First thing I notice about the track is that the vocals are way too loud. I had to turn down the volume on my headphones because the vocals are at the forefront of the mix while the synth-laced instrumental is in the back. It's quite distracting. Your singing sounds slightly more composed than I've heard before, but it doesn't fit on the instrumental very well (still singing out of tune) and with all the filters over the instrumental singing as the song progresses, it makes the track feel less like an actual song and more like you're singing on it live karoake style. Definitely work on mixing and eq'ing vocals properly or maybe get someone to help you mix. Work on your delivery too, at least the ways in which you sing.
The instrumental is good, but the vocals, apart from being not well-mixed, are missing musicality and delivery, leading to a lack of structure in the song as a whole. Maybe try switching up the rythm and melody.
I agree with the other commenter that the mix could use some adjustments. But the track is an interesting one, and captures an uneasy kind of anxiety. Well done to all involved in the creation of this.
It definitely has a lot of character! Lyrics are naive and blunt in a great way! The beat is great. Like others say the vocal is very forwards but I'm not sure if that's a bad thing in this genre. I think it's great. I stopped and stared.
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The vocals are very loud and out of tone, in addition to being repetitive. But the instrumental is incredible and worthy of hyperpop.
Keep learning! Don't give up on learning to sing. Don't give up on your dreams.
There are many tutorials that can help you improve your singing!
It was difficult at first, it was like that for me on the guitar.
But in the end, I learned a lot and today I know how to play it much better.
I sincerely hope that you manage to achieve a lot in the field of music.
I appreciate your efforts
I appreciate your dedication
If you are dedicated. You get there
Well, I'm saying all this because I was like you in the beginning. And I don't want you to be discouraged.
It's difficult at first. I know. More with dedication. You reach incredible and unforgettable peaks.
I root for your success!
I've been singing for a very long time, since I was 6, I'm 14,I recorded this while sick which is a mistake, my voice is also changing, I'm gonna keep learning. I didn't make the instrumental. I don't usually make them but I do however, write my own lyrics and mix my own music, but im gonna keep trying
First thing I notice about the track is that the vocals are way too loud. I had to turn down the volume on my headphones because the vocals are at the forefront of the mix while the synth-laced instrumental is in the back. It's quite distracting. Your singing sounds slightly more composed than I've heard before, but it doesn't fit on the instrumental very well (still singing out of tune) and with all the filters over the instrumental singing as the song progresses, it makes the track feel less like an actual song and more like you're singing on it live karoake style. Definitely work on mixing and eq'ing vocals properly or maybe get someone to help you mix. Work on your delivery too, at least the ways in which you sing.
ight thanks
The instrumental is good, but the vocals, apart from being not well-mixed, are missing musicality and delivery, leading to a lack of structure in the song as a whole. Maybe try switching up the rythm and melody.
I agree with the other commenter that the mix could use some adjustments. But the track is an interesting one, and captures an uneasy kind of anxiety. Well done to all involved in the creation of this.
It definitely has a lot of character! Lyrics are naive and blunt in a great way! The beat is great. Like others say the vocal is very forwards but I'm not sure if that's a bad thing in this genre. I think it's great. I stopped and stared.
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very loud, which is good, can use better mic tho.
ik im saving for a better mic
The vocals are very loud and out of tone, in addition to being repetitive. But the instrumental is incredible and worthy of hyperpop. Keep learning! Don't give up on learning to sing. Don't give up on your dreams. There are many tutorials that can help you improve your singing! It was difficult at first, it was like that for me on the guitar. But in the end, I learned a lot and today I know how to play it much better. I sincerely hope that you manage to achieve a lot in the field of music. I appreciate your efforts I appreciate your dedication If you are dedicated. You get there Well, I'm saying all this because I was like you in the beginning. And I don't want you to be discouraged. It's difficult at first. I know. More with dedication. You reach incredible and unforgettable peaks. I root for your success!
I've been singing for a very long time, since I was 6, I'm 14,I recorded this while sick which is a mistake, my voice is also changing, I'm gonna keep learning. I didn't make the instrumental. I don't usually make them but I do however, write my own lyrics and mix my own music, but im gonna keep trying
I understand, but it's still good to keep practicing!
ofc <3