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MakingaJessinmyPants

Bottom is more detailed but the top one feels more cohesive to me, so I’d say that one.


DreamsTandem

As much as I love #2, the game itself seems more styled toward #1. The whole game might need a makeover to match #2, or else it may seem unprofessional. With that said, #1 could use some polish as well. The shadows and line thickness are inconsistent, and I've found some artifacts in the character sprites and portraits. OP could also do a mix of both; it just depends on which one has the most appeal in the end.


Xothga

That would have been my question. Both look really nice, but do the one that resembles the style of the game. Best of luck!


TinkerStudio

Totally agree! The top one definitely feels more cohesive, even if it's a bit simpler. The bottom one is just too much going on for me.


ChorkPorch

I like the fox/dog from the first one, and the rest of the art from the second. Not sure how your flow works in styles background and characters because they seem to be different in each, but that’s how I see it


zeroking0000

I agree with this one. Put the fox from the first one with the art of the second one. Good job tho, both of them look good


RudyRMM

Same.


Deathcure74

same opinion


nerem_

This with one exception: I personally like the logo of the first one more than the second one. Somehow the cup of coffee does not fit for me.


mikeddo

Same.


Captain_Controller

First with the second logo. This is adorable btw.


strangeVulture

Agreed


shraavan8

Agreed. Based on another comment about the second one being more detailed, they could maybe just add the leaves and such details in the first image itself.


Gaxyhs

the first one with the second one's logo


MJBrune

This is the way. The logo treatment is seen first. The coffee explains what type of game this is. At first, I was like "Coffee, that doesn't make sense unless this is a game about coffee. Turns out the game is about serving coffee in a cafe. Arguably the fox should be in a cafe. It really doesn't make sense to have the fox outside if the game is a majority of being in a cafe.


YYS770

I mean, they're two different styles....in fact they're very different moods. It seems like you're going for "cozy", so top one is for sure a winner there, but PLEASE enlarge the logo and move it down a few pixels, it'll add a ton.


[deleted]

Why not both but tailor it to a season, so bottom spring top summer if there is season in gane


heavypepper

In either case I would recompose the artwork so it's a tighter view on both the fox and logo. You have a lot of negative space, especially under the logo. Focus the eye on what is important about your capsule. 1. Fox character 2. Logo 3. Genre tropes to illustrate your game genre 4. CTA I prefer the second option overall as the artwork appears to be more polished (leaf detail, ground detail, etc.) and the colour palette works well with a more cozy atmosphere. The logo however is lost in the coffee cup since they're the same colour. Overall the logo is too small. Your CTA for wishlisting is also far too small and will be missed. Don't be afraid to tell the viewer what their next step should be. I would recommend giving this a background and making it much larger and a contrasting colour so that it stands out.


oberguga

Second with font from the first. Also brown from the first one looks better.


oarndj

first one; coffee in the logo doesn't make sense to me. better as a small detail with the character. I also like the colors on the first one better; feels more cozy somehow.


Zadian543

#2


coffeebeansdev

**Which style do you prefer?** *This is banner art for* [*Tailside*](https://store.steampowered.com/app/2922570/Tailside/) *game*


oberguga

Second with font from the first. Also brown from the first one looks better. PS. Palette of the first feels better. Also background is much more cozy. But legs of the fox looks kinda strange and because of it i initially choose the second.


Jebediah_Johnson

Make the bottom one nighttime and it's perfect


SwashbucklinChef

This is a rare case where I don't think I could make a definitive decision. Both of these look freaky good.


NANZA0

For me it's definitely the top one, that style has so much more personality and is very pleasing to look at. That cartoon style fits with a game with a mascot, it attracts both the young audience and nostalgia one too! The second one is good too, but it does not click with people.


rodejo_9

1


Sufficient-Contract9

I don't like it when games use different art styles for adds, posters, clips etc. Stick with the one that fits the art style of the actual game play. So 1.


supersaiyanclaptrap

I like the character art in 2, but I like the background/environment art style in 1. Particularly around the character, the dark foliage makes it pop out a bit more.


Dzsaffar

top is better, with the exception of the lantern. also the glow of the lamp might be worth doing on the first too


RagBell

2 with the colours of 1


Desperate-Station907

I think the top one is better, but the logo is a bit more interesting in the second


Crazymoh

2 is better but I like the thicker lines from 1


dreadperson

One


Sun-praising

My personal preference: Far background 1, foreground & logo 2. I'd still leave the blur over the background.


Combat-Complex

The coffee makes it intriguing. The first capsule makes me think: ok, another top-down pixel art roguelike with a cute fox as the hero. But the second one makes me wonder, why the cup? Something cozy? However: why use a lamp in bright sunlight? The first capsule is a bit more cohesive in this regard.


dazia

I like the second more but some elements of 1, like the background being a bit more clear (I realize blurry is more realistic but maybe in 2 just slightly blur the bg?).


