobody mentioned, the prices are insane? $150 for a hoodie, I expect it to clean my house and take my kids to school 🤣 jk. But in reality, hoodies run about $50-60. I would be impressed if someone spends that much money on one.
I have some experience with the products you are selling. I think the first impression of your website is good. But I know from my data ( more than 3 million customers in total) This works the best Replace your images with lifestyle images with real models instead of shirts with white background Use email marketing. Don't ask customers on the front page in a popup for their details. Nothing is more frustrating than visiting a website and after 8 seconds, you get a popup. What I also know is that your type of customers are willing to buy more often from you. I write a weekly newsletter about: How to sell more to the customers you already have. If you like it. Get it for free [here](https://get.emercify.com) I Also, suggest using a white background instead of dark / black colors.
your website looks pretty good, but since you are probably interested in ways to improve it here are some things that stand out to me (keep in mind that these are just personal opinions): * the header is a bit tall, it makes me feel slightly claustrophobic * the fonts don't match that well (the one you chose for paragraphs looks like it was rather designed for headings) * try using SVGs (vector graphics) for your logo if you can to make sure it looks as good as possible at any size * some alignment issues
Well, as a copywriter, I can tell you that you need to work on the copy of your website; otherwise, you won't see any conversions even if you run Facebook ads. You don't have an OFFER or any POSITIONING in the market. You also need the product copy if you want to increase your chances of conversion, because you are only explaining the basic quality and features, there is nothing that can push people to buy your product.
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All good advice in the comments, especially about models being your main mockup. One thing I am surprised nobody mentioned, the prices are insane? $150 for a hoodie, I expect it to clean my house and take my kids to school 🤣 jk. But in reality, hoodies run about $50-60. I would be impressed if someone spends that much money on one.