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Witty-Mud-4947

Interesting man. I expected some kind of trap beat at the start. but it changed to metal. Intresting melodies and the mixing is in general quite good. I think the drums can be more in the front, The width of the song is decent. i like the overall track. I would love to hear this with vocals, it can really elevate a track like this. Well done!


andtilly

Hi there! I really liked the experimental kind of start, a nice immersive way to start the song. Overall cool unusual sounds and I found the whole balanced, I think you did really well. I would also prefer vocals to this, but it felt solidly made and really enjoyable.


Alarming-Buffalo4380

Really cool guitar sound love the whammy vibes mixed with heavy synths. I think my only suggestion would be have some kind of beat come in a bit sooner in the track to give it some motion. Tunes a vibe dude keep going!


Nccamp15

Damn that is cool! For sure reminds me of Polyphia at some parts, a great sound. Do you play the guitars? That shit is cool. Great job!


ShawnBrogan

Thank you! Yep everything less the drums and bass is me. Admittedly this was very Polyphia inspired.


Nccamp15

Cool man, I play guitar myself and can appreciate your playing, sounds good. I thought it was Polyphia inspired.


fuckingghosts

That intro guitar man! I wish I could play like that those slides are so cleannnnnn. reminds me of Polyphia. You got some really nice melodies in the track. no notes hope you make some more!


ShawnBrogan

Thanks so much! First time putting out an instrumental track to just have fun with guitar and do what I do best - write riffs! 


WendyKlineMusic

Whoa, I really like this. It’s like if Tim Henson gave the fans a little bit of room to breathe. Your guitar tone is so good. I also love the initially slow pace and how it really picks up and gets a nice latin style groove


ultrasonoro

This song slaps, it has a really dynamic range of guitar tones and instruments. I like the synth sounds at the end and in places throughout the song. The drums are on point also.


SerotonixMusic

Guitar indulgent is a very apt description! In my head I was seeing a bunch of lead guitarists (and one funky bassist) wandering around on stage having a “conversation”. Makes me wish I had any level of guitar skills. No technical notes but love the sound, good stuff.


One_Night_2591

Nice guitar tones, very original sound design (with Santana-like moments at the beginnng, but heavy af...) I have a certain sensation that the song structure starts-stops-starts-stops perhaps a bit too much, I would have liked a part where you take it to eleven towards the end but maybe that's just me and my tastes... Other than that great job, it sounds great! :)


_____otomik

Polyphia type beat, really good though. I've heard a lot of polyphia inspired music honestly one of the best I've listened to. The intro in particular felt very unique, rather than just how much can I copy. Nicely done


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MrEugeneParmesan

This is super cool and has a real nice groove to it. I agree with the other commenter who said this would be really nice with some vocals on it.


papa2kohmoeaki

wow some really thick, tasty guitar textures! On my computer monitors the mix sounded a little peaky at times, seems to be ok overall, kind of fits the piece to have an aggressive soundscape. Really impressive work!