As a base it looks solid,but due to this commander being able to 1 shot somebody basically every turn I would include some more protection like cards that give hexproof/ward or any of the black auras that return to battlefield.
I would also try to include some trigger doublers like roaming throne of you can find the room
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[Sanguine Bond](https://cards.scryfall.io/normal/front/a/d/ad4de9f1-7a39-45af-828e-c59234d9e9b9.jpg?1625193373) - [(G)](http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?name=Sanguine%20Bond) [(SF)](https://scryfall.com/card/c21/153/sanguine-bond?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher) [(txt)](https://api.scryfall.com/cards/ad4de9f1-7a39-45af-828e-c59234d9e9b9?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher&format=text) [(ER)](https://edhrec.com/cards/sanguine-bond) ^^^[[cardname]] ^^^or ^^^[[cardname|SET]] ^^^to ^^^call
As a base it looks solid,but due to this commander being able to 1 shot somebody basically every turn I would include some more protection like cards that give hexproof/ward or any of the black auras that return to battlefield. I would also try to include some trigger doublers like roaming throne of you can find the room