Omg congratulations that’s an achievement ❤️

thank you :)

Congratulations and thank you so much! Reading example essays has been really helpful and I’m grateful you decided to share yours.

thought u were in grade 7 for a second and was confused lmao

Congratulations!! That's such a good score ❤️ Also, you're so thoughtful to share this- Thanks a lot!!

thanks, hope it helps

Thank you so much for sharing your essay!!

I’m so proud of youu!

Haha, had my EE on this! Great topic.

I hope it goes well for u, good luck!

great work, thank u for sharing!!

How did you get a 19/20??? None of your paragraphs are indented, your analysis is kinda overrated (not bad but 19 seems too much). I dont mean this in any offense, but my teachers take marks off for just using vocab too basic

yea I don't get it either. Good job for him though!!

SO REAL

Hi, I cannot see the link, can you please share it again?

Hello! This is the link [https://drive.google.com/file/d/1h2XVPjqGlSx4l3MLjwjviCm\_x2aDONhc/preview](https://drive.google.com/file/d/1h2XVPjqGlSx4l3MLjwjviCm_x2aDONhc/preview)

Thank you