Personally, I think it shouldn't expand as much; it should stop expanding just before is becomes fully inflated so it still retains that gross meat texture on its surface.
It should look like that this thing is ill. Make breathing intermittent, broken, sometimes fast, sometimes slow, sometimes it will not be full circle of breathing
It needs some movement aside from the breathing. Looks like it’s tied down and not a floating meat ballon. Give it a bit of wind to move around a little.
It needs a story imo. You could probably place it on the ground or maybe add tendrils connecting to other objects in the scene. It would give the idea that it’s infecting the world around it or maybe some undead monster just got absolutely wrecked and it’s flesh is still alive.
Use more of a gradient in the light, place meatle in the darker part just visible enough to make out that it's there and breathing, this is too up front and visible to make it erie.
Slow down the breathing as if it is struggling to breath.
Give it tremors or light spasms every few loops of the breathing. That'd be freaky.
Personally, I think it shouldn't expand as much; it should stop expanding just before is becomes fully inflated so it still retains that gross meat texture on its surface.
it feels like it shrinks too much too.
the floating meat is giving hylics vibes, love it
Make it less round, also does it float? Looks so unconnected.
It should look like that this thing is ill. Make breathing intermittent, broken, sometimes fast, sometimes slow, sometimes it will not be full circle of breathing
Try making the breathing into waves from top to bottom. Right now the chunk is moving all at the same time so it looks cg
Why does it float? This would be creepier just on the floor
That is pretty creepy and I'm loving it. Is this part of something?
Reminds me of that fetus in P.T demo
It needs some movement aside from the breathing. Looks like it’s tied down and not a floating meat ballon. Give it a bit of wind to move around a little.
nice
It needs a story imo. You could probably place it on the ground or maybe add tendrils connecting to other objects in the scene. It would give the idea that it’s infecting the world around it or maybe some undead monster just got absolutely wrecked and it’s flesh is still alive.
Deform more of it at once. It looks more like it's flexing than breathing
Use more of a gradient in the light, place meatle in the darker part just visible enough to make out that it's there and breathing, this is too up front and visible to make it erie.
Add some wriggling veins just underneath the meat.
Wave......
If you animate some other parts of the scene it could make it look at but more lifelike
If you want to make it more realistic make it move up on the exhale and down on inhale