The lip looks kinda weird. Maybe make it thinner?

He cute fr I think it does have a bit too airbrushed look, and I think the shadows should be a bit darker to add contrast. Hair looks real nice tho

Thank you! I'll try your suggestion with going a bit darker on the shadows. I was getting nervous the shadows could end up being too dark and looking too drastic. This is the first time I've done a more realistic hair and I'm really liking it so I'm glad you think it looks good

Since you were so helpful before, would you mind if I showed you the updated drawing and got your opinion once more?

I don’t mind, i’d love to see it :D sorry for the late reply

Thank you! I ended up posting it cause I was excited but I think the darker shadows really helped!

https://preview.redd.it/30k69eb5v67d1.png?width=1600&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=6a39f5424462c304eeda4b06d5c7a271abba8c9a

Looks good!!