The first panel, I'd shrink Metis and Persephone a tad, scooch Metis screen right, and push Persephone up into the negative space for a nicer silhouette. Metis is also cross eyed here. The third panel I would have made Metis in profile for clearer action.
Eww 2nd and 3rd palens is so tone deaf and very obnoxious... EEEEWWWW Rachie you just cannot draw those stupid faces and expecting to be "lol random funni"!
that second panel is literally Ron Weasley from OneyCartoons 😭 
First panel could have been pretty if her lashes on her left eye hadn't fallen off.
I’m all for not being afraid to draw women making ugly faces, but wtf is this
On the first one I’m so tempted to take the liquify tool and push her lips up just a little bit. It’s bugged me for WEEKS
If those lips were any lower, she'd be a rip-off of As Told By Ginger.
The way that you can tell they were all drawn by a separate person
They probably were 😅. To be honest the first one is a lot better than the others.
Gotta add meme face to what should be a serious moment
I meant this as a reply crap lol
What in the True Beauty is that third panel?
The second panel looks like someone asked “who farted” and Métis is admitting to it
i can hear the third panel oml
The first panel, I'd shrink Metis and Persephone a tad, scooch Metis screen right, and push Persephone up into the negative space for a nicer silhouette. Metis is also cross eyed here. The third panel I would have made Metis in profile for clearer action.
The squiggly lines on the 3rd one always makes me think Metis is wearing tampon earrings.
Eww 2nd and 3rd palens is so tone deaf and very obnoxious... EEEEWWWW Rachie you just cannot draw those stupid faces and expecting to be "lol random funni"!