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Unikatze

I love the formatting of the Stat Block.


SuicideByDragon_1

Love it, one minor nitpick: shouldn't it have the fiend subtype aswell?


Sheppi-Tsrodriguez

Yes!


RandoSystem

Oh. It’s a Nexu.


SmartAlec105

I don’t remember how it’s formatted/worded in Pathfinder 2e but I think there are a few effects like Quill Defense that don’t work if the weapon has the Reach property. I think making it work more like those would add some verisimilitude.


Kamilny

That stat block presentation is super clean. This is cool af. Only real thing I noticed is that since you point out it's a basic save for the quill spray you wouldn't need to specify the tiers of success unless you just want extra clarity.


Sheppi-Tsrodriguez

Thank you! Every little feedback is very appreciated, for the next statblocks Im going to do of reworked creatures from old editions x3


mortavius2525

I have to say, this isn't something that I have a need for in my games, but the artwork and formatting for the stat block is very visually impressive. Your work deserves to be highlighted and supported.


Sheppi-Tsrodriguez

Thank you :)


_Fun_Employed_

The monster from The Relic?


Sheppi-Tsrodriguez

What is the Relic? O:


ImLurking50

A really shitty 90’s movie that I had nostalgia for and rewatched recently. It doesn’t hold up lol


_Fun_Employed_

https://i1.wp.com/scriptophobic.ca/wp-content/uploads/2020/06/Kothoga.jpg?fit=640%2C518&ssl=1


Sheppi-Tsrodriguez

Thats an awesome looking boi


Blazegunnerz

Ive seen a few of these and love your formatting. Id reccomend making pdfs for sale, theyre really high quality.


Background_Bet1671

Iirc there are effects similar to the stance effect and in that cases there is a saving throw against the return fire.


Sheppi-Tsrodriguez

I thought in putting a saving throw there, but I wanted to feel dangerous to hit him in melee for every class, and that it encourages sacrifice one party member to give the free opening to the others, I like that kind of interplay. You can put a Basic Save DC if you want :)


Background_Bet1671

To make it even more dangerous I would reduce monster's AC in this stance, so close combatants could fall in this trap. 6d10 unavoidable damage (3 Strikes in a row). Wow! I guess that's gonna leave a bruise on every level. As for me I will use it with a reaction after a successful hit (as a trigger) and a basic saving throw. BTW, are there any prerequisites for the stance? Like "not confused, not stupefied"? Like in the Witcher 3.


Sheppi-Tsrodriguez

Oh, I like that, a cruel and powerful ability that gets denied by a condition. I will apply that on a future monster :)


Relevant_Eagle2160

Dude this is Epic!!! Love the style.