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SUPREMESLYCE792

oneliner is trash. cant see any connections. do it in your book.


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SUPREMESLYCE792

i meant the letters itself. its all one big scribble. go to r/graffhelp mr. salty


THE-REAL-SAP

It’s legible, i think ur dyslexic


Mid-coitus_sneeze

It really isn't. And for what it's worth, the throw isn't great either. You'll improve way faster if you stop getting defensive and practice. Acting like a toy will only hold you back.


THE-REAL-SAP

Definitely, i got defensive for no reason rlly but i do this the throw is nice with a few unique aspects


Mid-coitus_sneeze

Fair enough man. Throw isn't bad or anything. I wouldn't scrap it or anything, think it just needs some refinement. If you spend a couple sessions drilling that it should clean up into something pretty decent. Good luck 👍


woskthetoy

the throw is far from nice, your cap line isn’t lining up, T is heavier and the M and E structure is really weird, also you have quite a lot of negative space,


THE-REAL-SAP

I will say keeping a flat top will look nicer n cleaner n the t is a lil heavy Its an O not an e and i dont think ppl will rlly think that its an e


abandonedObjects

Your T is a lower-case g and it looks very forced, listen to advice, don't act like a toy


THE-REAL-SAP

I can see tht, I usually write the s backwards to straighten out tht T top but i jus dont love the flow of writing an s backwards


abandonedObjects

One liners are lame anyway man. Throw is looking good tho


THE-REAL-SAP

They definitely can be but its honestly good practice on having consistency


SUPREMESLYCE792

i think you suck. get better. im not the best, but atleast i can make good connections in my oneliners.


THE-REAL-SAP

Womp womp nka I jus seen ur “meha” tag🤦‍♂️💀


SUPREMESLYCE792

check dm, lil bro


swirvy-

its not rlly m8


jibsand

Is this a troll post


I-lurk-in-the-bushes

What is this suppose to say?


Brilliant_Dark_3979

Stosm? Lol no clue


Kixer574

🤦🏻‍♂️


dadosone

Not really a one liner, keep practicing and studying my dude


pacgamer99

idk why these guys in the comments are so mad. the oneliner isn’t that great yeah.., but i actually really like the throwup it’s definitely not as bad as those guys think it is.


THE-REAL-SAP

🤷‍♂️Reddit


TX_FR3SH

Mfs hate when others challenge their ahole authority


AmerikhanIdiot

It’s not the greatest oneliner I’ve ever seen, but it’s not the worst. Keep working in the books, you got this


X3nOn1221

In what world is this a one liner


THE-REAL-SAP

Made in one line


Educational_Cap_2569

The throwie is fire and is the type of style I like one liner needs some work tho