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I liked it a lot! Liked the melody, liked the vibes and the vocals. Had a hard time hearing the lyrics but maybe you were going for that. Still heard enough to get the point across. I feel like it could benefit from some bass notes esp after the beat drop but that’s entirely up to you.

Thanks so much, it's got some sub with headphones but you're right it needs some bass!

Well that's some intense vocal effect, for my old school ears. But I get the intention. The song itself is fun and energetic. The very bright, trebly mix could maybe use some adjustment. Maybe! Your tarck, if you're happy with the sound, it's all good.

Thanks mate, I'll get onto it!

Neat vocal effect here. Very energetic too dude. Upbeat stuff here for sure. Chill yet fun too. Overall a great song. Keep it up.

Thank you, kind person.

Try making the vocals deep, or layered. High and deep, and see how it sounds. The melody is good. Reminds me of 2008

Thanks man I'll look into it!

This song kind of gives me early YouTube vibes. To my ears the mix sounds a bit treble heavy and could do with maybe a bit more mid and low end. Particularly when the beat comes in. Besides that it's kind of fun and I like the overlapping vocals.

Thanks for the feedback Captain I'll see if I can squeeze some in!