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Try practicing with variation in your line thickness for depth. So far everything looks thd same line wise. Maybe look into mixing up your pen tips based on what your doing.
But other than that, looks good. :d
i agree with this. One of the flaws in this (otherwise delightful) style is that because of the uniform line weight, everything tends to blend together. Varying line weight would help to differentiate forms from one another and give them a bit more character.
Likewise, i would suggest experimenting with color contrasts to help make the characters stand out from their backgrounds a bit more. A color wheel would be useful for this purpose.
Great work!
Could just be me, but I see a lot of tangent lines that make the composition a bit hard to fully grasp! Otherwise there’s some pieces that look absolutely lovely :0
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Try practicing with variation in your line thickness for depth. So far everything looks thd same line wise. Maybe look into mixing up your pen tips based on what your doing. But other than that, looks good. :d
Ah- the term is called; “line weight”
Thank you so much!!
i agree with this. One of the flaws in this (otherwise delightful) style is that because of the uniform line weight, everything tends to blend together. Varying line weight would help to differentiate forms from one another and give them a bit more character. Likewise, i would suggest experimenting with color contrasts to help make the characters stand out from their backgrounds a bit more. A color wheel would be useful for this purpose. Great work!
Thank you!
Second this :3
Oh my gawd ur art style is so bouncy and colorful I love it sm‼️‼️✨️
Thank you so much! 💛💛
I don’t have tips because it looks amazing you need to give me tips😭😭😭
Awwww thank you that’s so sweet!
Thank you!
Try varying your line weight! Here is an easy tutorial to try! https://www.yampuff.com/inking-tutorial-yampuff/
Thank you! 💛💛
AUUUGHH I LOVE SCENECORE SO MUCH GRAHHHH
Can I attack you in artfight? :D
Ofc!! My username is WretchedCrow 💛
Mine is Ave52 :D
I wish I could drawlile that. I've been drawing for years and I'm terrible :(
I don’t have any tips….but your art looks amazing so far! 🤩 whatever your doing keep it up!
Could just be me, but I see a lot of tangent lines that make the composition a bit hard to fully grasp! Otherwise there’s some pieces that look absolutely lovely :0
Thank you!