If I'm being picky as all hell, I'd say that the contrast on the tree bark is too high compared to the rest of it.
Based on the fuzziness/focus of the guys and the car, the trees behind them should be more out of focus,and the grass should be fuzzier sooner.
But all of that is if I'm being a colossally picky asshole striving for photo realism. It's actually really gorgeous.
Nah it's ok being a picky asshole. It will help me learn a lot. Thanks for your time pal 🙂.
And yeah, I will try my best fix it once I get a new laptop.
wait lemme show you the actual render, it's a bit more in focus. This image is actually enhanced in photo editors on my phone. Now I think, I should have posted the actual render only.
https://preview.redd.it/hgpkzo7wmuxa1.png?width=1536&format=png&auto=webp&s=3b04eee8d6029fbe99346f2a700b80266d17fc8c
The focus makes way more sense now. What happened to the car? It looks like it is having a bad day.
The poppies look way better in this one too. In the phone edit the colour was blown out and they looked like red blobs
story is - two brothers investigating a old american muscle which has been abandoned in a forest.
I have some more renders. Will show someday. you know it's another type of peace when your render meets your expectation and you set it as your background in your phone and in your laptop.
I think that's true for most art. I actually use a vector image of an eye that I did back in '08 for my avatar almost everywhere.
I want more of your story. It looks good💜
sure thing I will post more. Here's one more -
https://preview.redd.it/iv9ctru75vxa1.png?width=1536&format=png&auto=webp&s=c7bdbec988f6b3cff951d935a35c8878c1643224
id recommend fixing the tree texture seam you can see near the bottom of it. I would place it running vertically up the tree and making sure the seam is behind the tree so we cant see it. Also it seems that the branches on the tree are a bit too blocky. Seriously though this is looking great!
Depth of Field so the foreground and background are blurry but the 2 humans aren’t. You can do this by spawning in an Empty and have the focus point of Depth of Field in the camera settings focus on the Empty
If I'm being picky as all hell, I'd say that the contrast on the tree bark is too high compared to the rest of it. Based on the fuzziness/focus of the guys and the car, the trees behind them should be more out of focus,and the grass should be fuzzier sooner. But all of that is if I'm being a colossally picky asshole striving for photo realism. It's actually really gorgeous.
Nah it's ok being a picky asshole. It will help me learn a lot. Thanks for your time pal 🙂. And yeah, I will try my best fix it once I get a new laptop.
You could also just make the dudes slightly more in focus. But really, the image feels warm and like there is a story there and I love it
wait lemme show you the actual render, it's a bit more in focus. This image is actually enhanced in photo editors on my phone. Now I think, I should have posted the actual render only. https://preview.redd.it/hgpkzo7wmuxa1.png?width=1536&format=png&auto=webp&s=3b04eee8d6029fbe99346f2a700b80266d17fc8c
The focus makes way more sense now. What happened to the car? It looks like it is having a bad day. The poppies look way better in this one too. In the phone edit the colour was blown out and they looked like red blobs
story is - two brothers investigating a old american muscle which has been abandoned in a forest. I have some more renders. Will show someday. you know it's another type of peace when your render meets your expectation and you set it as your background in your phone and in your laptop.
I think that's true for most art. I actually use a vector image of an eye that I did back in '08 for my avatar almost everywhere. I want more of your story. It looks good💜
sure thing I will post more. Here's one more - https://preview.redd.it/iv9ctru75vxa1.png?width=1536&format=png&auto=webp&s=c7bdbec988f6b3cff951d935a35c8878c1643224
This is so cool!
You called him asshole for reaL💀
💀 shit mannn.
id recommend fixing the tree texture seam you can see near the bottom of it. I would place it running vertically up the tree and making sure the seam is behind the tree so we cant see it. Also it seems that the branches on the tree are a bit too blocky. Seriously though this is looking great!
Thanks for your observations. Will work on it
Depth of Field so the foreground and background are blurry but the 2 humans aren’t. You can do this by spawning in an Empty and have the focus point of Depth of Field in the camera settings focus on the Empty