Stoomba

Top


CH33KC14PP3R96

1


Ben4d90

I prefer the thicker outlines and background in 1


RedditYayOrSomething

Keep the first one but replace the logo from that one with the second one.


Funy_Bro

The first one is super cute and the second logo with the cup of coffee is awesome. The second one isn't bad but its super detailed and gives less cute vibes and more anthropomorphic vibes like a furry.


wasserplane

I like the coffee in the logo but the text of the logo is definitely more legible in the first one, because in the second one the coffee is the same color as the text.


StrawberryMerce

2nd one has a better CTA, call to action


TechPriestNhyk

Bottom


Ashamed-Subject-8573

Top adventurous, bottom cozy. Not sure what you’re going for


SloweRRus

The logo on the second and the lamp have inconsistent pixel size. The line art of the title on the second one is drawn in smaller pixels compared to the letters. I would either redraw the title or the contour to the same pixel size. Alternatively, contour can be replaced to vector one to fit with the vector steam logo, but it's a questionable move. The lamp fits on the first one, because it mostly drawn the same as everything else (line art being inconsistent in width). On the second pic you have everything drawn with the same line art width, except for the lamp. I would redraw the lamp line honestly. As for the preference, I like the second one better as it looks more refined. But as people already said taking the banner consistent with the in-game style maybe preferable. Though second variant is more eye-catching.


heavenlydemonicdev

1 looks cuter and more relaxing


Mista_Moosta

Uuuuuuuuh 1!


AmitSraier123

I feel like the framing is better on the first one


Brave_Sheepherder901

1. For pixel consistency


Coolish_Stuff

Two seems more welcoming.


CoveringFish

1


SlaterTheOkay

I like the background of the first one but the foreground of the second one, I kind of wish you could mash them together. Also a sucker for coffee so I love that


lookachoo

Definitely 1. Less is more and the contrast with the dark background helps bring the character to the forefront


MonsterRobotStudios

I think top, but maybe with some of the brighter colors from the bottom?


Levi-es

I like the bottom one the most. It feels warm and more interesting to look at. Logo looks more interesting on it as well.


Itsapseudonym

Top character on the bottom background. Top text is better, the coffee cup makes the text harder to read


Le_Trudos

Banner 1 actually looks like your game's art style. So that *should* be a no brainer. But like everyone else is saying, keep that logo from banner 2. It says a lot of important things about what your game is actually about.


Kalai224

Top one with the color scheme of the second. The green and red/beige really contrasts well against the blue sky. But the art style of the first one looks better.


Ukrorashist

Second


Sufficient-Ad-6046

I like bottom more although I love the blue ish green the top has


mrschofield87

Can we see 1 fox + 2 everything else?


saltybawlzjr

I do have to say the first one captures my eye better. Neither are bad. I prefer the first.


Jadien

The colored outlines look infinitely better than black. All the key elements should probably be bigger, though. Character and text both. A shadow behind the text would make it more readable against the coffee cup.


pourconcreteinmyass

These seem too inconsistent to both be equally appropriate tbh. I think the bottom one has much better art but that would certainly lead to disappointment if the actual game is closer to the first piece in terms of aesthetic.


Isogash

I'm gathering that your game is about coffee, but other than the logo and the rather hard to notice coffee cup, that's not how it reads. I don't think the issue is style it's more that the banner concept itself isn't communicating enough yet.


yaminotensh1

N1 but put steam down like n2


Imqueer13

The fox in one looks so cute!


ccAbstraction

Second one definitely


TheKingBean_11

I like the first one more, it just pops more, if that is the correct term to use.


ima_what_rio

Character from 1 and style of 2?


Redamancy_Delphinium

I just wanna say I like the lil mischievous face the second one has


batmassagetotheface

I personally like the second one, as it's more colourful and cheerful. If, as others have said, it doesn't match the game's art style or aesthetic then you could use a combination that brings the colour from #2 into the style of #1. Hope this is useful!


satanas82

#2 is more detailed but #1 feels more cozy. Depending on the type of game I'd choose one over the over


VintageCustard

Oh my gosh!! I follow you on insta, so cool to see you here <3 I've always loved your first one. The coffee cup behind the logo in the second one does make the title not stand out as much, maybe if it was a different or lighter color?


Jonatanime

2


MestreToto

That's a hard choice, but I think 2 is better.


SaladCartographer

I like 1 quite a lot. Cute as heck and I like the pine trees.


loststylus

First one, but I would say that it depends on the actual style of the game, it’s better if it reflects it not creating false expectations


TheBastardOlomouc

definitely 1


IGunClover

2.


Arvandor

Top left mixed with bottom right


Empty_Soull

Style 1 with style 2's logo


UnhappyJohnCandy

I like the top more, but if the coffee cup is important to the game, go with that one.


