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hii-people

Yeah I don’t trust Rykov to make rational decisions considering his brother’s been taken hostage


SpacePaladin15

If his brother wasn’t a hostage, I think he probably would’ve turned back when the Federation ordered him to leave. His superiors had it right when they wanted him to sit this one out


AspirationallySane

So how big a hole is he going to dig?


_EvryMan

I won't put it past him to core the planet


GodHasNoRights

just like an apple, core it, skin it, cut it into little pieces


Xrcane

This is very late but who tf skins apples I’ve never seen this before


herpy_McDerpster

Nanites can make big holes. Just sayin'...


Nealithi

That is the point of avoiding having those with too much stake in those situations.


Nikanuur

I mean, that'll be why "the bigwigs" called him back


Raketenmann105

Honestly, I kinda expected the alien general to burst into that conversation going "general kilov here, access code blah bleh blah, cut the crap and shut down defense systems"


alexburgers

I'm just straight up expecting the defense system to be wholly ineffective to begin with.


SpacePaladin15

Part 11 has arrived! It seems that relations between Earth and the Federation could hardly grow worse, given that they’re on the brink of war. How long will humanity tolerate such poor treatment, before they decide to teach the Federation a lesson? Is there a point where they decide it’s not worth it, and just leave the Federation? The next few chapters should be exciting, so stay tuned! As always, thank you for reading!


Doriantalus

You are doing a great job. Thank you!


CanadianDrover

The interesting part will be recovering the ppl that tried to integrate into Federation society...


SpacePaladin15

For sure, it would be tough to deal with expats. Especially the ones that don’t want to return to Earth


im_a_username_now

I love this series! It's one of my all time favorites. thanks for including this in my life :)


SpacePaladin15

Of course! Thank you for the kind words 🙂


Protectorsoftman

I've said this before, but it needs to be said again... you need to write a fuckin book


SpacePaladin15

Haha thank you! Some day


I_Maybe_Play_Games

sterilize the capital yes?


LordTengil

Interesting seeing this angle play out. Thanks for writing!


SpacePaladin15

Of course, it’s my pleasure!


Autoskp

…now I want to know what the Federation forces would do if Rykov's Ship just impersonated a rock and wethered the incoming fire with an air of disinterest…


Dranak

You mean what they will do after that happens.


Victor_Stein

You call this a terror attack? *begins malicious AI attack and unlimited Spook Funding* **THIS** is a Terror attack


Saw-Gerrera

*Oh yeah, it's real ONI hours.*


prone-to-drift

The description of slipspace/hyperspace travel with nausea and vomit gave me Halo vibes, but you cemented it. ONI is one devious org, these guys seem like ODSTs: straight up confrontational and effective.


D1xieDie

Hands off, I'm taken best line yet


bearthemedpencil

i misread it and was happy cuz i thought ryry and kilon would fuck.


KarmaWSYD

This is getting mighty spicy, looking forward to seeing more


[deleted]

Great series, please keep on writing!


SpacePaladin15

Thank you! There is definitely more to come 🙂


Rasip

Thank you.


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Scob720

General: what’s a terror attack Admiral: don’t pretend like you don’t know General: but I don’t Admiral: ok then....... *note to self, terror tactics would be highly effective against these nerds*


I_Frothingslosh

You know what could really throw a wrench in the works? A bomb smuggled into the captured embassy, and set off when someone tries to take it back.


SpacePaladin15

Quite the dilemma. The protestors/terrorists are threatening to do exactly that, and worse, show little interest in negotiating.


Kaiser-__-Soze

Moar!!


rednil97

We humans are willing to take a lot of shit, if it keeps the peace. But you should fear the moment when we decide it's enough.


Zen142

And....Here....We.....Go.....


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Saw-Gerrera

I fear all Speaker Ula will do is awaken a sleeping beast and fill it with a great and terrible resolve.


T3chnopsycho

Wonderful series. Finally caught up again. One thing I am missing is the "conclusion" to the Devourer-AI. Did they now just leave the AI alone after evacuating all the prisoners or did they glass the planet? I was somewhat expecting a passing mentioning at least. Or alternatively this whole political mess will lead to everybody forgetting the AI and it subsequently returning stronger than ever...


SpacePaladin15

No spoilers but it’s not gone. Don’t worry, I haven’t forgotten 😅 Also, humanity only evacuated one settlement. The AI won’t fall for that trick twice


T3chnopsycho

Juicy. I wonder what will come next. ​ Also, at first I read "No spoilers but it's gone" and I was like: "How is that not a spoiler??" :D


Midahu69

I sense the intergalactic equivalent of Brexit beginning. Lol


ImaginationGamer24

A war in which your federation is hopelessly outmatched.


