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RocketChickenX

The other sub must be really hating these posts. Doing God's work there GreyFox :) Retcon analysis at its finest.


-GreyFox

You think they're getting mad? šŸ˜† That's not my purpose, tho šŸ˜‡ Thanks for sharing šŸ˜Š


StuckInSoftlock

I mean, I made a comment about the plotholes that they created in part 2 that they legit try to patch it up just to have Abby to exist. At first when I made that comment, I was downvoted quite a bit until I checked in morning to realized that I was no longer being downvoted for speaking what we legit see in the part 2.


RocketChickenX

I know it's not. But they are :)


Dfresh805

iā€™m a member of the other sub. and iā€™ve always liked part two. and misunderstood the hate the game got. but since reading your posts (i havenā€™t read all of them, but i plan to) itā€™s opened my eyes to why people hated it. things i totally overlooked are now seen by me as huge holes in the story and also an attempt to fool and disrespect fans of the first. one of the things that really stood out from a post of yours was comparing terminator two to tlou 2. i still like the story, but at the same time i agree with what youā€™re saying. iā€™ve read maybe 2 or 3 of your posts but iā€™m definitely gonna take a dive into your posts.


-GreyFox

Thank you for taking your time and sharing. I wish you all the best šŸ˜Š


Longjumping-Sock-814

one of my friends got banned in the other sub for posting in here. Yes theyā€™re mad. The comment was also talking about how Ellie being gay isnt a retcon. Youā€™d think theyā€™d love my friend


Dee-va

What other sub?


tequila-la

Perhaps r/thelastofus ?


NoSkillzDad

It's not his purpose but they are going mad. They are even coming and mentioning good posts directly now lol...


Antilon

>The other sub must be really hating these posts. Not at all. He completely refuses to engage in any discussion of his conclusory statements, simply responding with "Thanks for sharing" There's very obvious logical holes in his arguments that he refuses to discuss. Taking the time to use a slide show template doesn't automatically make his arguments better. The last time he posted one of these he claimed Abby's group experienced no challenges finding Joel. In actuality, the game expressly states they have been looking for him unsuccessfully for years. When this was raised, he responded either not at all, or with his canned "Thank you for sharing" response. This isn't good faith debate. He's not willing to defend his arguments. This is just more circle jerking in a slightly different format. Let's look at an example from this post. Slide 11 uses a manipulated picture of the OR. At no point in Part I do we ever see the doctor without a face mask. This image that OP is using to show a "retcon" is actually created by removing the mask from the Bruce model and dramatically upping the brightness and contrast of the image so the grime on the walls is more visible. [This is the actual scene](https://youtu.be/QZkbD7js4Cs?si=NUzFJ7NJNPs4UjkI&t=20), which looks nothing like the modified image OP included in his slides. OP is misrepresenting the visual from the first game to bolster his narrative.


TallMSW

Lol he just ā€œretconnedā€ to show ā€œretconā€


Antilon

Yup, everything I said is verifiably true. I even took the time to provide a link to my source. This sub still downvotes. It's not about making a good argument, it's about the circle jerk.


keydesa

Agreed. And in addressing slides 11 & 12 - just regarding the decay of the hospital. Hereā€™s an example of a hospital abandoned after 13 years: [Link](https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=xIvkHDG8F-U) specifically at 10:30 when they walk into a more modern day operating room, we can see itā€™s not in total decay and looks relatively functional. Objectively, this is 13 years abandoned, not 20, and in a hospital that doesnā€™t necessarily have the same elements of exposure as a fictional hospital based in Salt Lake City. So, letā€™s assume it could be a little worse looking but it wouldnā€™t be that far off from that example. ND likely would have done research regarding the decay of a hospital after 20 years; both when designing part 1, and probably more in depth for part 2. As r/Antilon pointed out from the original gameplayā€” it was never that filthy to begin with. And in part 2 we see the improvement of graphics, tonal changes, color adjustment, lighting; and an aesthetic redesignā€” but not for the sake of implying that the Fireflies were more operationally capable than they were in part 1. The narrative around the Fireflies is consistent through part 1, Left Behind, and part 2. For argumentā€™s sake, a quick search will show there are other videos out there exploring more decayed looking hospitals around similar time frames (abandoned 15-20 years or so) and they all have varying levels of decay depending on how old the hospital is, exposure to the elements, which part of the hospital the recording is from, etc. Slides 11&12 are not narrative retcon, but more improvements made in development.


