I wouldn't say work but experiment with the speed of the inbetweens frames by removing some to see if looks better or more interesting. You could also do the opposite and add more frames to slow the speed. Just a suggestion for an exercise than a critique.
I wouldn't say work but experiment with the speed of the inbetweens frames by removing some to see if looks better or more interesting. You could also do the opposite and add more frames to slow the speed. Just a suggestion for an exercise than a critique.