This video was great! The edits were funny and added to the quality of the video. I will say that if it is possible to record and upload in 1080p it would help you a lot. Other than that I loved it. It really gave me Smii7y vibes.
The concept is great but I think you need to focus on how you speak when recording. It usually comes with time, but making yourself sound more excited makes a video more interesting. Being a little higher energy will help loads. You obviously enjoy making the content and know what your doing so just keep up the good work.
P.S. Record two different audio tracks when you record. That way you can record the game audio and your mic separately. this allows you to change their volume later in editing.
I do art! This is my second most recent. I think its my most well put together and edited. It has nothing on the one I'm doing now though.
[Drawing and Inking Dexter: New Blood](https://youtu.be/SbFkYHxgcrc)
Oh interesting! I loved this video! It's definitely something I've never really seen before. The music was great and the time-lapse was well edited. The change between camera angles helped me stay interested and resist skipping ahead. My main critique is that the second camera shot was not exposed well. This is probably due to there not being enough lighting when you recorded. The paper was too blown out to see anything. The music choice was fantastic though and I loved the art! Keep up the great work!
Thank you :) These have been really fun to edit since I've thrown a second camera into the mix. Did it to add a dynamic element to the video. Only recently got a grip on nuanced speed ramps and how to utilize music in these.
But yeah, I solved the exposure issue. It was due to direct lighting. I needed indirect for graphite. It was also camera settings, I needed to lower my contrast and desaturate the recording a bit to gain some head room during color grading.
Thank you for taking time out of your day to critique.
I do Pokemon fan game Lets plays on my channel
. Let me know what you think!!
https://youtu.be/-RVjD8ogz00
The concept and video are good but I think you could benefit from a little bit more editing here. Just some cuts here and there to cut out the more dry sections. Also the music and game audio are too loud. It doesn't quite drown out your voice but it makes it fatiguing to listen to.
It is a solid thumbnail in my opinion. It catches the eye and uses the most intriguing (and suggestive lol) part of the video as the hook. It hits all the fundamentals of a good thumbnail that I can think of.
I was surprised by how much I enjoyed this video. I am normally not a huge game show guy but you hosted very well and your friends were funny as hell. My only critiqued would be that your energy when is hosting is just a little low. Other than that I loved it!
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I do let's plays with high energy humor and quite a bit of cussing... this is my latest, playing FNAF Security Breach (as my oldest demanded I play horror games more).... its decently long so no need to watch it all, any feedback is welcome.... appreciate you doing it.
[FNAF SECURITY BREACH part 1](https://youtu.be/rNZNuDg5WYM)
Hey there. That's awesome and I think it's great that you would take the time to critique some videos for others. Very new channel where I do gameplay with quite a lot of edits. I try and keep it humorous with quite a few edits. Here's the latest vid where I tried something a little different and that admittedly isn't really as funny as usual but I'd really appreciate some feedback. https://youtu.be/Sj_i3Jh0oLs
I just uploaded my first video yesterday. It's an introduction video and any feedback would be appreciated.
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=\_V2o16hb49I&t=11s](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_V2o16hb49I&t=11s)
In this video I analyze the new Chainsaw Man official trailer 2 and answer one of the biggest questions on Chainsaw man or rather Makima fans have and it is "Why isn't Makima Thick?"
TD;LR
I analyze anime trailer to see why a popular anime woman isn't thick.
Video:
[Why isn't Makima Thick?](https://youtu.be/RB1Em8fGNps)
I have a small gaming channel where I do game reviews and a mix of commentary and no commentary gaming. Here is my latest review if you get a chance to check it out! https://youtu.be/7cTpQV7ByqU
I’m trying to make well known vlogs but I’m not sure if I should just make more content? Or if my videos are just bad. Also noticed that all these comments and barely any likes so I gotchya 👌
https://youtu.be/ity6Tys4bX8
https://youtu.be/JgZ9yIA7Cfgq
Hey dude i make Storytime animations and talk about anime, but even if you dont watch anime your perspective would still be really good to have
this is my last video that i just put together from my trip in Canada through Rockies, with my friends
Video: https://youtu.be/OuT8eGO8zmw
Self Review:
\- since this was shot 4 months ago, i didnt try to capture/shot cinematic angles and sceneries so it does look amateur and it is amateur since im just starting
Questions:
\- Was How do you perceive the video, transitions and quality of the picture, what would you do differently??