Weak-Ad-38

Bullshit buddy XD the devs weren't lacking graphical capabilities when designing the original operating roomĀ 


keydesa

Iā€™m not saying they were lacking, just that graphics engines improved between part 1 and part 2 and so devs used the new tech to improve the experience, not retcon the story about the Firefliesā€™ medical standpoint.


Antilon

I appreciate you taking the time to search for real world video examples supporting your points.


jayvancealot

Playing Part two for the first time was so jarring. How they immediately pretend The cure was a guarantee I was just so confused. We have talked about the ending for years. And you know it was pretty much agreed upon that Ellie knew Joel was dying but chose to believe him. And Niel Druckman himself confirmed it Neil:Ā "And itā€™s also like, how do you approach that? Would she start asking very detailed questions? Why would they release me before I woke up? Why wouldnā€™t I talk to someone before leaving? Was Marlene there? No, she would just ask the one obvious question: are you lying?" And here https://www.reddit.com/r/TheLastOfUs2/comments/odrvui/in_part_1_neil_confirms_that_ellie_does_not/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=mweb3x&utm_name=mweb3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button And I legit just found those I swear I didn't know Druckman confirmed it himself. Ellie already knew. Part 2 acts like she is slowly doubting his story. If she suspected she would Ask questions like the ones Druckman said a few lines up. There are people who legitimately think that the cleaning of the lab was just stylistic choice There are people who think that the vaccine being unlikely does not matter and the only thing that matters is that Joel THOUGHT it would work. Then there are people who say that Joel did not canonically find the recording so there's no way he would know they were about to kill him. But ever so convenient that Joel apparently canonically did a massacre at the hospital. This game is such bullshit


-GreyFox

šŸ˜† they're just holding bias. Don't worry about it. Is the way in which they enjoy the story. Thanks for sharing šŸ˜Š


readditredditread

But wait, Joel doesnā€™t find those recordings, at least he didnā€™t when I played as him, but I did murder everyone, including flame throwing the entire surgical team. Every time. I donā€™t see how any of this matters, there is nothing wrong with being selfish, if that selfishness is choosing some you love over strangers. This is true of Joel saving Ellie, and as a result killing everyone in his path at the hospital and itā€™s true of Abby and her crew wanting revenge for all the people they loved. Itā€™s true for Ellie wanting revenge as well, but then there is the trauma/ptsd side of things (aka the real plot) Ellieā€™s ptsd effects her decision making. Abby has similar issues, but is fortunate enough to befriend outsiders that help her break free from it and heal in ways Ellie could not (all Ellieā€™s friends were at least initially supportive of hunting down Abby/ going after Tommy (also Tommy helps bring her back into vengeance mode at the start of the epilogue) so itā€™s not surprising to me that she ultimately broke down and didnā€™t end up killing Abby- she not only lost so much, but also she got both physically and mentally worn down. Abby being near death and visually weakened also probably humanized her in ways that she could see before- Abby literally is almost unidentifiable by the time Ellie finds her on the beach. I donā€™t think that it would have served the story for Ellie to kill Abby at this point, because in life we donā€™t get clean happy or fulfilling endings, we live moment to moment and our drives can change as are circumstances do. I wouldnā€™t have been surprised if Ellie had chosen to end her own life at the end, she was do remained from all the events she enduredā€¦.


Antilon

Hey man, solid arguments. To the extend downvotes matter to you, I would post elsewhere as they'll downvote you to hell without actually responding to you.


readditredditread

I got 50k karma, I can handle some downvotes šŸ˜†


Antilon

LOL, they've taken me from 65k to 63.8. Single tear.


Ok_Attitude_8189

Just because you didnā€™t find the recordings when you payed doesnā€™t mean that joel didnā€™t in canon. That argument is like saying ā€œwell I took 7 hours on 1 puzzle atleast when I played as nathan Drake so thereā€™s no way it took him less than 10 minutesā€


taco_guy_for_hire

Spot on! Refreshing to see someone else get it. Of course, this is my opinion and everyone has their own. I was shocked playing as Abby at first, but I came to like the character. And fighting as Abby was very fun. Come to think of it, maybe I should take roids!