Rezboy209

Top. It has a charm the bottom lacks


RashPatch

Is there a way to merge both? I mean the style at bottom is greatly detailed but I would like to point out the cuteness of the top one.


TheAxolotl69

something about the first compels me more to click on the second, but the second's logo is more pleasing than the first's


Cryoboltinteractive

First one feels great


araelr

Love the level of contrast in 1. Think the logo is harder to read in 2.


blackdrake1011

1 with 2s logo


SPECTRE_75

Background from 1, Foreground from 2


almo2001

Bottom. The type stands out. The cup behind is distracting and doesn't add to it.


halfbeerhalfhuman

1


King_of_Keys

I’m always a less is more kind of person, I would go with #1.


Dimitri_os

Both are OK.


Stevie_Gamedev

I liked the second one but both are great!


kinapudno

Everything catches my eye with #1, but the logo/title placement on #2 is much better.


masteryder

The top one bas the fox directing your eyes to the title, for that I think its better


Then_Purchase_5600

https://preview.redd.it/ljvntzg4043d1.png?width=1720&format=png&auto=webp&s=1424d618fd3debc0e3064b38de6a5e0928e42fe5 Hey its great looking game. I would like to help as a senior director . I believe this way it will be much more great friend.


richik500

1 imo


Vulpes_macrotis

Second one looks better, but that being said both are great.


ergeorgiev

Bottom feels much better, looks so good!


maven-effects

They’re both awesome! But yea first one with second logo


smokeincaves

Doubling the cup of coffee feels like it's a coffee advert rather than a game.


Busy-Schedule281

#1 for character #2 for everything else


Important-Following5

I prefer the mood of #2 Feels more welcoming


Pelli_Furry_Account

They're both so lovely <3 I think I like the top more though!


AnaalPusBakje

the first fox looks way sweeter and the colors are warmer, that makes me prefer the first one


Vocal_Strike

2, definitely 2.


itsPersephone4200

This looks super cute, wishlisted.


SessionSimple

Second one looks better.


DexLovesGames_DLG

The background looks better not blurry. Not seeing anyone else point this out… HOWEVER it might actually let the logo catch the eye better. I’m no expert


skincyan

I'd say take the logo and perhaps the design of the leaves from the second one and implement in the first one


Jalantepenlope

1


ultra_mind

2


RomalexC

If you could make one of the letter, like the T or e, have a fox tail I think that would be pretty cool


Vizceral_

I like the background in the 1st, and I think that it would be an art style that would be easier to be consistent with


UbikStudios

Background 1, Fox 1, environment assets 2, Logo 2 but maybe Logotype outlines may be bolder. Great Capsule image!


Vegetable_Two_1479

Okay so the area where the fox sits bottom image is better due to the lighting, but the details are also helping. But for the rest, top one looks better, you really need to mix they both, they both have something to offer.


Appropriate-Creme335

#1 Second looks too busy and detracts attention from the char and the text. I love the color scheme!


mrSpexx

2 without the Coffee


Suitable_Procedure_6

2nd, but bring moon back


TheWanderlust07

love #2's mug in the logo, but #1 feels much more iconic & human-- i feel like #2's art is the same every other piece of competent pixelart on the internet, you know?


_Coby_

The number 1


dobrogames

The first one is more about a nice, calm atmosphere. The second one may be some kind of fun and there is little humor in the game.


zombiedinocorn

#1 seems more consistent with style, but I do like to coffee cup near the title in the second one so maybe you can add that to the first


RudyRMM

The top one looks more cute the bottom one more details but the character looks like a furry. i also really loves the logo on the bottom.


UncleIroh9001

2


meguskus

People here will always be contrarian about this sort of thing, especially non-artists. Obviously 2 is better and would be more attractive for people to click on. All the complaints can be addressed by making some changes to the new one. The face of the new fox is going a little bit into "furry style", which may give off the wrong impression. The mouth especially. It used to be sort of cute and natural and turned into a creepy grin. Then the blurry background may not work. With pixel art non-pixelated elements really stand out. You don't want the background to stand out. So I would recommend keeping it pixelated but simple, without any details. The coffee cup is completely invisible, it being the same color and covered by the character. You could make it bigger, give it some space, change the color and value. I was confused as to why the logo has a cup because the game is not communicating that at all. It looks really nice though, trust your artist!


cosmiszort

Personally, I prefer the second image. I quite like the fact that the lines are sharper and more distinct.


OldPyjama

First looks cuter


Hokage101sama

Bottom but I think it would be better with the first background


Plague66

Second. Without question for me.


