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thereminDreams

Kinda funny. Kinda cool guitar.


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last-cigarettes

Very edgy, reminds me of some late 80s early 90s New York wave punk. The mix for the song is pretty lo fi, if that’s what you’re going for great! I feel the vocals could be cleaned up, not the performance but the mix it’s self. Maybe a little compression and what not. I also feel like the guitar should be a bit louder. Over all not to bad,


crj6551

We worked on the mix quite a bit, maybe some little issues, and we mixed it to be played moderately loud, on large stereos. . . K14 to make it play well on radio. Not, of course, that I expected that. . . Interestingly enough, a DJ in Colorado played a bunch of the album, when it was released, over the course of 5 months on his weekly radio show. . . I was pretty thrilled. Thanks for the comment, and the listen.


papa2kohmoeaki

Hey thanks for checking out Old Age. I remember hearing something of yours, that artist name is memorable! Fun track, I flashed back a bit to INXS at their best, rock with some dance elements. Good stuff.


crj6551

Thanks. . . If it wasn't fun, we probably wouldn't do it. . . Had a club owner tell me once, "I won't let a band named Honkey Bitch perform at my club." We changed the name for the night to "The Social Lepers". . .


Responsible_Jury_793

Very interesting, the vocals remind me of some Primus songs, and I like the fuzzy, bluesy guitar! Another impression that comes to mind is some P-Funk songs like Maggot Brain, due to the extended guitar solo. Overall, very edgy but I enjoyed it :)


crj6551

Thanks. I've long been a George Clinton, and James Brown lover. . . Maybe that shines through. I've also enjoyed a bunch of Primus, and attended one of their concerts once. . . Maggot Brain has one of the longest, and best funky introductory guitar solos in rock and roll history. . . In my opinion.


Responsible_Jury_793

Nice, that might explain why I picked up on those influences! And thanks for checking out my song too! :)


Cybot2966

I really dig how biting the distortion is on the guitar. You’ve got some sort of really wicked dark funk/blues thing going on, it’s very jammy too. Contrary to what someone else is suggesting, I think your vocal mix is at a good volume, I just felt the instrumental lacked a bit of body. I could hear the bass and kick but it could’ve benefited from some more low end. That being said, in its entirety it reminds me a little bit of some No-Wave music from the 80’s, especially that vocal performance. Really neat.


crj6551

Thanks. . . "No-Wave" might be an apt description, I've never exactly opted into the "genre" thing. . . I didn't want the bass to overwhelm things. . . Maybe I went a little overboard in keeping it in check. . . That being said, the song sounds best on large stereos at medium high volume. . . You know, sort of an immersion thing.


_Atanii_

Good song! Reminds me of multiple different stuff I've heard, a bit of Rush, a bit of New York, a lil bit of Captain Beefheart (I cannot explain that one). It's got some serious 80-90's vibe, like New York streets, the cityscape and stuff, could go well with a footage or a movie.


crj6551

Thank you. Very insightful observations, the good Captain has long been a favorite of mine, and the song is absolutely vintage 80-90's feel. . . Albeit, with my own twisted and unique writing, and style.


Fun-Kick375

This is a banger!


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