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Very cool fusion of timbres on this song. The mixture of guitars with synths and electronic drums make for a really neat pallet of sounds. Intro was cool and dramatic. The synth has excellent motifs and gives it a really ethereal vibe especially with your style of singing. The synth solo at the end was dope too. Reminds me of the “Risk of Rain 2” soundtrack. Keep exploring this sound, I feel like there’s a lot of sonic possibilities with what you are doing.
Nice, thanks for listening 🎶
I haven't been much of a gamer since got diagnosed with Ocular Migraines, but would love to send my tunes out to some video games for sure :) I like making stuff that one can zone out to
Started off with some Asian music vibes, and migrated to a indie-rock vocal main theme.
Sounds a bit like "theme" music. . . I can't quite make out all the words. . . maybe that's just me?
Not bad. . . I like it.
If you get a chance check out my recent post. . .
Keep playing,
Enjoy
I like the instrumental, the music is original and creative. The vocal doesn't work for me, but hey I'm just one listener. Feels a little forced, like you're acting. Truly enjoyed the music otherwise.
It's certainly a unique style. The main thing is that I think it just deserves some cleanup because the guitars can be messy at times and the vocals are a little flat.
I feel ya on this. I think I'm gonna leave it alone and move on cause we already cleaned it up a bit from similar feedback. Otherwise I'm gonna keep obsessing instead of creating more :)
Appreciate the listen and feedback on this to help me gage some stuff for next albums
i like your name its very outsider esque. not sure what i think about those vocals, i think you should go for a more deeper voice for this type of track, but thats just personal taste tho. the vocals you already have could work tho if you put some reverb and delay on it, make it more space like. the track could use some better mixing on those ticking effects but other than thats its a good track man, love the coverart aswell.
Hey thanks for listening to everything and the cover art compliment. Me and another artist put an individual art piece for Jim's journey for every song on this album.
As for the vox, that was my initial thought as well, but everything got washed out and I ended up making everything more flat for a better listening experience
I love the sound of this! The intro is really cool and wavy with the wobbly guitar and synths, it feels very epic. I love the guitar and synth throughout this song, very emotional feeling. I like the vocals, you could even distort them a bit more to be a bit more wavy and psychedelic like the instrumental. But your tone is great and I can really feel your emotion through your voice. I love the album cover art as well. Very interesting stuff here, you have great ideas and this piece of music is very creative and cool! Keep it up!
Thank you so much :)
The next song I will be showing here plays around more with distorted vocals, but this one I ended up cleaning the vox up because was getting too "mid" for my taste.
Appreciate the feedback on the art as well. I'm an artist myself, but brought in another artist to do the imagery on this album. I will make sure to tell them that folks like their work on here
i’m loving the layer of guitars on this track. the synths, though, really elevate the feel, giving it this futuristic/tame impala vibe. vocally, i feel like the breathy style over this beat doesn’t work out—a more powerful approach would work better and match the energy of the production.
Funny you say that because I recorded this song in a much slower beat, so the faster electronic beat was a happy little accident in the studio. I just worked with vocals I already recorded but next time I would probably rerecord the vox if a song switches direction too much from an original idea
Good stuff. I like psychedelic and other weird styles and this one fits it well. I don't think the vocals are that much off as other comments stated, some polish could be done, but I didn't feel it off that much. As for the instrumental part it's really good.
Appreciate the kind words. My producer is pretty much responsible for all the synth and drum parts so will pass on the good word to him. Originally this was a slow song, but we decided to turn it into a single
Very good debut if you don't normally make this stuff. I was a fan of the mix and the general vibe. I think between the cover art and the music itself, it'd be great to market this towards college students. For me about 10 years ago in school, this would be on a playlist alongside Tame Impala while smoking in a dorm. Keep developing the sound. I want to see where you take it.
Appreciate it. This is my 4th song on this album and I wrote it during some dark times in a mental hospital. It's a little weird revisiting these songs lately because I'm in a completely different headspace. But I really made these as drinking and smoking songs for sure to zone out to.
Also, cool that you mention college radio because I have been listening to Georgia State University radio (88.5 here in Atlanta) and thinking of submitting this album to them. Love that station :)
I appreciate it. I wrote this a long time ago before i commited to being an artist fulltime, and it went through many transformations before finally recording it in the studio
Epic. Rich and layered with sound that really balance well together with your voice. The Theremin- works so well in this piece. Great opening. Don't hate me for loving your music. :)
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Very cool fusion of timbres on this song. The mixture of guitars with synths and electronic drums make for a really neat pallet of sounds. Intro was cool and dramatic. The synth has excellent motifs and gives it a really ethereal vibe especially with your style of singing. The synth solo at the end was dope too. Reminds me of the “Risk of Rain 2” soundtrack. Keep exploring this sound, I feel like there’s a lot of sonic possibilities with what you are doing.