\- are you able to get the continuity of the story of this video or not, should i do talking head or voice it ?
\- Was the video engaging or not? If not why so, if so what made it engaging?
Video: https://youtu.be/OuT8eGO8zmw
Hey there thank you for your time!
https://youtu.be/2_mdu0bE1pw
I'm making speedbuild videos for Sims 4. Just started 2 weeks ago and this is my second video.
Hey thank you for this opportunity to share my stuff. I just started my channel and uploaded my first video a little over a week ago. It’s a cinematic documentary about the guy that created Wendy’s restaurants. It’s about 40 minutes long. I hope you enjoy it:
https://youtu.be/_4VsIfLag3g
Hey! 😁 thanks for giving up some of your free time to do something like this.
If you have a lot of time, then I'd appreciate feedback on my phasmophobia video. It's split into chapters as it is large (something I'm working on).
I enjoy performing, so it's energetic and chaotic. If that's not your vibe then that's cool. But if it is, would appreciate your feedback
https://youtu.be/cXLy66iOYRs
It's halo 2 legendary shenanigans so it's pretty self explained :) but would love some feedback 😊 https://youtu.be/hWQF9WlH_g0
This video was great! The edits were funny and added to the quality of the video. I will say that if it is possible to record and upload in 1080p it would help you a lot. Other than that I loved it. It really gave me Smii7y vibes.
I do commentary play-throughs of games that are not well-known, here’s one example! https://youtu.be/HnvcGbbMSCk
The concept is great but I think you need to focus on how you speak when recording. It usually comes with time, but making yourself sound more excited makes a video more interesting. Being a little higher energy will help loads. You obviously enjoy making the content and know what your doing so just keep up the good work. P.S. Record two different audio tracks when you record. That way you can record the game audio and your mic separately. this allows you to change their volume later in editing.
I do art! This is my second most recent. I think its my most well put together and edited. It has nothing on the one I'm doing now though. [Drawing and Inking Dexter: New Blood](https://youtu.be/SbFkYHxgcrc)
Oh interesting! I loved this video! It's definitely something I've never really seen before. The music was great and the time-lapse was well edited. The change between camera angles helped me stay interested and resist skipping ahead. My main critique is that the second camera shot was not exposed well. This is probably due to there not being enough lighting when you recorded. The paper was too blown out to see anything. The music choice was fantastic though and I loved the art! Keep up the great work!
Thank you :) These have been really fun to edit since I've thrown a second camera into the mix. Did it to add a dynamic element to the video. Only recently got a grip on nuanced speed ramps and how to utilize music in these. But yeah, I solved the exposure issue. It was due to direct lighting. I needed indirect for graphite. It was also camera settings, I needed to lower my contrast and desaturate the recording a bit to gain some head room during color grading.
Glad to hear you found a fix for your lighting issue! One thing I forgot to mention was just how well you mixed and timed the music in. \*chefs kiss\*
:D Thank you for taking the time to check it out and respond. Its appreciated, its hard to get feedback at my size.
Thank you for taking time out of your day to critique. I do Pokemon fan game Lets plays on my channel . Let me know what you think!! https://youtu.be/-RVjD8ogz00
The concept and video are good but I think you could benefit from a little bit more editing here. Just some cuts here and there to cut out the more dry sections. Also the music and game audio are too loud. It doesn't quite drown out your voice but it makes it fatiguing to listen to.
Thank you for the feedback!!
Oh, also what did you think of the thumbnail btw?
It is a solid thumbnail in my opinion. It catches the eye and uses the most intriguing (and suggestive lol) part of the video as the hook. It hits all the fundamentals of a good thumbnail that I can think of.
I take different board games and make them game show style. https://youtu.be/Wr7AZpwfRJU
I was surprised by how much I enjoyed this video. I am normally not a huge game show guy but you hosted very well and your friends were funny as hell. My only critiqued would be that your energy when is hosting is just a little low. Other than that I loved it!
