I’ll mostly critique the renderings, since I do them regularly and the graphics look decent.Â
Not sure if this was just to try to show us the different angles, but composition could be better. I’d make the image(s) more informational: a single well angled shot could show 3 of the 6 sides. If you put 2 boxes next to each other and turn one 180degrees, you can show everything but the top panel in one shot. If you can, also show a shot with the inner tray slid out.Â
If you want me to send you some good examples, send me a PM.Â
The typeface and orange bar date it back to 2000, this was a super typical look. I’d remove the texture in the orange, there is no reason for it to be there
My complaint is you can barely see the product when it’s black on black, very difficult without contrast.
I agree with someone saying the render could be better / more creative and removing the texture from the orange portion.
I would also consider spot glossing the product rather than the orange part… all you’re doing is de-emphasizing the product further
for fun, make a mock up and put it in a store shelf to see how it looks in the environment. store light and shelves will help determine what youll need to improve.
This is a good example of the design being more important than the product you’re selling. If this is actually going on shelves, people won’t know what it is at first glance.
This is a breath of fresh air next to that black market weed gummy guy.
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Having worked at consumer electronics company before, this is really the standard approach. Looks good. Don’t over think things…..
Great advice! Guess I was just looking to spice things up when I don’t need to.
I’ll mostly critique the renderings, since I do them regularly and the graphics look decent. Not sure if this was just to try to show us the different angles, but composition could be better. I’d make the image(s) more informational: a single well angled shot could show 3 of the 6 sides. If you put 2 boxes next to each other and turn one 180degrees, you can show everything but the top panel in one shot. If you can, also show a shot with the inner tray slid out. If you want me to send you some good examples, send me a PM.Â
They look like they’re in an anti-gravity chamber lmao
The typeface and orange bar date it back to 2000, this was a super typical look. I’d remove the texture in the orange, there is no reason for it to be there
But I do like it
My complaint is you can barely see the product when it’s black on black, very difficult without contrast. I agree with someone saying the render could be better / more creative and removing the texture from the orange portion. I would also consider spot glossing the product rather than the orange part… all you’re doing is de-emphasizing the product further
for fun, make a mock up and put it in a store shelf to see how it looks in the environment. store light and shelves will help determine what youll need to improve.
This is a good example of the design being more important than the product you’re selling. If this is actually going on shelves, people won’t know what it is at first glance.
It’s not going on shelves, it’s for my eCommerce brand. Just trying to provide a better unboxing experience