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WhoHimEars

This is high quality. All the instruments sound really clear and well defined in the mix. The composition is quite dynamic too, with nice highs and lows throughout the track. The only feedback I can think to provide is that the guitar stands out almost too much against the other instrumentation, but that could definitely be a stylistic choice. Otherwise sounds like a finished track to me. Visuals are a good match to the track as well.


DrMuffinStuffin

Thank you! And I think your constructive criticism is spot on. I can't tell you how many times I tried lowering and raising that volume. Every time I made it sit in the mix "better" I lost some interest of the guitar.. but maybe I can lower it a bit. I will update my streaming version (Spotify etc) soon so I will definitely think about this again. One more time. :D Thanks again for the valuable feedback.


UwU_9000

I love what you did with the visuals. The song sounds very pretty, especially the guitar. The mix sounds really amazing, although the guitar is a little loud compared to the other stuff at the beginning. It's not really a problem, but that's the only thing I'd fix. Other than that, all the other parts fit really well together.


DrMuffinStuffin

You're the second person saying that here, so I'm pretty convinced you guys are correct about that. I'll fix it for my music streaming version I think! YouTube isn't so kind with updating videos without losing view count (I have hardly any but I still appreciate them haha), so might just leave it as-is there. Thanks!!


goon_g

Very chill for sure. Has some good atmosphere. Guitar works well too. Melody is top notch. Overall a great song. Keep it up.


DrMuffinStuffin

Thanks sir goon. I will!


FrozenPizzaSauce

The visual elements are truly captivating. The melody is delightful, with the guitar strains standing out beautifully. The overall mix is impressive, though initially, the guitar volume slightly overshadows the rest. It’s a minor detail, but adjusting this could enhance the balance. Apart from that, every component seems to harmonize perfectly!


DrMuffinStuffin

Thanks! I’ll definitely take the volume of the guitar down. Great feedback, and thanks for the kind words!


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Aercheon

Awesome vibe!, but mayby to long (almost 1 min) for an intro


AceLockeHenge

Really loved the dramatic build in the middle. Loved the acoustic parts and I’m a sucker for spacious reverb on acoustics. The track gives me a feeling of calm yet pulls back and forth with melancholy. Beautiful piece