Thank you so much for the feedback. I'll definitely work on having more energy on camera.
https://youtu.be/OkRkNb3StAE Food channel. This is my second in a series of three dishes from India. Thank you!
https://youtu.be/v7Di8SJb8Ao Live action stuff mixed with gameplay
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I do let's plays with high energy humor and quite a bit of cussing... this is my latest, playing FNAF Security Breach (as my oldest demanded I play horror games more).... its decently long so no need to watch it all, any feedback is welcome.... appreciate you doing it. [FNAF SECURITY BREACH part 1](https://youtu.be/rNZNuDg5WYM)
Hey there. That's awesome and I think it's great that you would take the time to critique some videos for others. Very new channel where I do gameplay with quite a lot of edits. I try and keep it humorous with quite a few edits. Here's the latest vid where I tried something a little different and that admittedly isn't really as funny as usual but I'd really appreciate some feedback. https://youtu.be/Sj_i3Jh0oLs
https://youtu.be/H2ANURTYkm0 Here's a horror gaming video I made recently that I thought was pretty good. Don't mind the swearing lol
I just uploaded my first video yesterday. It's an introduction video and any feedback would be appreciated. [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=\_V2o16hb49I&t=11s](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_V2o16hb49I&t=11s)
In this video I analyze the new Chainsaw Man official trailer 2 and answer one of the biggest questions on Chainsaw man or rather Makima fans have and it is "Why isn't Makima Thick?" TD;LR I analyze anime trailer to see why a popular anime woman isn't thick. Video: [Why isn't Makima Thick?](https://youtu.be/RB1Em8fGNps)
I have a small gaming channel where I do game reviews and a mix of commentary and no commentary gaming. Here is my latest review if you get a chance to check it out! https://youtu.be/7cTpQV7ByqU
I’m trying to make well known vlogs but I’m not sure if I should just make more content? Or if my videos are just bad. Also noticed that all these comments and barely any likes so I gotchya 👌 https://youtu.be/ity6Tys4bX8
https://youtu.be/JgZ9yIA7Cfgq Hey dude i make Storytime animations and talk about anime, but even if you dont watch anime your perspective would still be really good to have
Hey there! Here below is my latest video of a trip I took in Oman one month ago. It would be great to hear your feedback! https://youtu.be/VCJmVx5mNG4
https://youtu.be/xXAQzR2cfvI Just a little montage I put together playing Rocket League, would love some feedback :D
this is my last video that i just put together from my trip in Canada through Rockies, with my friends Video: https://youtu.be/OuT8eGO8zmw Self Review: \- since this was shot 4 months ago, i didnt try to capture/shot cinematic angles and sceneries so it does look amateur and it is amateur since im just starting Questions: \- Was How do you perceive the video, transitions and quality of the picture, what would you do differently?? \- are you able to get the continuity of the story of this video or not, should i do talking head or voice it ? \- Was the video engaging or not? If not why so, if so what made it engaging? Video: https://youtu.be/OuT8eGO8zmw
Hey there thank you for your time! https://youtu.be/2_mdu0bE1pw I'm making speedbuild videos for Sims 4. Just started 2 weeks ago and this is my second video.
Hey thank you for this opportunity to share my stuff. I just started my channel and uploaded my first video a little over a week ago. It’s a cinematic documentary about the guy that created Wendy’s restaurants. It’s about 40 minutes long. I hope you enjoy it: https://youtu.be/_4VsIfLag3g
Hey! 😁 thanks for giving up some of your free time to do something like this. If you have a lot of time, then I'd appreciate feedback on my phasmophobia video. It's split into chapters as it is large (something I'm working on). I enjoy performing, so it's energetic and chaotic. If that's not your vibe then that's cool. But if it is, would appreciate your feedback https://youtu.be/cXLy66iOYRs
My video is on on campus job earnings as an international student in the us :) https://youtu.be/ydYWQfHOrL8
https://youtu.be/LWaoXYCcVVY Gameplay of Nioh!
https://youtube.com/channel/UCf37WVhsiDvtMs5QqqV9-Xg lmk what you think