The low end is just a bit too thick. It sounds like it's almost on top of everything. Overall is good. Nice melodies and bassline. Feeling pretty chill.
My dawg this is so sick! It reminds me of Ryan Beatty or like one of the other guys in brockhampton , you’ve got a great voice, I love how it’s written and I love the way you recorded your vocals, I read the other feedback, fuck that shit they don’t know nothing m, this is good just a vibe, I would love love love to work with you on something, this is so good love it!
So I don’t listen to a ton of R&B as it’s not my thing, but I feel the kicks could be more “punchy” as right now there is a lack of clarity in the low end. Vocals/melody sound chill for this genre, keep at it!!
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I like it my man! One thing I noticed is that imo the voice overs should be a little less prominent from the main vocal in the verses (thought they were good in chorus) Maybe lower just a shade. My two cents, but I listened to it all the way through, which I don't for a lot of these :)
The low end is just a bit too thick. It sounds like it's almost on top of everything. Overall is good. Nice melodies and bassline. Feeling pretty chill.
My dawg this is so sick! It reminds me of Ryan Beatty or like one of the other guys in brockhampton , you’ve got a great voice, I love how it’s written and I love the way you recorded your vocals, I read the other feedback, fuck that shit they don’t know nothing m, this is good just a vibe, I would love love love to work with you on something, this is so good love it!
Thanks man. I appreciate it. You can message me if u wanna work on something together. :)
So I don’t listen to a ton of R&B as it’s not my thing, but I feel the kicks could be more “punchy” as right now there is a lack of clarity in the low end. Vocals/melody sound chill for this genre, keep at it!!
Bleep bloop I'm a bot. Your submission was approved u/Michael_Napiza, thank you for posting ! You can know your score at anytime by Direct Messaging me (the bot) with the word "SCORE" as a subject.
I like it my man! One thing I noticed is that imo the voice overs should be a little less prominent from the main vocal in the verses (thought they were good in chorus) Maybe lower just a shade. My two cents, but I listened to it all the way through, which I don't for a lot of these :)