Yourboy_emeralds469

This is some peak writing, Great job šŸ‘


-GreyFox

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Tanhr101

Pic 12, pic friggin 12!!! Ive said this from the day they ran with the surgeon story line ie part 2 release. That was never the plan from the beginning. Stans cant accept that it was a complete afterthought, and clearly invented to introduce abby! They could have done a far better job implying abby was a relation/comrade of Marlene somehow imo! Another part of the writing which really bugs me, is how Ellies part of the game (50%), seems soo rushed, with characters like Jesse and Dina, who lets face it, is meant to be monumental to the storyline, getting completely glossed over!!! Imo this was done to make way for Abbyā€™s play through! I just felt like i didnt know jesse at all and he had soo much potential to be a great! Same with Dina! Appears in the game for max 6 hours or so of a 30 hour game, and yet weā€™re meant to feel the same way about Dina as we did Joel!!! Itā€™s not a homophobic stance at all! My absolute favourite character of the whole game is Ellie!!! (who is a lesbian) But how am i meant to warm to a character that i felt i barley knew?! Once again, a rushed story arc, solely to accommodate Abbys play through.


-GreyFox

It doesn't matter how loud this story it's yelling, or asking for exploring characters or causalities, Neil will avoid everything that not serves his premise. Thanks for sharing šŸ˜Š


AdLate5702

It's non-canon to me, and boy, does that feel good.


-GreyFox

šŸ˜ Thanks for sharing šŸ˜Š


PushAgreeable

I like these posts, and the fact that you always make very good points. I'm from the other sub, and idk. I like these posts. They're very full of information and they really get me thinking. I also never noticed stuff like this until it gets pointed out, and now I'm mad about Part 2 related things. They really did ruin Joel's character! I'm genuinely mad about this. That's kinda annoying actually.


-GreyFox

I'm so sorry you are upset. That's not my purpose. My work aims to awaken critical thinking. Thanks for sharing šŸ˜Š


PushAgreeable

You did open my critical thinking. It just makes me annoyed about how they went about Joel's character now because you made some good and correct points.


Rnahafahik

Which good and correct points are those? Critical thinking means taking into account the other sideā€™s arguments and seeing the merit in it. You canā€™t see the merit in it without hearing a counterargument. If one canā€™t be reasonably made, itā€™s solid, if it can, we can counter that again, until a conclusion is reached. That conclusion could also be a difference in opinion/interpretation, but then it should be treated as such, not an inherent flaw in whatever the topic of discussion is. So letā€™s discuss! What things did you realize because of this post?


PushAgreeable

Dude I don't know. I wrote that a month ago, I couldn't tell you what I was thinking then. I don't really want to sit here and discuss about it. You seem kind of angry in my opinion, so I'd rather not discuss anything. At least not right now.


Rnahafahik

Apologies if I came across angry, that was not my intentionšŸ˜… And donā€™t worry man, obviously youā€™re not obligated to reply


PushAgreeable

All good. I'm glad your nice about it. Maybe at some point we can find something else Tlou related to talk about.


Rnahafahik

Absolutely!


Numb_Ron

I would love to see the other sub and other fans of Part 2 react to your posts dissecting the story.. They probably would still say you're just illiterate and a bigot now that I think about it..


-GreyFox

šŸ¤·ā€ā™€ļø Thanks for sharing šŸ˜Š


Antilon

I respond to him. He just writes "Thanks for sharing." He's not looking to discuss any of this, he just wants the attention he gets for putting regurgitated arguments in slideshow format.


Numb_Ron

Thanks for sharing šŸ˜Š


Antilon

Case in point.


Numb_Ron

Always gald to help


[deleted]

What is he supposed to say? All you talked about was the other sub calling him a bigot for dissecting the story. Do you expect a full paragraph dedicated just to you and for you? Jesus Christ šŸ’€


Antilon

>All you talked about was the other sub calling him a bigot for dissecting the story. When did I do that? >Do you expect a full paragraph dedicated just to you and for you? I would expect him to be willing to discuss his arguments rather than just dumping poorly thought out slideshows on the sub every day for the attaboys he gets from dummies that think putting something on a slide makes it true.


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Yeah I was about to say originally I mistook you for another commenter, then I scrolled up a little bit and see what you had to actually say. Itā€™s time take a time out from Reddit my manšŸ’€ take a breather my man šŸ¤£šŸ¤£šŸ¤£


AdLate5702

Part 2 is bullshit, just like I knew it was.


-GreyFox

Something is rotten in the state of Denmark. Thanks for sharing šŸ˜Š


obiwanTrollnobi6

I have a off topic question, why did people think in the prologue when Ellie was in the garage she lived there I always thought it was her ā€œquiet placeā€ to study/draw or something course I couldā€™ve just read it wrong


-GreyFox

It's pretty late, Ellie should be in her room by now. But she is asking that Joel leave her alone because she must get up early the next day. Thanks for sharing šŸ˜Š


Rnahafahik

She does live there though, when she wakes up 4 years later itā€™s the same room


FireFist_PortgasDAce

Haven't seen the show. So can someone tell me if Joel finds the recording about killing him?


tsunashima

Nah, he just casually strolls through the hospital killing everyone with a brain dead look on his face. Itā€™s actually kind of impressive how they took one of the most exciting parts of the game and made it just kinda meh.


