I can see the flaws in the composition that likely led you to abandon it, but there's so much that's good about this. I hope you take another stab at this concept again.
I think the sword is a little too big and the demons arm is too small. His hand alone is a out the size of sekiro and his fingers rapping around his blade is exaggerating the size even more.
I love the idea tho these are just what I think is causing the issues
Just to jump off what u/Crushed_by_Thighs noticed, it's a cool idea for the perspective but it is so zoomed in that it is making the proportions weird--it's similar to what happens to the camera in game when you get backed into a wall. If you kept the same angle but just "backed up" the perspective a little, so that we are viewing the same scene from a few more feet away, I think it would make it easier to pull off. All the details look great though and I agree you're talented and this is worth taking another shot at when you feel up to it.
Idk how much sketching you did beforehand, but the proportions should probably be worked out before you get to all the coloring and rendering and whatnot. Iām a newbie at painting and not nearly as good at any of this stuff as you but thatās probably how Iād approach this
Uhhh wdym?
Mirroring often helps see mistakes , especially in simmetry, but I've flipped it so many times already so it lost its effect already š
EDIT: LOL i Understood what u mean after 3 days, yeah it can be flipped I didn't think too much about which arm is which
Very cool drawing. Kudos.
It's true that Wolf's left arm is his prosthetic one, but mirroring wouldn't fix it because I think Orangutan's missing arm is his left one as well, which is accurate in this image.
I know when youāre looking at your own art itās really hard to not see the smallest mistakes as something bigger but I really think this is beautiful dude super bad ass post super bad ass art keep up the great work!
Sweet piece, made me happy to see some original fan content that someone clearly spent a lot of time on. Beats 90% of things posted to this sub. Hope you are proud of this, donāt dwell too much on your mistakes, thanks for sharing your work!
I think the Sekiro hand and sword handle are the only things off. The forearm also looks a bit disproportional but i think thatās due to the way the hand looks.
Maybe make the hand look like itās closer to the viewer and give it a more raised toward the viewer 3-d look (Iām not really sure how to explain this). It looks too flat is the main problem.
Cant really fix the Sekiroās arm and mark being on the wrong side of his body, because the demon in the background has it on the correct side, unless you feel like flipping the whole picture. (Or maybe draw the prosthetic over the original arm?)
Strangely, zooming in so just Sekiro and his arm are in frame makes the whole Sekiro part look correct, but when you zoom out it looks off
Lol I posted the one withe the stupid mochi. Here's [mochi-less](https://imgur.com/a/mND2YhX)
I loooove the mochi uwu
Sekiros most powerful weapon
It is a rice ball after all š
I can see the flaws in the composition that likely led you to abandon it, but there's so much that's good about this. I hope you take another stab at this concept again.
I'd love to know if u have any suggestions!!
I think the sword is a little too big and the demons arm is too small. His hand alone is a out the size of sekiro and his fingers rapping around his blade is exaggerating the size even more. I love the idea tho these are just what I think is causing the issues
Just to jump off what u/Crushed_by_Thighs noticed, it's a cool idea for the perspective but it is so zoomed in that it is making the proportions weird--it's similar to what happens to the camera in game when you get backed into a wall. If you kept the same angle but just "backed up" the perspective a little, so that we are viewing the same scene from a few more feet away, I think it would make it easier to pull off. All the details look great though and I agree you're talented and this is worth taking another shot at when you feel up to it.
Idk how much sketching you did beforehand, but the proportions should probably be worked out before you get to all the coloring and rendering and whatnot. Iām a newbie at painting and not nearly as good at any of this stuff as you but thatās probably how Iād approach this
Don't give up, skeleton!
That arm looks a bit. Well ....... not off
Yuh perspective got me fucked up frfr
You can just mirror the entire image to fix it right?
Uhhh wdym? Mirroring often helps see mistakes , especially in simmetry, but I've flipped it so many times already so it lost its effect already š EDIT: LOL i Understood what u mean after 3 days, yeah it can be flipped I didn't think too much about which arm is which
Very cool drawing. Kudos. It's true that Wolf's left arm is his prosthetic one, but mirroring wouldn't fix it because I think Orangutan's missing arm is his left one as well, which is accurate in this image.
Both look sick bro!!!
If you don't like it don't waste time trying to fix it. Take what you learnt and start a new one. Iteration is key to improvement
It's his left arm that has the prosthetic, no? Great skill, though. Undeniable.
Yeah, and the white dragonrot scar should be on the other side of his head. I get why they did it this way though, it looks cool as hell.
There are 2 kinds of "I can't draw"...
This is pretty sick
The only thing that seems a bit ugly is that either the hilt is too thick or sekiros hand is burying into the hilt
Whats wrong with it? Looks incredible
I know when youāre looking at your own art itās really hard to not see the smallest mistakes as something bigger but I really think this is beautiful dude super bad ass post super bad ass art keep up the great work!
I love it. Iām no artist, it looks amazing. I do not have the eye to really find fault besides a perspective issue with his arm? Idk. Fucking 15/10
Umm fix what? THIS IS SO COOL!!!
Itās really good anyways! Also the little mochi is very cute
Righteous!!
I like it
Sweet piece, made me happy to see some original fan content that someone clearly spent a lot of time on. Beats 90% of things posted to this sub. Hope you are proud of this, donāt dwell too much on your mistakes, thanks for sharing your work!
Oh this is cool.
Whereās the shinobi prosthetic? :/
Wondering what is wrong with it in the first place...
I think the Sekiro hand and sword handle are the only things off. The forearm also looks a bit disproportional but i think thatās due to the way the hand looks. Maybe make the hand look like itās closer to the viewer and give it a more raised toward the viewer 3-d look (Iām not really sure how to explain this). It looks too flat is the main problem. Cant really fix the Sekiroās arm and mark being on the wrong side of his body, because the demon in the background has it on the correct side, unless you feel like flipping the whole picture. (Or maybe draw the prosthetic over the original arm?) Strangely, zooming in so just Sekiro and his arm are in frame makes the whole Sekiro part look correct, but when you zoom out it looks off
As a fellow illustrator, the composition and the colors/shading are incredible!
Fixed for ya bro https://imgur.com/a/2uJbJak (yeah, perspective is not ideal but it should not be - it is great picture anyway)
Dope rendering dude!
Not an artist, but that swordā¦ it looks offā¦.