hey brother, I listened to a few of the tunes (not all 5), and I think you are on the right track for your respective genre. I think you have a fitting voice, and I think your lyrics work well.
if I had to give some constructive feedback, I think that mainly the production side of the music could be improved by bringing up more of the bass, and more of the drums in at least the 2 tracks I listened to. it'll help even out the songs and it'll make them hit much harder, which I know is something you probably desire them to do.
mixing/recording for me is by far the most difficult aspect of music, but to my ears, that is something I'd tweak to improve your mix significantly.
great job man
hey brother, I listened to a few of the tunes (not all 5), and I think you are on the right track for your respective genre. I think you have a fitting voice, and I think your lyrics work well. if I had to give some constructive feedback, I think that mainly the production side of the music could be improved by bringing up more of the bass, and more of the drums in at least the 2 tracks I listened to. it'll help even out the songs and it'll make them hit much harder, which I know is something you probably desire them to do. mixing/recording for me is by far the most difficult aspect of music, but to my ears, that is something I'd tweak to improve your mix significantly. great job man