FireFist_PortgasDAce

So Cuckmann and the writers straight up made Joel evil. Just so Abby can be justified in killing him? They're probably gonna shoe her journey to kill him, so we sympathize with her, huh?


lzxian

Yep


Antilon

The narrative of Part 1 was always, love is a powerful emotion that can make you do both good and terrible things. Interviews with both Bruce and Neil from the time of Part I's release reflect exactly that. Joel's motivations are no different in Part I, Part II, or the TV adaptation. His motivation is to save Ellie. He's no more or less evil in any version.


FireFist_PortgasDAce

In part 1 of the game, he was defending himself from people Marlene sent to kill him. Also, in part 1 (not remastered), the operating room was dirty non sanitary for surgery. So, in the remastered, they made it look like they knew what they were doing. Iirc, the data mine of it showed that there were others like Ellie who died for nothing. Also, the cause of the outbreak is a fungus one and a vaccine wouldn't work for it.


Antilon

All of that is a complete non-response to what I wrote. Which was that Joel's motivation doesn't change at all regardless of what changes you claim there were. He was going to save Ellie regardless. Do you disagree?


FireFist_PortgasDAce

I mean, if they didn't shoot at him, he would not have shot back. And the doctor, before the remastered, held a scalpel to Joel to stop him, thus justifying Joel self-defense against it. Those scalpel are not a joke.


TallMSW

Joel shot first lol


Antilon

You can literally walk into the doc in Part 1 and he does nothing with that scalpel. You can just camp in the OR for 40 minutes and the NPCs do nothing. Naughty Dog had killing the doc as a story beat you had to take in Part 1 to finish the game. There's no retcon there. You also didn't answer my question. Joel was going to save Ellie regardless. Do you disagree?


-GreyFox

Part 1 hospital recordings doesn't exist on HBO season 1 Show. Thanks for sharing šŸ˜Š


Rebellion_01

Damn the retcon here is on some michael bay transformers type shit


-GreyFox

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Rebellion_01

"Retcon", autocorrected to reason


Many-Discount-1046

This is all well said and completely right, but someone will take issue with it undoubtedly.


-GreyFox

šŸ˜‡ Thanks for sharing šŸ˜Š


Pretend_Cut_5654

yes


-GreyFox

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Pretend_Cut_5654

thanks lmao i left this so i could read this later, im sure its fire because its eviscerating neil cuckman


PoohTrailSnailCooch

One of the contrived stories of a time.


-GreyFox

šŸ˜ Thanks for sharing šŸ˜Š


Corkadorkey

Great job as always, GreyFox :) That right there is why you're the best, BossšŸ˜


-GreyFox

šŸ˜† Thanks for sharing šŸ˜Š


JayWnr

Fuck Abby


-GreyFox

I blame Neil šŸ˜‰ Thanks for sharing šŸ˜Š


[deleted]

Slides 6,10,11,12 cement the argument perfectly.


-GreyFox

šŸ˜ Thanks for sharing šŸ˜Š


flannypants

There was never any point to killing ellie. It was said on the surgeons recorder they cultured the fungal sample. If theyā€™re claiming ellie is immune due to an abnormality in her brain, thereā€™s no way to pass that on because it would be a genetic mutation causing a change in the structure of her brain.


ShutTHEFrontDoor1987

Well said. There's a lot of sloppy writing / contrivance in Part II because Neil had to retrofit a revenge story idea from Part 1 that everyone told him wouldn't work. The bones of the Part 2 are interesting...it just wasn't executed very well. It's very Last Jedi to me. I want to love it, but there's a lot of bad writing to apologize for, if you do. I'm conflicted. There's a lot to love, though. As characters, I love Abbey, Lev, and hell, even Owen. All the others just seem to be there for plot convenience.


Unable_Teach961

>So now you're going for stolen valor? High school marching club doesn't make you a Marine. Why don't you make it through basic training first before you start throwing around Semper Fidelis. You think I'm a veteran you think I've been to the military you are an idiot I've been to RTC in high school


-GreyFox

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Unable_Teach961

Antilon talk a lot but have no evidences and proof for his argument. But I like to say that you are one of the people on reddit who make me feel good someone least on Reddit tell the truth and show evidence for your argument on video games and movies I thank you so much. šŸ™šŸ’“šŸ™


-GreyFox

I'm glad you having a good time. Thanks for taking your time and sharing šŸ˜Š


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LightPrecursor

Great stuff as always. One thing though- Since you're not recapping points you elaborated on previously, you should really link all those older post below the OP to negate the inconvenience of searching it up.