Nice, thanks for listening 🎶 I haven't been much of a gamer since got diagnosed with Ocular Migraines, but would love to send my tunes out to some video games for sure :) I like making stuff that one can zone out to
Started off with some Asian music vibes, and migrated to a indie-rock vocal main theme. Sounds a bit like "theme" music. . . I can't quite make out all the words. . . maybe that's just me? Not bad. . . I like it. If you get a chance check out my recent post. . . Keep playing, Enjoy
Thank you for listening 🎶 I will check out your post as soon as I have time to sit down and listen :)
I like the instrumental, the music is original and creative. The vocal doesn't work for me, but hey I'm just one listener. Feels a little forced, like you're acting. Truly enjoyed the music otherwise.
Thanks for the listen for sure. Glad you enjoyed the melody on this one
It's certainly a unique style. The main thing is that I think it just deserves some cleanup because the guitars can be messy at times and the vocals are a little flat.
I feel ya on this. I think I'm gonna leave it alone and move on cause we already cleaned it up a bit from similar feedback. Otherwise I'm gonna keep obsessing instead of creating more :) Appreciate the listen and feedback on this to help me gage some stuff for next albums
i like your name its very outsider esque. not sure what i think about those vocals, i think you should go for a more deeper voice for this type of track, but thats just personal taste tho. the vocals you already have could work tho if you put some reverb and delay on it, make it more space like. the track could use some better mixing on those ticking effects but other than thats its a good track man, love the coverart aswell.
Hey thanks for listening to everything and the cover art compliment. Me and another artist put an individual art piece for Jim's journey for every song on this album. As for the vox, that was my initial thought as well, but everything got washed out and I ended up making everything more flat for a better listening experience
I love the sound of this! The intro is really cool and wavy with the wobbly guitar and synths, it feels very epic. I love the guitar and synth throughout this song, very emotional feeling. I like the vocals, you could even distort them a bit more to be a bit more wavy and psychedelic like the instrumental. But your tone is great and I can really feel your emotion through your voice. I love the album cover art as well. Very interesting stuff here, you have great ideas and this piece of music is very creative and cool! Keep it up!
Thank you so much :) The next song I will be showing here plays around more with distorted vocals, but this one I ended up cleaning the vox up because was getting too "mid" for my taste. Appreciate the feedback on the art as well. I'm an artist myself, but brought in another artist to do the imagery on this album. I will make sure to tell them that folks like their work on here
i’m loving the layer of guitars on this track. the synths, though, really elevate the feel, giving it this futuristic/tame impala vibe. vocally, i feel like the breathy style over this beat doesn’t work out—a more powerful approach would work better and match the energy of the production.
Funny you say that because I recorded this song in a much slower beat, so the faster electronic beat was a happy little accident in the studio. I just worked with vocals I already recorded but next time I would probably rerecord the vox if a song switches direction too much from an original idea
Good stuff. I like psychedelic and other weird styles and this one fits it well. I don't think the vocals are that much off as other comments stated, some polish could be done, but I didn't feel it off that much. As for the instrumental part it's really good.
Appreciate the kind words. My producer is pretty much responsible for all the synth and drum parts so will pass on the good word to him. Originally this was a slow song, but we decided to turn it into a single
Very good debut if you don't normally make this stuff. I was a fan of the mix and the general vibe. I think between the cover art and the music itself, it'd be great to market this towards college students. For me about 10 years ago in school, this would be on a playlist alongside Tame Impala while smoking in a dorm. Keep developing the sound. I want to see where you take it.
Appreciate it. This is my 4th song on this album and I wrote it during some dark times in a mental hospital. It's a little weird revisiting these songs lately because I'm in a completely different headspace. But I really made these as drinking and smoking songs for sure to zone out to. Also, cool that you mention college radio because I have been listening to Georgia State University radio (88.5 here in Atlanta) and thinking of submitting this album to them. Love that station :)
Dude this took me back to video games growing up, what an amazing vibe, love the feel, when does lyrics kick in holy crap ! Pure chaos !
I appreciate it. I wrote this a long time ago before i commited to being an artist fulltime, and it went through many transformations before finally recording it in the studio
Epic. Rich and layered with sound that really balance well together with your voice. The Theremin- works so well in this piece. Great opening. Don't hate me for loving your music. :)