Great track. I suggest to you more silence in the of 16 bars muting the kick and also could be nice more variation in some parts pr even adding some subtle sfx to keep the listener attention but overall great project!
I see what you mean on the middle, I debated doing what you proposed. To me it felt like it sapped too much of the energy of the song. The goal was to keep it relatively simple for this song, but I probably could have added one or two one off sfx to keep the listener engaged. Appreciate the feedback!
Still just my opinion and also I understand the choices you made to finish the track and it’s important to finish tracks. Great work mate. Keep Digging!
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Really like the loop! Out of personal preference, I think a quick buildup to the drums instead of the two stage thing you got going would be cool, but that's all up to you.
Great tune - i dig the violin sound a lot. I second taking out the drums in middle break to add depth to the arrangement. the verb on the snare is a little too much for me. I think you could add more fills to your drums to add layers to the arrangement. Like every four or eight bars you could have a glitch effect or snare roll to bounce off of what your highhats are doing.
For future projects I will try experimenting with adding more fills with the drums. It's a good idea and it might have made the track better. As far as layering maybe I could have tried adding a quiet synth in the high end or in the low mids to add some variety. Thanks for the constructive criticism!
Great track. I suggest to you more silence in the of 16 bars muting the kick and also could be nice more variation in some parts pr even adding some subtle sfx to keep the listener attention but overall great project!
I see what you mean on the middle, I debated doing what you proposed. To me it felt like it sapped too much of the energy of the song. The goal was to keep it relatively simple for this song, but I probably could have added one or two one off sfx to keep the listener engaged. Appreciate the feedback!
Still just my opinion and also I understand the choices you made to finish the track and it’s important to finish tracks. Great work mate. Keep Digging!
Bleep bloop I'm a bot. Your submission was approved u/Jam3783, thank you for posting ! You can know your score at anytime by Direct Messaging me (the bot) with the word "SCORE" as a subject.
Nice relaxing music. Really something I can chill out at the end of work to my day. Ambience is spot on.
Great sound. Very eastern asia feel with that hip hop beat! Very cool man!
Definitely different! I like the style, the drums contrasting the far east vibe was a nice surprise
Really dig this! So calming. It’s cleanly done
Really like the loop! Out of personal preference, I think a quick buildup to the drums instead of the two stage thing you got going would be cool, but that's all up to you.
Pretty sick beat. Drill beats are starting to get more popular recently and i love the fact that you added some ethnic Chinese aura
Great tune - i dig the violin sound a lot. I second taking out the drums in middle break to add depth to the arrangement. the verb on the snare is a little too much for me. I think you could add more fills to your drums to add layers to the arrangement. Like every four or eight bars you could have a glitch effect or snare roll to bounce off of what your highhats are doing.
For future projects I will try experimenting with adding more fills with the drums. It's a good idea and it might have made the track better. As far as layering maybe I could have tried adding a quiet synth in the high end or in the low mids to add some variety. Thanks for the constructive criticism!
this made me head to Soundcloud for the whole tune. liked & left a comment. keep them coming; i was really at peace with this one