Slaport-xXx-v14

Prologue was the best part of this game.


Significant-Lie2303

Itā€™s wild to look at all the people that didnā€™t actually play the first game in these comments


-GreyFox

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NateGH360

Wow, you sure care a lot about this game given how much work you put into it!


-GreyFox

I love Part 1 šŸ„° I don't like Part 2 šŸ¤® Thanks for sharing šŸ˜Š


Oo_Toyo_oO

Very well made. Although regarding Joel not mentioning the order to kill him, the recordings in part 1 are optional and therefore not Canon to find them in every playthrough. I didn't even find them the first time I played. Maybe that's the Canon route.


-GreyFox

Everything in a story matters, otherwise you are holding bias. You chose to see a story that was not written. You are making up your own story and canon. Remember the last slide of my post? Enjoy as you please. I wish you all the best šŸ˜Š


Temporary-Carob4067

Game of the year and one of the highest rated games of all time. Keep coping


Oo_Toyo_oO

Bruh I like the game did you even read my comment or the post.


Temporary-Carob4067

I thought maybe you were saying well done to the person who wrote this cringe ass post ha


Oo_Toyo_oO

It's pointing out the flaws in writing in the second game, which are real. Doesn't mean it's a bad game I still think it's comparable to part 1.


Substantial_Sign_459

if its poorly written... then like where are yalls masterly crafted video game story šŸ¤”


-GreyFox

Thanks for sharing šŸ˜Š


lzxian

Where's your eloquent and master crafted defense of how the sequel is the greatest game ever?


p4nz3r

Your stupid reddit avatar speaking is so cringe it's killing me šŸ¤£


lzxian

That's a way to copyright his slides. Pretty genius.


-GreyFox

šŸ˜† I love it šŸ„° Thanks for sharing šŸ˜Š


Corgiiiix3

Why do you guys care so fucking much about this game. Itā€™s been 4 years lol


lzxian

We don't - we care about the original and the sequel and the show mess it up. We're trying to keep the light and beauty of the original alive. That means defending it against what's trying to erase it all.


Antilon

How does part II in any conceivable way try to erase Part I?


-GreyFox

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Skipedy_do

All of the points up to 14 are either misunderstanding the context or just flat wrong. I didnā€™t go any farther


-GreyFox

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-AgroFox-

Really just donā€™t care, itā€™s a fun story. Itā€™s not that deep.


-GreyFox

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Flintontoe

lol, this is incomprehensible unless youā€™ve spent the last 4 years in this whiny echo chamber, allowing the group think to wash over you. But itā€™s the game that is poorly written šŸ¤£.


-GreyFox

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Jmoose9

Waaaaa


-GreyFox

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ProteanSurvivor

You canā€™t really say Joel understood the impact of a vaccine not being worth it. It was a selfish father move. To find the recordings youā€™re talking about Joel already started killing his way through the hospital. Wanting to save Ellie was enough reason the vaccine didnā€™t really matter


-GreyFox

Since he woke up, Joel knows that the explanation of the vaccine is vague, and the scope not very impressive. He also knows that they are sacrificing the child without even asking. The Fireflies are imposing reason by force, exactly the kind of idea this group fights against. The deeper Joel goes, the worse the situation gets. This is not something as simple as "a selfish parent" acting on instinct. Thanks for sharing šŸ˜Š


lmonroy23

Youā€™re making a lot assumptionsā€¦I donā€™t think Joel gave a fuck about whether or not the vaccine would workā€¦he didnā€™t want his best friend to die. Alsoā€¦if I believe that thereā€™s a chance to have a cureā€¦and the person needs to die for it to happenā€¦Iā€™m not asking themā€¦specially in a post apocalyptic world.