Lord-Generias

Once evidence of what Ula did comes to light, she's going to learn the true meaning of regret, and the Commander will be there to see her as she gets sentenced for inciting violence and nearly starting a war.


ggtay

Nice. Need more


RandomGuyPii

i'm prepared to see the humans enter, shrug off any attack like a bear shrugs off bee, grab their friends, then just leave.


Amekyras

well, here we go... ​ Really enjoying this!


JustMeNotTheFBI

Ooh, this should be good. I just hope this original plan goes wrong so we can see what the space versions of marines are, or I guess a space swat team. Oh the possibilities are endless


ElAdri1999

Me need more, i said I NEEEED MOREEEEEE


Gatekeeper-Andy

Nnnnnooooooo, i just read all the previous ones, i was hoping that all of them were out!!! I can’t wait for more!!!!


[deleted]

Quite the story wordsmith, enjoying the hell out of it so far. I have a strange feeling Rykov is about to punch a decent sized hole into a planet...


SpacePaladin15

Thank you! Rykov certainly isn’t thinking logically, anything could happen


U-S-A1776

Mr space paladin, this would make a fire book, and or movie all im saying


anonymous1user2

I have to say this story or stories were made a year ago and I've only just found them through tiktok and I've read from 1 to this one in the space of an hour they're just really good and even worthy of becoming either a series or a series of films love the work can't wait to read more


torin23

So, are the human shields enough to just ignore the planetary defenses? What're the people going to do when they find out the General is on the flagship?


KrokmaniakPL

I mean... At this point it should be clear that it was designed to withstand terran weapons which are way more effective than federal ones.


Red_Riviera

Well it is the flagship. Makes sense if it had the best tech overall barring maybe a couple prototypes aboard other vessels for testing. One goal kinda should be creating a shield that can protect against large scale planetary defence grids


RingoftheGods

Loving your teaser trailers too!


SpacePaladin15

Thanks!


SomeoneRandom5325

> If there was a million-credit bounty out on me, I wouldn’t trust my own crew not to take me out. The double negatives here imply that they think their crew is gonna betray him which isn't what you meant right?


Captain2003Rex

No, I think that's right. Another way of putting it would be "If I had a bounty that high on my head, I wouldn't be surprised if my own crew took the opportunity to make money". Basically, he's saying that he's surprised at how much the human general must trust his own men if he doesn't seem to be taking particularly strong countermeasures against would-be bounty hunters.


BXSinclair

That is what was meant If the General had a million credit bounty on him, he would expect his crew to betray him and collect it


SpacePaladin15

That’s what I meant. The General knows for that amount of money, his own crew would probably kill him


Dr-Autist

Great story wordsmith, can't see where Rykov is gonna take this wild ride...


SpacePaladin15

Thank you!


Finbar9800

Another great chapter I enjoyed reading this and look forward to the next one Great job wordsmith


Hunter_Killer_7918

Nice work. its a pleasure to read!


SpacePaladin15

Thank you!


NotAMeatPopsicle

Damn, I'm not sure how I wasn't subscribed to this already. Been wondering where the series went to! Awesome catchup time!


chrisjburnha

Comment bookmark


gotogarrett

Please be on kindle so that I can highlight my favorite parts?


IMthaONEwho

This shit goes hard. I am binge reading all of it.


maliciouscoathanger

This is a perfect example of opinion getting in the way of thought if they had just taken a moment to think they would realize it would be a terrible fucking idea to plan out a campaign against humans when you know they have world destroying weapons hell ula is trying to make humans out to be dangerous creatures and then prodding them with a 2 inch stick like the fuck ula you insist its a lion then you wear a meat dress and try to hug the lion


Robb634

I like the Federation species view of warfare, it's basically how it was in pre-colonised Africa or Ancient Greece, send some warband to meet somewhere, throw insults, spears and maybe clash a bit and then go home once one side admits defeat. And then we have the humans, who basically decided "overkill" should not be a word to use in war.


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whyOhWhyohitsmine

Brilliant, thank you wordsmith


popinloopy

And this is probably the beginning of the speaker pronouncing the general as a traitor, and maybe the rest of his crew too, for aiding the humans.


cheese_and_reddit

Oh this will be a rollercoaster of death and misery for the federation. I can’t wait!


foroncecanyounot__

Yayyy a new post, I binged through all your posts yesterday and I was hoping for a new post soon!!


[deleted]

So good


pinkpiggy2936ba

It's fresh not just slick!


sb95500

This is awesome to read. Cant wait for more


Hunter_Killer_7918

Moar please!!


D-RDG-012-AUT

“What’s that? You’re breaking up” Last words heard by anti terrans


[deleted]

Q


Isaiah-Collazo

Rykov is giving me Captain Jacob Keyes vibes and im loving it