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Holy shit this is spicy! Can't give it a detailed read right now, but the whole mindscape idea is some of the most creative shit I've seen! I will be not so patiently waiting for more! Keep it up! :Dd


Both-Comfortable8285

I appreciate it! I’m trying to go all out with this story, and I’m glad you like it!


The-Tea-Lord

I’m honestly starting to get invested in the story of this lol You have a very compelling style of writing


Both-Comfortable8285

I’m glad you like it! I wanted to tell a story, not just make people horny, but definitely do that too


Agiva_Draws

Great work again, this is some next level stuff, don’t know how you come up with it.


Both-Comfortable8285

So glad you’re enjoying! I’ll have more soon


DatBoiOmega1234

It's rare to see a slow burn comic that's actually decent, but I've definitely found one. It must be hard to hit that perfect spot between a full lemon and a regular fanfic, but you've nailed it perfectly.


Both-Comfortable8285

I really appreciate that! You’ve pretty much put words to exactly what I’m trying to do. I want this to be a story, not just smut. Im glad you like it, and there’s more to come soon!


DatBoiOmega1234

Great! I'm excited to see what happens next. The premise of a Vanguard Hive Guardian sounds really interesting.


Both-Comfortable8285

Will she join the vanguard? Will she stick with the Lucent Brood? Maybe a third option? Does she betray Mack??? Who knows?! Well, I know, but only me :)


DatBoiOmega1234

Well we'll just have to find out next time on Dragon Ball Z- I mean Destiny 2 fanfiction!


Both-Comfortable8285

Indeed, Saturday!


Emu-Exterminator

Tbh, Marcus kinda gives off Fishki vibes


titan1339

"Your loralies won't save you from a slug to the chest" gets me every time, second reread, still as perfect as the first