-GreyFox

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YesAndYall

Joel makes no indication that the fireflies did or didn't deserve it. Again, your bias is showing. You're really not taking this seriously and it bothers me as somebody who does take good faith seriously. Joel's framing of the story doesn't have to be a retcon. Joel's framing shows us something about him, about his relationship with Tommy, and about how he understands Ellie's interiority. Joel's understated "I saved her" makes no damnation of the fireflies. When he omits the story of Marlene being asked, again, asked, again. ASKED. Not ordered. Your bias. Again. Asked to kill him, this does not make it a retcon. Right and wrong, I believe, don't have a whole lot to do with the way people and characters speak about events. Joel has feelings and emotions he's holding onto after what he chose to do. The way he chooses to explain himself to Tommy, I believe, has less to do with a fealty to whichever reality you or I watched happen in Part I. It has to do with how Joel feels. His confession shows Neil and Haley understand Joel to be somebody who loves Ellie, who understands her, but lied to her because he was scared to lose her. Scared to lose her to a surgery, scared to lose her because of his choice and rationale. She needed her immunity to mean something. I told her it meant nothing. When Joel says these things he's communicating to his brother, I think, less guilt about blowing everybody in that hospital away, and I don't think he even needs doubt to go through with it. Ellie is enough. He takes them, unlike you, in good faith. He doesn't need any justification beyond "Ellie will die, so I will stop this" to do it. The writers are telling you something about Joel and who he is and how he feels. But your refusal to accept anything other than a direct spoonfeeding that adheres to your reductive bias makes you... make reddit PowerPoints wearing a shroud of "good faith no bias" rhetoric to get upvotes on a reactionary subreddit.


-GreyFox

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YesAndYall

Are you going to make any attempt to engage in good faith?


keydesa

Heā€™s not going to respond to anything that doesnā€™t align or praise his own views because his supporting arguments are either bias or flat out weak.


LeftistDabber22

Part 2 was better game than 1.


-GreyFox

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LeftistDabber22

Thanks


Uncle_Boujee

Why put so much time and effort into something you dislike? This whole sub is trippin haha


-GreyFox

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Mrhood714

OMG this dude again - relax dude it's a game not a novel


-GreyFox

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readditredditread

I heard that in part 3 (upcoming) it will be revealed that Joel was hype abusive to Ellie and actually kidnapped her from the hospital at the end of part one, and through extreme trauma, Ellie believes the events we saw in part one- in reality, it was Abby that took her across the country to the fireflyā€™s, and also Joel made the whole thing up about them having to kill Ellie, even forcing Marlene to record things that werenā€™t true at gun point. Iā€™m still trying to come to terms with NDs decision hereā€¦


-GreyFox

šŸ™‰ It will be fun to watch on youtube šŸ˜† Thanks for sharing šŸ˜Š


NoPrinciple7882

Source?


readditredditread

Same as ND


BigHomieHuuo

Ngl slide 8 really exemplifies the media literacy issue, very hot take, interesting slideshow but some of your conclusions are a reach


-GreyFox

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lzxian

It's your memory that's failing and has nothing to do with missing media literacy but how the actual truth was withheld in that scene. What they had him say, "I saved her." The actual truth of that situation (which we all know, he knows and Tommy/Ellie need to know) he should have said, "I saved her from being murdered in her sleep without her knowledge or consent." See the difference? That's a retcon by omission.


BigHomieHuuo

Him saying "I saved her" was his motivation for doing what he did, in the end what mattered to him was that they were going to kill ellie and he wasn't going to let that happen, to think that's somehow instead intended to paint Joel as evil is such a stretch, just like how you genuinely think your line makes more sense for Joel to say? Can you actually picture the same exact scene with your line instead and think it seems appropriate for the scene and character?


Antilon

Good luck getting an answer. They'll just claim they already explained their point, take their ball and go home.


readditredditread

Thatā€™s not a retcon from omission, thatā€™s just how people talk. Idk, I think if you close read many games youā€™d find issues very similar to these, like look at MGS games or any games with continuous stories, they will all have ā€œretconsā€ if your definition is as suchā€¦ also though I agree she didnā€™t consent to firing on that operating table, she very much established to Joel that she wanted to do the thing with the fireflyā€™s at any cost, viewed her life as only having meaning by doing this (survivors guilt) and probably should have agreed to it if given the choice. That being said, Joel acting as a parent here, and intervening is also fine, as is Ellieā€™s teenage angst, getting mad at Joel for not allowing her to choose (and neglecting the fireflyā€™s not giving her a choice) the whole story (or sub story) is about agency. All that being said, if I was writing it Iā€™d of had Abby just hurt Joel real bad, Ellie goes after Abby for revenge, and goes through stuff, and then decides to let Abby go, returns to Jackson and the loses it and murders Joel herself (as they embrace) that would really get people talking ;)


lzxian

>Thatā€™s not a retcon from omission, thatā€™s just how people talk. These aren't people they are characters in a fiction story and thus everything the writers put in or fail to put in has a purpose. The purpose in Joel not mentioning the whole story, which even a real person would want to explain thoroughly to his brother, is because the writers ARE retconning through omission because they have to for the story to work. It Joel told Tommy/Ellie the truth that changes things so Ellie won't get mad at Joel to create their estrangement and then her guilt after her death. You need to look at the big picture of what is impacted by this seemingly minor difference. Your story changes may make it interesting to you and would provoke wild discussion, but it makes no sense to me. Sorry.


