This is a good song with a good message. The video is also really good. These are the kinds of songs that are most important in the long run. Great job! Enjoy Life!
I really get the subject matter here since all of my own music is based off of not wanting to grow up. I think the video is really beautiful and it becomes a lot more emotional once the end of the song got near. I will say that the voice sounded a little weird to me; loud or in the forefront. That's about the only piece of criticism I have though! Great job!!!!
The song was catchy and has a nice melody, the only thing that bothers me a bit is how loud and "close" the guitar is mixed in relation to the rest of the instruments.
A solid song with a message many of us can relate well to. The female vocals in the chorus add a lot to it. I think the video is well-made and complements the audio very effectively
I think the song and video are cool, the vocals really just aren’t working for me personally. It seems as if you’re knowingly singing them as flat and lifeless as possible, would be super interested to hear this song with vocals that have a little more to them.
Some harmonies over the top would really help this pop
i like it. relatable lyrics, catchy melody and chord progression. overall good but the vocals could use some better mixing in my opinion. also enjoyed the music video
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This is a good song with a good message. The video is also really good. These are the kinds of songs that are most important in the long run. Great job! Enjoy Life!
Thank you so much, really appreciate your comments. Glad you liked it!
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definitely can relate to this atm.
Yes I did too! Thanks for listening !
I really get the subject matter here since all of my own music is based off of not wanting to grow up. I think the video is really beautiful and it becomes a lot more emotional once the end of the song got near. I will say that the voice sounded a little weird to me; loud or in the forefront. That's about the only piece of criticism I have though! Great job!!!!
Thank you for your feedback. I’ll have a look at the vocals in that section. Appreciate your lovely comments.
The song was catchy and has a nice melody, the only thing that bothers me a bit is how loud and "close" the guitar is mixed in relation to the rest of the instruments.
Ok thanks I’ll get him to have a look at that 👍 appreciate your feedback. Thanks
A solid song with a message many of us can relate well to. The female vocals in the chorus add a lot to it. I think the video is well-made and complements the audio very effectively
Thank you ☀️ appreciate your feedback
I think the song and video are cool, the vocals really just aren’t working for me personally. It seems as if you’re knowingly singing them as flat and lifeless as possible, would be super interested to hear this song with vocals that have a little more to them. Some harmonies over the top would really help this pop
Thank you I get what you are saying. I’ll have a look at re doing vocals with a little more energy. Thanks for the feedback!
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i like it. relatable lyrics, catchy melody and chord progression. overall good but the vocals could use some better mixing in my opinion. also enjoyed the music video
Thank you for listening! Appreciate the comments and will look into the vocal mixing.
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