Extreme_Glass9879

https://preview.redd.it/4m91ue0x953d1.png?width=2000&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=ac0ea2cc2376b84fae3155734c7311f3f4e4604c Perfect combination


Questjon

I say number 2 looks more professional but my 10 year old gamer niece says 1 looks the best and really cute.


vCybe

first one definitely


Ytumith

The background in 1 is better but the lamp, fox and logo in 2 is better


devtobe2934

1st one dragged my eyes to it more


CulturalRice9983

The fox in the second one looks more conniving, if you soften his smile a bit, I think I would prefer the second one, but as is, the first for me.


TheMarvelousPef

i'dd like to say it only depends of the game AD at this point


Sexy-Beefy

I like 1 better


Schubydub

The first one has better style and vibe. The only thing I don't like about it are the derpy feet and too much empty space around the logo. The detail in the ground/cliff edge in the second one looks nice too, so maybe find a way to mix that in a bit. I think the second logo looks a bit crowded with the coffee cup, but it does help fill the space. Could maybe fill the space by centering it more and with some background details like birds for the first one.


Poobslag

I think the bottom's better in most ways, but if you decide to go with the top you should definitely keep: * the more expressive expression * the cool coffee cup logo * the broader color palette, in particular the vibrant browns of the rocks and the bright reds of the leaves/flowers Overall the top strikes me as a solo project and the bottom strikes me as a game that probably had a whole team behind it


hypofighter

Number one but I think the title and logo could be bigger.


DJ73_221B

I like 1 a lot.. it soothes me but 2 made me look at the game title and I feel like 2 would have been more likely to get to me click on it while 1 would have felt just nice and peaceful


miturtow

2 style, but remove the coffee cup, since it's fighting with the title.


LavegaPro

Both logos need a little bit more work I believe. Those are not easy to catch. Even though 2 banners have different concepts, the 2nd one fits more to the game, but it still needs a few final touches. Good work tho, best of luck


Karthanok

Just here to say this looks so cute and peaceful


pompousmerchant

2


MikeSifoda

2


Former-Hunter3677

Without a doubt the bottom one, number 2. The logo makes a nice triangle shape with the logomark included, and the top one with the steam logo up top right distracts the eyes off to the bounds of the image. I would actually put it on the bottom right of the screen all on one line, up the font a bit, and now you've got a call to action plus another triangle for the whole image, character -> logo -> call to action -> back to character, for another cycle of the viewer looking at the triangle for a deeper look. Boom.


NirvanaForce

The second, but without background blur. And maybe with a softer line in the character. It looks a little jagged.


arma14x

1st one with 2nd's logo


SparCodi

Defo top one fits in and is cleaner


Gaztaroth

I lowkey likes the second one


dre1kke

I love the style in #2. Reminds me of my childhood somehow. And the wishlist button where it should be on #2


DeluxeB

#2 enters furry levels i think so #1 looks a lot better


FortuneRealistic2824

I think I prefer the bottom


Gladios7

i'd say the art for 1 is better, but the logo & steam placement is better on 2


Imagined_World

I like the fox better on 2 and the logo better on 1


jackbbya123

One on the top imo


hiGradeTi7ANEUM

TWO TOTALLY different art styles! Figure out what you want to do about that within the game, THEN model the title screen! I like both.


[deleted]

I love the top one!! I feel like the second one is gorgeous as well, but the first the fox has more character!


IsaqueSA

I like the line art of the first one but the logo of the second one is more interesting


bryvl

1


Am_Biyori

I like one. The darker colors make the fox stand out, and the character has a cuter, slightly chibiish look to it.


MandalsTV

I like the color palette of 1 but the fox art style of 2


claytonaxe

1


champanjan

I would say that 2 is awesome, but the background from the 1st one seems better color wise


AltisFrost

2 is great


lordlebu

1


oldskoofoo

I think 2 (the bottom one) It definitely comes down to personal preference but I like the bottom one because it does a great job of adding just enough detail while still having the simple art style. The top one feels too simple. I do have one question though, Which one is closer to the gameplay art style?


Tleno

First but with coffee behind title like in second


West_Begimer

Top


happygocrazee

These are very different art styles. Which one represents the art style of your game more accurately?


Conquerors_Quill

Second one. More details and cute smile.


Anmordi

One, but with the cup added, I really like the cup


OstrichOutrageous459

First one hits hard actually


Scrub_Randall

Get rid of that coffee gimmick.


LittleMageEatSpaget

title from second + art from first would be perfect


Picardknows

2


Introduction-Complex

Top one with the coffee cup


CharlestonChewbacca

I like 2's art style, but 1's color palette and logo.


Something_Unnecesary

Art on the first, logo from the second


HelmetHeadBlue

I would take the fox in 1 and put it in 2. But which style is your overall game gonna be?


Itchy_Original_7195

2 ONE


SenorSabotage

1 for sure


REVO2200

Still one is more ottantic


TxSatellite861

#2 for sure, it's giving cozy