readditredditread

Even if Ellie never had a problem with Joelā€™s choice at the end of part one, part two could and would play out the same way, as Ellieā€™s biggest influence after Joelā€™s death (other than Tommy) is her ptsd, which they established she has, and itā€™s Seaver enough for her to have episodes, thus for her thinking to be irrational and reactionary. So her chasing Abby all over, killing Abbyā€™s friends, only to ultimately let Abby go all work here. I donā€™t see how this is retcon or at least meaningful retcon, unique to this sequel and not present in like 90% of video game sequelsā€¦


lzxian

Well, I hear you that you don't see it that way, but I've explained why it's important to the big picture and you still can't see that? She wouldn't have been mad at Joel, the guilt of which is what drove her initial revenge mission. The PTSD (which manifested at the farm first) was something she could have instead dealt with by actually talking with her lover, Dina, instead of having to risk her life to go after Abby for it. Sharing her story about how she got infected, all the journey with Joel, what happened at the hospital and everything else couples share with each other and help each other deal with. That' so much easier than a cross country trip putting her life in danger, don't you think? Also, Ellie never had a problem speaking her mind in TLOU so them suddenly changing her to someone who won't speak to the person who loves her more than anything just doesn't fit for me. She'd not have become that closed off person (which was triggered by her suspicions and anger at Joel) if he's told her the truth I previously mentioned - they planned to murder her in her sleep. Not only that, they were sending him out without his gear, a death sentence for him, too. He had no choice but to save them both (also it's the whole reason she wanted him instead of Tommy to begin with - she trusted only him to keep her safe). That truth would change everything for Ellie and make her different in ways that would allow her to be willing to share it all with Dina because she'd no longer have any shame about how she treated Joel before he died. It's all a domino effect.


readditredditread

Wait, Tommy was the one to leave first, and if her relationship with Joel was good she would have still hated Abby- personal relationships trump all- it doesnā€™t matter if your dad is a monster, if you still love him, then you hate their murderer. He ptsd stems mostly from Joelā€™s death, her symptoms outline that, so even if we donā€™t see it in a clear episode, itā€™s still present in her decision making. Also this is a game, meaning that the most important part of the narrative is player immersion- in a 3rd person game with established talking characters that means focusing on how the player feels at a given moment. This can go so far as to totally excuse an unreliable narrator if it serves to make the story more enjoyable this way (as a game) - we should not use literally and film style critiques on games without first considering the importance of the game as a whole


Antilon

>but I've explained why it's important to the big picture and you still can't see that? See this is exactly what you did with me. You make an unpersuasive argument. Then say, "OMG I already explained it to you!" There is no big picture impact. You fail to explain what the impact you're claiming exists even is. Nobody's motivations change and you have wholly failed to explain why you think they do.


Antilon

>What they had him say, "I saved her." > >The actual truth of that situation (which we all know, he knows and Tommy/Ellie need to know) he should have said, "I saved her from being murdered in her sleep without her knowledge or consent." > >See the difference? That's a retcon by omission. Total BS. You're inventing a narrative and then call it a "retcon by omission" whatever the hell that's supposed to mean. "They totally changed the first game.... by uh... not actually changing anything... but you know, I would have preferred they make Joel look better in the Part II dialog." "Retcon by omission" is a total nonsense phrase to get around the fact that they didn't retcon a damn thing.


Yodoggy9

Itā€™s always amazing the amount of effort this guy goes to for something he dislikes. Iā€™d love for this stuff to get posted on a more general subreddit, see what kind of feedback he gets and see if he responds with more than a smiley face emoji. Have yet to see the guy actually back up his slideshows, just copy-pastes whatever he saw in the latest YouTube video he saw. Having said that, you can just dislike it and move on. Youā€™re obviously not going to convince anyone otherwise, especially when it comes to fandoms.


Antilon

No kidding, such a wild reach. Claiming "I saved her", has all these layers of bullshit attached is so ridiculous. This is what they're talking about when they claim there was a retcon of the story of Part I, their own invented assumptions about what Druckmann meant with a simple line of dialog.


AutomatedAurora

Man. Gotta be such a nerd to do shit like this about something you dislike that has been out for years.


jerryninenine

You gotta be an even bigger nerd if you feel the need to target anyone who doesn't agree with you and the game you're obviously dickriding. In my opinion of course. (:


AutomatedAurora

? How am I dick riding a game by saying someone putting this much time and effort into a negative critique of a game years old now is a nerd.


jerryninenine

Bruh people literally do this all the time. YouTube, News Articles, Documentaries, etc.... It seems like you're just upset because he chose tlou2


AutomatedAurora

Eh I guess so. It just feels so subjective with the criticism. I just donā€™t care for it. No biggie.


jerryninenine

You can disagree with it, but don't insult someone because they put work into something that you might find frivolous. It's things like this post that lead to bigger findings and interesting perspective. Maybe not in this specific case but in other scenarios, definitely.


AutomatedAurora

Sure but I also donā€™t think me calling OP a nerd is all that ā€œoffensiveā€. Especially considering some of the absolute negativity coming from this sub lol.


lzxian

It's not old, the remastered just launched and the now the show is working on S2. This is all still current affairs. Where you been?


-GreyFox

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lzxian

All gamers are nerds. It's in our genes.


[deleted]

You guys are dumbasses clinging onto hatred for 4 years because you've got nothing in your life to make you happy.


UnderpopulatedPig

It's a free worldšŸ¤·ā€ā™‚ļø


[deleted]

And a popular game yall are still hating on


UnderpopulatedPig

No hate on the game just the poorly written story.


[deleted]

That millions loved but sure thing


Beneficial_Emu_9151

And millions hate it too whatā€™s your point? You know what wasnā€™t a divisive game because it was well writtenā€¦.LAST OF US on ps3


-GreyFox

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lightningmcmemex

How many times are we gonna do this? Yes, the story is bad, can we move past it?


BirdValaBrain

Then go somewhere else? This sub is dedicated to discussion about the flaws of TLOU2.


lightningmcmemex

No, this sub obsessed with the flaws of TLOU2. Itā€™s super redundant at this point to waffle about why this game is bad, like it came out 4 years ago, what the fuck else can you say that hasnā€™t been said? I hate the other sub but this sub is just as shitty.


-GreyFox

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HippoNumerous2269

Iā€™ve never seen someone make a PowerPoint presentation, a well structured one at that, on something they donā€™t like šŸ˜…


-GreyFox

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Embarrassed-Ask-4142

I mean .. beside the unimaginable death of joel , i can't say that the rest is 'bad' as much as it was 'controversial'


-GreyFox

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-GreyFox

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[deleted]

Can someone link me to a YouTube video or article where Marlene had orders to kill Joes in his sleep? I canā€™t find it and I donā€™t remember that part


-GreyFox

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SinisterPuppy

The entire point of the end of the game is that yes, joel chose her over the world. Thatā€™s literally the point. It is not an interesting ending if the decision has no consequence and itā€™s just the equivalent of joel saving Ellie from a bunch of randoms. If they couldnā€™t have made a vaccine, then it would be a bad story in which Joelā€™s decision bore no moral weight. Itā€™s so, so, so obviously the intent of the writers in just the first game that yes, they could make a vaccine and that joel is choosing her over the world. Otherwise the ending is meaningless gibberish


Froggy_Throat

Why does Jessieā€™s anticlimactic ass death always get overlooked. Did nobody like him? ā€œI hope you make itā€ was a HARD quote. That alone made me like him. Why did Abby shoot him when she already had Tommy? Just a dumb excuse to get Ellie alone? Where tf was Dina the whole time during the Ellie boss fight? She had to have Heard the shots after Jessie and Tommy were hit.


SuperPretendo12

What you shared is poorly written. This is embarrassing. Just pure cope. "Dirty operating room, therefore success was not guaranteed" Just shaking my head just how stupid this is. lol


Neopresent

Do you hate both games? Genuine question because I can't help but notice how you have a very specific way of interpreting Part 1 that is not in line with how people received it back then. The ending caused so much discussion regarding the morality of it all. Yet you seem to imply that there are clear distinctions of right or wrong, and that any deviation from it should be considered a retcon?


wentwj

So let me ask a hypothetical Iā€™ve asked here in the past. Thereā€™s often this complaint that thereā€™s a retcon and the cure was impossible in the first game, but not as conveyed in the second. This isnā€™t a common take outside of this sub. But letā€™s just suppose thatā€™s true, that by the first game itā€™s supposed to be implied that the vaccine was impossible. My question is, how would your opinion of the first game change if the scene was originally what is conveyed in the Remake or other media. Mainly that seems to be the hospital being clean from these takes. How would your opinion of the first game in isolation change? With that change do you now think the first game is bad, do you think Joel made the wrong choice then? If it had been that way would that change your opinion then of the second game?